(This will be the first fictional story that I will post here, an adaptation of an ongoing RP with a member of the board. I'm still deciding how I will post the following chapters, if I will make everything within the same topic or create a new topic for upcoming chapters. Don't forget to specially leave your feedback about the writing and overall flow of the plot)
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CHAPTER 1
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The average perception that you have of an individual, or a group is always just like an ocean. Its blue and clear water, sometimes having a crystalline quality, always remains at the top, giving the impression that you can see everything right through it, having absolutely nothing to hide. But this is simply nothing but a mere illusion, caused by its immense vastity, where, if you really take the time and effort, or have any opportunity to dive deeper, you will see that the light will be slowly strangled and everything will be tinged by an even thicker and thicker layer of darkness, where you will find always things that you never would expect to see for yourself.
But sometimes an ocean can be engulfed by the waves of an even more colossal body of water, or even a cluster of bodies, which will flood and clash with one another, making everything in its dark depths to shock itself, sometimes revealing that maybe all these bodies, can hide the exact same kind of secrets in its depths…
Now, turning our perceptions out of the terrain world, we’ll be facing its opposite aspect, that posses some eerily similar characteristics in its colors and vastness, the sky. In which we have the one who shines above it all, the great giant, which when awaken proceeds to infiltrate the blackened hue of the night with a warm orange tint, until it fully conceals the true vastity of the night, in a never endless cycle, the sun. The yellow giant, from time to time, becomes the main dominant force in the atmosphere of the terrain world, painting all the mother earth with vivacity, bathing all the living and inert things on the surface below.
This time though, it will also illuminate the long road, in which a family will travel through relentlessly for many hours, to reach the countryside, the land where light shines brighter, life runs untamed, peace and tranquility coexists in harmony, miles and miles away from the chaos of the endless jungles of concrete, like a small and recluse paradise on earth.
Despite this family seeming much like any other in its surface, no one besides its women have the knowledge of a very exotic tradition that runs through it for generations. Within the bosom of its feminine part runs a constant hierarchic structure, where always after the youngest sibling of the group reaches her age of maturity, she is brought to the family old ranch in the country side during the summer to take part in a kind of passage rite, where she will serve basically as a slave, making all kinds of services to the older siblings around, while also being tied up vast majority of the time, being constantly teased and humiliated, for the entirety of the summer vacation. Its idea is to teach to the youngest sibling where she is placed within the family’s matriarchy, while also tightening the bonds between its members and especially building endurance and discipline. The whole process is entirely secretive, with the person in question vast majority of the time being introduced to the rite without any previous warning, needing to face and endure it for herself until the end.
This time, the lamb that will be brought to the circle is a girl called Helena, a 21-year-old non-binary woman that is halfway through her degree in biochemistry at college. Helena is a special breed, because, different from the other girls of the family, that were generally brought to the ritual as soon as they finished High School, generally being introduced just right after they turned 18, Helena is being submitted to it in her early-20s. This happens because she opened about her gender to her parents at 17 in the eve of turning 18, so, the family decided to postpone her introduction to the rite, since she came out really at the last moment, and her transition did not start yet, so, the other girls judged that she wasn’t properly ready for the event.
But, better late than never. Now, Helena was ready to take a ride, alongside her other family members, these being:
-Her older sister Amanda, that had already taken the duty of being a Lamb just 4 years ago, and was really eager to introduce her sister to the inner world of the feminine side of the family, also as some kind of catharsis of finally being able to be on the other side of the leash this time.
-Their mother Mackenzie, that constantly is called by her abbreviated nickname, Mac, which has a really domineering manner, being the main person in charge of Amanda when she was took to the ranch, being also pretty eager to take care of her other daughter.
-Their twin younger aunts Anna and Lisa, both featuring eerily similar features. They had been brought to the ritual together, serving as lambs at the same time, offering the double of entertainment for the other girls, making also their bonds with each other become incredibly strong. They also like to take part on the activities of the ranch, just in a minor scale than the other members.
