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GIVEN THAT THIS TALE IS DIFFERENT FROM THE REST OF MY WORKS AND THAT IT MAY NOT BE OF INTEREST TO MANY READERS, I'M GOING TO RELY ON THE NUMBER OF COMMENTS I GET TO GAUGE THE AMOUNT OF INTEREST THERE IS. IF YOU ENJOY WHAT YOU'RE ABOUT TO READ, PLEASE LET ME KNOW BY SIGNALLING YOUR PRESENCE IN THE COMMENTS.

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CHAPTER 1 - JOURNEY TO THE DEEP


Far beneath the windswept shores, snowpeaked mountains, and flowery fields of Faerûn stretched another world. An unspoken world. Not a world of sun and seas, but one of angst, darkness and terrors to freeze the soul.

The labyrinth of winding tunnels and underground caverns was rumoured to be teeming with life. It was said that those beings which flourished deep within the sunless depths of the earth were both strange and twisted. It was a land cloaked in near-perpetual darkness, filled with poisonous mushrooms and bioluminescent fungi. Scholars had long theorised that the Underdark was home not only to deadly creatures and long-forgotten secrets, but also to powerful civilisations. It is also said that those who travel to its depths - be it willingly or not - never return.



Elias had never meant to stray so far from the westbound caravan that would lead him straight to the bustling city of Baldur's Gate. A moment's curiosity, veering from the dusty road to examine what appeared to be a crumbling ruin, was all it took. By the time his senses alerted him to the sharp click of a crossbow, it was already too late. Cloaked raiders swooped in like shadows, masked and silent, emerging from shrubs and crevices like they'd been waiting there all along.

Elias begged, but the men weren't interested in coin. Just bodies. The potent sleeping agent coating the tip of a crossbow bolt did the rest, promptly sending the panicked lad into a debilitating slumber.

They bound him, cruelly tight. Four or five of the masked highwaymen piled atop his light frame and trussed him up with more rope than necessary, even as another one forced a generous wad of cloth into the cavity of his mouth and secured a thick brown muzzle over his amply stuff-gagged face.

Bound and gagged, Elias was carried off under the cover of nightfall. He was carried off through wild fields, hidden mountain passes and into ominous tunnels that seemingly dipped below the earth.


Days blurred into darkness, the air growing colder and the silence unmistakably heavier. Though heavily drugged, the still-bound captive was lucid enough to realise that the raiders and their shoddy cavalcade had come to a full stop. They had reached a rocky hollow carved with faintly glowing, geometric-shaped runes.

It was there that the grey dwarves – commonly referred to as duergar - waited.



No questions were asked. No names were spoken. Just a quick, silent inspection of raw goods and the clink of payment in gleaming metal cubes. Without a word, Elias's slumped form was uncaringly dragged off his pack mule. His face was relieved of the thick muzzle, and an iron collar was fastened around his neck.

He was taken - dragged into the far deeper and far darker reaches of the Underdark. Behind him, the sounds and smells of the sun-lit world were already fading to memory. What gods he had wronged or what sins he had committed to deserve this fate, he did not know. His only certainty was darkness and the promise of grim deeds to come.



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The stone halls of the grey dwarven city stank of sweat and soot. Elias could no longer tell if it was day or night in the world up above. Days stretched into what seemed like weeks – his existence guided only by the rhythm of the lash, the creak of ore carts, and the heavy thumping of duergar boots.

His hands bled almost constantly now. The crude pick they'd given him was too large and too heavy. The ore too dense. The air too thin, and his rations far too minimal. Still, he tried. Every day, he clawed into the black rock until his shoulders burned and his lungs threatened to give out. But it wasn't enough. It was never enough.

"Ya call that diggin', lad?" barked the merciless Overseer in charge of the slave cohort, his bald head glistening in the torchlight. The duergar's voice was like gravel under cart wheels. "I've seen one-armed goblins swing harder than that!"

Elias didn't answer, of course. He had learned to bite back his retorts. He only nodded, limply, and reached for the pick again.

The Overseer sneered in disdain and motioned for a nearby guard. "He's useless! He can't haul, he can't mine, he can't even lift a bloody crate without sobbin'!"

His eyes scanned the human like one might a sickened mule - contempt written all over his bearded grey face. "We overpaid."

The approaching guard grunted, apparently concurring with the other dwarf's harsh judgment.

"Toss him into the pit." came the Overseer's gruffly-voiced command.


Elias's stomach immediately tightened at the sound of those words. He'd heard whispers - hints of the pit. A place where the feeble and broken were tossed. A place where those too weak to work were sent to rot. A place where those too insignificant to waste resources on were forgotten. No light. No warmth. No water unless it dripped from the walls. Just the distant echoes of tired grunts and the constant clang of pickaxes hitting rock.

