The Bunnyverse (F+/F+) *NEW. STORY ADDED. 4 CHAPTERS. 17/10*

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[LunaDog]

I fully understand the conundrum that you described right at the beginning of this. It often happens to me i start a story sometimes, full of enthusiasm, but although i usually do end it, i've 'run out of steam' towards said end. which of course isn't possibly as good as i'd hoped for.

Having said that, what i can also say is that i DID enjoy reading just what you've come up with here. It's bloody good! So, chin up, and keep going.

[BlissfulMisery]

I perfectly understand your feelings. Especially:

And the story is in my head, I can play it out for myself, enjoy it for myself without writing it down.

When it feels like nobody cares anyways, or wants to actually engage with the substance of what is written, why even bother putting in the effort to write something out, when as you said, you can just enjoy the idea in your own head.

Not trying to hijack this into being about myself, as that is not really the point (not like my presence or contributions here matter that much in the grand scheme of things), but I have multiple unfinished drafts languishing on my hard drive for at least partly this reason. And I suspect I am not the only one. Comments (and the lack of them) are a dead horse around here, but I really do think the low amount of them has a chilling effect on the amount of content that is produced for the site.

I know this is probably faint praise from me, given that I have already said similar in the past, but I do think you are an amazing writer, and it always surprises me that people almost never bother to comment.

Because what point cliffhangers when- almost -nobody notices.

But enough about unhappy topics...

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I really liked the mix of almost steampunk plus surrealist aesthetic of the train. Mysterious and evocative.

Did she fall or was she pushed?

Definitely remember that line from previous iterations of Lucille!

Opening my mouth to relay such thoughts, to offer the sincere opinion that perhaps we should turn around and go home.

Possibly by way of running.

Closed. Cutting off Lucinda's smile as she'd turned around, enough time for me to see the very beginnings of her mouth dropping open in shock.

...And she should have taken her own advice

Quite the mistake for Bethany to make - and surprisingly honorable of Lucille to accept the deal and actually let the others go.

"We're going to have." Hearing the words coming from my own lips, speaking to mirror her own lips, out of which nothing beyond that laughter can apparently come. "So much fun together."

Appropriately creepy! No more then a plaything indeed.

Overall, quite the expansive tale you seem to be starting. Curious to see where it goes, although it is certainly off to a strong start!

[RopeBunny]

Having said that, what i can also say is that i DID enjoy reading just what you've come up with here. It's bloody good! So, chin up, and keep going.

Thank you

With this one I- famous last words -intend to keep it moving, fits and starts notwithstanding. I've created many characters here, and they could all fit easily into a short story format.

Currently pumped up, riding high

[RopeBunny]

I have multiple unfinished drafts languishing on my hard drive for at least partly this reason.

Worth finishing one sometime? When able, posting it for others to see. It is worth posting, sharing, it's what keeps me returning. The desire to share my- crazy -TUGs with others.

I really liked the mix of almost steampunk plus surrealist aesthetic of the train. Mysterious and evocative.

I like trains, a strange- is it -interest of mine, discovered through others. Quite a few of my stories feature my main interests: woodland/trees, fast cars and bikes. The railway. The idea of a bizarre train being central to this multi part creation made it perfect.

The train, Cheetah and associated coaches, alongside Drive and River, will be explained in due course. Of course

Did she fall or was she pushed?

Definitely remember that line from previous iterations of Lucille!

I did And whilst this is the end of the Countess story arc, Lucille will return. There are plans in place to revisit Lupin House, to discover Bethany's fate in more detail.

[BlissfulMisery]

Worth finishing one sometime? When able, posting it for others to see. It is worth posting, sharing, it's what keeps me returning. The desire to share my- crazy -TUGs with others.

Perhaps. The desire to share is the core motivation for writing anything, at the end of the day. Of course sharing with nobody is... well pointless.

On a related note, makes me think of how apathy is far worse then even negativity - you can sometimes glean something useful from the latter, the former is just demotivating.

I like trains, a strange- is it -interest of mine, discovered through others. Quite a few of my stories feature my main interests: woodland/trees, fast cars and bikes. The railway. The idea of a bizarre train being central to this multi part creation made it perfect.

Yes, there are quite a few repeating motifs/styles of character in your writing. Nothing wrong with/strange about that - both writing about what you like, or having a specific style.

And I definitely remember trains - specifically similar older style trains - being mentioned in at least one of your previous stories!

