The Land of Snowden: Summer (Tie-Up) School (M/F, F/M, m/f, f/m, etc.)--Chapter 4 added
Posted: Sat Apr 21, 2018 3:16 am
In response to popular demand (from at least two residents here), I am starting a re-post of this story from the old group, The Land of Snowden: Summer (Tie-Up) School, itself a sequel from an ever earlier Land of Snowden tale from the old site, The Family Feud. A hot summer day and some frayed nerves turns into a very big game which eventually consumes the whole of Valleyview Estates, with Snowdenites of all ages drawn into the fun!
Also, bear in mind (especially those reading the new Bind of My Own Making tale with Charity and her gang), in the Snowden timeline, this story is eight years ago. Thus, the Charity and Jillian and Clinton and Colton who are eighteen in the BOMOM tale are only ten here. I hope that's not a problem!
The thing is, when I looked at the old thing, it was, well, truly awful with book-saidisms and extra ellipses, so I've begun editing it to make it a little less awfully written. And since the thing runs 279 pages even without the final chapter I never wrote, this could take some time. We're starting in early spring, and it might be a couple more of them before it's done! Meanwhile, I hope you enjoy this new old tale, starting with...
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The Land of Snowden: Summer (Tie-Up) School
by Mister Mistoffelees
1 Summer Breezes
The icy winters in Snowden tend historically to alternate with scorching summers, and this blistering-hot July was no exception. The Fourth was the starting-point for a string of murderously-hot days, even in the marginally cooler reaches of Valleyview Estates, and any means of relief from the heat was fair game. Fortunately, many of the homes on Valleyview were equipped with more than mere air-conditioning to help keep their denizens cool.
The O’Hara sisters, wheatstraw-blonde Hannah and raven-tressed Margaret—known to one and all as Maggie—were the latest recipients of such help, and although they had remonstrated with the lady of the house—Hannah’s mother and Maggie’s stepmom Anne Thomson O’Hara—that she and her husband—Maggie’s father and Hannah’s stepdad Tony O’Hara—had waited until Hannah and Maggie were almost out of the house for Snowden State University before finally getting the in-ground pool installed, they were making good use of the time they had with the brand-new, sparkling pool. Both had spent leisurely hours that blistering-hot July day in the refreshing water; now they reclined in state on brand-new chaises longues on the adjoining deck letting the sun dry their long, slender, lissome forms. Hannah’s somewhat easier-tanning frame was slightly dressed in a sky-blue bikini of somewhat more modest cut than Hannah herself would have bought, evidence enough that the suit had been bought by her mom, a fact which rankled almost-nineteen-year-old Hannah but did not stop her from wearing it; just-eighteen Maggie, for her part, lounged in a daringly skimpy silky-black bikini which she had made meticulously certain neither her dad not her stepmom knew she owned. Both had set aside their glasses—both disdained contact lenses, preferring their glasses as improbable badges of pride in their intelligence. A pride which had recently been rather badly flicked by one of their two guests currently bobbing and giggling in the pool.
Presently that guest, who had had the unmitigated gall that past May to graduate as the Darius Allen valedictorian ahead of both Hannah and Maggie, took one last bob under the glittering surface of the water, then drew her ripe, hourglass-shaped frame up the steps built into the shallow end of the pool, grabbing a towel and patting her shoulder-length dark-brunette locks for a moment before draping it over her shoulders, partially concealing a royal-blue bikini top whose modest cut was mitigated in its effect by the ripe, generous bosom which it strained to contain. She slipped her small feet into a pair of flip-flops at the edge of the pool and strolled toward her drink, on a table under a wide parasol. “Tell you what, guys,†said Tricia Dwight with a grin as she downed a long cool draught of ice water, “how about we ditch the house on Schaefer Street and just live here? I’m sure your mom and dad won’t have a problem with that, would they Hannah?â€
Hannah giggled. “Mom had my suitcases packed forty-five minutes after commencement!â€
“And Dad had mine packed two weeks before commencement!†said Maggie. “Think they’re trying to tell us something?â€
“Yes!†said the fourth girl, piping up with a bright smile, bobbing at her shoulder-depth somewhat near the shallow end of the pool. She took a quick bob under the surface, then bounced back up with her long, fiery-red tresses glistening wet, flicking them out of her eyes with a small pink hand, then curling over to float on her back a few languid moments, displaying a pastel-pink bikini which almost perfectly matched the natural hue of the pale-pink flesh which adorned her petite frame, and whose somewhat daring cut was as adventurous a choice for her as Maggie’s had been. Had Ted Parker—who, caught in a maelstrom of mid-life crisis, with dramatic suddenness had absented himself from his family’s life a month previously—known his eldest daughter Krysten was currently floating in the O’Hara family pool in such a suit, he would have dragged her home and paddled her behind, all eighteen-year-old-high-school-graduate of her though she was. “They want the pool all to themselves!†Something four languid, giggling, barely-dressed soon-to-be Snowden State Snoops had no intention of yielding at that moment.
