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Unsolved Mysteries - Robbers case (MMMM/m)

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Unsolved Mysteries - Robbers case (MMMM/m)

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Hello, it's me again.

Time ago I wrote an story inspired in a TV show named Unsolved Mysteries. For everybody, don't know what I'm talking about, Unsolved Mysteries was a TV show aired from late 80 to 2010.

I watched it in México when was a kid, in 90 years and I think only watched Robert Stack episodes, but later, when I was a teenager in last 2000 the show weren't aired anymore here in mexicans TV newtworks.

But few years ago, when I was closed in my home because the Covid alert, I discovered Unsolved Mysteries again in YouTube (Unsolved Mysteries in YouTube) even after watched Unsolved Mysteries new era epidodes in Netflix.

I'm kind of nostalgic about my child and teen years, so that's why I wrote an story inspired in that show (My story).

And I thought lot about a new story and here we go.
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Unsolved Mysteries music theme sound at back

Robert Stack voice over: Morning of 5th july 1993, a group of masked men broke into Mayer's residence.

Recreation of a group of four men, maybe in his 25-40 years old age, wearing mask and black clothes climb back a fence of a residence, go to the back door and open int an break into the house

Robert Stack voice over: Mr. Dean Mayer was preparing for his day as a manager at Athlantic Coast General Bank, when he was surprised by the burglars.

Recreation of the group of masked and point a gun to a Mr. Mayer, a man in his early 40 years old, and order him to walk to the living room and sit over the couch; one man stay with Mr. Mayer while the other three burglars separed and checked the residence centimeter.

Robert Stack voice over: Mr. Mayer's wife and his two sons were forced to go to the living room, were tied and gagged, but the burglars didn't rob the Mayer´s home.

Recreation of the Mayer's family, a woman maybe in his early 30 years old and tho kids, a toddler and a early teen boy, being subdued, tied with his hands in front of them and gagged with bandanas while one burglar pointing his gun to Mr. Mayer head and whisper something to his ear.

Robert Stack voice over: In matter of minutes, the burglars left Mayer's residence with the 12 years old boy Nathan Mr. Mayer's son as his hostage.

Recreation of a group of burglars running out from a residence at the front door, two of them dragging a 12 years old boy, the boy had his wrist tied with rope at his front and his mouth gagged with a bandana. The kid was struggling in vain against the man. The burglars forced the kid get into a green pick up and later the car leaving the place as fast as posible.

Robert Stack voice over: Three days later, the Athlantic Coast General Bank was robbed by a group of four men, one of them caught in the bank recording was Mr. Dean Mayer. When the manager was catched by the police, he said he was forced to help to the burglars because his son was kidnapped.

Recreation of a group of man broke into a closed bank, went to the vault and take money. Later a man playing Mr. Mayer's was into a dark room, with a distraught face and being questioned by two men in suits and gold badges.

Robert Stack walking into a place what seem an bank branch: Police and security agencies have 10 reports of banks robs in the same modus operandi as Mr. Mayer's case.

Slow close up to Robert Stack: Maybe you can help us to solve one of those mysteries.

Crossfade from Robert Stack shoot to Unsolved Mysteries opening.
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This is a series that I can really sink my teeth into. I really like your screenplay style of writing.
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home invasion and kidnapping... its seem an interesting case...

intrigued to know whats happen
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This is the update of the story

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Unsolved mysteries theme and anted wipe.

Crossfade to a open shot to a suburban two floor house. It’s morning time, and seen as a cloudly morning.

Robert Stack voice over: July 5th, 1993, 7:30 am. Mr. Dean Mayer is preparing for his labor day as Athlantic Coast General Bank Manager.

Recreation: fade to a man seen in his early 40’s, wearing a formal gray trousers, a skyblue shirt, and a black tie. The man playing Mr. Mayer is carrying a gray jacket over his shoulder and walking into a kitchen; the man take a seat and drink a cup of coffee and bite a piece of toast bread.

Robert Stack voice over: Meanwhile, a group of four men were preparing for broke into Mayer’s residence.

Recreation: fade to a group of four mean, wearing black clothes, black gloves and black masks arriving at a back fence, climbing it and runing into a house backyard. The group of men walking quickly to the residence’s back door.

Robert Stack voice over: in matter of minutes, the men broke into the house. They surprise Mr. Mayer, point him with a gun and force him to walk to the living room and forcé him to sit at the couch.

Recreation: While Mr. Mayer drink his cup of coffe, he turn around and notice a group of men breking into his house. He stand up trying to do something but a man with a gun pointing him. Mr. Mayer just rise his hands, his face looks worried and walk few steps to the living room and sit down at the couch. A man wait with Mr. Mayer, still pointing him with a gun.

Meanwhile, two men take up the stairs to the second floor and the last man walk and checked the first floor.

