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THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *NEW CHAPTER MAY 31*

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FOR HIS 2ND STAY INSIDE BRODY'S INFERNAL BAG, WHAT SHOULD SAMMY BE GAGGED & KEPT QUIET WITH?

LOTS OF DUCT TAPE, BUT NO STUFFING
10
10%
A CLOTH, SPONGE OR RAG OF SOME SORT
9
9%
HIS OLDER STEBROTHER'S (MARK) SOCKS
24
25%
SOMETHING FROM CAPTAIN CHAD'S STASH
3
3%
SOMETHING FROM HUNKY HUNTER'S STASH
30
31%
SOMETHING FROM SEXY MATT'S STASH
3
3%
SOMETHING FROM BEEFY BRODY'S STASH
11
11%
SOMETHING FROM ONE OF THE THREE GUESTS
4
4%
OTHER (SPECIFY IN THE COMMENTS)
2
2%
 
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bondagefreak wrote: 7 months ago
I had no clue as to whether or not they'd warned the little guy about his potential sleepover accommodations, especially seeing as how they didn't yet know if Andrew would help out, but going by the disgruntled look on his face, I knew that he'd been briefed about our stay. Sammy wasn't exactly thrilled, to say the least. He just sat on Chad's lap; his wiry limbs and meagre frame trapped in between the downright brawniest of heavily tattooed arms while his unintelligibly mewling face struggled to draw breath from beneath the absolute beefiest of oversized handgags. Chad's oversized handgag.
Heavens I wish I was in Sammy's situation right there! I would struggle and try to yell out as much as I could.
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Sammy is so lucky.... the tickle torture must have been a hell for him and yet his throbbing boner is a proof that he loves every second of his captivity!

I was quite surprised to see that the alpha jocks actually listened to Andrew's common sense and didn't insist on pushing that stinky sock inside their prisoner's mouth... But now I really wonder what Andrew will come up with :twisted:

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Ugh i wanna be sammy. I will say tho I'm shameless and would beg someone to touch it 😫😏
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@bondagefreak Wow my friend another amazing chapter . How I wish I could be in Sammy's spot so badly reading that chapter . Can't wait to read the next one to see what yummy thing will be shoved in his mouth . Maybe some unwashed underwear and then tape that shoe over his face .
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Sammy will definitely be sleeping tight tonight. So kind of everyone to help him fully test the effectiveness of his restraints.

Andrew on top form, ensuring safety and security whilst also coming up with alternative options.

Love the imagery of Sammy's erection straining against the confines of his boxers. Technically hidden but completely on display at the same time.
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I just wanna thank you guys for all the comments so far. Really appreciate it. Some chapters - especially the hornier ones - are more challenging for me to write. This most recent one was definitely among the more challenging. Really glad it's being well received, not only by our resident tickle-torture fans @Sneakerlover1079 and @Msueta@2, but also by the rest of you.

Also glad to see the commentary pertaining to Andrew's assertiveness. Given his stoic and unassuming nature, I'm not surprised his self-assuredness ended up slipping our minds and being somewhat forgotten. His poised, quiet and unassuming personality makes him easy to overlook. Definitely a different kind of dominant than say, Matt or Brody.


socjuc wrote: 6 months ago I particularly enjoyed the sound effects of the strapping into the gurney :lol:
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gag1195 wrote: 6 months ago Loving the surprise Hunter handgag!

And of course, massive props to Andrew for making sure this prank/hazing/kidnapping plan is safe for Sammy... and I cannot wait to see what he scares up to gag the poor lad!
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Eros95 wrote: 6 months ago I think Andrew asks Josh for a gag from his toy stash
Hey @Eros95. Glad to hear from you!
While that's not a bad hypothesis, per se, I'm afraid Chapter 15 has already debunked that possibility.
Trust me, had Josh been present, he would've been ALL OVER Sammy and his hunky captors as well ;)



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AN IMPROMPTU FIRST DATE
THE TWINK & THE JOCK
CHAPTER 15 - MEETING ANDREW



Seeing as how the hour was getting late, the first thing we did was text our teammate Kyle, not only to ask him if Andrew was still up and about but also to ask him if I could drop by for a quick visit. Suffice it to say, we received an affirmative response.