"Be grateful, surface rat." The Overseer spat with a curled lip. "At least down there, no one will bother you to work."

Elias didn't resist as they grabbed him. He couldn't. His legs barely held him upright as they pulled him by the heavy chain at his neck; dragging him past the churning forges and past other slaves who didn't dare watch the spectacle.

As the iron gate to the stinking pit groaned open, and the reeking dark swallowed him, Elias realised something he hadn't yet thought of: death would have been mercy. This was worse, however. This wasn't just death. It was erasure.



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Elias spent what seemed like days curled up at the bottom of the lightless pit. He lay among the bones of the long ago deceased, half-asleep, lips parched from thirst and aching limbs colder than usual. He hadn't eaten in so long that the pangs of hunger had begun to dwindle.

Then came the heavy thud of boots. And judging by the sound of it, lots of them.


Three guards wordlessly entered the pit, yanking him upright by his thin arms, and dragging his starved body from the stone cell without explanation. His bare feet scraped over the stone floors. He didn't fight. He didn't have the strength to resist.

They brought him not to the mines nor to the relentless forges, but to a tiled chamber thick with the scent of oil and something reminiscent of lavender. A single brazier burned low in the corner, and a particularly thick-bearded, stout duergar stood beside a water-filled basin, arms folded and scowling like he was not the least bit happy to be there.

"Strip him down, boys!" the old dwarf grumbled. "And be quick about it. Them blasted drow like 'em squeaky clean."


Elias blinked. The words didn't make sense at first. But then came the scrubbing - rough hands with even rougher brushes, lukewarm water scented with surface flowers and aromatic herbs. They scraped the dust, grease and grime from his skin, cut his matted blond hair, and left nary an inch of him unwashed and unexplored.

A robe of thin fabric was draped over his slim torso. It covered his hairless chest and trailed all the way down to his toes, whilst at the same time leaving both of his bony shoulders exposed and revealing much of his left thigh via an indecently high slit. This wasn't clothing, Elias recognised. It was presentation. A gift wrapping, if you will. Only, he was to be the gift.


The older duergar laughed. "There ya go, lassie. Lookin' almost as pretty as one o' your wee surface flowers." he chortled, pinching the skinny human's bum and causing the rest of the stout group to erupt into poorly subdued laughter.

Then came the heavy bronze necklace - more like a collar really - and a pair of matching wrist cuffs; nothing magical, but undeniably ornamental. The drow – if such heathen even existed - would surely understand its meaning.

It was only then that Elias allowed his watery gaze to rise and his hoarse voice to pose a question: "Why...?"

The old duergar, now inspecting a small crate of violet gemstones and rare ore nearby, paused. He didn't even bother to look up. "Shipment's late again." he warily muttered. "House Druu'giir expects tribute this week. We're short by two hundred weights of soulstone and three dozen firegems." the dwarf added, before angrily kicking one crate.

He finally turned his dark eyes towards the scrawny young man. "So we sweeten the offering. Trinkets. Relics. And you."


Elias just stared at him - utter disbelief lining his ghostly pale features.

The duergar merely shrugged, some minuscule string of guilt apparently tugging at his cold, darkened heart. "Oh, don't be looking so surprised, petal. Them dark elves be likin' your kind. Soft, breakable, obedient." His tone wasn't cruel - just matter-of-fact, like someone explaining why the wind blows or why the sun disappears at night.

"You won't like it there. Those pointy-eared bastards be much crueller than we are." the stout dwarf confidently boasted, his loathing for the dark elves - more commonly referred to as drow - quite literally dripping with every word.

"But business is business. 'Tis nothing personal." he went on to grumble, before walking over and tightening one of the heavy bronze cuffs adorning the scrawny human's wrists.

Elias didn't speak again. He simply stood there, wrapped in fabric that felt foreign on his freshly bathed skin, breathing air that smelled too clean, and waiting for a journey that would carry him even deeper into the lightless depths of this soul-crushing world. Deeper into the Underdark and right into the awaiting clutches of those infamously sadistic drow.




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I'm ready for more! This board needs more stories like this, full fantasy, and with darker more mature themes. I'd say after this introductory chapter I'm curious to know how the Drow react to receiving this package in lieu of what they were promised. Doesn't bode well for their treatment of Elias. Can't wait to see what Drow have in store for their new slave.
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Much greenest with the above, variety like this is always a fun addition.
Also the plot lines up pretty perfectly as a way for our poor young fella to end up with the Drow.
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I don’t know anything really going into this story, but I honestly can’t wait for more! I would’ve loved more pictures but your writing illustrates enough… is it cruel I hope there’s orcs coming later on in the story?
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It certainly seems like Elias is making a pretty rapid decent through the circles of hell! He really shouldn't have wandered alone. Will being given to the Drow as a gift be a better fate than being left to rot in the pit? At least they seem to value cleanliness if he had to be scrubbed first!

