A Life in Bondage and Porn: Plymouth (MF+/F+)

[RopeBunny]

Like it very much myself - especially the details you often throw in, even if they are not 'important'

Thank you

Overall they are having quite the trip!

Which has barely begun, Glasgow merely the first of several stops, at least four most likely more. Largely depending on my own staying power.

(See Fayth, if I run out of steam, or an idea for what to do next occurs and I become Impatient to get to it)

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[BlissfulMisery]

Overall they are having quite the trip!

Which has barely begun, Glasgow merely the first of several stops, at least four most likely more. Largely depending on my own staying power.

(See Fayth, if I run out of steam, or an idea for what to do next occurs and I become Impatient to get to it)

Fair enough.

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I flick water at Sonya, she sticks out her tongue, and the world turns again.

Fun little exchange - not just this part, but the entire thing. Very natural dialogue between them.

"Hey, Hayley."
"Sonya." Brief blush, flustered. "Flame, I mean."

And bizarrely Sonya seems flustered too, because what follows is like an awkward pause, eyes darting all across each other.

And then stepping in to hug.

Where's- kidding, but it's weird -mine?

Indeed! But jokes aside, a very telling few sentences.

I don't particularly like escape videos, because I don't particularly like escaping.

Which is a lie.

The truth is I hate. Hate hate hate escaping. It should be banned, outlawed.

But there's a market for them. So why not have one.

A totally unsurprising bit of insight into Brooke's character.

And an interesting bit of backstory between Sonya and Hayley. Not exactly what I had been predicting, but makes sense.

Still the continuing dance between Sonya and Brooke as well. Both seeming unsure about if they should commit (or want to commit) - both almost daring each other to make the first move. Enjoying the moments, but reluctant to go further. Brooke's reasons are known, Sonya's are harder to pin down, although have been hinted at.

[RopeBunny]

And here I come, logging in to dump/post a couple of new chapters and expecting to do so right below my last effort.

And yet here you are dropping a comment and spoiling- but not really obviously because a comment is ALWAYS welcome -my plan.

Of course thank you for doing so.

And an interesting bit of backstory between Sonya and Hayley. Not exactly what I had been predicting, but makes sense.

Might. Might? Be some foreshadowing going on there, depending on whether I have the steam and will to execute, and whether I'm remembering what foreshadowing means

The point being Hayley might- might -return. If I decide.

Still the continuing dance between Sonya and Brooke as well. Both seeming unsure about if they should commit (or want to commit)

A lot of this is simply that it still suits me to have them be casual. Fuck buddies and not an actual couple.

The story works better if Brooke is a free agent, because there are others out there I want her to interact with and she can't if she's committed to Sonya.

So Sonya being eighteen, unwilling to be tied- ha -down, is working for me.

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[BlissfulMisery]

And here I come, logging in to dump/post a couple of new chapters and expecting to do so right below my last effort.

And yet here you are dropping a comment and spoiling- but not really obviously because a comment is ALWAYS welcome -my plan.

Happy to disappoint

Though it seems I missed the next set. You are really on a roll the last few days. More to read I suppose

The story works better if Brooke is a free agent, because there are others out there I want her to interact with and she can't if she's committed to Sonya.

Suspected as much. The vagaries of spinning a tale without a specific plan.

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Liked the breakdown of the tattoos. Both a bit of a trip down memory lane, along with being a nice moment for the two of them to share. The 'party' was also a nice change of pace - yet another one of the vignettes that you do so well.

Because this is Sonya, she binds and gags me, then fucks and abandons me. And I'm okay with that.

Indeed

And for the smallest instant, there then gone I see her eyes flare, see the moment she's readying to turn and deck Mark. Punch or just push him for interfering. Because I'm hers, not his, and Flame's- Sonya's, both of them -blood is up. And she doesn't want to share and fuck the script.

You do a good job of keeping their relationship feeling 'energetic' (not the right term, but I cannot think of a better one right now) but I think you understand what I mean). Avoiding settling into a routine, and I think bits like this are part of why.

And quite the chapter to wrap up the last set, with Sonya having her fun (I would say at Brooke's expense, but that would be a lie).

"When I return." Tugging at a nipple clamp, small jerks and each time I squirm. Moan. "I'll turn your little friend up and spank you till you scream."

I think the saying 'don't threaten me with a good time' seems appropriate for the situation

[Caesar73]

Quite the hot ride for Plymouth and she enjoys every second. Sonya plays Plymouth like a fiddle!

[Switchgirl]

I go away for a few days and all hell breaks loose!!

Really enjoyed these last chapters - can feel the heat between Red and Blue coming off the screen - a slight disappointment that they’re not going to end up together (yet?) but the knowledge that more adventures for Brooke is on the horizon makes up for it!!

Excellent as always!

[RopeBunny]

Quite the hot ride for Plymouth and she enjoys every second.

Indeed that final chapter especially I did let the imagination flow into overdrive.

Though it seems I missed the next set. You are really on a roll the last few days. More to read I suppose

It won't last. Not forever anyway but, whilst it doss I guess you all get to enjoy fairly regular/constant updates

Liked the breakdown of the tattoos. Both a bit of a trip down memory lane, along with being a nice moment for the two of them to share. The 'party' was also a nice change of pace - yet another one of the vignettes that you do so well.

On the verge of getting another I wanted to break down exactly what Brooke has. I mention her ink often, making note of how it's almost entirely on her left side but don't really go to individual pieces.

As for the 'party' yes I liked the idea too. Could've made more of it but felt it was a good aside to drop in.

[RopeBunny]

I go away for a few days and all hell breaks loose!!

