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Two Hours And Counting... (m/self)

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2020 9:45 pm
by Redman
Here's an older piece I wrote a while back.
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"Well, a fine mess I got myself into this time," I think to myself. I pull on the ropes again. Nope, they're still not budging.

Let me explain. My name is Zack. I'm 11 years old and my mom let me stay home alone while she went shopping. That left me plenty of time to do some self bondage.

I started by stripping off everything but my black boxer-briefs and setting up a camera in the finished basement. Yeah, I like being tied up in my underwear. Bite me. So I took my gear down there and got started.

Tying my ankles and knees was easy enough. I'd tied a black bandanna into my mouth and put two strips of grey duct tape over that in an "X" shape. I even used clothespins on my nipples. Yeowch! But it's fun for a little bit.

After securing my legs to the padded support beam, I tied a slipknot in my last length of cotton clothesline. I looped it a few times, wrapped my arms around the post behind me, and slipped my hands in the loop. I had twisted it a couple times, and pulled the knot tight. Perfect. I struggled for a little while and "mmphed" into my gag. In 20 minutes, I had worked up a good sweat, my sandy hair was damp. Then, it happened.

I had tried to loosen the knot on my wirists, but it just... popped into a new knot. I don't really know how, but it wouldn't slip. My hands were stuck. I started to panic and struggled for real. But nothing happened. I was stuck. I know, I know. I should have kept scissors nearby in case something like this happened. But I didn't. I was stupid.

That was 2 hours ago. Now, I'm still standing here, tied securely to the post. It kinda feels like I'm kidnapped for real. My nipples are numb now and my hands kinda hurt. The tape has lost some of its stickiness, but the bandanna is still there. And mom isn't gonna be back for another hour. At least.

"She's gonna kill me..."

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2020 11:11 pm
by Xtc
Nicely done.

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2020 11:20 pm
by LatexLover
Please continue soon.

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Wed Mar 04, 2020 11:41 pm
by Redman
Xtc wrote: 5 years agoNicely done.
Thank you!
LatexLover wrote: 5 years ago Please continue soon.
I honestly never thought up a continuance to this story.

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 12:22 am
by slackywacky
Redman wrote: 5 years ago I honestly never thought up a continuance to this story.
It has lots of possibilities. Maybe think about it ;)

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 12:23 am
by Redman
slackywacky wrote: 5 years ago
Redman wrote: 5 years ago I honestly never thought up a continuance to this story.
It has lots of possibilities. Maybe think about it ;)
Well... Now that YOU have chimed in, I feel obligated to continue.

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 9:22 am
by Xtc
Sorry Slacky,
For my four-pennorth: don't feel obliged to carry on if you think the piece stands alone. You might be more committed to a new work.

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 2:47 pm
by slackywacky
Redman wrote: 5 years ago Well... Now that YOU have chimed in, I feel obligated to continue.
Please don't be :)

I agree with Xtc, don't feel obliged. I started the 'All in the family' story with the idea that it would be a few chapters and it kind of ran away from me (which I do not mind). My 'Bondage model by choice' story I started on over 10 years ago and it has seen some changes. I look back at some of my other stories, those that ended, and my brain is already extending them. But that does not mean it will be written (yet). You write a story because you feel like it, whatever I say (there is better writers on this board than me) or whatever others say.

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 2:51 pm
by Redman
Very well. I think I will leave it stand as is. Zack probably got grounded when his mom came home. Haha

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Thu Mar 05, 2020 10:08 pm
by cj2125
Oh I remember this story! Feel bad for Zack but I like it! Personally I think it works better as a stand alone but I guess the topic has already been decided, agree with what others have said, work it however you like, wheter a stand alone or as a series! :)

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2020 2:42 pm
by ducttape1
Whether the mother finds him after shopping and then continues to tie him up for his careless play?

Re: Two Hours And Counting...

Posted: Fri Mar 06, 2020 3:05 pm
by Redman
ducttape1 wrote: 5 years ago Whether the mother finds him after shopping and then continues to tie him up for his careless play?
Honestly, I don't know. I have thought about sequels to this. Does his mom find him and tie him some more? Maybe his friends wander in and find him. Does a robber break in? So many possibilities, and nothing that I feel like I can flesh out. And that's coming from a guy that wrote 3 novels worth of Star Wars fan fiction in less than a year.

Now, If anyone has an idea of what could happen next, feel free to write it here! Yes, Zack is now officially a community character!