JEFF AND ANDYS FIRST CAMPING TRIP (m/m)

[Camguy2050]

JEFF AND ANDYS FIRST CAMPING TRIP (m/m)



DISCLAIMER
ALL IMAGES AND VIDS ARE Ai GENERATED

Hello readers this is my first story

Character info

Jeff is a 13 year old blond boy who loves surfing and TUGS
Andy is also 13 he is a redhead who loves surfing and TUGS

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Chapter 1

Jeff and Andy were talking about TUGS during lunch at school on Monday.

“Hey Andy, what are you doing this weekend? I was thinking of going surfing at Main Beach.”

“Jeff, why don’t we go camping for the weekend? If we camp at middle beach. we can also surf; and its just around the corner from my brother’s house so if we have any problems we can just go to his place.”

“Ok Mate, let’s ask our parents when we get home tonight.”

………….

Jeff and Andy were so excited that they might be able to go camping on the weekend that the afternoon classes seemed to drag on forever. When the bell rang at the end of the last period, they rushed out of school and went straight home. They both lived in different directions from the school.

……….

Jeff got home and ran inside the house, calling out for his mother, but there was no reply. A bit disappointed he went to his room and put down his school bag. Then he went to the kitchen to get something to eat and drink.

He went back to his room and turned on his laptop. He opened the browser and went to his favourite web site, “Stories of Tie Up Games”, and then went to the tug art section and started looking at all the different pics of boys tied up, dreaming of what Andy might do to him on the weekend. He was so dazed out that he didn’t notice his mother was standing at his bedroom door until she spoke. He almost jumped through the roof; lucky for him, his mum couldn’t see his laptop screen from where she was standing.

“Oh hi mum, I need to ask you something,” Jeff Said.

“Ok, but you need to come and help me get the shopping bags out of the car, and then put all the shopping away, then we can sit down and talk while I have a cup of coffee,” Mum said.


end part 1



I have tagged all of you wonderful writers because i have enjoyed reading your works and the replies you leave for others works

hope you all enjoy mine,,,

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@Killua
@Xtc
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@BDBrit
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@1990Kidnapping
@TuggyBoundMale

[WhereAmI]

But mom we dont have time for coffee, this is really important and I dont want to get tied up in all the details.

Good start let's hope for a great weekend for Jeff and Andy.

[Killua]

You tagged me, so I guess you expect me to write a comment. I actually can’t write much about the story yet to be honest. The part is quite short and I have no idea where it will lead to. So the story surely has potential to become good, but I have absolutely no idea how it will turn out.

The writing seems fine to me so far. It is obvious that Jeff clearly loves being tied up and even nearly got caught looking at bondage pictures. So I guess he is probably more the less careful type who is more likely to get stuck in selfbondage or agreeing to positions or durations of being tied up he will regret later when with his friend just because he is too excited about a tie up idea.

About the writing style, I would really prefer it if you mark your speeches in some way, like at the end of your part where you did but unlike at the beginning where they talked to each other without using “” or other symbols. The part was really short, but in longer parts it would become exhausting to read lines twice because I don’t know if that was a description, a speech or maybe just a thought. Personally I’m a fan of a little longer parts. The part was quite short. It set the scene nicely though, so people know that there will be tie up games at a camping trip between two friends. So it is a good way to help readers decide if that is going to be a story they are interested in. For later parts, I personally prefer them to be a little longer, but that’s personal taste. With the current length, I probably won’t write a response to every part and rather wait a little to be able to read more in a single go. As I said, personal preference.

So I’m curious to see what this story will be like when it progressed a little further

[Camguy2050]

You tagged me, so I guess you expect me to write a comment. I actually can’t write much about the story yet to be honest. The part is quite short and I have no idea where it will lead to. So the story surely has potential to become good, but I have absolutely no idea how it will turn out.

The writing seems fine to me so far. It is obvious that Jeff clearly loves being tied up and even nearly got caught looking at bondage pictures. So I guess he is probably more the less careful type who is more likely to get stuck in selfbondage or agreeing to positions or durations of being tied up he will regret later when with his friend just because he is too excited about a tie up idea.

About the writing style, I would really prefer it if you mark your speeches in some way, like at the end of your part where you did but unlike at the beginning where they talked to each other without using “” or other symbols. The part was really short, but in longer parts it would become were exhausting to ready lines twice because I don’t know if that was a description, a speech or maybe just a thought. Personally I’m a fan of a little longer parts. The part was quite short. It set the scene nicely though, so people know that there will be tie up games at a camping trip between two friends. So it is a good way to help readers decide if that is going to be a story they are interested in. For later parts, I personally prefer them to be a little longer, but that’s personal taste. With the current length, I probably won’t write a response to every part and rather wait a little to be able to read more in a single go. As I said, personal preference.

So I’m curious to see what this story will be like when it progressed a little further

thanks for your reply. i will endeavor to make the chapters longer and put in speech marks

[harveygasson]

Interesting start, looking forward to reading what you come up with.

[Xtc]

Hi, @Camguy2050. It's always good to greet a new writer and thanks for enjoying my work.

I've pm'd you.