I thought so


I was really tempted.
I thought so
Quite the tangled web Brooke has found herself caught in... and not just metaphorically tangled eitherRopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago
And of course another twist and layer to it all. The fact of Brooke beginning to fall for Kira, manipulated, in part into having feelings, into wanting and missing her.
Amusing indeed - but a little forward as well of Brooke to, as she says, negotiate on behalf of someone whose opinion is not even known yet. But I can certainly imagine why she might want to bring a friend along, as it were.RopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago Me negotiating on Fayth's behalf for a job she might not even want, the humour of it all almost bringing laughter at least twice.
Ah yes, Brooke the wandering arboriculturist chainsaw-for-hire - almost sounds like some kind of strange spin-off
A verbal slip dripping with meaning - Brooke already starting to fully embrace her Plymouth persona. A long held balance that has been upturned. Something that I suspect might not end well, given her penchant for diving ever deeper into bondage. But I suppose we shall have to see.RopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago "Pl." Brooke, shouting at myself, causing a flashed smile which she returns with a scowl. "Brooke, from Owl. Is Mrs Castleford available?"
Well with an offer like that, how could anyone refuse?RopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago "Stay, I'll bind you to the chair and then you get to watch Laura bind me."
A stretched pause, Laura opening her mouth and something muffled emerging. The beginnings of words, nothing intelligible. And, very slowly as though afraid the seat might catch fire, Ruth sits down.
Cannot disagree that it would have been interesting, and yet equally, as you mention yourself, stretching credulity more then a little to the point of threatening immersion.RopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago Al. Most.
Went and rewrote the entire back end of the chapter. Basically something along the lines of Laura casting Brooke out, giving her to Ruth, or simply Ruth taking over, owning both Brooke and Laura.
I even entertained brief thoughts of Brooke somehow being sent back to Owl in a crate.
None of which works particularly well, in the 'real' world. And plus it would've been several chapters, and I was equally keen to move the story along.
Appreciated!RopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago But I wanted to mention it anyway, give a small insight into the mind of the Rope Bunny x
And if only this weren't a TUGs site, I'd write thisBlissfulMisery wrote: 3 weeks agoAh yes, Brooke the wandering arboriculturist chainsaw-for-hire - almost sounds like some kind of strange spin-off![]()
That damn quotaBlissfulMisery wrote: 3 weeks ago
Certainly some 'well now that we are no longer employer and employee...' vibes between Brooke and Laura, even if it was not really planned - but of course the bondage quota must be fulfilled
"We've had one bondage scene yes, but what about a second one?", to butcher a quoteRopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago
That damn quota![]()
Which to be fair I'm happy to fill. It's- for me at least -kind of a game. This is how I want the story to flow, so, how can I add bondage to that?![]()
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Shh, do not let all the other plants know about the fact that you have favorites, Brooke, or they might get jealous
Well, given the genre we are in, she would probably be tied up at the bottom of the van. Or in the trunk, like a 'normal' personRopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago Or even, actually laughing and almost getting out to check, is Kira right now hanging underneath dressed all in black, some kind of movie spy shit.
A nice call back to past tales.RopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago "Cheers."
"To your very good health."
"To certain disaster." Pondering, bottles still held high, Fayth regarding me, waiting. "Or not, obviously, because we've got this."
"Hope so." Clinking with me a second time. "Nothing you haven't-"
"We."
"We." A shrug, a smile. "It's been done before, by you." Waving my open mouth off, which I shut with a grin. "Us, and done well."
...And speaking of 'the quota' rearing it's head againRopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago And it takes a professional to hogtie someone in the near darkness: wrists and ankles crossed, a third rope reeled in tight enough I can brush fingers across my toes.
Certainly connotations and implications there, with using that specific word.
Or a third....BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 weeks ago"We've had one bondage scene yes, but what about a second one?", to butcher a quoteRopeBunny wrote: 3 weeks ago
That damn quota![]()
Which to be fair I'm happy to fill. It's- for me at least -kind of a game. This is how I want the story to flow, so, how can I add bondage to that?![]()
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BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 weeks ago [Shh, do not let all the other plants know about the fact that you have favorites, Brooke, or they might get jealous
So, going for a bondage high score?RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago
Might have to aim at a high multiple count in a future chapter, just for the fun of it![]()
Well... more like 'how Plymouth wishes every day would start'
Of course - for the cameraRopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago "Want to struggle?"
"For." Almost laughing again, small cough instead but a small blush too. "The camera."
I would make a joke about how her vocabulary of choice in such regards is limited to a certain three letter word... but honestly, in reality it is more along the lines of gagged moaning
Kira has *really* wormed her way into Brooke's thoughts...RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago Thoughts drifting, to Kira and isn't that what a stalker does: makes you the centre of thier world?
Wondering where she is, missing her though I shouldn't and so far there's been no danger. But, could there be?
Ah yes, an amusing bit of legal distinction there (that I presume you are poking fun at).RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago Bondage, but not porn because we're on stage, not on camera, and so there are rules.