Robert Stack voice over: Mrs. Jena Mayer was into the bathroom, when she open the door one of the masked man was waiting for her pointing with a gun. The man slap her and yell her for be quiet.

Recreation: A woman in his last 30’s playing as a Mrs. Jenna Mayer are in front of a washbasin cleaning his hands and look her at the mirror. She closes the wáter keys and leave the bathroom. When she opened the door, a man in black clothes was in front of and pointing her with a gun. She screams and the man slaps her and made moves and screams saying her for shut up. The man take Mrs. Mayer at his neck and guied her to the living room.

Robert Stack voice over: The other two men catch Mayer’s sons, a 5 years old Randy was at TV studio watching TV, and 12 years old Nathan, who is preparing for a day in a community sports center.

Recreation: A 12 years old boy playing Nathan Mayer is putting a red jacket while he gets surprised by his mom scream. Suddenly his room door was opened by a man masked in a black clothes pointing him with a gun. The man take the kid by his left arm and guided out his room. At the hall the last burglar take a seen 5 years old kid playing Randy Mayer. The kid seem scary and crying while the man was dragging him.

Robert Stack voice over: in matter of minutes, the Mayer’s family was submitted in the living room by four armed men. While Mrs. Mayer and her sons were tied by the other three men, the gang leader still pointing his gun to Mr. Mayer’s head and saying things to his ear in low voice.

Recreation: The Mayer’s were sitting over the living room sofas. The burglars tied Mayer’s hand in front of them with zipties and gag them with a bandanas.

The Mayer’s seen scary and pleading for not be hurt. The men working quickly while Mr. Mayer’s just close his eyes while the gang leader threat him.

Mr. Mayer’s voice over: He said… if im clever and know what’s better for my and my family, Im not going to be an hero. He said they were watching us since time ago… and… if I know what’s Good for me, Im not going to go to the police.

Recreation: The gang leader yell to Mr. Mayer and forcé him to raise his hands in front of him, other man take a pairo f zipties and tied Mr. Mayer hands. Then the burglar take a bandana and gag Mr. Mayer.

Robert Stack voice over: The gang weren’t looking any valuable at the house.

Fade to Mr. Mayer interview – he was sitting in a armchair in a seem back porch. It seem early at morning, maybe 9-10 pm and sunny day.

He said… he said he know where I’m working and… they here for ask my help. And he said they were here for made me work with them if I want or not.

Recreation: Mr. Mayer, Mrs. Mayer and Randy were forced to stand up and were taken to the second floor. The gang leader and another man where with Mayer’s. and they made Mayer’s stand in front of a stairs railing. The man take more zipties and secure Mayer’s hands to the railing. The leader take out a white envelope, said something to Mr. Mayer ear and putt he envelope into Mr. Mayer shirt pocket.

Robert Stack voice over: The gang leave the residence but taken with them Mayer’s older son, Nathan.

Mr. Mayer voice over: I was there… desperate and powerless. Seeing how those burglars take my son and he crying and asking me for help.

Recreation: The leader gang and the other man climb down the stairs and met with the third burglar. The man was pointing his gun to the 12 years old Nathan. The man made the kid stand and drag him out the residence. The men and the kid are walking to the residence entrance and there were a gray compact car waiting for them.

The fourth burglar was at the wheel waiting for his parnters, and the kid was forced to climb into the back seats. While all were in, the car leave the place as fast as posible.

Robert Stack voice over: The Mayers spent almost 30 minutes untile they can broke his bindings. The Mr. Mayer opened the envelope and there was a letter with instructions for him and his family.

Fade to Mrs. Mayer interview – She was sitting in a chair at kitchen table. At his back was a window, and seem as a sunny day.

They said my housband must help them, otherwise we never see our son again.

Recreation: The railing was broke and Mr. Mayer run to another room. He came back with his hands being untied; next he help his wife and his little son to remove their gags. Mr. Mayer take the envelope and open it, take a paper page and start t oread it. He and his wife take his hands to their head as if they asking why.

Robert Stack voice over: The letter said they Will be still under the gang watching so they shouldn’t go to the police. The letter said Mr. Mayer must help them for steal Athlantic Coast General Bank if he want see his son again. The letter said they must wait for instructions too.

Recreation: Mr. Mayer was sitting in the couch in the living room and he was at pone. Mr. Mayer looks kind of worried and at some point a Little desperate. Crossfade to a Mrs. Mayer arriving in his car at a building. She get down to his car and walk into the building. Into the building, Mrs. Mayer was chatting with a man in training clothes in the building hall, the man was kind of serous face but turn a Little worried but handshake Mrs. Mayer. Next she left that place.

