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Erica Sinclair - The Ememy Within (M/F)
Dear @LunaDog, let's see if Erica was right to talk to Ruiz.
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The fluorescent lights of Mr Leslie’s 24/7 supermarket on West 72nd Street hum softly, casting a sterile glow over the aisles. Erica walks at an easy pace, tossing essentials into her cart – almond milk, a pack of blueberries, chicken breast for the kittens.
Her phone buzzes in her pocket.
At first, she hesitates as she sees an unknown number, then answers nonetheless.
“Erica Sinclair.”
A pause. Then a familiar voice, low and certain.
“Let’s do it.”
Sandra Ruiz.
Erica straightens, eyes flicking around instinctively. The store is half-empty - just a few shoppers meandering through the aisles, an elderly man at checkout counting exact change.
“What’s your plan?” Ruiz asks.
“Hold on a second.”
Erica abandons her cart near a shelf of boxed pasta and strides toward the exit. The cool evening air greets her as she steps outside, slipping into the driver’s seat of her car.
She doesn’t waste time. “I’ll call Fallon. Send him a message with one of those screenshots—make it clear that I have something he wants.”
Ruiz exhales, a sound that could be approval or skepticism. “And?”
“I’ll set a time and place to meet. Somewhere public but controlled. Somewhere you can witness everything.” Erica grips the steering wheel, thinking it through as she speaks. “He’ll probably assume I’d try to shake him down for cash, but I don’t care what he thinks. All I want is a confession.”
A beat of silence. Then Ruiz says, “You’ll have to be wired. And you’ll be wearing a vest.”
Erica nods, even though Ruiz can’t see her. A fair precaution. Fallon, backed into a corner, might not go down quietly.
“Perfect,” she says.
“I’ll call in sick tomorrow,” Ruiz tells her. “That way I can set everything up on my end.”
“Meet me at my office. Nine A.M. sharp.” Erica allows herself a small smile. “My assistant makes the best coffee.”
Ruiz snorts softly. “We’ll see about that.” Then the line goes dead.
Erica exhales, tucking her phone away.
She finishes her shopping, drives home, feeds her kittens, and makes herself dinner. The night is quiet. The news cycle has already moved on from Candice Summers. Good.
Nothing is older than yesterday’s headlines.
Tomorrow, everything will change.
~~~
The moment Erica steps into her office suite, Holly Beck, their young receptionist flags her down. “A Detective Ruiz is waiting for you in Conference Room Two.”
Erica checks her Rolex. 8:55 A.M.
She smiles to herself. Ruiz is early. That’s a good sign. “Thank you, Holly.”
The door clicks shut behind Erica as she steps into the conference room. The air inside is warm, laced with the scent of fresh coffee and tension thick enough to be cut with a knife.
Detective Sandra Ruiz sits at the table, a cup of coffee before her, fingers curled around it like it’s an anchor.
Erica shrugs off the slight chill from outside and meets Ruiz’s gaze.
"Good morning, Detective. How’s the coffee?"
Ruiz lifts the cup slightly, her expression unreadable. "As advertised."
But Erica sees it - the way Ruiz’s shoulders are just a little too stiff, the way her fingers tighten around the ceramic cup. She’s nervous.
The unspoken question lingers between them like a third presence in the room.
Are you in or not?
Ruiz doesn’t answer. Not with words. Instead, she reaches for a sports bag resting it on the conference table.
She zips it open.
Inside - a microphone, wires, and a bulletproof vest, one of the less bulky, lightweight kind meant to stop pistol rounds.
Erica exhales slowly. This tells her everything she needs to know.
Ruiz is in.
The weight of the moment settles between them. No hesitation. No second chances.
However, the way Ruiz shifts in her chair also tells Erica that the detective feels a little uneasy. Who wouldn’t?
If – for some reason – Fallon might turn out not to be dirty, and if he realizes that his partner had turned on him, Ruiz might as well look for a new job as a Mall Cop. She’d be done in the NYPD. Nobody trust someone who rats on a fellow officer.
"The Emergency Service Unit is ready, Mrs. Sinclair," Ruiz says, her voice steadier now, like the decision has anchored her. "They suggest meeting Fallon in Battery Park at the Fountain Splash Pad. 12 o’clock."