Had been thinking about/remembering exactly that before you mentioned it. A nice callback.RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago I only own the name and the rights now because Trevor had the foresight to buy it up for me, to gift me.
There is a terrible joke in there that I will let lie
Mmm... I suspect not, Brooke.
TrueBlissfulMisery wrote: 2 weeks agoI would make a joke about how her vocabulary of choice in such regards is limited to a certain three letter word... but honestly, in reality it is more along the lines of gagged moaning
Second draft addition there, Trevor making it into the rewrite where I go through and expand on what needs it, change what no longer works.BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 weeks ago
Had been thinking about/remembering exactly that before you mentioned it. A nice callback.RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago I only own the name and the rights now because Trevor had the foresight to buy it up for me, to gift me.
A terrible joke I couldn't help but include, which yes, doesn't need mentioning
Now if only she were so diligent with keeping a lid on other bad habits.RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago drinking water because beer is a bad habit, something to be savoured rarely.
Ah yes, nothing like waking up to a video of yourself (that you never knew was even recorded). Creepy love letter indeed...RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago It's me, on my own small phone screen. Bound and gagged, naked, trussed and stretched to the four corners of my Scottish hotel bed. Sleeping, snoring the soft inhale exhale of the drunk.
Just the right mix of exciting and yet a little terrifying.RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago 'Okay. Yes x' Almost howling in frustration as only one tick appears, Kira's- and who else, really could it be -rapid disappearance, her assumption of my willingness to play. Coming, going, treating me like a toy, like a thing she can click her fingers and command.
The perks of being an adult - being free to ignore all the good advice you have been given. When one is a child, one wants to grow up so they can do whatever they want, not realizing that the restrictions placed upon them are often a safety net rather then a burden (well, not implying that *all* restrictions are always for ones benefit/good of course, but the problem is that it is often hard to tell the difference when younger).RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago Instead I'd likely give her a thirty minute lecture on the benefits of surrender, the perks of having no respect for such trivial things as personal safety.
Think there is a word missing - multiple options, but all of them leading to pretty much the same end result/meaning, I suppose.
Ah, so the answer to 'what' they are - just friends (with bondage benefits), apparentlyRopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago 'If you don't, then I'll assume you don't like me, that we aren't friends. But, more importantly I'll know you DON'T do as you're told x'
A fun way to wake up
Love the symmetry, the oscillation back and forth. Being 'led around' by the sensations, only serving to further highlight ones complete helplessness.RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago and seconds later, as though to temper the pain with pleasure: a kiss. Soft, brush of warm lips against mine which open in welcome, feeling a tongue slipping in, probing.
Breath catching as the nipple clamp is tugged, twisted. Pain to temper the pleasure and I moan
Nice catch, Brooke, although far far too lateRopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago "I, wanted to. I love."
Words drying up as I realise what I just said, what I almost just said next.
You.
"Love, your attentions. So, please." Pushing my chest out again, voice coming out a little wavering now, because I'm asking. "May I have the clamp back."
Nothing ever so delicious as the feel of cold hard steel, unforgiving, biting down on my soft protruding nipple.
Take your time, and- hopefully -enjoy the rest as you catch upCaesar73 wrote: 2 weeks ago I have some catching up to do? But from what I read so far? Excellent as usual!
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Then again, if that were the case, there would be about half as much story to tell
Perils of editing. Either I forgot to add 'girl' after good, or I forgot to remove the 'a'BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 weeks agoThink there is a word missing - multiple options, but all of them leading to pretty much the same end result/meaning, I suppose.
BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 weeks ago
Liked the description of her mind racing through various scenarios - fitting for the headspace she is in.
BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 weeks ago
Also seems like you were playing at trying to fit as much bondage in as possible as discussed/mentioned, with the various imagining/dream scenarios![]()
True, but it's the trials that make everything interesting
Definitely
IndeedRopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks agodefinitely not going to be giving up ALL her bad habits, I'd have nothing to write
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Fair enough - just seemed strangely coincidentalRopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago
But what I wrote there, the multiple bondage scenarios running through Brooke's head whilst she ran towards the hotel room. I'd done those awhile ago, so no, it wasn't an intentional attempt![]()
Very much enjoying being along for the ride.RopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago I'm enjoying letting things unfold naturally anyway, seeing where my gut and the flow takes things.
All of the above?RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Urgent appointment? A demanding stalker, obsessed fan? A complete loss of self regard, again?
A good argument for 'look before you speak', I suppose.RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago "You beautiful and sexy minx I could ki...." Words drying on my lips, mouth working but no more sound, shock bringing me to an abrupt halt. Staring, and across the room, impossibly: Dorothy, blush rising on her cheeks, a small nerve filled giggle erupting from her lips.
"Dorothy?"
"Hi." Clearing her throat, blushing some more. "Um. Surprise."
"Well." Laughing myself, head shaking. Trying to mask the crashing disappointment inside, like a dropped weight into my belly, falling into a dark pit and it isn't fair, on Dorothy.
RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Letting her release the tension, the frustration, on me. Certain I deserve it, playing dead, gone doll like not fighting back.
