Much better. Keep writing. As I said earlier, writing (especially in a second or third language) is an acquired skill. The more you do it, the better you get at it.
Drawscore
Website Migration Update
I moved the website to a new host, which I think will be more tolerant of the content this website hosts. Nevertheless, I do want to take a moment to remind everyone that the stories and content posted here MUST follow website rules, as it it not only my policy, but it is the policy of the hosts that permit our website to run on their servers. We WILL continue to enforce the rules, especially critical rules that, if broken, put this sites livelihood in jeapordy.
Punishing young brother (M/m)
Very good stories
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Snozzberry
- Centennial Club
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Mark seems to be getting everything he deserves for taking things without permission.
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🖐Tie you up and have my way with you. 
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