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Other Valleyview pools were being put to good use at the same moment. Only a house away, on the same side of Valleyview Drive, a longer-established pool was currently hosting its own guests—three young ladies, one for each of the three daughters currently putting the pool to its intended use.
The youngest of the guests, whose dozen-year-old, slim olive-toned frame strikingly set off the snowy white of her very first bikini—a gift from a mother rather rueful that her daughter had grown enough to do justice to a bikini—had had a trip of only two houses to get to the house from her own pool-less home. In normal circumstances, Aisha al-Fashir would have accompanied her mum, noted Egyptologist Barbara al-Fashir, to the Valley of the Kings to do further research on the Egyptian royal lineage, which Aisha had in the past year—at nearly tragic cost—discovered she was in fact part of, but Mum was deep in the drafting of her third book, Slaying the Goddess—Thutmose III and the Roots of Modern Propaganda, which kept both her and her only child back home in Snowden. Which Aisha hardly minded for once, since the emoluments of this summer now included a boyfriend; and while small, mousy Tucker Logan was hardly considered much of a catch by most of the girls of the soon-to-be seventh grade at Snowden Middle School, Aisha was still dizzily in love with her bespectacled little swain. I wish he could be here today, she mused to herself as she floated lazily along an edge of the pool, occasionally flicking small sprays of water at her hostess, classmate Lisbeth Morgan, whose sun-yellow two-piece suit well matched the golden–blonde tresses which floated around her face as she floated beside her friend, her slender limbs splayed casually around her as she floated along.
The second-eldest of the guests was the only one actually swimming in the swimming pool, long slow backstrokes which pulled her petite, diminutive frame along the opposite side of the pool from Aisha and Lizzie. Her short, rich brown locks clung close to a round, fair face as she swam under the vivid green eyes of her hostess. A hostess which smiled at the way the rich pink one-piece suit with a back low-cut enough to give its owner a bit of pause clung to that small trim body. Cora Peabody caught a glimpse of that hostess—and girlfriend—Leslie Morgan gazing down at her from the chaise beside the pool and smiled. The suit had been a gift from Leslie to Cora; pink, Leslie swore, was Cora Lee’s best color, and Leslie knew Cora well enough to know that her beloved Cora would be badly embarrassed in a two-piece. But the daringly low back was still pleasing to Leslie, and therefore to Cora as well, despite any discomfort it might cause her. The green eyes of Leslie Morgan drank in the lithe, pink-suited form, settling herself more deeply in her chaise and adjusting her suit, such as it was. The black bikini top swelled to contain a bosom generous enough to be the envy of most of the girls—and the delight of the vast majority of the boys—of the incoming freshman class of Darius Allen High School, but was matched not with a conventional bikini bottom but with a pair of baggy black shorts which allowed generous room for ripening hips and rear and reached well down soft, fair thighs. The green eyes of Leslie Morgan, prospective Darius Allen High junior, perfectly matched her current hair color—an iridescent neon green peppered with streaks of sky-blue which had been the latest of her outrageous new choices in hair color. The past months had seen a startling change in Leslie; she who had, as a blonde, been a shy, timid bookworm, had begun to discover herself with a vengeance, finding a circle of friends among the local emo/goth/scene crowd who didn’t disdain her for her intellect nor looked askance at her for her near-tragic suicide attempt of the previous summer nor even evinced issues with her bisexuality, and in response Leslie had embraced their style in her own extravagantly quiet way. She was still the bookworm, still timid around strangers, but with her own unique style, which allowed her to tweak at her mother’s nerves. Especially with the series of outrageous dye jobs she had perpetrated on her now shoulder-length-cut, fluffy-banged tresses; first electric-blue, then pink, then purple, now vivid green.