Erica’s lips twitch into a small, knowing smirk.
"High noon. Very cinematic."
So Ruiz was able to get an ESU team for backup. They are not alone in this.
She unbuttons her black cashmere coat, draping it over the chair before sliding her phone from her pocket.
With practiced ease, she types out a message to Jimmy Fallon and attaches one of the pictures of the ledger detailing Fallon’s debts.
“I have something you want. Fountain Splash Pad, Battery Park. 12 noon.”
She angles the screen toward Ruiz. A silent confirmation is all she needs now.
“Good enough?”
The detective nods approvingly.
Erica presses send.
This is it. The point of no return.
The blood oath between her and Ruiz, unspoken but understood.
They’re in this together.
Ride or die.
No retreat, no surrender.
Erica slips the phone back into her blazer pocket, then leans against the chair, apparently cool and composed.
"Another cup of coffee while we wait, Detective?"
A beat. Then, Ruiz chuckles, a faint smirk breaking through her tension.
"Yeah. Why not."
Time ticks forward, the trap is set.
Despite all her outward coolness, Erica muses what might happen if Fallon doesn’t take the bait, this would be over before it begins. If he does… well, the next few hours would decide everything.
~~~
Her phone buzzes in her pocket.
At first, she hesitates as she sees an unknown number, then answers nonetheless.
“Erica Sinclair.”
A pause. Then a familiar voice, low and certain.
“Let’s do it.”
Sandra Ruiz.
Erica straightens, eyes flicking around instinctively. The store is half-empty - just a few shoppers meandering through the aisles, an elderly man at checkout counting exact change.
“What’s your plan?” Ruiz asks.
“Hold on a second.”
Erica abandons her cart near a shelf of boxed pasta and strides toward the exit. The cool evening air greets her as she steps outside, slipping into the driver’s seat of her car.
She doesn’t waste time. “I’ll call Fallon. Send him a message with one of those screenshots—make it clear that I have something he wants.”
Ruiz exhales, a sound that could be approval or skepticism. “And?”
“I’ll set a time and place to meet. Somewhere public but controlled. Somewhere you can witness everything.” Erica grips the steering wheel, thinking it through as she speaks. “He’ll probably assume I’d try to shake him down for cash, but I don’t care what he thinks. All I want is a confession.”
A beat of silence. Then Ruiz says, “You’ll have to be wired. And you’ll be wearing a vest.”
Erica nods, even though Ruiz can’t see her. A fair precaution. Fallon, backed into a corner, might not go down quietly.
“Perfect,” she says.
“I’ll call in sick tomorrow,” Ruiz tells her. “That way I can set everything up on my end.”
“Meet me at my office. Nine A.M. sharp.” Erica allows herself a small smile. “My assistant makes the best coffee.”
Ruiz snorts softly. “We’ll see about that.” Then the line goes dead.
Erica exhales, tucking her phone away.
She finishes her shopping, drives home, feeds her kittens, and makes herself dinner. The night is quiet. The news cycle has already moved on from Candice Summers. Good.
Nothing is older than yesterday’s headlines.
Tomorrow, everything will change.
~~~
The moment Erica steps into her office suite, Holly Beck, their young receptionist flags her down. “A Detective Ruiz is waiting for you in Conference Room Two.”
Erica checks her Rolex. 8:55 A.M.
She smiles to herself. Ruiz is early. That’s a good sign. “Thank you, Holly.”
The door clicks shut behind Erica as she steps into the conference room. The air inside is warm, laced with the scent of fresh coffee and tension thick enough to be cut with a knife.
Detective Sandra Ruiz sits at the table, a cup of coffee before her, fingers curled around it like it’s an anchor.
Erica shrugs off the slight chill from outside and meets Ruiz’s gaze.
"Good morning, Detective. How’s the coffee?"
Ruiz lifts the cup slightly, her expression unreadable. "As advertised."
But Erica sees it - the way Ruiz’s shoulders are just a little too stiff, the way her fingers tighten around the ceramic cup. She’s nervous.
The unspoken question lingers between them like a third presence in the room.
Are you in or not?
Ruiz doesn’t answer. Not with words. Instead, she reaches for a sports bag resting it on the conference table.
