The Kidnap Game (M/M) - Finished!

[bondagefreak]

Just finished fixing the text in the earlier chapters, will post the next (and 2nd to last) chapter either later today or tomorrow!

While I haven't given this tale a go yet, I just wanted to pop in to say that I'm stoked to hear (and see) that you were able to restore this story back to its original state. Awesome stuff! This will be a relief to many readers. Keep up the good work!

[CaptiveDan]

Oh boy, Luke now has to pay his debts. Both with Selim and Nahum. He got the W, so I'm sure it'll be worth the sacrifice! Looking forward to the remaining last 2 parts!!

It was so tough to choose whether Ricky or Luke should win, but in the end I love when captured guys get their revenge on their kidnappers so I had to give Ricky the L. Glad the story has been suspenseful and exciting, and I'm pumped to share more!

In the off chance we ever bump into each (considering we're in neighboring states) remind me not to try and capture you. Then again, could be worth the low risk of you getting free and trying to capture me in return jk

Oh it's definitely worth the risk... Surly you'd be able to tie me good enough I couldn't break out

[CaptiveDan]

Chapter 18 - How they spent the night

Despite being 11pm, the night was far from over for the prisoners at Rolland's house.

Rolland was beaten, shocked, tickled, pinched, and burned for the next few hours. Nearly everyone came in to pay their respects at some point, but it was Artis who stayed with the big guy the longest. The nerd made sure his bully didn't know a moment of peace. Artis made sure that even the brief reprieves, (when Rolland wasn't being tickled, whipped, shocked, or coated in wax) were still a source of dread; he’d lightly touch the man and make him flinch, or whisper threats of pain to come.

“I like this house,” Artis said, “maybe when all the other guys go home I'll stay here. I throw you in one of your cells and keep this place all to myself. All I’d need to do is feed you twice a day. I bet none of the other guys would go to the cops if I let them have fun with you a few times a week.”

Dasol also spent the remainder of the evening tied and as a center of attention for the victorious men. He, however had volunteered for his situation. He'd cleaned out, and let the guys tie him face down to a bed. He'd given everyone consent to fuck him, as long as they helped him keep track.

Over the course of the night the free men came by, some once, some twice, to fuck the eager twink. They each left him with a load in his ass, a permanent marker tally on his lower back, and a big smile on his face.

Luke was having less fun. The usually dominant man spent over an hour tied to the post. Harry edged Luke, while Selim and Nahum tickled him. Eventually Selim and Nahum got tired of tickling him and offered to secure Luke in a more comfortable position if Harry wanted to continue having fun with the captured traitor. Harry assured them he did. Luke tried to bargain and beg for mercy, but with his gag and these three men binding him no amount of schemes or deals would help him.

They strapped him in a sleep sack, which had an opening for his cock to poke out of. Harry sat beside Luke, teasing, tickling, and edging his cock for the rest of the night, leaving him alone every so often to go fuck Dasol or torture Rolland. Luke finally fell asleep after hours on edge, never allowed to cum, frustrated and painfully horny beyond belief.

When the club finally closed at 2 am, Sir Raymond got a few volunteers to release Carlo and Seth and force them into straitjackets. Then Raymond and his husband brought the two exhausted entertainers home.

“I found out both of you have tomorrow free,” he told them, as he laid them beside each other on a bed, “I'll wake you both up bright and early so we can have more fun before I have to let you.”

He pulled a breathable hood over both of their faces, which left them un-gagged and able to breath, but unable to see anything. The two didn't say anything, they were too exhausted to plead, and grateful to finally have some rest. Sir Raymond strapped them together at the ankle and left them to enjoy a few hours of sleep.

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Ricky fell right back comfortably into his usual sub role. He submitted to the different forms of bondage his previous victims decided for him. He endured torture with screams of pain and cries for mercy. He let himself focus fully on the fact that he was tied up and fully under the other guys’ control.

First Ricky was led in his gimp suit and mitts and forced into a cage. While the other guys had their fun with Rolland, Dasol, and Luke, they left Ricky bound, gagged and blindfolded, kneeling uncomfortably, with clamps on his nipples and an electro box zapping his ass and thighs at random intervals every few minutes.

