Plymouth and Deborah (MF+/F+) *FINISHED*

[BlissfulMisery]

In reality most of this just wouldn't happen of course. So many red flags as you pointed out there's just no way.

More like a red flag factory

As for the chapter...

Again more of Brooke wrestling with her emotions and memory. Getting close to... something. Wanting to find that balance, that truth, but it just not coming to her. A section that is more important then it seems at first glance, despite not that much of relevance actually happening.

I'm scared, worried and yet moments later I'm cursing the slowness of time.

A great way to encapsulate her mixed feelings.

You have got to be the worst/best submissive I ever met.

Stephanie is not wrong there

Plymouth, I'm, not that good?

An interesting line. She literally sees herself as the two different personas. Hints of that earlier (post-accident that is, obviously this was the case before her memory loss), but I think this is the first time it is spelled out so clearly.

As for 'the idea'... I will take a guess that she will try to use her Plymouth/Domme personality to try to bowl over Stephanie, get her tied up, and give her a little 'interrogation'. Finally get some straight answers.

Would probably work well on Deborah, but Brooke does not know that, given her memory loss, and either way, might not work so well on Stephanie...

Or perhaps I am totally off the mark

Either way, should be interesting.

[RopeBunny]

Thank you both for the comments.

Two chapters below, everything playing out.

Enjoy.

[RopeBunny]

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[RopeBunny]

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[RopeBunny]

As for 'the idea'... I will take a guess that she will try to use her Plymouth/Domme personality to try to bowl over Stephanie, get her tied up, and give her a little 'interrogation'. Finally get some straight answers.

Reading my notes again

So.

The end.

A strange thing this story. Twists and turns.

Originally I had an itch to scratch, I wanted to delve back into Plymouth as a true slave, proper hardcore level stuff whipping and the cage.

The ending was going to be Plymouth and Deborah, some form of happy ever after for them both. But.

I had enough of the slave stuff and so wrote the accident as a form of clean break, and, since that point I've been angling towards Plymouth breaking free.

Morgan an unexpected bonus, working and slotting in well.

I'm sorry if the ending is somewhat abrupt. As I said I'd had enough, wanted things wrapped up smoothly but without taking fifty chapters.

Plymouth isn't over though.

I'm beginning a fresh new story, no more Deborah or Stephanie, going back to the roots of just her being a model and having fun.

I hope you'll all join me.

And.

Thanks, as always, for reading.

[GreyLord]

I am looking forward, @RopeBunny, to Plymouth returning to being a bondage model and just having fun. You had a great excursion. But, for me, the beginning was the greatest.

[BlissfulMisery]

Reading my notes again

I would not say that I guessed it perfectly - the scene ended up more Brooke tricking Stephanie into an interrogation. But close enough I suppose

"Is she hiding?" Managing to keep my voice light, playful, as we wander through into the kitchen. "Going to jump out all," I wave my arms, "'surprise' and then you'll what." Somehow despite the building nerves I manage a laugh. "Double team me to death."

I actually really liked this set of lines. It is not anything 'special', but it is a fun little bit of dialogue on her part that stood out (in a good way!)

I'm sorry if the ending is somewhat abrupt. As I said I'd had enough, wanted things wrapped up smoothly but without taking fifty chapters.

It is indeed a little abrupt, but it does wrap things up sufficiently. Ultimately if you were getting bored with the concept, better to just stop rather then drag it out.

Plymouth isn't over though.

I'm beginning a fresh new story, no more Deborah or Stephanie, going back to the roots of just her being a model and having fun.

I hope you'll all join me.

I am sure whatever you end up doing next with Brooke/Plymouth will be worth the wait!

Thanks, as always, for reading.

You are welcome - it is always a pleasure

And I am sure it is for many others, even if they often seem a little shy in voicing their appreciation!