The train, Cheetah and associated coaches, alongside Drive and River, will be explained in due course. Of course

Of course

There are plans in place to revisit Lupin House, to discover Bethany's fate in more detail.

Well I suppose there are worse fates then becoming a kinky ghost's personal pet

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[BlissfulMisery]

Sort of breaking my own promise, or decision.

I had meant to post large blocks at once. An interlude- a River based chapter, train stuff -alongside the newest story. But.

Surely I'm not bound by my word?

Personally I prefer single chapters, but I doubt it matters either way in the grand scheme of things. So no 'binding' expectations from me.

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But our- Drive's and my own -evolutions away from our base humanity have taken very different directions.

Curiouser and curiouser...

How many other cameras are there on board?

In my bedroom?

And who has access?

Ah yes, the important questions when there is a breach alarm

An amusing little interlude with how Melantha inadvertently teases River, quite literally walking in and out of her (train) life

A cameo of sorts - wonder if she will show up again as you hinted at in the preamble. Doubt we will ever find out exactly why she decided to show up bound (Well we all know the actual reason - this is a bondage story after all!)

[RopeBunny]

Sort of breaking my own promise, or decision.

I had meant to post large blocks at once. An interlude- a River based chapter, train stuff -alongside the newest story. But.

Surely I'm not bound by my word?

Personally I prefer single chapters,

To which I'd agree, both for posting and for reading. But, and however. I made my observations clear at the start of all this.

And so multiples it is.

A cameo of sorts - wonder if she will show up again as you hinted at in the preamble. Doubt we will ever find out exactly why she decided to show up bound (Well we all know the actual reason - this is a bondage story after all!)

indeed, writing a TUGs story does make for some purposeful twists, such as Melantha appearing bound.

As for the cameo, the chapter as a whole.

Yet another example of changing my mind mid flow to be honest. I planned to write Melantha in as River's new second, she'd basically volunteer herself for it.

Offering to hang around, help.

But then I had a better- coming soon -idea. And so a half finished chapter I was unwilling to junk, a TUG I liked, and to be fair Melantha wandering into and then out of a moving train, offering no explanations.

It is mostly how I try to write her general personality which is to say someone not always operating on the same plane or levels as the rest of us.

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[BlissfulMisery]

It is mostly how I try to write her general personality which is to say someone not always operating on the same plane or levels as the rest of us.

Indeed, a perfect fit to her character!

Black inked flames on her left forearm, and a busty anime girl, bikini clad long hair flowing, one hand holding a cowboy hat to her head, sitting astride an oversized and stylised atom bomb on her left thigh.

Nice reference

Interesting how both Ush and River were surprised by each others abilities. Although I suspect this can be explained by River having a guardian angel of sorts, someone/some force helping her out without her knowledge.

And an amusing contrast of titles between Ush and River

"The siege of Mollineux, City of Walls. Ysta-los-Techumoth."

The age old technique of name dropping things to assist in world building. Wonder if these things will remain merely window dressing or be expanded on (certainly could go either way). Or perhaps references to prior tales I am unfamiliar with?

"We're gunna need a bigger train."

And another, entirely different reference snuck in!

But if, when we are called upon to meet. Formally, there's a way these things are done.

...Naked...

...collars...

Ahh yes of course, the *proper* method of meeting a fellow bondage enthusiast powerful entity

should I- anyone -be foolish enough to mess with a Dark Good.

Small typo there. Although makes me think about what a hypothetical 'Dark Good' would actually be like!

(Same typo happens again later right at the end)

Quite the trick on Ush's part too. I had thought the detail about the sand being blown in was a strange one to include, but figured it was intended more as a 'oh look, more annoying work for me to do' thought from River - characterization rather then a plot setup. Obviously I was wrong! Though I suppose I should have seen it more clearly, given that Ush outright stated she had a plan in mind, and implied it was an antagonistic one.

And again more push and pull between Ush and River with the latter asserting herself as much as she is able to. A rivalry in the making? Or a planted seed of respect? With the sexual tension between them, really could go either way. And nicely dovetails with similar dual aspects of bondage. A nicely written character dynamic.

I very much do. Not, want to see the Shark.

Ever.

Again.

Not the first story you have teased that particular bit in. Not surprising to see it crop up again, an unresolved thought as it were.

A really fun tale to read so far, especially now things seem to be getting afoot. Eager to see more!