[Waryverse] The Urge (COMPLETE, 2023-08-24)

[Xtc]

Quick, @Red86, send the bill in now.

[Red86]

Quick, @Red86, send the bill in now.

Wait, I can be compensated for just throwing a small pitch to @blackbound and letting him work his magic . Nah, that's just it, the story is all the compensation I need!

When you have someone who can overpower you at will, sometimes you have to go extra hard, I guess. At least he apologized for the taser.

This comment, by the way, has adapted the ending of my upcoming story, focused and cemented the one after that, and created the one after that.

That is a good point and goes back to the fact Warry submits because he wants to not because he's forced to or because of size comparison. And indeed, he did apologize. Besides, I believe on most tasers, you can set the voltage so maybe he didn't have it that high. And in all fairness, Loam was subjected to the shock collar by Warry. Semi fair trade off!

Oh so now I'm responsible for not only planting the seed for The urge but possibly 3 other stories? I think I should retract my statement above. Where's my payment . JK

[blackbound]

Oh so now I'm responsible for not only planting the seed for The urge but possibly 3 other stories? I think I should retract my statement above. Where's my payment . JK

Well, not quite - the next one (Pharaoh) is already written but will see a small change, I was already thinking about the one after that (working title: I'd Strike the Sun) and now have a way to end it in a cliffhanger, and the one after that is the one for which you gave me the idea with the previous comment, and which retroactively influences the other two.

[Pup Wingletang]

Great ending - it seems like everyone is in a happy place. It's nice to see Loum realising that he enjoys being on both sides of the knots and I think Wary will be happy to oblige from time to time.

Looking forward to more stories to come. It seems like there will be an endless supply so long as @Red86 keeps commenting!

[blackbound]

Great ending - it seems like everyone is in a happy place. It's nice to see Loum realising that he enjoys being on both sides of the knots and I think Wary will be happy to oblige from time to time.

Looking forward to more stories to come. It seems like there will be an endless supply so long as @Red86 keeps commenting!

Thanks! There will be more, though the next two will be a lot darker...

[blackbound]

@Xtc @Red86 @Pup Wingletang and anyone else silently reading: the next story is now available. Link in the signature.

[Bradstick]

Part 1

I can't breathe, and as I still struggle to get back in place, he comes, firing directly down my throat. I do too, but I don't notice at the time.

I manage to pull back just before I run out of air, but overbalance, and fall backwards off the stool onto the mat. Not how I wanted this to go.

Sighing, I reach for the handcuff key.

It's not there.

Okay first off, self bondage is never a good idea. Warmed nearly choked on his boyfriend cock and then lost the key. Whatever is about to happen, Warmed deserves for pulling that stunt!

I am also curious about Loum reaction to being bound. Disappointed I was not expecting. They are up to something!

Part 2

"Warmed... will you marry me?" he asks.

The way I just squealed like a school girl. Out of every scenario i could think of, I was not expecting that. Oh my gosh I’m so excited!

Part 3

My hands go in the two final restraints and I'm helpless again, my ass sticking out invitingly.

Which, of course, is the point. He brandishes a strap and takes great delight in "explaining" to me how I will be counting the hits and thanking him for them. He knows I hate verbal submission and is wielding it against me.

The gag comes off, and he spends an inordinate amount of time paddling my ass until it feels like it must be glowing red, stopping only when he knows I really can't take anymore. He applies some cooling salve; now it feels like it's on fire and freezing at the same time. He then callously wipes his hands off on my dick. Any erection is long gone, and this stuff isn't helping either.

The spanking scene was so hot! I love the salve at the end, very nice tough. Also the though of them on that double sided gag is super hot!

Part 4

That's the nickname we've given Rui's fucking machine. He knows full well I don't like it, and has never used it on me. My eyes widen as he pushes it in place, the largest attachment looming threateningly, bigger than anything I've taken before.

The ball press was written beautifully. I don’t see them often on here so that was a nice surprise. I do want to learn more about Mr F though, maybe he could give me some private lessons

The first four parts were fantastic, I look forward to finishing the rest of this series! Great work!

[Bradstick]

Part 5

"Next, we have to make sure you don't make a mess." He produces a diaper, and while I could resist, I'm in no position to actually fight back without hurting Loum via kicking, so I just let it happen. It feels weird but strangely erotic, and helps with the remaining soreness from the earlier paddling.

I really enjoyed this chapter, normally I am not one for diapers but it was well done in this story. I like how it is a clear indicator that he will be in that position for a long time.

Part 6

"So. I never told you this, and he'd never admit it, but Loum is jealous of his brothers and of Faiz. You've taken all three of them, but not him. And he knows it's because he's your dom - most of the time, anyway - but he does want it. But he doesn't want to ask you for it, he wants to be forced."

What a twist! I never took Loum for being jealous over that but it makes sense. Rui is such a good character, playing both sides like he is. It is rather sad we won’t get to see Warmed eat of dog bowl, that would be hot!

Part 7

"You have thirty seconds to put that straitjacket on," I announce. He hesitates, so I deliver another shock. That makes him scramble to get out of the cuffs and he practically dives into the restraint. It takes him more than the time I allowed, but I generously overlook it.

I love scenario like this. Where the sub is fully free other than the shock collar. They have to choose to obey or get punished. Absolutely hot seeing Loum in that position.

I love shock collars when they activate by voice. Again it’s that gag without the bondage. They sub simply has to obey to avoid punishment, great chapter!

Part 8

When I return, much later, Loum is making distressed noises through his gag. I rush to check on him, but it's not Loum strapped into my bed - it's Faiz!

FAIZ!!!! What is he doing here and how did Loum escape? More importantly where is Rui?

On a side note, that was such a hot chapter! I love Loum being forced into the diaper at the end!

Part 9

"Not quite," Rui replies. "There's one more thing missing to make it perfect."

He gets down on one knee and opens the other box.

This was such an aftercare chapter! Absolutely loved it, my heart is so warm (ha get it ) Rui proposing to Faiz was such a great twist!

This was such a heart warming series compared to the others. I saw one of the comments that the next too will be darker. I am excited to continue reading your stories!

[blackbound]

(so many kind words)

This one was my "setup for the future" story and designed to misdirect repeatedly, so I'm happy you were surprised by all the things I wanted to do with it.

This story sets up so much future content that I had no idea it would at this point. I got lucky repeatedly with planting stuff that looked like it was completely deliberate later on. Some of it was planned, of course, but when I wrote some of the stories that found themselves connected to the bigger universe, I had no idea they would be part of it at first. I am proud that I only had to go back and edit two things ever to make it all fit, though.