Robert Stack voice over: In the following hours all was caos and desperation at Mayer’s home. Mr. Mayer’s call to his secretary and said he feel sick so he don’t go to the bank that day. At same time, Mrs. Mayer’s drive to the community sport center and said Nathan was sick and his doctor said he going to need rest for few days.

Mrs. Mayer interview: We didn’t know what to do. They said they still watching us and my housband was terrified about the idea of not seeing our son again.

Recreation: Mrs. Mayer was wrapping his Little son at his bed. She kisse the kid forehead and walked to the room door; schwitched off the light and closed the door. In the living room Mr. Mayer was sitting on the couch next to the pone. He looks worried and desperate. Mrs. Mayer arrived at the living room, sat down next to him and hugged his housband.

Roberts Stack voice over: The Mayer’s stayed all the day at his home all the day, waiting the burglars call. That day at night, the door bell rang.

It was 9:00 pm. Mr. Mayer went to the residence entrance room. He found an envelope at his door floor. Outside all was in calm, no body was there and not the sound of a car at the Street. Mr. Mayer opened the envelope and found a letter from the kidnappers, he notice de same hand writing.

Recreation: Mr. Mayer stand from the couch when hear the door bell. He get out to the house and run to the residence main entrance, he looked at the floor and pick an envelope. Mr. Mayer look from one side to other in the Street.

Mr. Mayer interview: The envelope said rules about. It said we must do our life as is nothing was happen. The letter order me stay at my work and not made something wrong. They still watching us and if I not follow his orders we going regret it.

Robert Stack voice over: Nothing happened in the next two days. Mayer’s just follow kidnappers instructions.

Recreation: Mr. Mayer was in his bank office chatting with some of his partners and Mrs. Mayer was in his home doing chores as a housewife.

Mrs. Mayer interview: It’s very unconfortable suspect everything you see around you. Think about your front neighbour could be one gang accomplice. Or maybe something at my housband job. The worst about is not recive anything about our son.

Suspense music

Robert Stack voice over: July 7th 1993, two days later Nathan’s kidnapping. Mr. Mayer found another envelope in his front glass car.

Recreation: Mr. Mayer is walking in the bank parking to his car. He notice something in the whindshield car. He took the envelope and open it. He found another letter and a polaroid photo.

Robert Stack voice over: Mr. Mayer found a picture of his son, lying over a mattres, with his hands handcuffed at his back and gagged and blindfgoled with a pair of bandnas.

Mr. Mayer interview: It was a shock saw the picture of my son. He seem alive but… you feel powerless don’t knowing if he was alive at time i recive the letter. Or if the kidnappers were hurting my son.

Mr. Mayer almost crying.

Robert Stack voice over: The letter said the kidnappers going to rob the bank in two days. They order Mr. Mayer arrived at the bank two and a half hours before the bank open to the clients. Mr. Mayer must help the robbers and not call to the pólice or his son going to pay the price.

Recreation: Mr. Mayer arriving at the bank parking. There were three men in black come to him while he was at bank front door. The leader point a gun to Mr. Mayer back. He opened the bank door and get in with the robbers.

Robert Stack voice over: Mr. Mayer opened the vault and in a matter of time the robbers take the money, the amount was 780 tousand dollars. Before they left the bank, they put another envelope into Mr. Mayer jacket and they left him bound and gagged into the vault and actívate the alarm.

Recreation: Mr. Mayer being tied with zipties, lying into the vault floor. The masked man puta n envelope into his jacket while his partners take a bags with money.

Robert Stack voice over: In the envelope there was a map, when the police arrive at bank and free and help Mr. Mayer, he said his son was kidnapped. The cops and Mr. Mayer went to the point as the map marked. There they found Nathan, tied, gagged and blindfoled to a tree.

Recreation: Two police cops arrive at bank and found Mr. Mayer; they untied him. When he was free, he opened the envelope and explain something to the cops. Crossfade to a escena where a cops car was driving into a highway and stop at the side of the track. The cops and Mr. Mayer go out of the car and run few meters into the forest. There they found Nathan, sitting on the floor, gagged and blindfoled with bandanas and seem he was yelling for help. The kid hands was at his back and his ankles were tied with hemp ropes at front of him.

Mr. Mayer remove the bandanas from his son while a cop went at back to the three for free the kid.

Cross fade to: Robert Stack walking into a bank branch.

Although his son kidnapping, the cops try to frame Mr. Mayer in the rob. The liutenant at local cop rated Mr. Mayer as a accomplice. But when federal agents arrived at place next to recive pólice reports all the things change.

Interview with Federal Agent John Nolan – the interview was made in the agent office, he was sitting in the back of his desk. There was US flag and some recognitions and medals at back.

When I read the report in the sistem I know we’re looking the same gang what made another five robberies earlier. And the modus operandi was the same, they broke into the manager home, kidnap his son and in the next week they made the hit. And they force the manager to help them with the robbery.