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It was a special kind of torture. Left fully unattended. Suffering passively without anyone needing to touch him.

When the men came to release him, Ricky knew it was only to torture him more directly.

They stripped him naked, save for his fist mitts. They pulled his limbs apart and secured them to points on two wooden beams in Rolland's shed. Chet and Nahum pulled the chains tight so Ricky was trapped in a standing spreadeagle. Jurgen forced a sock in his mouth and sealed it with a head harness.

“I thought you might want something to bite down on,” Jurgen said with a scarily friendly tone.

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Ricky strung up and whipped/tickled
By sliprightin0

Ricky did come to appreciate having the sock to bite down on, as the men whipped his back with a flogger, spanked his ass with a belt, and ran a spiky wartenberg wheel across his exposed skin.

Only when all of his limbs were exhausted, all his muscles burned, and all the fight had been beaten out of him did the men release Ricky. He fell to the floor.

They ordered him to stand. He weakly pulled himself up. His ex-prisoners led him to the place he'd spend the night.

With his fists still locked in mitts, they forced Ricky into a cage. They pulled off his gag and offered him some water before locking the door closed. Ricky laid down, forced to curl up in the small cage.

He went to sleep bruised, battered, beaten, and happy.

[Bradstick]

I was just catching up on the last chapter when you dropped the next one! Either way, I am loving the story! I love the twink tied to the bed, only asking to for everyone to help keep track. That is hilarious! I can’t wait to see more of these men!

[blackbound]

Sorry for being absent, but I can't for the life of me stay logged in at this alternate URL. I've been reading and enjoying these past chapters a lot, now that everyone is where they're supposed to/deserve to be and look forward to the conclusion!

[Red86]

Yikes, I hope Roland can handle what he likes to dish out!

They really aren't giving Luke any breaks are they

As for Ricky, he seems to be pretty content with how things turned out. Not bad for someone who almost pulled one over on everyone!!

Oh it's definitely worth the risk... Surly you'd be able to tie me good enough I couldn't break out

Care to find out jk

I'll put it to you this way. Usually if a sub gets free, either it was just meant to be a quick little fun scene or I've gone and deliberately set them up so that they think they can get free, only for me to start adding more and more restraints until they just give in. I'm not unbeatable but if I don't want a sub getting free, it's not likely to happen for them. But I will note, while I do prefer to be dom, I am part switch and as long as they don't push me in ways I don't want to be pushed, I can handle them getting me back. Somewhat

[ChairBoy]

im loving keeping up with these chapters im not finished just yet but damn am I obsessed

[CaptiveDan]

im loving keeping up with these chapters im not finished just yet but damn am I obsessed

Yay! I'm glad you like it! You're reading at a great time, by the time you catch up it will probably be completed

Sorry for being absent, but I can't for the life of me stay logged in at this alternate URL. I've been reading and enjoying these past chapters a lot, now that everyone is where they're supposed to/deserve to be and look forward to the conclusion!

I'm glad you enjoyed these last few chapters! It was fun figuring out how to wrap everything up and give everyone the ending they earned

Yikes, I hope Roland can handle what he likes to dish out!

They really aren't giving Luke any breaks are they

As for Ricky, he seems to be pretty content with how things turned out. Not bad for someone who almost pulled one over on everyone!!

I definitely relate the most to Ricky. Like I love being tied up and wouldn't complain about losing a tie up game, but I'd absolutely try my hardest to win for the sake of the competition

[DeeperThanRed]

Luke should have seen this coming! Still, I think his victory should count as something, as short-lived as it was.

[gag1195]

So many great, fun chapters to catch up on! Luke and Selim's takedown of Ricky; Harry's escape and takedown of Rowland! The fate of the prisoners, the maturity Luke showed in accepting his fate (even unwillingly)! And of course, amazing descriptions and photos to highlight everything!

Fantastic work!

[CaptiveDan]

Luke should have seen this coming! Still, I think his victory should count as something, as short-lived as it was.

