The Attic (mm/m+)

[Jeff K]

Hey guys! Wanted to share another quickie as I just recently finished compiling as much information as I could from this day.



Growing up, I had a friend named Mike whose older brother Steve was best friends with my older brother Henry. Steve and Henry were both very into the idea of the military and worked out a lot. Mike and Steve lived in a house with an attic that we lovingly called The Treehouse, as we spent much of our time in there, reading books and hanging out (and tying each other up, of course).

One day, Henry and I were over at this house, along with two other friends my age, Jake and Charlie. At some point in time, there was a war declared of us younger boys (all age 12 or 13) against Henry and Steve, who were 15 and 16 respectively. I don't remember who declared it or what we were fighting for, but it was pretty common to declare war in those days and just sort of make everything up as you go.

After quite a while of warring with neither side scoring a decisive victory, I ended up spotting Henry climbing up the ladder into the attic and told the others. After a discussion, we decided that Charlie and Mike and myself would go inside while Jake would hold back to keep an eye out for Steve, because none of us knew where he was.

The three of us crept silently up the ladder, confident in our impending victory. I, for one, was especially excited, because after many times being captured by Henry, it was finally going to be my turn to hold him prisoner.

We reached the top and slowly opened the door into the room. Our stash of books and games and snacks was up there, but apart from that, it appeared up be empty. However, we knew Henry was inside, so we pressed on, determined to find him, wherever he was hiding.

We searched every corner, but to no avail. I was beginning to think that Henry might have left while I was reporting to the others. Then I noticed one last place: a large box that I hadn't remembered being up there from last time. I managed to get the others' attention and gestured to the box.

I meant for them to approach silently, but Mike (bless his heart) exclaimed "he must be in here!"

As soon as he called that out, the box lid burst open, revealing not just Henry, but Steve as well. It was a trap, and we had fallen right into it. Fortunately, I kept my wits about me and did the most heroic thing I could do: I ran away.

I was the closest to the exit, so I was able to reach it quickly. However, the sounds of scuffling behind me and the cries from Charlie and Mike revealed that they were not so lucky, so I turned around. The two of them were laying on the ground, face down, each pinned by one of the older boys, who were in the process of binding their hands. Neither of the captives offered any resistance, as they were weaker than their captors and it wouldn't have done much good anyway.

Henry and Steve continued their handiwork, tying Charlie and Mike's feet and roping their limbs together into a hogtie before finishing them off with gags.

All this I watched with rapt attention, unable to tear my eyes away from the scene. However, this quickly proved to be my downfall as Henry and Steve finished tying up my friends and looked up to find me standing there, mouth open as I gaped stupidly at them.

At this point, I could have run and still had a chance of getting away. However, seeing my friends lying there bound and gagged, I was feeling jealous of them so instead of running away I walked up to Henry and Steve and yielded myself their prisoner.

Henry wasted no time in binding me hand and foot while Steve silenced me with a gag. They then stood over us for a moment, admiring their handiwork as we lay there helpless. Then they headed off to find Jake, leaving the three of us behind.

Charlie and Mike pulled and squirmed against their bonds, but I merely lay there, enjoying being a captive. There was a part of me hoping that they would catch Jake, but instead he was the one who showed up first, declaring that he was here to rescue us.

Our captivity was ended all too soon, but the war was still going on. The four of us decided to stick together for now, and realized that we needed weapons, so we set off to look for some Nerf guns or toy swords.

Before we could find some, however, we found ourselves face to face with Henry and Steve. They shouted at us to come back as we took off running. We knew we couldn't outpace them long, so we dashed to the bathroom and locked the door, sealing them out.

The two of them tried the handle and moaned when they realized we had locked it. Henry asked Steve if there was a key, but there wasn't. The two of them started to gripe that it was unfair, and the four of us began to mock and tease them, stating that we had outsmarted them and they might as well just give up.

We could hear them talk in muffled voices and then finally Henry said "Alright, we give up. You guys win this one."

The four of us let out a cheer of delight and started to high-five each other. Then Henry followed it up with "it's too bad, though."

We looked at each other in confusion. I shook my head not to take the bait, but Mike couldn't help himself and asked "what do you mean?"

"We just had so many plans for you guys," stated Henry.

"What kind of plans?" Asked Jake, whose curiosity had gotten the better of him now.

