A Life in Bondage and Porn: Plymouth (MF+/F+)

[Caesar73]

Again, loving the turn the story is taking…Brooke still searching and realising she is being accepted

She seems closer to finding what she is - but I imagine they’re be some (F cup) roadbumps along the way…

I think your description pretty accurate!

[BlissfulMisery]

One of those many (my stories tend to be littered with them) just flowed that way moments.

Did intend Charlotte abandoning Brooke, in my more 'into it' moments possibly even all night. But I liked the idea of her being, actually no good. The funny element of Brooke stalking/running naked down the corridor after her, kidnapping her right back.

Can't and shouldn't always go deep and dark.

For sure.

sorry there's two TUGs light chapters in a row, not ideal but I'll be making up for it next post.

I think it was a great set of chapters. Captured the feeling of a big stage quite well - I could feel how overwhelming and surreal it was for Brooke. The dialogue (specifically the cadence and pacing of it more then exact wording) was very on point for an awards show of this kind. Even found myself subconsciously 'hearing' it all in the typical echoing/booming sound of a microphone in a large room.

"And. Tonight, we make that six."

Whispered anticipation, and were I not so distracted, mind wandering idly over thoughts of just what you'd have to do to earn such an honour.

Amusing how she didn't pick up on the obvious point that the award was for her Makes sense (things like that are all about expectations, and when those are aligned incorrectly it is easy to be blindsided by the obvious), but still quite funny.

Does suffer from the problem of being a climatic/cathartic scene (which makes sense given this was the end of your initial ideas, as it caps off a story arc quite nicely), which makes a continuation feel a little awkward. But I suppose that is where Fayth asking her to a shoot comes in, to help bridge the gap

[RopeBunny]

Again, loving the turn the story is taking…Brooke still searching and realising she is being accepted

She seems closer to finding what she is - but I imagine they’re be some (F cup) roadbumps along the way…

I think your description pretty accurate!

Thank you both. And, F cup roadbumps

Does suffer from the problem of being a climatic/cathartic scene (which makes sense given this was the end of your initial ideas, as it caps off a story arc quite nicely), which makes a continuation feel a little awkward. But I suppose that is where Fayth asking her to a shoot comes in, to help bridge the gap

Was always going to be an issue. I wanted to write Plymouth, so came up with enough ideas to make a story. But now we're at the end.

And I want to continue, nothing else I feel in the mood to write so onwards towards Fayth, as you say a decent bridge taking us to what I have planned next.

And there is a plan

[RopeBunny]

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[BlissfulMisery]

And there is a plan

Fayth seems a lot more playful then the last time they were together - back then she seemed very unsure about the whole thing. Although I suppose it helps that Brooke gave her an opportunity to seize!

By the ancient and known rules of bondage: she won, I'm tied up, so therefore Fayth can do pretty much what she wants.

Not wrong

Mostly a win by cheating, if you ask me. Because rolling off her, going for my suitcase stashed rope and Fayth had met me on the field of battle: her hotel room bed, brandishing plastic cable ties.

Somehow I doubt Brooke's annoyance is all that sincere

Torture. And. Pure heaven.

Indeed! A fun scene with the two of them, Brooke struggling valiantly to keep her composure when exposed to such insidious delights

[RopeBunny]

Still got that poll going, would be great to see some votes.

Please.

Over now.

And. I was hoping for more votes, have gone back and forth regarding even mentioning such. But.

I know I'm not the most commented author here, and, fair enough. I generally keep chugging along, occasional breaks but I come back. I'm now used to the low number of responses. So, is what it is.

But a poll, I'd hoped for a fair response, clicking isn't writing after all. I'd hoped for a good number of votes. I'd even taken time to consider my story direction were Deborah to win by a landslide

But it's fine.

Onwards.

[RopeBunny]

Fayth seems a lot more playful then the last time they were together - back then she seemed very unsure about the whole thing. Although I suppose it helps that Brooke gave her an opportunity to seize!

Thought a playful chapter would be fun, and I did enjoy writing it. Could've had Brooke win, had thought it through what could Brooke do to/with Fayth. But the phone call option was too fun to ignore

[RopeBunny]

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[Caesar73]

Fayth and Plymouth is a very intriguing combination It will be interesting how this relationship plays out @RopeBunny

[Switchgirl]

Loved the last two chapters and now intrigued what Brooke wants building!!!

Love your writing as always!

