A Life in Bondage and Porn: Plymouth (MF+/F+)

[RopeBunny]

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Just want to say, the ending....

Might not be telegraphing what you think....

Quoting myself, always amuses me

Just to clarify: I meant that, usually, something like this would lead to Plymouth's surrender, to Flame taking ownership.

A TUGs site after all, so why not go large and dive deep.

But not as you now see this time.

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[Switchgirl]

Once again - excellently written

Love the fact that Sonya admitted everything first - Brooke feels the same way but can’t ‘release the beast’

Would be good to see Brooke finally be happy and find her owner but I suspect this is not yet her time….

Loved the last few chapters snd I do have a thing for belts…

[RopeBunny]

Loved the last few chapters snd I do have a thing for belts…

Belts are underused, I find. Alongside cable (zip) ties. Both good alternatives to rope I feel, but often forgotten.

Sonya being upfront, Brooke not so much. Indeed. This will be mentioned, covered and explained- by Brooke -in the next chapter.

As for- her -happiness.

I'm working on it

[Switchgirl]

Cable ties are fun for quick ‘kidnapping’ or restraining until I can be tied in something I can last longer… find I can’t tolerate them for long…

I can imagine Brooke could though..

I look forward to Brooke finding happiness but would be gutted it that was the end of her stories…

[BlissfulMisery]

Kinda intended multiple ways, to be honest. Both as humour: Sonya stealing the crisps but as a demonstration of their dynamic too: Sonya the Domme, taking what she wants.

To be honest, not sure the latter came across too well. Oh well.

Just to clarify: I meant that, usually, something like this would lead to Plymouth's surrender, to Flame taking ownership.

A TUGs site after all, so why not go large and dive deep.

But not as you now see this time.

Not exactly what I had expected, but it does work. An awkward situation, and one that is dragged on, Brooke unintentionally (or perhaps subconsciously?) playing with Sonya with her silence on the issue. Poor communication on her part, but it is understandable why it happens the way it does.

Her eyes tell the story of what she'd really wanted, even whilst her- traitor -hands had begun the business of freeing me.

Speaking of what was mentioned above, this line sums it up well

Overall I do like the slow-burning tension between them. Brief flare-ups, stamped down by either party. A simmer slowly being brought to a boil? Silly/cliched metaphors aside, curious to see what the resolution will end up looking like, since obviously this cannot go on forever.

Belts are underused, I find. Alongside cable (zip) ties. Both good alternatives to rope I feel, but often forgotten.

In fairness, zip ties tend to have the fundamental problem of focusing pressure too much, making them both more uncomfortable and more dangerous if used for long periods of time. Quicker to apply, I suppose, but as mentioned that edge cuts both ways. Of course this is much less of an issue in fiction

As for belts, don't disagree. An interesting alternative to rope.

As for- her -happiness.

I'm working on it

Good to hear

[RopeBunny]

Kinda intended multiple ways, to be honest. Both as humour: Sonya stealing the crisps but as a demonstration of their dynamic too: Sonya the Domme, taking what she wants.

To be honest, not sure the latter came across too well. Oh well.

Quote and quote and quote and quote

I guess the latter, the Domme angle. It's fine, I realised it whilst writing, but didn't add the crisps to prove the fact.

Anyway.

Next chapter below. Thanks all.

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Plenty of scene setting here, for later payoffs

As for the 1 night stand, I had intended writing everything into one chapter but the introduction took up more room then I thought

So you'll all have to wait for the TUGs action

[Switchgirl]

I love it - the scene has changed from Flame so rather than go straight into a TUG with A.N.Other, we get a realistic build up and ‘setting the scene’ for Brooke’s next ‘adventure’.

The best comes to those who wait.

[BlissfulMisery]

Quote and quote and quote and quote

Obligated to continue the chain

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'What If.... Examining Alternative Outcomes To Major Historical Events.' A literal mouthful splashed across the cover.

A minor detail, but I liked it. Reminds me of certain pretentious book titles

Because we've had this discussion: him wanting to do a babysitter bondage video, and me finding the whole style, though popular it just seems odd, specifically the fact of someone young enough to need a sitter then stripping said model once she's helpless.

Odd indeed. A fitting bit of mental commentary.

Overall quite a bit of jumping around the last few chapters. Not that there is anything wrong with that, as it certainly kept my attention. Lots of potential story threads set up. I suppose we will see what unravels when they are pulled on

Plenty of scene setting here, for later payoffs

Indeed!

[RopeBunny]

Quote and quote and quote and quote

Obligated to continue the chain

And obviously I won't be quoting you and....

Oh.

Oops


I actually have this- the What If -book or at least I kinda do, the title isn't so longwinded.

It's quite a good/interesting subject/read.

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we get a realistic build up and ‘setting the scene’ for Brooke’s next ‘adventure’.

The best comes to those who wait.

Indeed and, waiting over- at least for the 'One Night Stand' thread, which concludes (?)



Above.

[Switchgirl]

Loved it.

Brooke still searching whilst having fun…though the hint that she wants, but doesn’t, to be enslaved….(the cage)

Another great chapter

[Caesar73]

I do love your writing, your style. You have a very distinctive Style - which matches Plymouth´s Character perfectly. In this Chapter I like very much how you created the steamy atmosphere. It is a slow build up - but perfectly timed.

[RopeBunny]

Loved it.

Brooke still searching whilst having fun…though the hint that she wants, but doesn’t, to be enslaved….(the cage)

Got to keep dropping those hints and who knows....

Some day someone might answer.

I do love your writing, your style. You have a very distinctive Style - which matches Plymouth´s Character perfectly.

Thank you, a lovely compliment. I like my style, something- much like every author I assume -that's grown the more I right.

Yours is different, from mine but very well done. Having got into your latest I'm consistently impressed by the level of detail.

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[Switchgirl]

Another great few chapters.

Your unique style highlights Brooke’s uncertainty in what she really wants…