THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER: JULY 21*

[Bradstick]

A fantastic ending to this story! I got to say, I want not expecting that ending but I can’t say it wasn’t better than I what I imagined. Sammy ending with Chad makes sense and I love the relationship the two have. Fantastic ending, I can’t wait to see what else you have planned for these characters, after all, we now have three allegeable bachelors in need of pseudo consorts!

[sock slave boy]

I completely understand why Sammy now prefers Chad to Hunter, knowing that it could have also gone Brody's way.

First, there's the issue of security: Sammy really had a rough time with Brody. He needed someone to truly protect him from this madman. Unless he submitted 100%, he couldn't continue with Brody—which is literally the equivalent of a 24-hour extreme sports session. Sammy wouldn't have been able to last. And the only one who truly offered him that protection was Chad. He was the most active, but above all, the most influential in every situation. Sammy quickly understood that in the end, everything depended on Chad.

Chad also scored points against Hunter precisely because of his involvement. Hunter, unfortunately, remained too passive, not present enough. So honestly, who would you choose? A guy who stays in the background while you're literally tortured by atomic stinky farts and socks that would wake the dead? Or a guy who's 100% involved, who sometimes gives you a break, and even better—a guy who enforces that break by sitting you on his lap, asserting his presence?

I myself have a huge crush on Hunter, who, in my opinion, is perfect. But he's still disappointing in this whole thing, to be honest. There are opportunities he's missed. Even in a similar situation, I might end up abandoning Hunter for Chad. I tend to prefer the soft side, but if I'm forced into the hard side, I'll always end up enjoying it more—after swallowing a big glob of pure, pure fear saliva, LOL.

Well, even at the end, you can see that Hunter is caring and could have made a great man for Sammy. But I think either he's not interested enough in Sammy, or he just doesn't see himself in that kind of relationship with a man.

(No matter what, I'm always available for Hunter if he wants me, LOL.)

[sock slave boy]

2. Second point: I did read the last chapter. I'll include the excerpt here:

"He's down there." Hunter calmly reassured me, stepping up behind my slightly narrower frame and nodding toward the large bed where our team captain slept. "We released him just a few hours after he went to bed last night. Chad took him in. I wanted to make sure the little guy stayed safe and out of trouble," he continued, speaking quietly so as not to wake his roommate.

This passage tells me that Hunter watched over Sammy passively. I admit that, of course. I'm going to assume this is a French translation error, but to me, it all says Hunter watched over Sammy by entrusting him to Chad—or that he would have intervened if he felt Sammy was only safe with him or someone else.

Ahhhh eh bien voilà. This is 100% a flawed translation issue. The excerpt you shared is not what I wrote. Your translation tool is adding words where none should be added. This seems insignificant, but in some cases (such as this one), it changes the meaning of a sentence completely.

This is the excerpt you shared:

"He's down there." Hunter calmly reassured me, stepping up behind my slightly narrower frame and nodding toward the large bed where our team captain slept. "We released him just a few hours after he went to bed last night. Chad took him in. I wanted to make sure the little guy stayed safe and out of trouble," he continued, speaking quietly so as not to wake his roommate.

Look at the original text. There is no "I" in what Hunter said. The original text reads: "He's under there." Hunter calmly assured me, stepping in behind my slightly narrower frame and motioning his head towards the large bed where our burly team captain slept. "We freed him just a few hours after going to bed last night. Chad took him in. Wanted to make sure the little guy stayed safe and out of trouble." he went on, speaking to me in a low tone so as not to wake up his roommate.

The absence of the I is critical to this sentence. Hunter is saying that Chad took Sam to bed because Chad wanted him safe and out of trouble.

Well, at least I know for sure

[bondagefreak]

That's a reasonable analysis, @sock slave boy.

Well, even at the end, you can see that Hunter is caring and could have made a great man for Sammy. But I think either he's not interested enough in Sammy, or he just doesn't see himself in that kind of relationship with a man.