A new fantasy world to me but it all makes sense so far.
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I love stories set in these kinds of fantasy settings—the creative possibilities are so vast that the next step always feels like a mystery, even if you set limits. I couldn’t reply to the thread about the theme itself, but since we’re here: drows are familiar to me, though it’s a fantasy genre I’ve never dug too deep into. Either way, I’ve got high hopes for this new story!
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Well this seems really interesting. Never thought I'd see D&D lore in a bondagefreak story, lol. I haven't really tried reading fantasy bondage stories, since I always assumed I wouldn't like really them, and while I don't yet know for sure if I'll like this one or not, judging from the introduction, I actually might.

Choosing D&D as a lore base for this is such a fun touch though. Wonder what those dark elves have in mind for Elias.
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Great start! Looking forward to seeing where things go for poor Elias!
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Marvelous! I can really see the Salvatore influence in your writing here. I'm looking forward to seeing what becomes of Elias in service to House Druu'giir. Poor lad!
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Redman wrote: 2 days ago Marvelous! I can really see the Salvatore influence in your writing here.
Oh my. That is one heck of a compliment. Thank you so much, @Redman. I have long admired Salvatore's works. His writing is very poignant. He writes from a sort of omniscient 3rd-person perspective, but somehow it still always manages to make us feel really close to the characters. I usually find it harder to connect to 3rd-person narration, but his works are one of the rare exceptions.

This is entirely new territory for me (not the genre, I've written on Fanfiction.net in the past), but the narration. Most of my tales here are in 1st person. I am so very unused to writing 3rd-person. I was constantly having to correct myself while writing this opening chapter. My fingers are so used to typing "I" instead of "he". Anyways, glad you're enjoying this!


ChairBoy wrote: 2 days ago I don’t know anything really going into this story, but I honestly can’t wait for more! I would’ve loved more pictures but your writing illustrates enough… is it cruel I hope there’s orcs coming later on in the story?
That's great! Obviously, those with prior knowledge of D&D will instantly feel more at home reading this, but it's definitely a good sign if those with no prior knowledge still get something out of it. I'll strive to keep this story accessible and newbie-friendly. In a way, it sorta makes sense given that the main protagonist himself is basically being pulled into a world of the unknown.

As for your question, the short answer would have to be: Yes, there are many orcs where Elias is going. Without giving away spoilers, though, I'm not sure orcs will be quite the antagonists you're probably thinking they'll be ;)
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Plowed by the Drow
Porked by the Orc
Hanky-Panky with the Githyanki

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Thanks for the awesome comments and feedback, guys! I know it's only been 24 hours, but I'm going to go ahead and drop Chapter 2 in the hopes of securing those readers who are still a bit on the fence. Thanks again for the support!

HERE'S THE NEXT CHAPTER. ENJOY!


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* Drow - Dark elves, bitter enemies of the elves that live up on the surface. Known for their sadism and cruelty.
* Duergar - Subterranean grey dwarves. Slavers known for their craftsmanship and smithing skills.
* Lolth - Evil goddess of the drow, also known as Queen of Spiders and Lady Lolth.
* Matron Mother - The matriarch at the head of a noble house. Typically, a high priestess of Lolth.
* Menzoberranzan - Holy city of the drow. Small by human standards. Population: 60,000 (20,000 drow/40,000 slaves)
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* AUTHOR'S NOTE *
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CHAPTER 2 - THE ROAD TO MENZOBERRANZAN


The day-long journey across winding tunnels and fungi-lit caverns was gruelling. The bulky bronze collar chaffed at Elias's unprotected neck, and so did the thick manacles that adorned his hopelessly diminutive wrists. He had been fed, though just barely, before being dragged through the rune-encrusted doors that marked the entrance to the dwarven city.

"Don’t pull." grunted the grumpy duergar handler assigned to the heavy leash connected to his neck. "You don’t walk, we drag."

There was no ceremony and no escort of guards to see them off. Just a stout wagon drawn by a pair of blind lizards, flanked not by one but four grim-faced duergar. Elias had been hurriedly bundled into the wagon like some object of little worth; tossed among crates filled with gems, rare fungi, and other assorted artefacts.