-To finish, we have their grandmother Cassandra, from which Mackenzie had learned the vast majority of her posture as a dominator. Despite her age, she is still very active and full of energy, being also a kind of intimidating and domineering woman on her own, so, no doubt that she made a great dominatrix.
All the family was pretty radiant and chatty through the whole ride, but when they started to reach towards the ranch gates, the tone of the conversations quickly changed.
"What are you thinking Amanda?" Aunt Lisa turned and asked.
“Oh, nothing too much, just excited for this summer” Amanda answered, where Lisa, in turn, just let a knowing smile seep through.
“As do I. Right Mackenzie?” she says while facing Mac, which was driving the car with Cassandra on the passenger seat.
"Oh, yes, I think this summer will be quite the adventure. Amanda will definitely have fun; I know she had a bit of a rough time a few years back." Mackenzie said, while she smirked back at Amanda, her domineering features becoming more pronounced.
When the older sister had achieved her graduation in High School, she was taken to the ranch while her younger sibling was at a summer camp. The experiences that she had that fateful summer simply broke her, reverberating deeply within her body and mind, while the four older women had all the enjoyment watching it.
"I think I'll be fine m-mother." Amanda answered, being really grateful that she didn’t need to address her as “Mistress” anymore.
While all this conversation took place, Helena was just dozing off with earbuds. She just admired the quiet atmosphere of the place, driving by really long and old roads, alternating between the smooth, almost floaty running of the tires over the concrete layers, and sometimes the aggressive, almost invasive bumping and jumping of the old dirt paths. Independent of the path ahead, Helena just took her time to admire the nature, all the trees, bugs and birds flying in the sky, like they're meticulously painting a graceful majestic dance over the blue canvas, making a really great show that would come to grace all the creatures down on the terrain world.
She was really proud of her performance at the prestigious college in which she was studying, although it has been something really exhaustive and time consuming. But in the end, she knows that it will pay off somehow, no matter how much her uncertainty could tell her otherwise.
By now, she would just take some time to feel the summer, admiring the hazy and yellow tint over the landscapes that were all bathed by the sun, that would stay like a penetrating and overwhelming presence over the earth. She was really excited and curious about how life in the family ranch can feel like, since she will spend the vast majority of the summer there, experiencing finally some peace from the urban life, that besides being something very busy and rich to live in, it can really wear people off due to how it can be chaotic, aggressive, invasive, relentless, overstimulating... it almost feels like something unreal, that contorts and bends reality into something draining and completely unrecognizable. But that will be cast behind by now, at least for a few months, for Helena’s luck and relief.
"And your little sister?" Mac asked towards Amanda
"Oh, I'm sure she'll be fine." Aunt Anna answered
"Yeah. What aunt Anna said." Amanda echoed.
As Helena saw the end of the driveway, she stumbled on a very impressive vision: A really large ranch house. She was stunned by it, because it was gorgeous and beautiful, it felt majestic but also kind of rustic and foreboding for some reason, maybe because of how old it seemed, being owned by the family for years before she was born.
"Wow, it is huge and amazing, how did you never bring me here before?" She exclaimed.
As the gates close, all the other members of the family start to exhibit large smiles, specially Amanda, because she knew that now it wasn’t she that would be in a collar, but her pretty little sister. She also got even more excited thinking about what she would see, since it would also be her little sister that would be between the legs of the women of the family, maybe even between Amanda’s own thighs. She felt on her right to also feel some pleasure through this whole trip, even if their domineering mother would much probably seek to enjoy her new daughter first and foremost.
"We're here!" Mac said with a grin as they drove along the long driveway up to the ranch house. It had its own little brick wall around it, and it was large enough to be consider a McMansion. Not to mention its large pirate themed pool in the back.
"Told you we would make it girls!" She concluded
"Never doubted you Mackenzie." Aunt Anna said with a smile as she hopped out of the van, stretching her arms as she looked up at the clear blue sky.
"Me either." Said Aunt Lisa with a wink.
Amanda proceeded to get out at the same time as her Aunt. Looking over she saw her sister slowly get out and look around.
"Come on Helena, the inside is even better." She said with a smirk.