Absolutely! A win is a win, no matter the cost

So many great, fun chapters to catch up on! Luke and Selim's takedown of Ricky; Harry's escape and takedown of Rowland! The fate of the prisoners, the maturity Luke showed in accepting his fate (even unwillingly)! And of course, amazing descriptions and photos to highlight everything!

Fantastic work!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, it's been really fun to write

[CaptiveDan]

Chapter 19 - Epilogue
Everyone was sore the next morning. The sign of a good weekend.

Dasol took his car and left early, he had work after all, but the rest of the guys enjoyed the time they'd blocked off to be prisoners.

Ricky, much to his surprise, was released from the cage. He had breakfast with the other dudes, his previous prisoners and wardens. The guys chatted, joked, and reminisced on the past two days. Ricky felt 8 feet tall as the men complimented the ruthlessness and dominance he'd displayed. A few of the guys he'd only ever subbed for before this weekend told him they definitely wanted to be his prisoner again sometime.

For the rest of the morning, Ricky, Chet, Jurgen, Nahum, Selim, Artis, and Harry enjoyed some low stakes, casual bondage fun. No betrayals, no long term imprisonment, and only very brief moments of teasing and torture. Nahum showed off his ropework and trussed a few guys up in hogties, Selim and Jurgen tested out Rolland’s extensive gear. Chet tied Artis and Harry up, but the two broke out and turned the tables.

The casual kinky fun came to an end around noon, when it was time to go home.

Luke had not had the pleasure of joining the bros in their chill morning bondage games. He remained strapped in the sleep sack until it was time to be transported to Selim’s house. The guys worked together to get him out of the sack and into a full 5-point chain restraint system.

Rolland, similarly, had not been released. He spent the night and morning in his own jail cell. Artis had brought him some food for breakfast, hinting that he was making real on his threat to steal his house and keep him as a permanent prisoner. However, when it was time to go, Artis gave Rolland his method of release.

Frozen in a small block of ice were the keys to Rolland's cell.

“This should give me enough time to get out of here.” Artis said, “I gotta get home and change my locks.”

What Artis didn't reveal to Rolland was that he'd snagged the burly bully’s spare key, and fully planned on visiting him later for continued revenge.

The events of Seth and Carlo’s morning at the hands of Sir Raymond could fill a story of their own. Perhaps one day they will. For now, know that the two were freed that evening, though only after one of the longest days of either of their lives.

The guys piled into Ricky's Uhaul. Ricky dropped them each off at home and then returned the truck. Each man ended the weekend happy and free, with only the bruises, rope marks, and hot memories as proof of their 3-day kidnapping game.

Except for Luke of course, who didn't go home, but instead was brought back to Selim’s place, locked in manacles, looking down the barrel at 4 more days as a prisoner.

The End.

Afterward
Thank you to everyone that read, enjoyed, and commented on this story! It was an absolute blast to write! I love the "games" part of 'tie up games' and definitely have some ideas for other stories that involve kinky variations of classic games. Let me know if you have any ideas or favorite games you think could be bondage-ified.

I plan on writing something about Luke's 4 days as prisoner, but I'm trying to find what format I want (might try out a sort of how to book, maybe a diary format, maybe something else idk). I also have ideas for some short stand-alone stories I might make before jumping into the next big one.

I hope everyone enjoyed this story of deception, dominance, and torture! I wish you all luck in your efforts to kidnap and be kidnapped in your own life

[DeeperThanRed]

What a wholesome ending.

Despite some losers who are too gagged to complain about it, everyone had their fun and had no hard feelings over their captivity.

[gag1195]

Great wrap up! Though they need to watch out for Artis... I'm worried that they created a monster...

[Red86]

Poor Luke not even being allowed to join in for the game ending festivities. But he did make a deal and he's paying for that win he wanted Curious how his 4 days of captivity goes in the future. Does he spend the whole time tied and what not or does Selim slip up and Luke turn the tables. So many possibilities!!