The cart moved along through the echoing tunnels of the Underdark, deeper and deeper into realms where light had never shone – save for the faint blueish glow emanating from dense mushroom forests. Elias could barely see, for unlike the creatures that inhabited this alien world, his eyes were virtually useless in the dark.



Time passed without meaning. The small procession stopped just once, and only for a brief half-hour or so. Food was hard bread soaked in something bitter. Ale, perhaps. Not exactly a meal fit for kings, and barely enough of it to keep Elias's stomach from growling. The stomping of dwarven boots and the occasional creaking of cart wheels soon resumed. The long journey continued, with only the occasional grunt or hushed command peppering the otherwise eerie silence.

The cart came to a halt several times, and Elias could tell by the stout leader's wary face and cautious gesturing that the group was on high alert. There were far worse things lurking down here than even a seasoned group of battle-hardened dwarves.

Finally, after what seemed like hours of cautious trekking, the tunnel began to widen.

The air noticeably shifted. It was tinged with strange, flowery spices and the poignant smell of incense. Even in the dark, Elias could sense it. Its pull was invisible to the naked eye, but its power was unmistakable: magic.


Menzoberranzan spread out before them, a vast city carved into the heart of a colossal cavern. Its towers spiralled upwards like fangs, both twisted and elegant. Bridges of web-like stone criss-crossed high above the city floor, forming roads and connecting different estates – many of which seemed built into the huge stalagmites that jutted up from the ground. Elias could only guess at the size of the impressive city, though from a casual glance, it appeared to be at least several kilometres wide.

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The whole cavern-city glowed with an almost otherworldly radiance. Veins of enchanted crystal lit its walls in soft purples hues, casting shadows that seemingly shifted even when nothing moved. Tall spires shimmered with magical wards. Floating glyphs – similar to those used by human wizards - rotated lazily above the various estates, marking them as places of power.

It was beautiful in the same way a venomous serpent could be beautiful - elegant, precise, and absolutely deadly.


Elias stared, his breath shallow and his mouth left gaping in unabashed awe. Even though much of the journey had been spent crammed amongst the other goods that made up the makeshift appeasement package, his tired limbs ached.

Still, it wasn't the soreness of his body that bothered him. Rather, it was the tightening in his chest. The silent voice inside of him screamed. This wasn't right. This place...it was not meant for his kind. He had seen cruelty before. But this, this was completely different. The entire city was built around it. A civilisation that didn’t just tolerate domination - it exuded it.



As soon as they reached the city entrance and negotiated passage past the guards, the young human's shackled form was hurried off the small cart, and his dishevelled robe was hastily straightened.

He trudged behind two of his duergar handlers, the leash from his collar gripped tight in one of their calloused fists. Behind them followed two more stout guards, both of them bearing small crates filled with gleaming violet gems and relics from deep beneath the earth. It was an attempt at appeasement. A tribute in place of a delayed shipment. And him? Well...he was just the exotic, unwanted addition. Something soft and innocent to sweeten the deal. It was a bonus the duergar apparently hoped would help preserve their shaky alliance with House Druu'giir.


As they made their way past the busy market stalls and entered Menzoberranzan's far quieter and more austere noble tier, the city's cold grandeur pressed in from all sides. The air hummed with magical residue, and the sound of buzzing wards and distant laughter bounced off walls like threats in disguise. One misstep could spell the end of them all.

Their path led them along a wide, winding walkway carved with unreadable glyphs and lined with phosphorescent fungi gardens. Elias had been warned to keep his gaze down, but the frightened young man nevertheless allowed himself to cast the briefest of discreet glances up to the spiralling towers that loomed overhead.

He had never believed the drow to be real and had – like many humans – brushed them aside as being nothing more than mere figments of imagination. The dark elves were campfire tales and boogeyman stories conjured up to spook children before bed. He was wrong, of course. The drow were real. Very real. And judging by the striking appearance of this city, so were the tales of their unparalleled cruelty.

This was a place of predators, Elias knew. He could sense it. He could feel it. Not only in his heart, but in the very air he breathed. He was a sheep among wolves. Or more fitting yet, a fly among spiders.




The procession eventually came to a slow halt. In front of them loomed a tall, barbed gate made of blackened adamantine. At its doors sat the glowing sigil of what Elias assumed was House Druu'giir - eight spider legs loosely closing in around a clenched obsidian gauntlet. It screamed one thing and one thing only: Power.

The colossal doors groaned open, pulled inward by unseen gatekeepers. Elias was led inside.


The first thing he noticed was the sound. Not the quiet whispers of silk-clad nobles, nor the chanting of priestesses, but the rhythmic clack of boots on stone, the barked orders of drill masters and the recognisable clash of steel against steel.