She zips it open.
Inside - a microphone, wires, and a bulletproof vest, one of the less bulky, lightweight kind meant to stop pistol rounds.
Erica exhales slowly. This tells her everything she needs to know.
Ruiz is in.
The weight of the moment settles between them. No hesitation. No second chances.
However, the way Ruiz shifts in her chair also tells Erica that the detective feels a little uneasy. Who wouldn’t?
If – for some reason – Fallon might turn out not to be dirty, and if he realizes that his partner had turned on him, Ruiz might as well look for a new job as a Mall Cop. She’d be done in the NYPD. Nobody trust someone who rats on a fellow officer.
"The Emergency Service Unit is ready, Mrs. Sinclair," Ruiz says, her voice steadier now, like the decision has anchored her. "They suggest meeting Fallon in Battery Park at the Fountain Splash Pad. 12 o’clock."
Erica’s lips twitch into a small, knowing smirk.
"High noon. Very cinematic."
So Ruiz was able to get an ESU team for backup. They are not alone in this.
She unbuttons her black cashmere coat, draping it over the chair before sliding her phone from her pocket.
With practiced ease, she types out a message to Jimmy Fallon and attaches one of the pictures of the ledger detailing Fallon’s debts.
“I have something you want. Fountain Splash Pad, Battery Park. 12 noon.”
She angles the screen toward Ruiz. A silent confirmation is all she needs now.
“Good enough?”
The detective nods approvingly.
Erica presses send.
This is it. The point of no return.
The blood oath between her and Ruiz, unspoken but understood.
They’re in this together.
Ride or die.
No retreat, no surrender.
Erica slips the phone back into her blazer pocket, then leans against the chair, apparently cool and composed.
"Another cup of coffee while we wait, Detective?"
A beat. Then, Ruiz chuckles, a faint smirk breaking through her tension.
"Yeah. Why not."
Time ticks forward, the trap is set.
Despite all her outward coolness, Erica muses what might happen if Fallon doesn’t take the bait, this would be over before it begins. If he does… well, the next few hours would decide everything.
~~~
For all Erica Sinclair adventures, please visit my story collection over at Wattpad under:
https://www.wattpad.com/user/JS_writing
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Well, it kind of depends on just how deep Fallon is in the s*it, doesn't it? Sandra Rutz clearly believes he is, as you say if he isn't she is taking a risk regarding her career. But she obviously has questions about her 'partner' in her head. How is this going to go? No doubt you're intending to let us know, in your normal, magnificent style. Don't keep us waiting TOO long!
Indeed a good Question @LunaDog: Is Fallon the main cuiprit or is he another pawn in the Game?
Dear @LunaDog, thank you for the kind compliment. I don't intend to let you wait for long. In fact, we'll press on in a minute or two. Enjoy!
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Dear @Caesar73, you never know. But maybe Erica and Detective Ruiz can find out.
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Ruiz lays the transmitter out on the sleek conference table, its black casing matte under the overhead lights. The device is small - no larger than half a deck of cards - yet it carries the weight of everything they’re about to do. A silent witness. A tether to the tactical team waiting in the wings.
“The microphone goes under the collar of your blouse, and we’ll run the wires beneath the vest down your back,” Ruiz says, her voice steady, professional. She has done this before, several times. “Since you’ll be wearing your nice coat, Fallon won’t notice a thing.”
Erica nods, rolling her shoulders slightly. "You're the expert."
She lifts her arms, allowing Ruiz to work, the detective's fingers efficient as she clips the wire to the underside of Erica’s silk blouse. The transmitter is lightweight, its presence almost imperceptible. But the vest - that’s different. When Ruiz eases it over her shoulders, Erica feels its weight settle across her torso, a stiff, supposedly bulletproof shell from navel to collarbone, pressing against her ribs, the straps tightening it even more as Ruiz secures them.
“Comfortable?” Ruiz asks, watching Erica’s reaction.
Erica exhales slowly, shifting her posture. The vest restricts movement more than she expected, but discomfort is a minor inconvenience compared to what’s at stake. "Not really, but I'll manage."
Is there a flicker of doubt in the detective’s eyes as if she doesn’t believe that this encounter might end without bloodshed?