Alright so here's my honest review of this tail. While sex isn't something I'm big on (which you did a good job of managing/ balancing), the story was great. Definitely one of my top stories here that I was always looking forward to reading new chapters. From the story plot of a large kidnapping game, to the characters being introduced, the execution of the kidnappings, the detective work, catching the kidnapper and ending game on a positive note amongst almost all the characters..... even the included images from your inspiration. You put quite a bit of effort into this story and it definitely shows!

Looking forward to the next adventure from you

[blackbound]

A great ending! I'm hoping to hear more about Luke's adventures in the future.

Here's hoping that Artis doesn't find himself biting off more than he can chew! Or maybe I'm hoping he does?

(You also forgot to update the thread title)

[CaptiveDan]

What a wholesome ending.

Despite some losers who are too gagged to complain about it, everyone had their fun and had no hard feelings over their captivity.

I love a happy ending. It's great leaving bondage wanting more.

Great wrap up! Though they need to watch out for Artis... I'm worried that they created a monster...

Poor Luke not even being allowed to join in for the game ending festivities. But he did make a deal and he's paying for that win he wanted Curious how his 4 days of captivity goes in the future. Does he spend the whole time tied and what not or does Selim slip up and Luke turn the tables. So many possibilities!!

Alright so here's my honest review of this tail. While sex isn't something I'm big on (which you did a good job of managing/ balancing), the story was great. Definitely one of my top stories here that I was always looking forward to reading new chapters. From the story plot of a large kidnapping game, to the characters being introduced, the execution of the kidnappings, the detective work, catching the kidnapper and ending game on a positive note amongst almost all the characters..... even the included images from your inspiration. You put quite a bit of effort into this story and it definitely shows!

Looking forward to the next adventure from you

Thanks for the kind words! I'm glad you liked the story so much! It was definitely one of my longer projects (I think it might even beat out Small Town Dark Secret for length) but it was a lot of fun to write.

A great ending! I'm hoping to hear more about Luke's adventures in the future.

Here's hoping that Artis doesn't find himself biting off more than he can chew! Or maybe I'm hoping he does?

(You also forgot to update the thread title)

I absolutely plan on writing about Luke's next few days! And with y'all's comments about Artis, maybe I should write something involving him soon too...

[ChairBoy]

I need to know what happens to carlo!

[ETBMichael]

Thanks for the great conclusion. I love that Luke got his victory, but in the end all his machinations meant that he was immediately tied up and didn't get to enjoy it. Since Selim held up his end of the deal and unlocked his cage right away, I hope that Luke will keep his end as well and be a willing prisoner.
I wonder if Luke remembered to let his roommate know he wouldn't be back for a few more days. After all, he told the roommate that if he wasn't back by Monday to get worried/call the police. Which could lead to the fun times being interrupted and/or Luke's coworkers finding out what he gets up to in his spare time.

[Bound Down]

Thanks for such a great story! I love how well you wrote so many different personalities into the story.

[CaptiveDan]

I need to know what happens to carlo!

I have some ideas for a Carlo+Seth epilogue, maybe one day I'll write them!

Thanks for such a great story! I love how well you wrote so many different personalities into the story.

Thank you! I've been trying to vary my characters more so they feel more real & different. Most of this story cast is loosely inspired by people I've hooked up with / tied up / been tied up by.

Thanks for the great conclusion. I love that Luke got his victory, but in the end all his machinations meant that he was immediately tied up and didn't get to enjoy it. Since Selim held up his end of the deal and unlocked his cage right away, I hope that Luke will keep his end as well and be a willing prisoner.
I wonder if Luke remembered to let his roommate know he wouldn't be back for a few more days. After all, he told the roommate that if he wasn't back by Monday to get worried/call the police. Which could lead to the fun times being interrupted and/or Luke's coworkers finding out what he gets up to in his spare time.

For those of you interested in what happens to Luke, I'm uploading a follow-up story now!

It's here: viewtopic.php?t=23603

[Croup]

Oh man, this is EXACTLY the kind of story I like! Full of twists, betrayals, and what I like to call "kinky peril". Tons of guys trying (and failing) to evade capture. There were literally too many hot moments to mention. I just discovered it today and read the whole thing in one go. Thanks so much for writing!