Sorry. But not obviously. It's good to find a comment from you though, to see you're still following and enjoying. Thank you.

a slight disappointment that they’re not going to end up together (yet?) but the knowledge that more adventures for Brooke is on the horizon makes up for it!!

Yes. As I've said.

A lot of this is simply that it still suits me to have them be casual. Fuck buddies and not an actual couple.

The story works better if Brooke is a free agent, because there are others out there I want her to interact with and she can't if she's committed to Sonya.

So Sonya being eighteen, unwilling to be tied- ha -down, is working for me.

I like Sonya, Red. Like her enough she could. Could. Be the right fit. However there are other girls in the story, and I want to keep things fluid.

More girls equals more options for fun, and play. More chances for Brooke to explore that bondage life

On which note.

What follows below....

I actually wrote the first part (the Brooke/Sonya exchange) with the intention of it being a genuine interlude, a break before Sonya plays some more.

However.

A short while ago I gave myself a future opening to finish (temporarily or otherwise, I honestly don't know) the Brooke/Sonya arc, and looking at things I realised I could fire that gun now.

In a fun way.

So I did. (See below of course )

What I'll say, at the start of the following two chapters is: if things don't quite make sense, if you think you know more then Brooke. Be patient, answers and so on will occur. Sonya will reappear.

Just not for awhile.

It's all about the journey, to quote the lady x

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[BlissfulMisery]

It's all about the journey, to quote the lady x

Indeed!

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Amusing how dream-Deborah tries to assert her superiority over Sonya by mistaking her name (or I suppose Brooke's subconscious is fighting it out about who she wants in charge of her )

"Fuuuuuuuccccckkk." Stretching, tip toes and spread arms. "What a day."

Clearly she spoke too soon

Curious to see where all this goes in the end. Quite a sharp transition.

[RopeBunny]

Amusing how dream-Deborah tries to assert her superiority over Sonya by mistaking her name (or I suppose Brooke's subconscious is fighting it out about who she wants in charge of her )

Something to slip in, a funny aside. But yes, easily could be a way to assert yourself or signs of Brookes internal struggles.

Curious to see where all this goes in the end. Quite a sharp transition.

Can't be helped, the suddenness. Or rather it could but then I'd still be seeking a way to bring Sonya/Brooke to a conclusion, therefore giving me to ability to move on to other girls.

And this is a form of conclusion, just one that won't be explained or properly wrapped up for awhile.

I didn't want, I'd decided, to simply end Scotland and then have them drift apart. Far better to make something interesting happen.

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[BlissfulMisery]

I didn't want, I'd decided, to simply end Scotland and then have them drift apart. Far better to make something interesting happen.

'Interesting' seems about right. Intriguing would be another way to put it.

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"Why can't I be both?"

There is a tirade in there somewhere that involves an in-depth discussion of social norms and intersects with various political elements, but it is a question that does not actually require an answer (because it is obvious and Brooke is painfully aware of why).

Palpable frustration at play on her part.

Old Japanese navel flag hanging off one wall.

I assume that is supposed to be 'naval'?

Is she into it? Is this just an act, playing for the cameras?

Perhaps she should not have set the situation up in such a manner as she did if this was going to be her concern. Especially given her personal experiences with similar situations

Of course even she (and certainly Deborah with her flippant responses earlier) realizes how silly and poorly planned the whole thing is.

It makes sense however, given how upside-down her world feels. When there is impending change/consequences of this sort looming, it is not surprising that she goes off in what seems like a random, crazy direction.

Although I find it curious you did not give any details about the e-mail. I suspect (and did so already in the previous chapter although this pointed omission only solidified my suspicions) this may be a case of Brooke overreacting/assuming what might happen, rather then the situation actually being as bad as she thinks. I could certainly imagine the conversation going a different direction then she seems to be expecting.

Or I could be completely wrong. I suppose that is the fun of having to wait and see what actually happens

On another note, I find myself about as surprised as Brooke as to Deborah's willingness to go along with all of this. I suppose there are some obvious reasons for her to do so, but again, curious to see where it all goes (and I suppose there is always the meta-story reason of having more tie-ups).

[Caesar73]

"Why can't I have both? Why can't I be a friend to trees and a bondage porn star?"

The question of questions It remains to be seen what Stan has in mind - I am curious. Again Brooke switches from bottom to top - I like that.

[RopeBunny]

"Why can't I be both?"

There is a tirade in there somewhere that involves an in-depth discussion of social norms and intersects with various political elements, but it is a question that does not actually require an answer (because it is obvious and Brooke is painfully aware of why).

Palpable frustration at play on her part.

"Why can't I have both? Why can't I be a friend to trees and a bondage porn star?"

The question of questions It remains to be seen what Stan has in mind - I am curious.

Interesting- or not, depending -aside. I'm sort of directly quoting 'High School Musical'

The line is a tease, between myself and someone I was close to. Something often used in moments of Indecision.

"Why can't I have both?" and thinking this plot twist up for Brooke the line occurred, and how could I not add it in

On which subject still

Although I find it curious you did not give any details about the e-mail. I suspect (and did so already in the previous chapter although this pointed omission only solidified my suspicions) this may be a case of Brooke overreacting/assuming what might happen, rather then the situation actually being as bad as she thinks. I could certainly imagine the conversation going a different direction then she seems to be expecting.

Or I could be completely wrong. I suppose that is the fun of having to wait and see what actually happens

Deliberate vagueness on my part. Usually I'd include the email exchange, because I enjoy writing the random extra content as much as anything.

But lack of detail here encourages the not knowing. It really could go either way: fired or much ado about nothing.

And soon- wrapping, ha, up Deborah first -we'll find out.