Kyle invited me over, predictably enough without so much as offering even a glimmer of curiosity pertaining to what business I could possibly have with his new roommate Andrew. Simply put, he probably didn't care.


Sammy was still in the washroom by the time I stepped out of the apartment and headed across the hall, towards the neighbouring unit that housed Kyle and his roomies. The poor lad was most likely still drying himself off with captain Chad's towel; oblivious to our plotting and no doubt enjoying every second away from Brody's hawkish gaze and out from under the beefy tyrant's tight leash.

In any case, the door to Kyle's apartment had preemptively been left open a crack, no doubt in anticipation of my arrival. I still deemed fit to signal my presence by letting a few knocks resonate before pushing the door open and poking my head through.

"Hey, bro. Come on in." Kyle absentmindedly greeted, standing shirtless behind the kitchen counter and appearing deep in the throes of preparing a late-night supper and a rosy-coloured protein shake.

"Thanks! Hey, smells good in here. Whatcha making?" I asked, inducing a quick bout of small talk, more for the sake of being polite than out of genuine curiosity.

"Nothing much. Just bacon and eggs. The usual." came his succinct, matter-of-factly reply.

"Cool. Man, it's nice and quiet here too. Way quieter than Chad's place." I noticed, looking around to see an illuminated TV but a seemingly deserted living room. Other than the sound of fatty bacon sizzling on the frying pan, only the faintest of background TV noises animated the otherwise silent apartment.

"Yeah, Joshua's out of town for the weekend, and the other twerp I haven't seen in a few days. Who the fuck knows where he is. By the way, Andrew's in his room if you wanna see him. Second door to the left. I told him you were dropping by." Kyle went on, motioning his head towards one of the bedroom doorways before dismissively returning his focus back to the heated stovetop.
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I like that Andrew was concerned about prisoner’s safety and didn’t want him to be gagged with a sock. Very sensible.
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Hey guys. Hope everyone is doing well. I've been away visiting relatives for the past week or so, but am heading back home in a few hours and am very much looking forward to working on the next chapters of Sammy's harrowing adventure. Anxious to pick up where we last left off!
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bondagefreak wrote: 5 months ago Hey guys. Hope everyone is doing well. I've been away visiting relatives for the past week or so, but am heading back home in a few hours and am very much looking forward to working on the next chapters of Sammy's harrowing adventure. Anxious to pick up where we last left off!
Safe travels sir @bondagefreak ! Looking forward to the next chapters, but do rest up also :D
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AN IMPROMPTU FIRST DATE
THE TWINK & THE JOCK
CHAPTER 21 - THE MYSTERY STASH



I couldn't even begin to fathom the thoughts going through Sammy's mind during the short minutes pending Andrew's return.

His limbs - all four of them - were individually fastened down; held in place via thick, heavy-duty, velcro-reinforced security restraints. Broad safety straps rose up from both sides of the padded gurney; each one further immobilising the patient's helplessly supine form. The intimidating chest harness that came down atop his shoulders and across his upper arms and chest topped everything off; leaving everything save for his head, hands and feet virtually immobile.

And now, as if the probing hands, the overkill security restraints and the sheer uselessness of his big boxer shorts wasn't already dire enough, he was about to lose his last remaining ounce of freedom. In other words, he was about to be gagged.

My teammates - Brody in particular - would've liked nothing more than to cram his mouth with Andrew's eyewateringly pungent socks. Fortunately for Sammy and much to our collective disappointment, our dark-haired host proved more judicious and assertive than anticipated. More importantly, he'd been quite adamant in voicing his safety concerns. Adamant enough to change Chad's mind, that is. No small feat, even for those of us in the captain's good graces.



As soon as our jumbo-footed host left the foul-smelling bedroom in order to embark on his mystery quest, a subdued chatter immediately filtered up into my ears and dominated the stuffy abode.

Most of the teasing banter was directed at Sammy, who, thanks to one of Hunter's immensely sizeable palms, was unable to call for help or even protest the precarious nature of his increasingly harrowing fate. Chad's probing hands remained as curious as ever, but Brody was predictably the most relentless of the bunch.