Bingo! I think this is something a lot of readers might tend to forget when reading my stories. Many, if not most of the characters are not necessarily interested in other guys, let alone romantic relationships with other guys. Some (eg: Kyle, Shawn, etc) may partake in one-sided sexual activities if it suits or benefits them, but they have no ulterior or romantic motives beyond that of self-gratification and the fulfilment of their own sexual needs. For others (eg: Brody), it may simply be a means of power exchange.

I will forego confirming anything, so as not to spoil a possible - and highly probable - sequel (should you guys still want one) but it may very well be that Hunter simply was never interested in Sammy, at least not in the way many of you were hoping for.

[vincenzotognolo22]

I don’t know what to say, this whole story was a 10/10, good job bro

[OrdinaryWorld]

A satisfying conclusion to an excellent story!

[socjuc]

Well he does it again, @bondagefreak throws us a curve ball!

I should have known that Chad with his aloof demeanor and limited participation would swoop in and take over. I like that, that he seemed distant and let the others have their fun, and then just claimed Sammy

Looking forward always to the story extensions! And perhaps Brody overstepping?

[ShadowHusky]

What a fascinating ending to a really engaging tale. This really was amazing to see from start to end; and it's so wonderful to see how you've grown as a writer through the near decade I've been following your stories. Looking back, the progress and interest of Chad was heavily referenced and Hunter was a red herring. I find Sammy's situation rather intriguing and I'm glad he has found himself so comfortably fallen into that role. It was so interesting to hear to that almost sort of bitterness underlying the writing of this final chapter from Mark. He seems like he, himself, has a lot of things to contend with mentally on the situation and this was far from a welcome, but not entirely unwelcome, change. As always, I'm looking forward to seeing more from you!

[Bound Down]

Great ending! Love that Sammy ended up getting a happy ending through such a long weekend.

[Stormee]

Even after the weekend of intense bondage and hazing, Sammy is happy in the end. Least the bondage still happens when Brody or Hunter come pick him up. All and all, what a great story this was and quite the adventure for Sammy.

[Bradstick]

I will forego confirming anything, so as not to spoil a possible - and highly probable - sequel (should you guys still want one)

”Should you guys still want one” like anyone would complain about a sequel with those four hunks!!! I’m already on Matt withdrawals

[GoBucks]

Wouldn't have expected Chad and Sammy to be endgame, but I love it. Looks like Brody needs a new victim, maybe Mark?

I think this may be my favorite of your stories. Each and every chapter was very stimulating

Relieved to hear we still have a lot more to hear from Sammy!

[gag1195]

Definitely not the ending I expected! Great little twist, and surprisingly wholesome!

[sock slave boy]

That's a reasonable analysis, @sock slave boy.

Well, even at the end, you can see that Hunter is caring and could have made a great man for Sammy. But I think either he's not interested enough in Sammy, or he just doesn't see himself in that kind of relationship with a man.

Bingo! I think this is something a lot of readers might tend to forget when reading my stories. Many, if not most of the characters are not necessarily interested in other guys, let alone romantic relationships with other guys. Some (eg: Kyle, Shawn, etc) may partake in one-sided sexual activities if it suits or benefits them, but they have no ulterior or romantic motives beyond that of self-gratification and the fulfilment of their own sexual needs. For others (eg: Brody), it may simply be a means of power exchange.

I will forego confirming anything, so as not to spoil a possible - and highly probable - sequel (should you guys still want one) but it may very well be that Hunter simply was never interested in Sammy, at least not in the way many of you were hoping for.

I can also say that some people like to be tied up and have nauseating things in their mouth or next to their nose without even having sexual thoughts, this is notably my case and that of many I think

[4toes]

Aha! Called it before, love our guy ended up with our hunk captain, Chad. Looking forward to a sequel if there will be.

[bondagefreak]

WARNING: DO NOT READ UNLESS YOU ARE FULLY CAUGHT UP!