"Oh indeed." Mac said.
"Has a combination of rustic charm along with a modern design!"
She enjoyed home shopping shows, and everyone could tell this got her excited.
"As well as some hidden treasures inside that will make this summer one of pleasures." She said, giving Amanda a knowing smirk.
"Come on girls."
While all this happened, Helena noticed also that the other visitors seemed pretty happy and excited about it, but she felt that there was something "off" somehow, it looks like her mother, sister and all the rest of the crew were more excited than usual about this trip, she personally never has seen them all this radiating before. The way their smiles felt also got her even more suspicious, specially the one that came from Amanda when she occasionally glanced at her, of which Helena could feel something kind sinister coming from it, like there is something under the covers happening there, maybe some fun surprise (or prank) for her, since all the achievements that she has conquered until here were impressive, maybe them all wanted to give a huge party to congratulate. Still, Helena just kept herself upbeat and really anxious by what was coming next, pretty open for any kind of treat that was coming.
As the family walked inside, quickly getting their luggage placed within the house, Amanda looked around and smiled. Standing next to her mother she heard aunt Anna come by and whisper into her ear.
"Helena is going to make such a fine slave this summer."
She said with a grin as Helena sister went to the patio out of earshot to observe the rather unique pirate themed pool. Mackenzie watched her younger daughter.
"Yes, I'll enjoy her collared body immensely." She paused and gave her sister a look as they talked under their breaths.
"But you know me, I love to elicit screams from my slaves." She said with a giggle, looking at Amanda and giving a wink, which blushed and looked away, wanting to shudder, but refraining from doing so.
"Mmm…" Amanda mewled under her breath, almost silently, as her mother patted her should shoulder.
"Oh, dear Amanda. Head up, you need a strong backbone. You’re a dominant this summer, a mistress, you need to be stern and cruel so you can help us use and abuse our new property." She giggled.
"As I’m sure you remember, you didn't take your place for the summer consensually. And I very much doubt your little sister will either." Mac completed
"Pretty young, but is growing up fast, has a lovely body. Tight and slim in all the right places." Aunt Anna looked at Helena and said with a leer, as their grandmother put the snacks in the cupboard and aunt Lisa went outside to the pool as well.
Helena stayed at the border of the pool, just appreciating the warm aquamarine water, which due to its color and crystalline quality, seems to have been cleaned pretty recently, prepared to be used as soon as they arrived, ready to let them bathe and refresh themselves for the long trip under the hot roof of a car that was exposed to the omnipresent sunlight that shone all over the long path until here.
She stayed there beside aunt Lisa, that, just as like the other members, was really pumped and elated with this trip. So, they spent some time talking to each other, since she was the aunt of which Helena had the most intimacy, so they shared many special moments of the recent times, Lisa from her work, while Helena shared some of her time at the high school and college, making she reminiscent of her own youth at the high school, sparkling many interesting conversations between both of them.
After some time, mother Mac started to redirect herself to the pool also, looking over her shoulder as she walked away, winking at her older daughter. "Come Amanda, let’s start our little game shall we. Won’t be a couple of more hours until the collar comes out."
"Y- Yes Mother." She said, happy that she no longer instinctively called her 'Mistress' anymore, instinct of which Helena would learn very soon.
Mac walked outside where Helena and Aunt Lisa were, clapping her hands together. "Now everyone. Why don’t we put on some bathing suits and go for a swim while the sun is still in the sky?"
Helena specially was excited to finally put her Realise one piece swimsuit that she acquired recently to the test, where she would see its shiny rubber/vinyl like look and reflections under the sheeny hot sunlight, feeling its stretchy but also kind of tight hold hugging her skin, drawing along the curves of her young slim body.
As Helena and the crew went upstairs and headed towards the bedrooms, she got really impressed with how spacious and grandiose each place was, it was a really nice house in the middle of the ranch. Reaching to the bedrooms, each of the family members took one way to their own room, with Helena choosing one that was not very large, but that also wasn't the smallest. Mother Mac always took the largest room of the whole house, which was always dubbed as the “Master Bedroom”.