Anyhow, it’s too late to pull back now.
Ruiz steps back, her dark eyes scanning Erica’s form, ensuring nothing looks out of place. Satisfied, she gives a single nod. “This is just an extra precaution,” she says in a voice low but firm as she outlines the setup. "We have eyes in the sky. A drone is sweeping the park, an airship is on standby. Snipers are in position. The moment Jimmy...” she corrects herself, jaw tightening, “Fallon admits everything, we’ll move in.”
Erica smooths the front of her coat, adjusting to the feel of the vest beneath it. Her usual confidence is intact, but there’s an undeniable weight to this moment. She’s used to fighting battles in courtrooms, where words are her weapons. But this - this is different: after all, Fallon was supposed to be one of the good guys.
She’s going up against a man she’s certain has already killed once.
There’s no doubt in her mind that Fallon tortured and later murdered Sue Cline and that alone makes him extra dangerous. Unpredictable. She’s faced criminals before, but Fallon isn’t a street-level thug. He’s a seasoned detective. A man who knows the game, knows how to manipulate it. If he so much as suspects a setup, things could go South fast.
“I understand,” Erica says, her voice clipped, controlled.
Ruiz studies her for a moment, then reaches into her pocket and pulls out a small earpiece. “This is for me,” she says. “It's connected to the recording device. You can’t hear us, but we’ll hear everything you and Fallon say.” She exhales, shifting her weight. “You’re sure about this?”
Erica meets her gaze, her expression unwavering. “Absolutely. A girl’s got to do what a girl’s got to do.”
The tension in the room thickens, the unspoken truth hanging between them.
Erica checks her Rolex. "Time to get going."
The countdown to High Noon has begun.
~~~
The city hums around her, a restless, pulsing beast of steel and motion. Erica grips the steering wheel tighter than usual, her knuckles faintly white as she weaves her black Volvo through the current of Manhattan’s late-morning traffic.
Yellow taxis dart through lanes like impatient wasps, cyclists cut too close, and delivery trucks rumble in slow defiance. She barely registers the honking, the sharp wailing of sirens in the distance.
Her mind is locked on what’s ahead.
She inhales deeply as she changes lanes, forcing herself to loosen her grip, to keep her shoulders relaxed. Calm. Collected. But the undercurrent of tension sits just beneath her skin, electric and undeniable.
As she nears Battery Park, the towering skyline gives way to open air, the scent of the Hudson thick with salt and the faint bite of gasoline from the ferries docking nearby. The sun gleams off the water, silver waves lapping against the shore beyond the railing. Street musicians are setting up near Castle Clinton, their cases open for tips. Tourists cluster near the Staten Island ferry terminal, their voices a patchwork of languages.
She circles the park’s perimeter twice before spotting a parking space along State Street. Pulling in smoothly, she shifts into park, kills the engine, and sits for just a moment.
A deep breath. A slow exhale.
Then, with precise movements, she unbuckles her seatbelt and slides out of the car, the city air hitting her at once. The wind rolls in from the waterfront, tugging at her black cashmere coat, carrying the mingling scents of pretzels from a nearby cart and the brine of the harbor. It’s brisk, sharp against her skin, grounding her.
Today, however, the wind isn’t just cold, it carries whispers from passing strangers, snatches of conversations that make her feel like everyone around her is in on something. Somehow the air feels thick with a metallic tinge - as if the city itself is watching her.
~~~
“The microphone goes under the collar of your blouse, and we’ll run the wires beneath the vest down your back,” Ruiz says, her voice steady, professional. She has done this before, several times. “Since you’ll be wearing your nice coat, Fallon won’t notice a thing.”
Erica nods, rolling her shoulders slightly. "You're the expert."
She lifts her arms, allowing Ruiz to work, the detective's fingers efficient as she clips the wire to the underside of Erica’s silk blouse. The transmitter is lightweight, its presence almost imperceptible. But the vest - that’s different. When Ruiz eases it over her shoulders, Erica feels its weight settle across her torso, a stiff, supposedly bulletproof shell from navel to collarbone, pressing against her ribs, the straps tightening it even more as Ruiz secures them.
“Comfortable?” Ruiz asks, watching Erica’s reaction.