Dorothy walking out, leaving me.
What I deserve. Maybe.
She has a bit of an obsession with military time I see...
Oof. Not very responsible of either of them, but I fully understand both perspectives. Dorothy's being obvious (feeling snubbed after Brooke kind of led her on), and for Brooke, the desire to be punished in some way for a self-perceived wrongdoing. For we can often be our own worst critics (well, not true for narcissists I suppose, but you know), and guilt can be an extremely difficult emotion to work through.RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago I've been here for five hours, plus or minus. Dorothy's revenge, which I basically rolled over and took, feeling like it was deserved, justified. Letting her hogtie me, anger on display in the harshly yanked ropes, the complete lack of freedom I've had since she left.
Not even glancing back, closing the door and storming out.
Or, you know, they wind up deadRopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago We talk often, so Fayth is quite aware of the train wreck that is my love life. My consistently bad choices: drawn to girls who spell doom, for me, whilst seemingly incapable of finding, keeping a normal, healthy relationship going.
Twisted, strange, one might even say tangled... One of the endless conundrums and contradictions of such interests.RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago It's a twisted and strange thing we have and share, that I can be down in the pit, and Fayth can simultaneously want to help me, and get off on the fact of my state at the same time.
That I can be okay with that, can even take some pleasure in her enjoyment of me back, like a loop.
In fairness I do not think Fayth (or anyone really) needs much 'leverage' over Brooke to convince her into bondageRopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Giving me a look as she speaks, wondering at angles and leverage, into me and always interested in playing, with me.
TrueBlissfulMisery wrote: 1 week agoFair enough - just seemed strangely coincidentalRopeBunny wrote: 2 weeks ago
But what I wrote there, the multiple bondage scenarios running through Brooke's head whilst she ran towards the hotel room. I'd done those awhile ago, so no, it wasn't an intentional attempt![]()
BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 week agoGoing to mark this up as potential foreshadowingRopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Hopefully her various 'associates' do not find out about each other, or things might get a little awkward/complicated - the scheduling alone already promises to be a nightmare at this rate
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because it's likely too much fun and games NOT to have some kind of crash, at some future point. And indeed the idea had already appeared.
Indeed, aiming for depression there, feeling bad, sorry for herself.BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 week agoRopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Letting her release the tension, the frustration, on me. Certain I deserve it, playing dead, gone doll like not fighting back.
Dorothy walking out, leaving me.
What I deserve. Maybe.![]()
Again, true.
Whether it was obvious or not I actually merged two shorter chapters: Brooke coming home to find Dorothy, followed by the initially separate Fayth coming home to find Brooke.
I had let the second part of this run away from me. That bondage quotagetting filled as Fayth took advantage, but on reading back I didn't like it, didn't want yet another instance of Brooke being taken advantage of, even willingly, so what you see is the result.
Had noticed it seemed like a longer chapter then usual. And cannot disagree with anything you said - makes sense for multiple reasons.RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago
Whether it was obvious or not I actually merged two shorter chapters: Brooke coming home to find Dorothy, followed by the initially separate Fayth coming home to find Brooke.
I had let the second part of this run away from me. That bondage quotagetting filled as Fayth took advantage, but on reading back I didn't like it, didn't want yet another instance of Brooke being taken advantage of, even willingly, so what you see is the result.
Small world, I suppose.RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Dorothy.
Who works in the waterpark, as a manager of some kind, judging by the individuality of her clothing.
Of course - as any professional stalker worth her salt wouldRopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Another unrecognised number and she must've bought SIM's in bulk, I muse
Brooke is *really* lost in the proverbial weeds here. Also not sure if Kira's games are really all *that* clever given she mostly just repeatedly pulls on the same thread of Brooke's personality - not too difficult to manipulate someone who melts if you dangle a pair of shiny handcuffs in front of them. (Exaggerating a little for comedic effect, but you know it is kind of trueRopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago But I'm supposed to be ignoring Kira and her advances and demands and clever games, but if I don't reply she'll think I don't miss her when in fact I.
"Do."
Well, not unless a certain individual sends you another message...
And as if on cue...RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Frustration too at Kira, for not leaving me alone despite I haven't actually told her to leave me alone.
That she should just be psychic, or something, and know, is apparently perfectly obvious, in my head anyway.
Not that she needed to prove it, but Fayth really is a true friend to Brooke.
Hmm... even odds on if this actually goes according to plan. Not in the sense that I think Kira will somehow sabotage anything, but more that Brooke will self-sabotage/be unable to take her mind off Kira.
This was my original idea, the base premise that everything else slowly grew out of.BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 week agoSmall world, I suppose.RopeBunny wrote: 1 week ago Dorothy.
Who works in the waterpark, as a manager of some kind, judging by the individuality of her clothing.
Which to be fair is almost a given, the Plymouth/Kira angle is far from over.
Well....BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 week ago
Hmm... even odds on if this actually goes according to plan. Not in the sense that I think Kira will somehow sabotage anything, but more that Brooke will self-sabotage/be unable to take her mind off Kira.