Scores of drow warriors – most of them male - moved in fierce unison across a wide, open courtyard. They trained with spears, blades, whips, and curved sabres. Their dark, charcoal-coloured arms and partially armoured torsos glistened with sweat. Their movements were harsh, efficient, unrelenting.

Elias lowered his eyes quickly - but not before noticing something a bit peculiar. These drow were a tad different from the ones he had noticed in the busy market district. They were taller. Broader. Their physiques were noticeably bulkier than those he had seen at a distance. There was a heaviness to them - not only in physical weight, but in sheer presence as well.

Drow were – much like their surface-dwelling elven cousins - typically a tad shorter and of slightly leaner build than the average human man. They were physically a fair deal stronger than most humans, but rarely did they reach six feet in height. These drow, however, stood like seasoned killers - sharp, disciplined, alert and unusually large.

No one here lounged in fine garb. No one strolled idly through the spacious courtyard. Everything was combat.

"House Druu'giir." the lead duergar muttered, seemingly more to himself than for Elias's benefit. "Fourteenth house of Menzoberranzan, and climbing. The Matron, aye...a mighty ambitious one she is. Best we not keep her waiting." he added, fighting back the urge to spit on the ground, a combination of hate and begrudging respect clearly hinted at in his low-spoken words. Whoever this Matron was, she obviously was not one to be trifled with.


Elias didn't lift his head as they made their way across the busy courtyard, but he immediately felt the sting of a dozen stray glances sliding over him. Contempt, loathing, but most of all, curiosity.

The lead duergar bowed shallowly to one of the imposing, chainmail-clad soldiers. The irrefutably handsome drow – who was seemingly of high rank – leaned rather lazily against the open doorway that marked the entrance to the towering compound. His crimson eyes did not even stoop to acknowledge the grey dwarf's showy deference. Rather, they rested entirely on Elias, eyeing the starved human as one might eye a slowly-roasting piece of meat.

"A surface human?" he mused, his words monotone and even, but his tone betraying subtle hints of amusement. "Hmm. How delectable. I haven't seen one of his kind stroll through these gates in almost a century. The matron will be amused."

The duergar, to his credit, did not allow his vexation at being ignored to override his manners. He merely acknowledged the dismissive drow with another curt bow and then resumed his careful entry into the dauntingly menacing estate.


Elias allowed himself to catch one final glimpse of the courtyard. None of the warriors had stopped their drills to gawk at his presence. He was, at best, a footnote in their day. And a minor one at that. They merely shifted their eyes to watch him - another object, another gift, another piece of meat passing through their gate.

Whatever awaited him within the ominous walls of House Druu'giir, it would not be mercy. Of that he was certain.




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Great descriptions! Elias's sense of foreboding is well justified from the sheer presence of the city, and that's before he met with someone being openly dominant towards him. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
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I'm craving for such much more fantasy (or sci-fi for that matters) setting, and I enjoy seeing it at last on this forum. And by a great writer, that is. So keep it coming! I really want to see where this is going.
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I love the fantasy element!
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I'm... intrigued.

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A great description of Elias introduction to the beautiful yet deadly city of the Drow. It definitely sounds a very intimidating place to be if you're just a little human.
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the building of the atmosphere is very well done! The slow burn is great, as always!
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You know, @bondagefreak, that I am not one to comment much on your stories. But you have me hooked on this already. As Elias is unwillingly dragged deeper into the Underdark, your description of his surroundings, the dwarves, the city, and the elite Drow all give me a sense of dread and anticipation of what will happen to the poor, young man.

Thank you so much for this Tolkeinesque tale.
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I'm really surprised - and pleased - to see more of you enjoying this and signalling your presence in the comments.

I just wanted to let you guys know, a QUICK REFERENCE GLOSSARY will feature in the notification posts atop each chapter. The glossary is there to serve as a reminder and will be expanded to include more words & definitions as the narrative progresses. Should you guys have any questions regarding the definition of certain words, don't hesitate to say so.
FOR A LIST OF ALL MY WRITTEN WORKS, CLICK HERE: BONDAGEFREAK'S STORIES

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You got me on the edge of my seat!
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The glossary is a great idea, especially with this story rich world building
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Menzoberranzan sounds like the name of a medication lmao
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blackbound wrote: 2 days ago Plowed by the Drow
Porked by the Orc
Hanky-Panky with the Githyanki

...I'll see myself out.
I actually LMAOed at this. And then I shared these with my DnD group. We've been going through the monster manual trying to make more. And it's all your fault. :lol:

Some favorites:
Shagged by Hags.
Boned by a Gnome.
Laid with the Fey.
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