Henry began to describe all the torments they had been going to inflict upon us. They had plans to keep us gagged firmly for hours, to bind our hands and feet and drag us along the ground, to tie our hands above our heads and leave us like that, to parade us around and lord their victory over us.

The more he talked, the more my heart was racing. That sounded like the best day ever! Looking at my friends, I saw their faces light up and realized they were just as excited by the process as I was. We practically fell over each other as we scrambled to the door and declared "we surrender!"

Steve laughed at this. "Really?"

"Yes," I replied. "We’ll be your prisoners."

Our captors kept their word. I was dragged along the ground by my bound feet, strung up by my wrists, and gagged so long I almost forgot how to speak. They tied the three of us with our hands behind ours backs, roped us together and made us march in circles for their victory parade. The worst part about that is that our mothers were inside, but Henry and Steve called them out to show off their captives. My face burned red with humiliation as we were truly put on display for all to see.

After many hours of delightful captivity, we were finally released and went to our own homes. When we got back, I thanked Henry and told him how much fun I had being captured by him, to which he promised it would not be the last time.

[shyguy92]

That sounds like it was a ton of fun.

[squirrel]

That's a very funny story!

[Gino]

Great experience, do you have more to say?

[Jeff K]

That's a very funny story!

Thanks!

[Jeff K]

Great experience, do you have more to say?

Not from this day, but plenty of other stories to tell.

[Gino]

Great experience, do you have more to say?

Not from this day, but plenty of other stories to tell.

I wouldn't mind learning more about this story

[bondagefreak]

@Jeff K My review of your tale is unfortunately something of a mixed bag. I really enjoyed your writing. It's straightforward and to the point, whilst also being quite eloquent and easy to follow. I could vividly imagine every scene as I was reading and could perfectly picture the shenanigans you, your friends, your older brother and his buddy were involved in. All in all, this was a wonderful read and I thoroughly enjoyed it; the atmosphere, the joyousness, the actual writing.

However, I won't shy away from letting you know that my read-through would've been a bit - actually, make that a lot - more enjoyable had you graced us with a few details pertaining to those gags and what they entailed. So while I genuinely enjoyed the account, I really wished we knew what those gags were made up of. It would've definitely made for an even more enjoyable read. Just my two cents.


@FelixSH @cj2125 @Stormee @alkaid_ @harveygasson @Canuck100 @Xtc I think this little tale will be right up your respective alleys.

[Jeff K]

@Jeff K My review of your tale is unfortunately something of a mixed bag. I really enjoyed your writing. It's straightforward and to the point, whilst also being quite eloquent and easy to follow. I could vividly imagine every scene as I was reading and could perfectly picture the shenanigans you, your friends, your older brother and his buddy were involved in. All in all, this was a wonderful read and I thoroughly enjoyed it; the atmosphere, the joyousness, the actual writing.

However, I won't shy away from letting you know that my read-through would've been a bit - actually, make that a lot - more enjoyable had you graced us with a few details pertaining to those gags and what they entailed. So while I genuinely enjoyed the account, I really wished we knew what those gags were made up of. It would've definitely made for an even more enjoyable read. Just my two cents.


@FelixSH @cj2125 @Stormee @alkaid_ @harveygasson @Canuck100 @Xtc I think this little tale will be right up your respective alleys.

Totally fair! I'm more into the tying and the circumstances than the gags myself, but I'll definitely make a point to include more details around it.

These were bandana cleave gags, and they felt good and tight.

[Xtc]

You write very well. In my opinion, the lack of detail doesn't matter much and, indeed, assists the narrative to go in a pace.

I'm looking forward to the next episode.

Oh, and thanks for the gender-tag, I seem to spend most of my time chasing them lately.

[derred6]

Great story. I wish I'd had friends like yours growing up for games like this.

[Jeff K]

You write very well. In my opinion, the lack of detail doesn't matter much and, indeed, assists the narrative to go in a pace.

I'm looking forward to the next episode.

Oh, and thanks for the gender-tag, I seem to spend most of my time chasing them lately.

Haha, no problem. I've been around here long enough to know how that works

[harveygasson]

Definitely an enjoyable story! I'd like to hear more about your experiences.

[60Cancer]

Sometimes you don't need a great deal of description on the story. It's a good story.