[RopeBunny]

Fayth and Plymouth is a very intriguing combination

It's one I've used before, Fayth is a girl from Plymouth's past as opposed Sonya (and others) who are new to this story. She's older, more years of experience in the industry but still playful at times, which I think makes for a good combination too.

intrigued what Brooke wants building!!!

Indeed

Probably won't see this new metal toy/device for awhile, because I'd already thought up a good chunk of story to carry hs forward, before the opportunity of Toni making something for Brooke entered my head

But I'll get around to it.

Thank you both for the comments and kind words.

[RopeBunny]

Thought it'd be best to set things out first.

Regarding the road trip, about to begin below. I've done, will do some research. I'll make sure the major points are correct, locations and names, certain places.

But I'll be making stuff up too. Location of campsites for instance, or pub names. Small things.

[RopeBunny]

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[Caesar73]

I like the Layout of this Chapter The Idea of a ride - a ride in more than one sense

"Sending Sonya a photo: my messenger bag, filled to bursting with rope and gags, wand vibrator iceberg like rising from it all. And beside the bag a scattering of- pretend discarded -clothes. 'Packing' I add, alongside a string of emoji."

[BlissfulMisery]

But the phone call option was too fun to ignore

Understandable!

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The shoot scene seemed a little rushed - a bit one and done. Still, an interesting idea, and obviously gives the opportunity for Plymouth to experiment with metal bondage herself in the future as teased.

And Brooke is showing her hand more then she has previously with regards to Sonya, with how she immediately agreed to go on an impromptu trip/vacation/sort-of-date.

Maybe Sonya has noticed, is perhaps moving in on the opening that has been given. A continuation of the strange 'dance' their relationship has been so far

Arriving as afternoon considers giving way to evening.

A nice turn of phrase. And overall a fine description of the trip. Especially liked the flirty back and forth between the two beforehand. Very cute/amusing!

[RopeBunny]

I like the Layout of this Chapter The Idea of a ride - a ride in more than one sense

Indeed

Thank you.

The shoot scene seemed a little rushed - a bit one and done. Still, an interesting idea, and obviously gives the opportunity for Plymouth to experiment with metal bondage herself in the future as teased.

To be fair it kinda was.

Sort of.

Entirely my fault, I'd planned for Fayth and Brooke to meet at the awards, had planned for at least two shoots between them, a nice filler and bridging gap leading into whatever came next.

Which I still- at that point -didn't know

And then I had the thought of the road trip. And as happens I began to have all these ideas for what could happen on the road trip.

And so I didn't want to write the whole Fayth thing anymore, but I needed the bridge. So.

Two ties and whatever became one tie. Not Ideal, but time to move on.

[Switchgirl]

An excellent chapter - I loved the teasing via whatsapp and the relaxed meeting, travelling and going for a drink/ food, ramping up the sexual tension as both Brooke and Sonya just want to go at it like rabbits!

[RopeBunny]

Brooke and Sonya just want to go at it like rabbits!

Rabbits

Which hopefully I'll do justice to such a statement below.

Thanks for commenting, as has been said- by me -before, I love doing the non TUGs stuff, the flirting and simple things like travelling or normal conversations.

[RopeBunny]

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[Switchgirl]

Loved that! Definitely captured the freeing of the sexual tension/ lust!

And Brooke starting to submit again…

[Caesar73]

Another intense Chapter - and Brooke enjoys being wonderful Sub @RopeBunny !

[RopeBunny]

Brooke enjoys being wonderful Sub

And Brooke starting to submit again…

I glad you both enjoyed the chapter. Brooke being Domme will be a rare thing, so expect plenty more submissive play to follow.

[RopeBunny]

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[BlissfulMisery]

as has been said- by me -before, I love doing the non TUGs stuff, the flirting and simple things like travelling or normal conversations.

Like it very much myself - especially the details you often throw in, even if they are not 'important'

Enjoyed the somewhat poetic style of the first chapter. Not exactly the right term for it perhaps, but the descriptions definitely evoked the right peaceful naturesque atmosphere.

The capture bringing instant clarity like soothing rain washing all else away. I don't care, not the why or the how. Reason doesn't matter.

Liked this especially!

And a great scene to release all the building tension between them, with Sonya playing Brooke like a fiddle

Sh- stop it Brooke -ame.

The second part was excellent as well. More subdued, relaxed, but interesting all the same. The two of them bonding over shared experiences (in more ways then one I suppose )

Overall they are having quite the trip!