Well, after catching up on what I missed, I have to say that I'm pleased with how things turned out and I even have a new Bondagefreak character! From the very first chapter, I was drawn in by the depiction of the characters and the vivid descriptions. It's sad to see the end of this story... for now, but it was a genuine pleasure to read.
Starting from what I've missed, Matt using Sammy's cummy boxers as a gag and then Chad sitting on his face was a perfect introduction to the unfair punishments to come. The scene where Sammy is bound and gagged with Chad's underwear was a nice parallel as well as a sneaky foreshadowing of what was to come between the two. I also really loved the forced milking, edging and tickling that Brody enacted upon our main character. Those hours must have been long and hard for our poor captive, in more than one way. Brody then took things further by tormenting him with Matt's smelly gear and gagging him with Matt's jockstrap, would have definitely been humiliating considering their rivalry, but forcing him to cum to Matt's, his own, and Andrew's fetid socks, all in our main character's own shoes, would have been mortifying. Another big surprise for me came about when we learnt that Chad had not only become Sammy's suitor but had also been bedded by him, and it seems that both of them have a tendency for sleeping with each other in bondage.
Anyways, I have alluded to the fact that Brody is one of my favourites from his stories but after the past 13 or so chapters, he has definitely become my favourite. I have had quite... let's say "strong" feelings about Brad and Zack, and how I have the hots for both of them even if they are two very different types of dominants. The way that Brad and Zack torment and tease is just amazing; however one is very difficult to set boundaries with and the other seems to be overly lenient and yielding, or at least in my perspective. Brody is quite literally the perfect fit in between those two. He is apathetic, but not to the borderline abusive point that Brad would be with a new sub, and Brody seems less hygienic than Brad… or at least has smellier feet. And he is creative with his torments and punishments compared to Zack, and knows how to get his victims to comply, either by force or verbally. His torments align so much with Brad's, especially taking into consideration the cum-bomb socks scenes that they both came up with which is arguably one of Brad's hotter scenes, but Brody also has endearment and being he's more hands-on as well. Not to say that he doesn't know when to leave his victims alone to fester in their embarrassment. Honestly, I wish that I could be one of those new recruits, and be forced to suck on his "special" pouch.
That being said answering this,
bondagefreak wrote: 3 weeks ago
HOW WOULD YOU REACT?
CHOOSE FROM ONE OF THE THREE CHOICES BELOW (A, B or C) & POST YOUR ANSWER IN THE COMMENTS
A) SUBMIT: Report to him as ordered and allow yourself to be taken and claimed as his very own personal submissive.
B) EVADE: Run for the hills and never look back! Avoid him at all costs in the hopes that he will either forget about you or hunt you down.
C) BYPASS: Attempt to sidestep his plans for you by seeking Captain Chad's protection - essentially submitting to Chad so as to avoid being claimed by Brody.
I would definitely submit to Brody, a dream come true, no matter how rough he is with me. However, if I had to consider it from the perspective of those who wouldn’t appreciate Brody’s strict rule, submitting to Chad would be the next best option. If you try to run, Brody would be sure to catch you and when he does, there will be hell to pay.
I can tell you put a lot of work into this story and it certainly paid off. Your descriptions really bring the writing to life and the imagery felt so real; I could picture everything perfectly. Also, the way that you've characterized Brody is just perfect. A bit sad to see Brody go, but hopefully we get more of him some other time or in a sequel! Thank you
@bondagefreak!