* NOTES & THOUGHTS ABOUT THE CLOSING CHAPTER *

SPOILER-FREE BUT WITH SOME FORESHADOWING

I can tell from the comments that many of you are either surprised by this turn of events or even a bit disappointed by the outcome of Sam's adventure. I sympathise with those of you who were hoping for a different resolution. Even though this was indeed the endgame I had originally planned, I'd like to point out that Sammy landing with Chad opens up a veritable plethora of interesting possibilities. To those of you who are interested, here are some of my thoughts about the closing scene:


* To those who were hoping our protagonist would wind up with Hunter: Draw satisfaction in the knowledge that Sammy and Hunter are now closer than ever, and seeing a lot of each other due to Hunter's close friendship with Chad. Hunter is regularly sent on runs to fetch Sammy, and, as elaborated in the closing chapter, he is very often close by - guarding and keeping a close eye on our or young protagonist. Their lives are now deeply intertwined. Add to that the fact that he and the captain are not only flatmates, but also share the same bedroom. The ensuing complications and/or possibilities are quite numerous.

* To those who were hoping Sammy would get chased down by Brody: Who is to say that he won't? Consider the fact that Sammy finds himself protected by Chad at the cost of basically being a pawn in their potentially volatile power games. Mark seemed certain that Brody was fully aware of the subtle power moves going on, and he also went on to point out how Brody had grown noticeably frustrated with the whole affair. Who is to say that Sammy's presence will not end up sparking virulent jealousy between the captain and the able-bodied linebacker? The possibilities are even more endless when you take into account the fact that Brody is Sammy's primary transporter - a normally enjoyable job made intentionally demeaning due to the fact that it serves to benefit only the captain and not himself.

* To those who were hoping Matt might make a move: Though he was never alluded to as being one of the main contenders, Mark provided us with clear hints about Matt's severe and very demanding predisposition towards Sammy. He did not go into great detail, but he seemed to imply that his stepbrother was basically working overtime to win the cocky stallion's acceptance and that Matt's expectations were incredibly taxing. The potential implications and outcomes of this uneasy relationship are plentiful.


In short, Hunter, Brody and Matt fans should not despair. On the contrary, Sammy's relationship with Chad opens up a whirlwind of interesting possibilities. It leaves room for jealousy, intrigue, drama and petty politics. All things that make for great storytelling.

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THE BOI & THE ALPHA (M/M)

Synopsis: Follow along as our 24-year-old closeted protagonist recounts his tentative foray into the world of BDSM, and how his growing attraction to an irresistibly masculine Dom ends up encroaching on his everyday life and consuming his every thought.

Story Tags: BDSM, ROMANCE, DRAMA, CNC, BONDAGE, MATURE THEMES + LOTS MORE

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[Msueta@2]

@bondagefreak Thanks for writing another amazing story . I am sad to see it end .

[ChairBoy]

Bondagefreak, this was my first story I’ve read along from start to finish as it came out, totally hot! Ty for your writing!

[sock slave boy]

I have a big question (in my opinion): what did the narrator mean by "using one of my own father's stink bombs"?

I know he's talking about his father's socks. I'm not that much of a jerk, but how powerful are they? How powerful? Compared to other famous people known for their own stink bombs, where should they be classified?

A bit of a stupid question, I know. We'll find out one day, maybe, but this is the kind of detail I like. Thinking that Sammy was tortured by his father-in-law's smelly socks excites me a little.

Anyway, it's a great story. You deserve to rest now.

[bondagefreak]

@sock slave boy
Ah, c'mon now. You know I won't answer that question. We've not met Mark's dad, and you know I'm not into providing spoilers.
You'll have the use your imagination for now. If Mark threatened to use them, then I'm sure you can put A and B together.

Anyway, it's a great story. You deserve to rest now.

Rest?! You want me to retire? And here I was, thinking you guys would be anxious for more
Nah, I appreciate the sentiment, boi. But if I'm writing, it means I'm resting. I need to evacuate all these crazy ideas out of my head. What better way to do that than by putting them on here so they can fill yours instead?

No, I'm afraid there won't be much rest, at least not writing-wise. We're getting a rather lengthy chapter of THE BOI & THE ALPHA later today (my time). I intend to kick the continuation off with a banger.