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Plymouth and Deborah (MF+/F+) *FINISHED*
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BlissfulMisery
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Fair enough - certainly you are correct that *something* had to happen lest the story dead-end.
I see what you meant - it seems Plymouth is gathering a whole collection for herselfRopeBunny wrote: 1 year ago Might.
Might.
Of gone slightly overboard with this next chapter. But I like it, and so it's staying.
You'll see what I mean.
Might be a bit hard to manage, although she seems to be doing fine so far
Was a bit surprised the redhead was not doing more with Deborah, given that she seemed to have arranged the situation with Alice (or perhaps not). Had expected a bit more of a 'rescue' from Plymouth. Not a complaint, just not what I thought would happen.
Did! Interested to see where it will go from here.
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Amazing writing as usual 
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As I had suspected, quite the handful for Plymouth to deal with all of the girls at once, although she did quite well!
It was good that she 'came up for air', even if it was at the behest of someone else. Despite wanting to see it happen, have to admit, still a little sad that she 'escaped', despite it honestly probably being the best thing for her.
Now it is just Plymouth and Deborah again (funny how that is the title of the story...)
Wonder what they will get up to - it seems both are wanting to submit to the other. Perhaps they will develop some sort of switch relationship (one day on one day off?). Might be a healthier way for Brooke to get what she wants without going completely under.
Or maybe something completely different. Was just an idle thought that came while reading, certainly many ways this could go.
Interested to see where it does!
It was good that she 'came up for air', even if it was at the behest of someone else. Despite wanting to see it happen, have to admit, still a little sad that she 'escaped', despite it honestly probably being the best thing for her.
Now it is just Plymouth and Deborah again (funny how that is the title of the story...)
Wonder what they will get up to - it seems both are wanting to submit to the other. Perhaps they will develop some sort of switch relationship (one day on one day off?). Might be a healthier way for Brooke to get what she wants without going completely under.
Or maybe something completely different. Was just an idle thought that came while reading, certainly many ways this could go.
Interested to see where it does!
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I love the switch from Plymouth to Brooke and back - domme to sub - looks like Plymouth can play any role.
Interesting to see how the dynamics of B and Deborah play out….
Fantastic story as usual
Interesting to see how the dynamics of B and Deborah play out….
Fantastic story as usual
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It seems Brooke is back on her wild submissive ride - it really is an addiction at this point. Still, a crazy and fun ride!
Ironic that Brooke is annoyed at Alice for being so willing to surrender, but then does the exact same thing herself, seemingly unable (or certainly not wanting to) to resist, despite genuinely enjoying keeping Deborah. Birds of a feather they are, at least in this manner.
The exchange of private messages makes me think of exactly how much of dominance and submission is about 'impression' - one generally needs impetus of a sort to fall into a submissive role, which a 'good' dominant provides. And it often comes in the form of things that are not *exactly* true - the words that are spoken are often quite exaggerated compared to the reality - even in fiction.
A sort of carefully built shared illusion - or perhaps delusion?
Either way, it is not exactly a particularly new or original thought (really this is all pretty basic and intuitive), but it was interesting to have it laid out so starkly and directly (hard to have much nuance with text messages with the lack of non-verbal communication - it is very accurately written in that regard!), with the words Stephanie uses to exert her will, to allow Brooke to fall into the role they both desire.
Barely coherent ramblings aside, a great set of chapters - it seems Plymouth only managed to last about a day
Ironic that Brooke is annoyed at Alice for being so willing to surrender, but then does the exact same thing herself, seemingly unable (or certainly not wanting to) to resist, despite genuinely enjoying keeping Deborah. Birds of a feather they are, at least in this manner.
The exchange of private messages makes me think of exactly how much of dominance and submission is about 'impression' - one generally needs impetus of a sort to fall into a submissive role, which a 'good' dominant provides. And it often comes in the form of things that are not *exactly* true - the words that are spoken are often quite exaggerated compared to the reality - even in fiction.
A sort of carefully built shared illusion - or perhaps delusion?
Either way, it is not exactly a particularly new or original thought (really this is all pretty basic and intuitive), but it was interesting to have it laid out so starkly and directly (hard to have much nuance with text messages with the lack of non-verbal communication - it is very accurately written in that regard!), with the words Stephanie uses to exert her will, to allow Brooke to fall into the role they both desire.
Barely coherent ramblings aside, a great set of chapters - it seems Plymouth only managed to last about a day
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A bit of a contrast to the more fast-forwarded sections with Alice. More 'realistic' in the sense of having the oscillations between playing and well... actually having to do things and even have a conversation of some sort. Like it or not, it cannot be all submission and bondage all the time
More of a somber tone too, in a way, as if both are trying to 'find' something in all of this - Steph's moment where the mask slips seems to hint at such at least. And Brooke is certainly searching for something - total submission, to feed her own desires. An impossible thing in reality - irresponsible even - but deeply desirable nonetheless...