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Every thirty seconds or so, the overbearing brute would reach out, wrap a huge hand around the defenceless captive's 8-inch-tall tent, and then give the engorged thing a few tugs; keeping my helpless stepbrother aroused to the max while at the same time denying him that much-needed release.

*WANK*
*WANK*
*WANK*
*WANK*


Even though the spectacle of Sammy's torment was a delight to all, it didn't take long for the cacophonic chatter to take a somewhat different turn and for the guys to start openly lamenting the acrid reek wafting out of Andrew's discarded footwear.


"Oh my fuckin' god. This guy's feet fuckin' REEK!" Matt unceremoniously let out, squinting his eyes and waving a hand in front of his face, futilely attempting to dissipate the unbearably powerful smell.

Everyone agreed with the lament - myself included - which, in hindsight, might've seemed a little hypocritical given that the lot of us were similarly afflicted and quite infamous in that regard.


As you can probably imagine, Brody ended up causing quite a stir when he, for no apparent reason other than to jealously draw attention back to himself, yanked one of his own crummy as fuck trainers off and tried clamping it atop Matt's visibly disgruntled face. "Here, bro. I got somethin' else for you to sniff." the brawny linebacker grinned, swiftly cupping a beefy hand behind his unsuspecting roommate's head before pretty much launching his entire weight onto the more athletic blond jock.

The resulting brawl was rather short-lived, but a mixture of coughing, laughing and gagging nevertheless filled our ears as Andrew's socks and shoes were weaponised; joining Brody's foul-smelling sneaker in repeatedly being flung across the room.

As you can probably imagine, the only one not laughing at that point was our prisoner. He couldn't. Even as the guys laughed, hollered and actively sought to haze each other, poor Sammy was kept from voicing out even the faintest of peeps.

Brody's huge hand once again reached out to aggressively tug at his hard woody for what now seemed like the millionth time, but the gurney-bound dweeb could do nothing to defend himself or protest his fate.

*WANK* *WANK*
*WANK* *WANK*

*WANK* *WANK*
*WANK* *WANK*


He just lay there; angry boner-tent on full display, strapped down from his neck to his ankles, with the back of his head and the front of his little face completely sandwiched in between the hulking quarterback's phenomenally oversized hands. I say phenomenally oversized, 'cause even for a brawny 210-pound muscle-hunk, Hunter's arms and hands were exceptionally large. Perhaps even disproportionately so.

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Honestly, I thought it quite fitting for Hunter's mammoth palms to be involved in the silencing of my twinky stepbrother. I thought it fitting, not only because he was Sammy's secret crush and because his very heavily seeded stinkbombs had served as gags during most of the day, but also because he'd been the one to prevent the little runt from calling out for help during the initial kidnapping back home.

So yeah, Sammy just lay there; unable to move, unable to get a peep out or alert anyone to his plight. And judging by the rather desperate straining of his trapped limbs, not to mention the panicked expression on what little we could see of his face, it seemed as though he wasn't having much luck getting any air in either. Poor guy.



As it turns out, I wasn't the only one to notice what was going on. Brody did in fact take note of what was transpiring, but instead of intervening on the struggling twink's behalf, the brute merely licked his lips and reached out to give the little guy's distended erection another series of quick heavy-handed tugs.

*WANK*
*WANK*
*WANK*
*WANK*

"Yeaaah. There we go..." he beamed quite obviously deriving some twisted form of pleasure from the sight of our beefy-palmed star quarterback unwittingly smothering his much smaller victim. That's not to say that I could blame him. It would be dishonest of me not to admit that the spectacle of Sam's demise was pretty hot. Perhaps even more so due to Hunter's continued obliviousness.


Another quick wanking was administered, after which Brody wasted no time in swiftly gathering both of Andrew's feverishly reeking bundles up and somewhat discreetly stashing them inside one of his pockets, no doubt thinking them of worth for a future endeavour of some sort.

His eyes danced around the room as if wanting to make sure that no one had seen him. When finally his gaze met mine, he raised a finger up to his lips and flashed me a knowing wink. His secret was safe, for I too had come to the inevitable conclusion that Andrew's socks should be kept for future use. If not against Sammy, then against some other unfortunate soul.




