Witnesses in Horror (part 3 added) (mmm/ffmmmm)

[Dude89]

This is my first story. Advice would be appreciated:)

John was walking through the city at night with his friends. Their names were Isabelle, Elizabeth, Alex, and Josh. His brother Eric was also there. Elizabeth led the way. Usually Josh would lead but he was drunk as hell right now. It was a long walk back.

"Let’s cut through the alley," Elizabeth said.

“But the alleys are dark and creepy. That’s like a horror movie choice” said John.

“That’s a shortcut,” she said, smiling.

The alley was narrow and dark. Elizabeth started walking down it, so the rest followed her. Halfway through, they heard it a muffled voice and a scream. They stopped. Elizabeth held out a hand, signaling them to be still. In the alleyway, three figures had a man pinned against the wall. He struggled, but they had him by the jacket, by the throat. One of them smashed his phone on the ground and stomped on it 3 times. Another grabbed his bag and poured out the contents.

“Where’s the rest?” one said.

“I told you, I don’t—”

The man punched him in the stomach

Isabelle whispered “We should call someone—”

“Shh. They might hear us” said Elizabeth

But it was too late. One of the gang members turned his head towards them, and smiled. John recognized him. He knew he had seen him before. The man smiled, and then all three turned. In terror, all the friends ran, and heard slamming footsteps behind them. But the gang didn’t chase them for long, as they didn’t have to. The friends had already been seen. The damage was done.

2 days later...

John’s friends started disappearing. They didn’t show up to work, to meetups, and didn’t respond to texts. First to disappear was Elizabeth. Then Isabelle, then Alex, then Josh, and then even Eric disappeared. John thought they were pranking him. However it didn’t make sense that they would skip class for a prank. Even when John asked his teachers, they said they didn’t know where they were. It wasn’t until this night that John would know the truth. He was walking in the city back to his dorms when he felt a hand clamp over his mouth. He tried to scream, but then he felt a taser hit him, knocking him unconscious.

[WhereAmI]

AH HA the old hand-clamp over the mouth routine. Very very effective.

[60Cancer]

Something is afoot.

[Dude89]

Sorry for the delay. Here’s part 2. It’s short. Future parts will be longer.

Elizabeth’s POV:

It’s all black. Elizabeth couldn’t move. She was worried about her friends. John, Isabelle, Alex, Eric, Josh, all of them. 4 of them just disappeared, and now here she was; tied to some sort of bed. She felt her wrists tightly tied to the bed posts. So tight. So painful. So awful. Her legs were also tied to the bottom bed posts. So tight. So painful. So awful. She was gagged. So painful. So awful. She heard footsteps approaching, and a door opened. A light turned on. A small light. A figure was holding a flashlight. The figure pointed it in her face, and began to flash it. She turned her head away and squeezed her eyes shut, but the man turned her head back and continued to flash the light.

“Hello” he said.

“MMPH”

“You’ve fucked up. Welcome to your new home. Your life will be a mess from now on”

Screaming and crying sounds came from everywhere. Distorted screams that Elizabeth could barely handle. But she couldn’t cover her ears. Her hands were tied to the posts. The man then put a blindfold over her.

“You are alone. Everyone you know will die. You will stay here a lonely loser”

“MMMPH”

“Shut up”

The man punched her in the stomach. She began to cry

“You will be mentally tortured here until you forget who you are and everyone you know”

“MMPH”

“Enough with the screaming. You’re stuck here. Now make yourself comfortable. You’re gonna be here a while. Maybe forever”

She heard even more screaming sounds, as well as the sounds of chains. She then heard something she recognized. Her mom’s voice. She heard her mom’s voice saying something. She couldn’t understand exactly what it was saying, but she made out some words: “You - screw - done - forever”. Elizabeth struggled in her ropes but couldn’t escape. More screams occurred around her. The voice that sounded like her mom’s began to hum. She couldn’t cover her ears. She was screwed, and was gonna lose her mind. She felt one more punched on her stomach before hearing a door slam shut, shaking the entire room. She began to cry like crazy. She couldn’t take this. But she was helpless. She had to find a way out. She was only 19. She couldn’t live the rest of her life here.

[WhereAmI]

Great story, please continue. Elizabeth is in trouble and not going to like her new life and surroundings.

[Dude89]

Part 3:

Isabelle’s POV:

She felt herself on a concrete floor. She could feel ants on her hands. She opened her eyes. She was in a cage. A very very small cage that just barely fit her size. Her hands were cuffed behind her back, and her legs were tied together. There was rope wrapped around her torso, securing her arms to her torso.

“HEEELLLLPP!!” she screamed.

Then a shock went through her. An extremely painful shock. Probably the most painful thing she ever experienced in her life

“AAAHHHHH!! WHAT THE HELL!!” she screamed.

“Shut up,” a voice said. “There’s no point in screaming. You are far away from society. Far away from home. Far away from life. No one can hear your useless screams. Also, if you scream again I will zap you again. So be quiet”

She looked through the metal bars and saw a man in a black balaclava.

“Who are you?” she asked.

“Your worst nightmare. Your life. Your biggest fear is spiders right?”

“How did you know?”

“Do not worry about it”

The man then put 2 tarantulas in the cage with Isabelle

“AHHHH! GET THEM AWAY FROM MEEEE”

She then felt the terrible zap go through her body again.

“GAHHHHHH”

“What did I tell you about screaming?

The man put another tarantula in.

“Each time you scream, another spider goes in, and you get another zap. We can hear you. We are listening, enjoy the rest of your life in hell. You are never getting out of here” he said.

Isabelle began to sob. She then heard crying sounds around her, and a voice that sounded like her father’s. She was horrified.

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Eric’s POV:

He awoke. He was in a chair. His hands were behind the chair, tied tightly together. His torso was wrapped in duct tape. It secured him and his arms to the back of the chair. His thighs were duct taped to the surface of the chair, and his ankles were tied to the legs. Socks were stuffed in his mouth and his entire head was wrapped in duct tape. He couldn’t move at all. He heard screams, but all the voices sounded identical to his sister’s. Like there were 50 copies of his sister surrounding him, all screaming in unison. He felt a hand grab his head and swing it.

“MMPH”

“Welcome home Eric”

He recognized the voice. He knew he had heard it before.
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John’s POV:

He awoke in a bed. He looked around. It was a room lit by one light. He recognized the room. His hands and legs were tied to bed posts. A man walked in. A man he knew.

“Hello John”

“What is this shit” said John

“Your life from now on. You will be mentally tortured here for the rest of your life”

“I see.”

The man punched John, but John showed no emotion.

“I know you” said John

“Indeed you do.” said the man.

“Ok, leave now.”

“See you soon, John”

“See you soon, CJ”