The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [FINISHED 2nd Feb]

[NotSeen]

Surely, you'll give us a look into what the 'church' will be after the changes come into effect? Right?


Please?

[RopeBunny]

[mention]Nainur[/mention] and [mention]NotSeen[/mention] one final chapter to come

[RopeBunny]

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[NotSeen]

A fitting - and a bit surprising (I had envisioned Denise wanting to be a bit more... vindictive, but that's just me) - conclusion to a very good story. Thank you.

[Nainur]

I like happy endings, first of all, and I'll call this one so.

Awesome. Just awesome. Splendidly done, one of the best I have ever read!
Truly, a long journey, but a good one and 'a rich friend out of the box' to kick-start the future is just nice. Why not, eh?
Cleaned of drugs why should she not do well again and letbygones be bygones?
May they live happily ever after!!!!
Five stars!

[RopeBunny]

[mention]Nainur[/mention] thank you, for this and every comment. It helped to have you along for the journey, seeing you following each step.

And [mention]NotSeen[/mention] this is (roughly) the forth ending I had planned out for the story. At one time Denise was indeed going to install herself as the new Michelle, with Petra as bodyguard/number two. At some stage this morphed into Michelle rising back up to retake what was taken from her, most likely over several extra chapters. The shades of this possibility are even included in the final paragraphs of what I eventually settled on for an ending.

[tickletied84]

Wonderful (and happy!) ending to a great story. Bravo again [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]

[Risperdaltied]

Excellent story and a fitting ending!

Another gem.

Thank you for continuing to produce such quality work