I liked the overall tone, and I really liked that brief moment of candidness. Very human, a small island in a sea of fantasy (not that the fantasy is bad!)
More of a somber tone too, in a way, as if both are trying to 'find' something in all of this - Steph's moment where the mask slips seems to hint at such at least. And Brooke is certainly searching for something - total submission, to feed her own desires. An impossible thing in reality - irresponsible even - but deeply desirable nonetheless...
I liked the overall tone, and I really liked that brief moment of candidness. Very human, a small island in a sea of fantasy (not that the fantasy is bad!)
Indeed. Nice to just write as deep and dark as I wish, to make it all about the TUG and not worry about human concerns like needing to eat or take a break before your body simply gives up through overkill.BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 year ago More 'realistic' in the sense of having the oscillations between playing and well... actually having to do things and even have a conversation of some sort. Like it or not, it cannot be all submission and bondage all the time
But.
It's nice to throw some normal in there, to break the chapter up. And besides it's potential ground work too, depth being added.
I assume the 'brief moment' to be Steph's belief that Brooke/Plymouth won't be back?BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 year ago I liked the overall tone, and I really liked that brief moment of candidness. Very human, a small island in a sea of fantasy (not that the fantasy is bad!)
I'm glad you liked the chapter.
Might have something interesting cooking, a change.
Maybe....
You'll all find out soon enough
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Very much so.RopeBunny wrote: 1 year ago It's nice to throw some normal in there, to break the chapter up. And besides it's potential ground work too, depth being added.
I meant this exchange:RopeBunny wrote: 1 year ago I assume the 'brief moment' to be Steph's belief that Brooke/Plymouth won't be back?
It is interesting too - thinking about it more, what sticks out is that Steph seems... *afraid* of the answer. Or perhaps afraid of her own desires, dismissing them out of hand, trying to act as if they do not matter, push them away...RopeBunny wrote: 1 year ago "Why didn't you leave?"
"Huh?" Caught off guard, the question, I blink, looking back at Steph who makes a gesture like waving her half a slice around.
"Alice." Taking a huge bite, offering me the small end of crust left. "There's no real power there. Or." Looking around, at me, reaching out to tug my chest harness. Steph laughs. "Or here. It's all just a game really. So." A shrug. "Why didn't you leave?"
"Want me to?"
Laughing, quiet and quick but the tease or flirt slips out.
"No." Sincere, serious. "It's been a good day."
"For me too." Quiet, flicked glance. "You. Um. Know how to treat a girl."
"Oh yeah." Another laugh, shake of her head. "Because every girl wants to be treated like shit and then locked up."
I blush, Steph shuts up.
"You really are into it?" Almost Disbelieving.
"Well...." Mouth dry, feeling my nipples harden and pussy growing damp. I squirm.
"It doesn't matter." Voice suddenly harsh, the moment gone, or lost, or never there at all. Steph slaps the ballgag back into my mouth. Buckling it viciously tight.
A logical reaction, for dominance and submission do involve a degree of cognitive dissonance when contrasted with 'the real world' and normal life. And that is a feeling (the cognitive dissonance) that 'we' (as in the general 'we' as in people in general) do not like to confront, for it is quite difficult to.
Perhaps not wording this the best way, but I think the gist of what I mean is there.
I imagine whatever it is, will be just as interesting as what has come before.RopeBunny wrote: 1 year ago Might have something interesting cooking, a change.
Maybe....
You'll all find out soon enough
Well, here it is.BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 year agoI imagine whatever it is, will be just as interesting as what has come before.RopeBunny wrote: 1 year ago Might have something interesting cooking, a change.
Maybe....
You'll all find out soon enough
What you might call a curveball
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A curveball indeed!
Still, at least she has friends to help her along. A lot of old faces from her past making a reappearance, which is nice to see (and new faces of course!)
One problem however - Deborah probably has no idea what happened to her, since I doubt Brooke's mother knows about her. And worse, Brooke does not currently remember this.
Still, at least she has friends to help her along. A lot of old faces from her past making a reappearance, which is nice to see (and new faces of course!)
One problem however - Deborah probably has no idea what happened to her, since I doubt Brooke's mother knows about her. And worse, Brooke does not currently remember this.
Exactly, and this is where the potential for interesting tines arises.BlissfulMisery wrote: 1 year ago
One problem however - Deborah probably has no idea what happened to her, since I doubt Brooke's mother knows about her. And worse, Brooke does not currently remember this.
Might have to wait awhile for Deborah, and/or Steph, even little switch Alice, to surface, but no doubt they- at least one of them -will.
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Indeed...RopeBunny wrote: 1 year ago Exactly, and this is where the potential for interesting tines arises.
Might have to wait awhile for Deborah, and/or Steph, even little switch Alice, to surface, but no doubt they- at least one of them -will.
Nice to see Brooke rediscovering Plymouth (and more callbacks!), even if still faintly, from a distance.
Although I suppose the unexpected guest is likely to have something to do with/perhaps be able to help with that?
A mean cliffhanger!