Erica exhales slowly, shifting her posture. The vest restricts movement more than she expected, but discomfort is a minor inconvenience compared to what’s at stake. "Not really, but I'll manage."
Is there a flicker of doubt in the detective’s eyes as if she doesn’t believe that this encounter might end without bloodshed?
Anyhow, it’s too late to pull back now.
Ruiz steps back, her dark eyes scanning Erica’s form, ensuring nothing looks out of place. Satisfied, she gives a single nod. “This is just an extra precaution,” she says in a voice low but firm as she outlines the setup. "We have eyes in the sky. A drone is sweeping the park, an airship is on standby. Snipers are in position. The moment Jimmy...” she corrects herself, jaw tightening, “Fallon admits everything, we’ll move in.”
Erica smooths the front of her coat, adjusting to the feel of the vest beneath it. Her usual confidence is intact, but there’s an undeniable weight to this moment. She’s used to fighting battles in courtrooms, where words are her weapons. But this - this is different: after all, Fallon was supposed to be one of the good guys.
She’s going up against a man she’s certain has already killed once.
There’s no doubt in her mind that Fallon tortured and later murdered Sue Cline and that alone makes him extra dangerous. Unpredictable. She’s faced criminals before, but Fallon isn’t a street-level thug. He’s a seasoned detective. A man who knows the game, knows how to manipulate it. If he so much as suspects a setup, things could go South fast.
“I understand,” Erica says, her voice clipped, controlled.
Ruiz studies her for a moment, then reaches into her pocket and pulls out a small earpiece. “This is for me,” she says. “It's connected to the recording device. You can’t hear us, but we’ll hear everything you and Fallon say.” She exhales, shifting her weight. “You’re sure about this?”
Erica meets her gaze, her expression unwavering. “Absolutely. A girl’s got to do what a girl’s got to do.”
The tension in the room thickens, the unspoken truth hanging between them.
Erica checks her Rolex. "Time to get going."
The countdown to High Noon has begun.
~~~
The city hums around her, a restless, pulsing beast of steel and motion. Erica grips the steering wheel tighter than usual, her knuckles faintly white as she weaves her black Volvo through the current of Manhattan’s late-morning traffic.
Yellow taxis dart through lanes like impatient wasps, cyclists cut too close, and delivery trucks rumble in slow defiance. She barely registers the honking, the sharp wailing of sirens in the distance.
Her mind is locked on what’s ahead.
She inhales deeply as she changes lanes, forcing herself to loosen her grip, to keep her shoulders relaxed. Calm. Collected. But the undercurrent of tension sits just beneath her skin, electric and undeniable.
As she nears Battery Park, the towering skyline gives way to open air, the scent of the Hudson thick with salt and the faint bite of gasoline from the ferries docking nearby. The sun gleams off the water, silver waves lapping against the shore beyond the railing. Street musicians are setting up near Castle Clinton, their cases open for tips. Tourists cluster near the Staten Island ferry terminal, their voices a patchwork of languages.
She circles the park’s perimeter twice before spotting a parking space along State Street. Pulling in smoothly, she shifts into park, kills the engine, and sits for just a moment.
A deep breath. A slow exhale.
Then, with precise movements, she unbuckles her seatbelt and slides out of the car, the city air hitting her at once. The wind rolls in from the waterfront, tugging at her black cashmere coat, carrying the mingling scents of pretzels from a nearby cart and the brine of the harbor. It’s brisk, sharp against her skin, grounding her.
Today, however, the wind isn’t just cold, it carries whispers from passing strangers, snatches of conversations that make her feel like everyone around her is in on something. Somehow the air feels thick with a metallic tinge - as if the city itself is watching her.
~~~
For all Erica Sinclair adventures, please visit my story collection over at Wattpad under:
https://www.wattpad.com/user/JS_writing
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suspenseful and thrilling as always!
Couldn't have put it better myself.
Dear @SashaMoh, I do my best to deliver. Thanks a lot for being one of my faithful readers.
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Very nice building up of Tension! Will Ruiz and Erica be successful?
Dear @Caesar73, you'll find out if you stay with the story.
There will be another episode later tonight.
There will be another episode later tonight.
For all Erica Sinclair adventures, please visit my story collection over at Wattpad under:
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