The Other Box (F+/F+) (COMPLETE 06/07)

[BlissfulMisery]

Interesting chapter, I enjoyed it quite a bit.

It keeps getting better and better. I hope I'm not repeating myself. But if I am, it is only because it is true. Wow, @RopeBunny, wouldn't it be something to have a sub like Ush who would make herself naked with a thought and tie herself up arbitrarily tight with another thought. I have to wonder what resources you will give Morgan to compete with this pair.

I think some might argue half the fun from the other side is actually doing all the things, the dance, the wholistic experience. Whichever side of the experience one is coming from, as they say, it's about the journey, not the destination

[RopeBunny]

Thank you both for the comments.

Posting the next part now, below. Prehaps one (two at most) more still to come.

Enjoy.

[RopeBunny]

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[Caesar73]

Very nice chapter - especially that devious Cliif Hanger at the end

[GreyLord]

Luna does have a good heart to step in front that way. What a fascinating world you have invented, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. Eagerly waiting to see how you solve this cliffhanger. I need to learn how to write one of those.

[Nainur]

The Endless Desert is...not endless, or so it seems!
Therefore this oasis is well visited, which is great, do not get me wrong. Most interesting thought-lines and exchanges, as always. And a fine cliff-hanger on topf, which i like especially!

[BlissfulMisery]

Feels like Ush has been jumping from one predicament to the next. Exited to see what will happen next!

[tickletied84]

Oh dear, let's hope there's a happy end in site for Ush and Luna. Wonderful chapter, really drawing all the threads together

[GreyLord]

Feels like Ush has been jumping from one predicament to the next. Exited to see what will happen next!

Ush does that, doesn't she?

[RopeBunny]

The cliffhanger. I couldn't think of any other way to leave it. Writing any more would've spoiled what's coming below, but it was quite abrupt.

Thanks for all the comments, final chapter time now. As always, enjoy

[RopeBunny]

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[Nainur]

Well, hell, wtf?!

Honestly, I had to re-read and still feeling a bit lost, doesn't matter. For sure loved the last two lines!
Awesome, the whole thing. Awesome.

[Caesar73]

What a fantastic web you have woven here, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention] !

[GreyLord]

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention], you have smoothly mixed a high quality fantasy with a bunch of TUGs and released the result on this site. Well done and thank you very much. I do hope to read more of Moon Girl and Ush in the future.

[ThatDino]

What a conclusion, lovingly written and greatly amusing! So much potential for sequels if you ever find the inspiration... Thank you - as always - for your contribution!

[tickletied84]

"Well. Moon Girl." Blowing me a kiss. "Wanna go home and tie me up?"

Stupid question.

Brilliant, the last couple of lines sum it up - a mixture of fun bondage TUGs, and some form of dark magic. Loved reading it, hoping there's lots more coming from your creative mind

[Rdo4y8]

Another absolute banger. Can’t wait for your next one!

[RopeBunny]

I'm so very grateful to you all. Such an amazing response all through this story, thank you for taking the time.

To those who mentioned the potential of more Luna/Ush, yes. I'd love tp write them again, but not yet. I can think of several possible story arcs but at this time they're all just single line ideas. Not fleshed out. I need to think and plan.

In the meantime I'll likley be writing another Plymouth story, since several have mentioned an interest in reading her again. Quite aside from which I love writing Plymouth.

Most likely starting soon.

[GreyLord]

Everything you do is great, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. Whatever you pick is sure to be well receive.

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey, great ending.

Ties off (pardon the pun)/concludes just enough to be satisfying, while leaving enough open for the reader's imagination (or maybe follow-ups down the line). Ultimately isn't that what written stories are for, to open/use one's imagination? One of the 'advantages' they hold over other mediums that is often overlooked (too much detail/information can end up being less in some cases).

Either way, I hope to see more, on whatever story(ies) you choose to/are inspired to write next.

[RopeBunny]

Whatever you pick is sure to be well receive.

Thank you

concludes just enough to be satisfying, while leaving enough open for the reader's imagination

I agree with this, a good point well made in my opinion.

This is how I try to write, individual chapters and indeed the whole story arc in places. Some stuff doesn't need or shouldn't be explained. A hinted at TUG from the past or the mentioned threat of a TUG, for instance, in both cases I'll sometimes not follow through, which leaves what happened open to each individual.

Gives the reader something to ponder. Something I hope they'll (you'll) enjoy wondering at.

Thanks

[Switchgirl]

Wow! Another story! Love it!

[Bound to Please]

Great Story, keep posting.