Moving on with our narrative, all foot odour-related laments predictably ceased the moment our towering host returned. As was made evident by the content-filled bag he now carried, the quest he'd embarked on had apparently not been in vain.

We watched with growing anticipation as he quietly strode into the bedroom, took position next to the gurney and began rummaging through the contents of the mysterious nylon bag.

"I'm sure there's something in here we can use..." he mumbled, speaking more to himself than for our own benefit and providing us with nary a confirmation as to whose bedroom he'd collected this stash from.


Curious objects were pulled out seemingly at random before dismissively being tossed aside. An electric toothbrush, a pair of handcuffs, a roll of black gaffer tape, a number of clothespins, and a rubber gas mask nearly identical to the freakish ones Brody and the guys had worn during last year's Halloween party. Heck, Andrew even pulled out a weird cage-like contraption shaped as though specifically designed to be locked around male genitalia!

"Holy fuck...this is some kinky shit, bro." tattooed superhunk Chad remarked, even as Brody extended a hand to give Sammy's boner a few tugs and then beamed in delight at the sight of what appeared to be a large vibrating wand.

Whoever's bedroom Andrew had sourced this stuff from was quite obviously into some weird shit. Still, our collective amusement reached new heights when our handsome host dug through the clutter and finally found what he'd been looking for.


"Here. Use this on him." was the only explanation he gave us, as he handed the strange-looking object over to his burly assistant, Hunter.

Hunter's features betrayed noticeable perplexity as he freed my stepbrother's puny face from the suffocating handgag and reached out to accept the object our host had just handed him. He cocked his head to the side, raised his brow up and initially seemed as dumbfounded as we all were. But it didn't take more than a second or two for him - and the rest of us - to successfully clue in on what the object was intended for.

It was a gag. An actual, dedicated gag.


The outside of it was rather unremarkable in that it consisted of a simple leather panel designed to be pressed atop the wearer's mouth and cheeks. A pair of self-explanatory leather straps dangled down from both sides of it, more than clearly hinting at the object's intended purpose. Still, that's not exactly what ended up drawing our attention or garnering a chorus of disbelieving remarks. Of far greater interest to my four colleagues and I was the frighteningly bulbous protrusion affixed to the inside of the front panel piece. The bulb would make for a truly monstrous gag!

I'd never seen anything like it. And judging from the semi-baffled, semi-ecstatic reaction of my teammates, neither had they.



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bondagefreak wrote: 5 months ago Another quick wanking was administered, after which Brody wasted no time in swiftly gathering both of Andrew's feverishly reeking bundles up and somewhat discreetly stashing them inside one of his pockets, no doubt thinking them of worth for a future endeavour of some sort.
Fantastic follow up to Sammy’s predicament! I loved the gradual edging of keeping him erect. That plus the strict handbag with little air coming in made it so hot! I am excited for this gag to come into play.

All the kinky items were hilarious! I am very curious what Brody has planned for those socks! Will they be used on Sammy or some unsuspecting victim. Who knows, maybe Sammy won’t be the only spending the night bound and gagged? Great work, can’t wait for the next chapter!
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Well that was worth the wait, and such a hot chapter.

Loved Brody edging Sammy. Stashing Andrews socks for later has me hoping Brody is left with Sammy when they all turn in for sleep. Wonder if he’ll stash that chastity cage to make Sammy his bitch like he promised. I know I’m not alone but Brody is definitely up there as one of my favourite characters from your stories.

This gear must be Josh’s judging by what’s in it.
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Socksbound wrote: 5 months ago I know I’m not alone but Brody is definitely up there as one of my favourite characters from your stories.
You like Brody too? Damn! I knew he'd carry a certain appeal to those readers into more sadistic guys, but I honestly had no idea he'd be this popular. Zack and Mitch are arguably two of the most sadistic characters I've developed, but their sadism doesn't exactly hit the same seeing as how they're both goody-two-shoes types and the element of danger isn't there. Ryan has also shown clear hints of sadism, but his style is more insidious and mentally manipulative, so again, it doesn't exactly hit the same.

