Plymouth. (MF+/F+) *NEW 15/02 NEW* (Finished...?)

[RopeBunny]

And. This time, I'll try not to dive too far down any dark rabbit holes.

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[Caesar73]

I love this chapter Imho your style matches Brookes personality perfectly. When I read this chapter it is almost as if looking in Brooke´s mind! Nicely done! And I am looking forward on which Journey you will send Brooke this time

[GreyLord]

Hi [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. You are off to a good start. I hope, and I am sure the vast majority of your readers will join me, that you will find your new Plymouth adventure a happier experience.

[Switchgirl]

Shes back!

Great start - what can Brooke get up to in the US?

[tickletied84]

Lovely start, glad that Brooke still has that mix of cheekily embarrassing security guards, and then the innocence of looking up at the (to us Brits!) huge American buildings.

Looking forward to where you take it next.

[Rdo4y8]

Another chapter in Plymouth’s journey is always a welcome addition. Excited to see where this goes.

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey,

Good to see a continuation of Brooke/Plymouth's tale.

Well, not much going on so far, mostly setting the stage. But there is plenty of promise for all kinds of shenanigans in the near future.

The conversation with the security guard was definitely very 'Plymouth'. No shame at all.

As you said, much more lighthearted so far.

[slackywacky]

I love the fact Plymouth is back! YEAH! Your writing style is different from most, and I do not say that in a bad way. I like it.
Looking forward where this tale will lead us.

I will tell Jack and Elsa to look out for Plymouth

[RopeBunny]

Thanks for all the positive comments.

Not much of a first chapter, deliberately short, setting the scene: a US trip (hopefully) filled with fun rope based play.

Hoping to drop the next chapter very soon. It's written, just needs polishing.

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[GreyLord]

Wonderful, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. Although your last story was well written, I am enjoying this one much more. It feels as if a matured Plymouth of old has returned. Excellent descriptions.

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey,

Well, seems Plymouth is getting right into the action. Or more specifically, the primary purpose of her trip.

I like the little details on preparing/setting up the shoot. Really helps flesh out the scene.

It's a particular kind of torture, taking so long to tie me up, prolonging the feeling of approaching helplessness that's steadily settling over me.

Great line. Pulls double duty on both characterization (important, since this is technically a new story) and describing the situation in an indirect, but very evocative way.

Some echoes of the old, sometimes reckless, Plymouth too, but (thankfully) this is a much more controlled environment. But perhaps she no longer needs that safety net.

[RopeBunny]

It feels as if a matured Plymouth of old has returned.

Some echoes of the old, sometimes reckless, Plymouth too,

Indeed the mature Plymouth of old, in the beginning prehaps, who morphed into the somewhat reckless Plymouth of old but slightly more recent times.

Can't say there won't be reckless moments ahead. Brooke/Plymouth does love to walk a fine line at times. But I'm going for a more upbeat tone here, attempting to keep this tale largely based around Brookes pornstar journey across the US.

Thank you both for commenting.

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[Caesar73]

For me personally? I liked the reflections of Brooke at the beginning of this chapters best, comparing 9/11 and Hiroshima. That adds a sombre note to this chapter, and I like that.

[RopeBunny]

I liked the reflections of Brooke at the beginning of this chapters best, comparing 9/11 and Hiroshima.

Thanks. Writing the bondage side of these stories is great fun, but stuff like that, the various asides that link everything together, I like doing them too.

Enjoyed writing the Hiroshima stuff back in my original Plymouth story, this was a good opportunity to do similar again.

[GreyLord]

I echo and ditto [mention]Caesar73[/mention]. After the period of reflection, Plymouth becomes urgent. Good job, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention].

[BlissfulMisery]

Her reaction to seeing ground zero is interesting. It highlights the human tendency to focus on 'big, single events' rather then all the small, little tragedies that happen every day (and tend to add up to far more suffering and death). Interesting because it highlights exactly why certain issues are addressed, and others are not; people (and therefore society at large) generally only react to the major events, and even then, often in a counterproductive, kneejerk manner. Like it or not, we are mostly ruled by our emotions. A set of realities that explains much about why things end up the way they do.

Lost out to an French girl. A damn good video too. Not quite as quirky as my offering: getting chased around a hedge maze whilst bound and gagged, topless, by four guys dressed in inflatable Tyrannosaurus costumes.

Is that a tinge of jealousy on Brooke's part?

I liked the awkward conversation about the rope.

Also, seems like Plymouth's fascination with bondage is about to impose itself on another poor hotel worker, although perhaps in a more reasonable, up front fashion.

[RopeBunny]

Is that a tinge of jealousy on Brooke's part?

Maybe

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[GreyLord]

What a busy- fun -life I lead.

What a busy- fun -story I read.
Thank you [mention]RopeBunny[/mention].

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey,

I like the bit of almost 'bait and switch', with the overconfidence. Makes the scene feel more organic, as certainly such moments do happen...

Places to be, people to tie up, be tied up by.

Well, hopefully more successfully tied up then this time! But reality has a way of crashing down into fantasy.

[RopeBunny]

Sorry everyone, been ill.