Robert Stack voice over: The federal agents interview Nathan. They need to find clues for catch the gang.

Recreation: Nathan, his parents, Federal Agent Nolan, and another man were inside and office. The agent was making some askings and Nathan answer questions. The kid seem worried about it.

Robert Stack voice over: Nathan tell the kidnappers blindfoled him as son they leaving his home. The gang drived for few minutes and next they change the car.

Nathan voice over: It feel like it was a kind of truck. They threatened me, saying things like I must behave or I regret it.

Recreation: Nathan was in the back seats of the compact car, in the middle of two men. They use a bandana for blindfoled him and next made him resto ver his legs. Minutes later the car stopped and the men forced Nathan get out the car. They were in a kind of vacant lot and a gray van was parking there. The men forced the kid to climb into a gray van. The side var door were closed and the van start to move and take a highway.

Robert Stack voice over: Nathan said the car driving for long. At the end the van stop and just one man stay with him. He know he was taken to a place in the forest, because can’t hear nothing as birds noises and the wind moving the trees and branches.

Recreation: A shoot from a van driving into a dirt road. The van stop and parked next to a parked pick up. Three men climb into the pick up and leave the place while the other man opened the van side door for checked the kidnapped kid.

Robert Stack voice over: for the next days Nathan was under the eyes of one man. The kid said he was gagged and blindfoled all the time. During the day, the kidnapper keep Nathan tied to a three and in the night he was taken into the van.

Recreation: The kidnapper guided Nathan to a three, made him stand in front of a three and raise his hands and cuffed the kiddo hands in front of him. Made him sit and next take a hemp rope from his pocket and tied kid ankles in front of the three. Crossfade to an escena where the kid was lying over a camping blanket, the kid was with his hands cuffed at his back and his ankles tied with a hemp rope. The kidnapper roll and wrapped the kid in the blanket and use some belts for keep the kiddo rolled.

Nathan voice over: I can hear the chatted with his partners, he must use a radio… the kind of radio was used by truck drivers. I can hear they talked about a hit. They need wait one or twio days and all Will be ready.

Recreation: Nathan cuffed to a three, gagged and blindfoled, hearing at distance a man in the van use a radio for chat with his accomplices.
Crossfade to Robert Stack stand into a bank Branch: Nathan wasn’t the only kid kidnapped for made his parents help in a bank robbery. But he was the only kid who can saw something for identify one of the suspects.

Crossfade to Robert Stack voice over: Nathan said one day he can remove the bandana. He notice he was into a forest and can saw the van and the car plates at parcially. He can’t recognize where it from but said there where white ones and start with the number 65.

He said he can saw the kidnapper, a man maybe in 30’s, with long, brown and greasy hair. He had mustache and a cross tattoo at his left shoulder.

Recreation: Nathan sitting and tied to a three, the kid fighting against his cuffs but can lift a little the bandana at his eyes. He move his head and see around him and notice he was un a forest, turn his head at his left and see the gray van and turn his head at front and notice the kidnapper; the man was standing and the kid only see his back and notice he turn his head to his side and notice the man mustache. The man was wearing a black tank top shirt and the kid saw man tattoo. Nathan eyes turn scared and use his hands for put the bandana over his eyes again.

Robert Stack stand into a bank branch: There aren’t the only clues about the gang.

Crossfade to Robert Stack voice over: A witness drescribe a gray oldsmobile cutlass parking at front of Mayer’s residence. The witness said the plate was 950 RED.

The same car was seeing at a gas station, 10 blocks away at Athlantic Coast General Bank. A man was standing next to the car was between 25-30 years old. Was short dark air and a scar at his right cheek.

Recreation: A man with a dog walking at street in front of Mayer’s residence and notice the gray car; next to a red car parking at gas station at back of the gray oldsmobile cutlass and notice the man with the gas hose.

Robert Stack stand in a bank branch: Federal agents have 8 reports of bank robberies in the same modus operandi. They offered a reward of 200 thousand dollars for any information to lead them to the gang capure.

If you have any information for solve this mistery call to our line or your local police departament.
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OMG, I love this kind of stories, please, I need more. Maybe the kidnappers use duct tape for their young kidnapped boys
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BoudBoy22 wrote: 3 weeks ago OMG, I love this kind of stories, please, I need more. Maybe the kidnappers use duct tape for their young kidnapped boys
Thank you @BoudBoy22, glad to know you like the story.
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Post by Alkaid90 »

i love the idea... and imagine every paragraph in my mind...

damm it... its awesome story and idea...

but must said i I was left wanting more about the kiddo... i mean... the poor nathan telling more about his distress.. or details about the other kiddos like in the other story..

anyway... was a good crime story
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