Plymouth and Deborah (MF+/F+) *FINISHED*

[RopeBunny]

A mean cliffhanger!

I suppose it was

There was, is, more. But I realised it was better broken up and the separate parts padded out to include more detail.

Hopefully the three chapters below will make up for it.

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[BlissfulMisery]

Back to work indeed... Brooke is starting to rediscover her old life - especially her love of bondage. In some ways unfortunate perhaps, given how much trouble she has gotten into previously due to her favorite obsession.

But fresh beginnings mean fresh chances to do things differently - perhaps even better. Maybe Morgan might turn out to be the right person to set her on a less rocky path then she had been walking previously.

Or maybe not. I suppose we shall have to see.

[RopeBunny]

But fresh beginnings mean fresh chances to do things differently - perhaps even better. Maybe Morgan might turn out to be the right person to set her on a less rocky path then she had been walking previously.

Or maybe not. I suppose we shall have to see.

Maybe she will.

Next chapter, posting immediately below, should show that things in the Morgan/Brooke world are certainly moving along.

Or as you say maybe not.

Because there's no doubt that Deborah and/or Steph will resurface at some point. And then I guess we'll see what happens

Thank you, as always, for commenting here. It means a lot to find them, and I'm grateful for your effort.

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[BlissfulMisery]

Was away for a bit and I see there is a lot to come back to!

Because there's no doubt that Deborah and/or Steph will resurface at some point. And then I guess we'll see what happens

Indeed!

Thank you, as always, for commenting here. It means a lot to find them, and I'm grateful for your effort.

You are very welcome!

As for the chapters...


An interesting chapter with Brooke trying to figure out the holes in her memory. Remembering half fragments - can definitely feel some of her confusion and frustration coming through the text!

A bit of an amusing back and forth with the emails - Plymouth almost teasing, obviously eager to get back into her work. A fun interlude as is usual.

And things are certainly moving along between Brooke and Morgan. Ironic that Morgan accidentally 'wandered into' the same thing Brooke was into.

"College. Some drunk sex one time." Another laugh. "Some fucking girl, midway through she just cuffs me to the bed. Outa nowhere. And."

Ahh yes, the best way to be introduced to bondage - by surprise (Obviously dubious in reality, but quite amusing in the context of a story).

In some ways it is good that Morgan is more of a beginner (and submissive) - perhaps it might help temper some of Brooke's excesses. That or frustrate her - I suppose we will have to see.

And a great end to the chapter, with Brooke rediscovering her dominant side, all the while battling her own hesitation. Outward control, inward uncertainty - it creates a great duality to the scene.

Looking back at me Morgan half smiles, nerves.

"It's a little loose?"
"Is that right?" Keeping my tone light, smiling. "Probably still tight enough to keep you out of trouble though."
"Well...." Making a show of moving her arms and legs.

See how much freedom I have.

Pretty sure 'See how much freedom I have' is supposed to be 'Seeing how much freedom she has', based on the context. But maybe I am the one misunderstanding something here.

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Was away for a bit and I see there is a lot to come back to!

Thought I'd play a game of how much can I post before someone....
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Looking back at me Morgan half smiles, nerves.

"It's a little loose?"
"Is that right?" Keeping my tone light, smiling. "Probably still tight enough to keep you out of trouble though."
"Well...." Making a show of moving her arms and legs.

See how much freedom I have.

Pretty sure 'See how much freedom I have' is supposed to be 'Seeing how much freedom she has', based on the context. But maybe I am the one misunderstanding something here.

Nope. It's supposed to be 'see how much freedom I have' as in Brooke imagining that by moving her arms and legs Morgan is saying just that.

See how much freedom I have, that it isn't really tight at all.

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[BlissfulMisery]

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Nope. It's supposed to be 'see how much freedom I have' as in Brooke imagining that by moving her arms and legs Morgan is saying just that.

See how much freedom I have, that it isn't really tight at all.

I suppose. Reads a bit awkward, which makes one go back and read it again, which makes one question the meaning.

Either way it is not important, just something that stood out as being somewhat unclear.


Liked the chapters, as usual!

Lastly my corset. The real deal and quite expensive. Black with dark smoky purple stormcloud at sunset coloured detailing, hint of colour between the vertical bones constricting and sealing me in. I need Thomas's help lacing me up, because it's a back lace. It, the corset, takes inches off my waist squeezing me to the point breathing is something to do carefully, and it pushes my F cups up and out something amazing, actual mountains of cleavage.

To be fair, a proper, expensive corset should not actually restrict breathing at all - if it does it is done far too tight/is not of good quality. Really despite a lot of the somewhat exaggerated depiction of corsets in popular culture, the main 'restriction' of wearing one is not being able to bend down/far to the sides as much due to the rigid bones (literal whale bone back in the day, but of course that is illegal now so these days usually steel is used). A good corset conforms to the body and molds the figure in the desired manner - historically corsets came in many shapes and sizes and their design (ie the practice of corsetry) was actually quite complex.

Modern corsets actually tend to be quite terrible to wear because they are made poorly, (which gives people trying them the wrong impression, adding to the myths). They are also generally worn over (for appearances rather then practicality), rather then under clothing (historically corsets were underwear), which can add to the constriction. It also does not help that while most modern clothes are made to fit as many people as possible, and this *really* does not work for a corset, which *has* to be tight, and therefore actually has to fit properly.