It's interesting to note that Brad and Phil are the closest/most similar to Brody, in terms of well-developed sadistic characters. Neither of them garnered even close to the level of admiration that Brody seems to be garnering. With Brad it's understandable. His harsh antics were kinda popular until he veered into outright abuse, but Phil - for all his clever machinations and cruel plots - never benefited from broad readership approval.

That leads me to one inevitable conclusion.
Brody gets a free pass (+ reader approval that Phil never had) in large part because he's deemed attractive ;)
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bondagefreak wrote: 5 months ago
Socksbound wrote: 5 months ago I know I’m not alone but Brody is definitely up there as one of my favourite characters from your stories.
You like Brody too? Damn! I knew he'd carry a certain appeal to those readers into more sadistic guys, but I honestly had no idea he'd be this popular. Zack and Mitch are arguably two of the most sadistic characters I've developed, but their sadism doesn't exactly hit the same seeing as how they're both goody-two-shoes types and the element of danger isn't there. Ryan has also shown clear hints of sadism, but his style is more insidious and mentally manipulative, so again, it doesn't exactly hit the same.

It's interesting to note that Brad and Phil are the closest/most similar to Brody, in terms of well-developed sadistic characters. Neither of them garnered even close to the level of admiration that Brody seems to be garnering. With Brad it's understandable. His harsh antics were kinda popular until he veered into outright abuse, but Phil - for all his clever machinations and cruel plots - never benefited from broad readership approval.

That leads me to one inevitable conclusion.
Brody gets a free pass (+ reader approval that Phil never had) in large part because he's deemed attractive ;)
No I don’t think it’s that entirely, as I always found Brad hot. It could have to do with the narration. Steven was always critical of both Brad and Phil. Our narrator here is part of the group not the receiver of the action. That to me is the biggest difference if Sammy was narrating we might feel differently
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Sammy must be in real hell right now; completely restrained, aroused and unable to do anything about it... and edged! I wonder what he would want to say to his kidnappers if he wasn't gagged; would he beg them to untie him or let him cum?

One more thing: is Brody planning to tie up somebody in particular and stashed Andrew's socks on purpose?? So many questions and no answers... yet :D

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Brody is a dream dom. He just can't help himself and needs to constantlt be involved :lol:

Wow little Sammy is actually 8 inches hung?

Obviously Andrew found one of Josh's goodie bags :lol:
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I wonder what is going through Sammy's mind during all this. Although his body clearly enjoys it, I wonder if his brain is on the same page.
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bondagefreak wrote: 5 months ago
That leads me to one inevitable conclusion.
Brody gets a free pass (+ reader approval that Phil never had) in large part because he's deemed attractive ;)
I would disagree as well, though there is some truth to your conclusion. I think the reason those two did not garner nearly as much attention was because of Steven prospective. Steven is an unreliable narrator, meaning his own bias leek into the description of those two characters. They are shown as antagonists towards Steven, so we as readers see them as such.

This story is from another unreliable narrator being Sammy’s brother. Our narrator does not see Brody as an antagonist, as he is one of his friends. The way Brody is described has a completely different vibe compared to Phil and Brads description. I think if this story came from Sammy’s perspective, we would see a similar reaction as we did Brody and Phil.
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Wooof - handsmothered by a hunk and edged. I am surprised Sammy has been able to keep it…
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Hey guys. Just putting it out there that the next chapter is complete and should be up and ready to read within the next 24 hours.
I know I haven't been super regular these last couple weeks, so thanks for being patient and hanging in there. Stay tuned!


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Hahaha, great chapter! Poor Samy who is still living in hell. The more I read, the more I realize that the guys really think they are in a gym locker room. They are rowdy, dirty... Boys are boys, but still, LOL :lol: :lol: .

For Samy's gag, I just thought: it would be funny to slightly moisten the bulb of the gag, then rub it on the other guys' feet, on the floor of a bed, or inside a sock... just to give it a little taste. :mrgreen: ;)
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I just got into gas masks even more knowing that Brody and the rest of the guys wore them for Halloween! Hot!! I HOPE that this is the bulb gag that Bob made his son wear! That would be awesome!
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