Then, Helena locked up the door and started to take off her clothes, always spending some considerable time to dress and undress. She doesn't know exactly why; the time just seems to run at a different rate on her head.
She was a really pretty girl, tanned and soft skin, which was deepest and darkest tan of anyone in the house, having also the pretty average height for a woman, just 5’5, possessing black hair a little below her shoulders, fleshy lips, well defined eyebrows, brown eyes, very slim body and curves, petite shy breasts, thick thighs and considerably large glutes. Being someone incredibly attractive at the pinnacle of their youth, she is frequently hinted over by boys, although she always had a strong preference for other woman, even though she also hanged out with some male friends occasionally.
She slowly took off her shirt, then the shorts, the sandals and her anklet, since it is a costume jewelry that was given as a gift by her sister it can't be in contact with water, which made her pretty sad, because she really loved it and considered really beautiful, without even touching upon the emotional value that it has. Then, she started to slowly dress on her one-piece swimsuit, stretching it as it ran through her skin, until she had it fully dressed and pulled the zip behind her back, to fixate it through the young girl’s slim body. Helena already worn it before, but even with this fact, she still got impressed about how well it had fit into her body, it was really shiny, smooth and tight, making she feel very pretty and kind of sensual.
While this, all the other members already had dressed themselves, and were coming out of their respective bedrooms. Amanda chuckled as everyone was wearing one-piece swimsuits, just like hers, except for Cassandra, which worn a dress to stay on the outside.
"Amanda." Mackenzie said, looking at her up and down while, which made she instantly recognize that look in Mac’s eyes.
"I’m so glad that Helena is with us this summer." Amanda said, reminding her who would be the one suffering this year. Mother Mac had drunk on her tears, torment, whimpering and squirming of years ago, her oldest daughter wanted to remind her mother that it would not be happening this summer, at least not to her.
"Yes, she has such a lovely body doesn’t she?" Mac exclaimed.
"You do as well of course. Still do. Still…" Amanda said, which in turn made Mac giggle as her daughter rolled her eyes.
While this conversation happened, Helena could barely hear some muffled noises coming from the main corridor that gives access to the bedrooms, these coming from all the chatter that was happening in parallel. After dressing herself properly, she carefully combed her hear again and inhaled deeply, also stretching herself, feeling the whole outfit also stretching to accommodate her flexible and slim body. Then, she started to take steps towards the exit, barefoot already, since it felt really appropriate for the moment, and when opened it she found herself with all her family members also wearing one-piece swimsuits. "What a coincidence, haha."
Helena was genuinely stunning in that outfit, the shiny texture of the deep dark blue color that contoured her curves was something really stunning to see, specially in contrast to the other swimsuits on the room. The only one that came close being the one that Mac wore, which was a tight red one-piece swimsuit that made her bust and chest much more prominent. It also made sense someway, since the warm and striking character of the red color would completely overwhelm and make a direct contrast with the dark blue of Helena’s piece.
As everyone’s attention turned to Helena, Mac exclaimed "Ah Helena! You look so lovely."
The way in which she was received by the other members of the crew made her really happy and comfortable, the fact that basically everyone was wearing also one-piece swimsuits only made the whole group look even more connected and of the same nature. Helena was feeling genuinely euphoric making part of that.
It was when she noticed that mother Mac held a small package in her hands, "I bought this for you, hope you like it dear!", her mother said.
Helena eagerly took the package into her hands, thinking that it would be something which she would be able to use in the pool, like glasses or some paraphernalia, but then she felt that the contents within it were light and soft, evidencing that it would be some kind of clothing. At first, she was struck with some kind of confusion, since that would be a little strange time to offer her that, since it probably would be a piece of clothing, she would not even have the opportunity to wear it now since she would enter into the pool.
Anyway, Helena decided to open it right there at the moment, and while unwrapping the package, she could also hear some weird noises similar to metallic jangling coming from it, which made her even more confused. When she finally finished the unwrapping, she stumbled on something really strange…
(TO BE CONTINUED...)
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An Unforgettable Summer (FFFFF/NB) [Chapter 1]
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