Some of the current misconceptions also come from a very small minority that practiced 'tight-lacing' back in the day, but it was controversial even back then, and certainly not the general norm. But it is a lot more interesting to talk about 'crazy' things people did back in the day I suppose, then the actual somewhat boring reality, so people talk about/remember those parts more

Apologies for the short 'rant' - not intended as a criticism, just some brief commentary on the subject.

Bringing it back around to the actual story, I suppose in this case the issue might be in part that it is not fitted specifically to Plymouth. And perhaps it is laced tighter then it 'should be', given the nature of what she is doing


Nice to see Deborah/Stephanie making their return! Although a bit strange how they are acting - they seem to know about the injury, but are being very coy with how they are testing the waters. Honestly, it actually worries me a little, for Brooke's sake - why would they not simply tell her the situation, rather then playing these games?

Well I suppose I can vaguely understand why (there is an element of control I suppose, to knowing something the other does not), but it is not what I would call responsible domming.

Honestly made me question for a moment if their website is even real (I suppose it probably is, else why the specifically large fee, but it seemed quite out of nowhere given the whole setup seemed to be one big excuse to toy with Brooke).

Reading that back, perhaps it sounds a little *too* critical - it is a fun scene, just perhaps the motivations seem confusing to me. Or maybe I have strange sensibilities

And I don't have to go back. I don't have to and I don't- because that shit had been pure craziness -want to.

Right?

Ahh yes, the old 'trying to convince herself she does not, but deep down she knows that she does'... Brooke is truly incorrigible


Well I think I have written more then enough... Time to cut it off.

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[BlissfulMisery]

Well that told me
Not mad, it's funny. I normally research stuff I'm writing about, Japan and the Hayabusa being noteworthy examples.

But I didn't look into corsets at all, and have close to zero knowledge/experience of them.

So.

Oops

As I said, not mad at the rant, it's funny.

To be fair was not attempting to 'tell you'

As I said, there are perfectly plausible reasons as to why Plymouth might have had the experience she did - in fact as I mentioned, the 'average corset experience' today would be negative. So it is not even as if the scene is unrealistic (plus the corset being used is purely for 'looks'). But it did obviously bring up the subject, and it seemed relevant to mention some things and perhaps dispel a few myths.

To add a little more on the subject - there were even corsets worn for sports, and work, so the idea of not being able to breathe in one being the norm is simply absurd. They also assist with posture, and even today medical corsets (although I do not think they are called such) are sometimes used to help people with back problems.

Either way, lots more history and details to be gone into, but that would go far beyond the scope of what would be appropriate for the thread.

Deborah and Stephanie. In time explanations and truth will emerge. Sometimes hard to write everything perfectly, the ideas in my head don't always come out on paper looking right.

Alright. I had already expected things to become clearer with time. And yes, I can certainly understand that it is different having ideas in your head, versus for someone on 'the outside' who does not have all that information bouncing around in *their* head.

Probably could've done a better job but at some point you've just got to post and go with it.

Indeed, perfectionism is the bane of actually getting anything done

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A brilliant example of email dialog. Poor Plymouth, so conflicted.

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Poor Plymouth, so conflicted.

Indeed.

I've said before how much I love the character Brooke/Plymouth, how I care. So, it's hard at times to write these downward spirals, to deliberately place her into danger.

Hard. But fun.

Thanks for commenting.

[BlissfulMisery]

Well Morgan certainly takes well to being in charge - I suppose it helps having someone as willing a Brooke!

Dinner eaten and enjoyed by at least one of us

A really nice line (not the only one of course, but quoting them all would be absurd ). Succinctly describes the situation.

It is a great scene between them, but in the broader scheme of things it is not exactly a healthy way to deal with Brooke's uncertainty - the solution to being unsure about her submissiveness is not to keep playing slave. What she is doing is trying to bury her feelings via satisfying her addiction (submission). And obviously such things never work out in the long run - it is how addictions become worse.

Definitely a bit of a downward spiral.

Obviously not a criticism - it certainly makes sense. But as you mentioned, a bit painful to watch.

The exchange with Deborah and Stephanie being even further along those lines. To be honest, were this reality, what Deborah and Stephanie are doing here is pretty much a 'do not ever contact this person again', far beyond even a red flag, as they are ignoring Brooke's needs and emotional well-being for the sake of their own fun (and 'well Brooke secretly likes it' is not a valid justification). And that is even without the extra context of them knowing what happened before the accident but refusing to clue Brooke in.

Continuing to act as dommes while Brooke is obviously upset about what they did, outside of the context of play like this, and then basically taunting her... It is questionable at best, and honestly utterly immoral given what they know, and what they are not telling her.

Poor Brooke obviously at least partially understands all this, but just as obviously cannot resist.

Again, I know it seems as if I am saying it is bad writing or 'needs to be changed' - it is not. It really brings out the inner conflict, the complicated emotions in such a situation. I totally sympathize with Brooke acting the way she does, understand the siren song of temptation that leads her astray. But obviously the rational part of me wants her to keep herself safe, as it does not seem that Deborah and Stephanie can be trusted to fulfil their roles as dommes in that regard.

As always, I suppose we shall have to see what happens.

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It is all a little 'over the line' at times, agreed. Parts of this story have been, quite often I've delved down into things beyond what I'd normally write.

Fun, but.

In reality most of this just wouldn't happen of course. So many red flags as you pointed out there's just no way.

Next chapter posting below.

Perhaps....

A change coming...?

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[GreyLord]

Eager to discover the idea. Great suspense.