THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*

[GoBucks]

I'm happy to explore anything more with this story, but I'm going to vote A and F. Like the others said, I feel like A is broad and likely overlaps some with the other choices and you'd still get to see his interactions with the other guys.

F- I'd like to see more of Mark getting humiliated by his rival Matt. He avoided getting gassed like his brother was and I think he needs to experience that! I know this option doesn't mean it will play out like that, but I hope!

The Brody options intrigue me, but I'm not all that into role reversal and seeing an alpha type dominated. Would still love to see him fighting to make Sammy his though.

[Bound Down]

I think A and H could both be the most interesting (all of them would be). I'd love to see Andrew share more toys and ideas with the team.

[Ossassin]

E & F are my go tos, they sound fun.

[ChairBoy]

G without a doubt. I want to see how they interact with victims that struggle and are bratty, versus victims that instantly sub out to giant doms

And b. I do want to see how they keep getting away with it.

[Bradstick]

A - A DAY IN THE LIFE OF SAMMY, DETAILING THE DUTIES AND EXPECTATIONS SURROUNDING HIS NEW ROLE.

C - SAMMY'S CONTRASTING RELATIONSHIPS WITH CHAD, HUNTER, MATT, & BRODY.

I choose A and C. I will say that one thing I did not like about this story is we never go to know the inner thoughts of Sammy. I really want to read a story from Sammy perspective.

A story where we get to see what it’s like being Chad’s plaything but also managing his role with other three would be very interesting. Not to say I didn’t like the story but I definitely love a story from the sub’s perspective.

[vincenzotognolo22]

I would choose H and I, Brody and Andrew are two of my favorites characters ever

[Msueta@2]

I go with G and I

[bondagefreak]

I will say that one thing I did not like about this story is we never go to know the inner thoughts of Sammy. I really want to read a story from Sammy perspective.

Heresy!!! Nah, I understand, buddy-boi. I know you've already come to realise this, but my decision to construct this tale around Mark's narration was very much deliberate. All of my lengthy tales are told from the submissive/victim's point of view. I really wanted to break from this routine, not only for the sake of narrative diversification, but also for my own enjoyment.

Mark was able to provide us with a mostly unbiased, almost 3rd-person style narration, right up to the point where things began revolving around his own person, during the late-night hazing. It would have broken the story's neutral/distant narration completely had we magically jumped into Sammy's head. I also feel it would have been very redundant, seeing as how Jake's tale is running simultaneously with this one. I won't completely bar the possibility of having Sam narrate a sequel, but I won't hide the fact that I have no immediate plans for it. Either way, we'll see.

[JustKindaCurious]

I'm gonna pick A and D

A, cause it has the most potential for a diverse storytelling, since there are multiple angles and directions to write about

D, cause I'm a sucker for stories in which someone is in a lower position, surrounded by oppressing personalities. A potential deep dive in Sam's psyche surrounding that could be interesting

I like basically all the Sammy options cause I identify with him the most, the one with the different relationships is interesting too, but A and D are ultimately my picks

[bondagefreak]

* PRELIMINARY RESULTS *

These results are only preliminary, seeing as how only twenty of you have responded so far, but already a few surprises have cropped up. I was not expecting so many of you to be intrigued by the unspoken Mark vs Matt rivalry. And while I knew the hazing of new recruits would rank pretty high on the list, I also wasn't expecting it to practically overshadow Sammy's plot.

I do, however, feel the need to mention that this is not a poll about what a potential sequel would be about. Rather, I'm just curious to see which aspects of the storyline you guys are most interested in seeing developed. In the event of a sequel, this would help me decide which elements to give added emphasis to and which to spend less time on.


In order of interest, here are the top three options so far:

A - A DAY IN THE LIFE OF SAMMY, DETAILING THE DUTIES AND EXPECTATIONS SURROUNDING HIS NEW ROLE.
G - THE HAZING OF NEW AND UNSUSPECTING FOOTBALL TEAM RECRUITS.
F - THE UNSPOKEN RIVALRY BETWEEN OUR NARRATOR (MARK) AND HIS COCKY PSEUDO-RIVAL MATT.


I think what surprises me most, besides the unexpectedly broad interest in the Mark vs Matt subplot, is the fact that option B (A FOCUS ON THE SUMMONS & TRANSPORTATION/PACKAGING TO AND FROM CHAD'S PLACE) is performing so poorly. I'm not sure why, but I was expecting this to be pretty high up there, since it's the one option that hints explicitly at bondage.

Looking at some of the comments and explanations given, it looks like most of you are cramming your votes into option A as a sort of insurance policy. You guys are correct to assume that "A DAY IN THE LIFE OF SAMMY" would agglomerate options B, C and D together. But option A would only offer a basic summary of all elements without necessarily offering a deep dive into any of them. The final chapter of the series is a good example of that. A lot was hinted at and summarised, but nothing was explored in great detail.

Either way, interesting results. Keep the votes coming, guys.

[Wedgieboy69]

As great as they all sound, I am going to have to go with G and H. I am a sucker for anything hazing, and I can't turn down anything with Andrew or his brother.

[Eros95]

G and f

[Bradstick]

All of my lengthy tales are told from the submissive/victim's point of view. I really wanted to break from this routine, not only for the sake of narrative diversification, but also for my own enjoyment.

I fully agree! It was definitely a good change and not something I am outright against. With your comment that I left quoted, do you think you would ever write from the dominant/attacker perspective? Would definitely be fun to hear someone like Brody’s inner thoughts as he tied up freshman to haze!

We have seen third party ones like this series with Mark and the short story with Corey. It would be fun to see one of our more dominant and aggressive tops tell the story. Of course, this is all up to you! Whatever you enjoy writing is what you should write!

[bondagefreak]

With your comment that I left quoted, do you think you would ever write from the dominant/attacker perspective?

A few of my shorter tales (and even not so short ones, like Easy Prey 1) are from the bondage-giver's perspective, but you're right to point out that most of those feature somewhat distant/passive narrators who were instrumental in group action, without being the main instigators (eg: Ethan, Corey, Mark).

I've been polling you guys for 15+ years now (god, I feel old), and although this is most likely due to the content of my stories, my audience is very sub-heavy. I have a few dom readers like @Volobond and @Red86, but most of you are subs and switches. Even in stories like this one, where the narrator is a passive/instrumental bondage-giver, I receive lots of requests for the story to be told from the victim's POV.

I think it's a lot easier for you guys to connect with and feel sympathy for a submissive narrator. The passive/instrumental/semi-removed Dom narrator feels like a nice compromise - partially relatable to most readers; be it subs, switches or doms.

But yes, I have thought about writing from the dominant/attacker perspective. Who knows what projects await in the future?
On that note, if you're looking for a dominant/attacker POV story, I suggest looking at @Gaybondage's new tale, in this very section. Here's the link: WEEKEND KIDNAP (M/M). It's his first story here. Be sure to drop him a note if it's up your alley.

[bondagefreak]

Just a quick heads-up to let you guys know that I've published a new story. While the fantasy genre may not be everyone's cup of tea, those of you who enjoy my grounded writing and depictions of domination/submission may find yourselves enjoying this piece more than you initially suspected. If fantasy is not your go-to but you are a regular reader of mine, I recommend giving this tale a 1-minute tryout before making up your mind. Whether this project continues depends entirely on reader reception.

ENSLAVED BY THE DROW (M+/M)

Tags: BONDAGE, SLAVERY, BDSM, PSYCHOLOGICAL DOMINATION, HARDCORE, D&D, FORGOTTEN REALMS, EROTICA, MATURE

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