While Leslie’s outrageous styles irritated her younger sister Lisbeth, they did not at all displease her elder sister Lana. Despite a lifetime of sisterly tormenting, Lana had come to see herself as Leslie’s defender against their parents—and since Leslie’s proclivities (which Lana had known all along) had come to the fore, against their kid sister Lisbeth as well. While Lizzie considered Leslie to be a humiliating ruination of her social aspirations, Lana was both relieved and quietly proud of the way Leslie was asserting herself. Perhaps Lizzie was disgusted by Leslie’s obvious infatuation with Cora, but Lana was simply happy to see her troubled sister Leslie happy. Which allowed Lana to concentrate on her own guest, sitting beside her near the low-set diving board flicking their feet in the water. While Lana’s own daringly-cut two-piece was a brilliant emerald green to match her eyes, her guest’s substantially more modest one-piece suit was a fiery red to match the fiery red locks bobbed closely around her freckled face. Lana could tell that Chelsea Parker, the latest guest to arrive, was bearing news that was not altogether pleasant—unpleasant news from the newly-broken Parker household was common lately—and finally nerved herself to ask about the most likely topic of that news. “Your mom okay? Problems with the baby?†The infant conceived during their wild autumn tie-up-game extravaganza was mere days away from being due—which was the least of Diane Parker’s problems at that moment.
Chelsea sighed ruefully. “Well, good news and bad news. The good news is that the baby’s perfectly healthy and Mom’s okay too. No problems there.â€
“And the bad news?â€
Chelsea smirked. “Turns out my baby brother’s name is going to be Virginia.†She chuckled mirthlessly at Lana’s puzzled expression. “As in my baby brother has turned out to be my baby sister instead. Mom waited until yesterday to let the doctor tell her the baby’s sex.â€
“Well,†said Lana airily, catching a glance at Leslie smiling at Cora, “you know, Chell, baby sisters aren’t all that bad!†Something Chelsea seemed to find very doubtful.
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The neighbor across the street, Lana and Chelsea’s classmate Felicity Mabrey, in a suit which involved a pirate-striped bare-midriff tank-top-styled upper piece and track-shorts-styled bottom, found baby sisters to be much less palatable at that particular moment than did Lana Morgan. “Oh, come on, Jerkface! Can’t you and your slobby little friends ever pick up after yourselves?†She had spent much of the afternoon picking up the mess her youngest sister Charity was leaving around the Mabrey family in-ground pool; empty drink cups, abandoned towels, scattered flip-flop slippers, candy wrappers…
Charity Mabrey—the aforementioned “Jerkface†to her two elder sisters—paid Lissy heed only long enough to reply with a haughtily stuck-out tongue between bobs in the shallow portion of the pool, enjoying the freedom of the white polka-dotted turquoise one-piece suit which robed her slim, freckled frame, tall for her ten years. Her companion in bobbing, however, was more apologetic.
“Sorry, Felicity,†came a sweetly contrite, naturally cheerful voice from that companion, smiling at her hostess as was her wont. Meredith Howland was a plump young lass of an age with Charity—ten years old and heading into the Snowden Elementary fifth grade—distinctly shorter than her friend, with a chubby round face and shoulders even more heavily freckled—if such was even possible—than her hostess, friend, and classmate Charity’s and a ruddy complexion which well complemented the bright strawberry-blonde tresses hanging in a low off-center ponytail somewhat below and behind her right ear and hanging wet over her right shoulder. Her white two-piece suit with its horizontal pink stripes was an unfortunate fashion choice for chubby Merri—the nickname everyone had always used to address the child all her life, a nickname which perfectly suited her sweetly outgoing personality—but she paid the incongruity of her swimsuit no mind as she frolicked with one of her two best friends in the world.
“She didn’t mean you, Merri,†the other of Merri Howland’s two best friends said with a sardonic little grin from behind the book she was perusing in her parasol-shaded chaise, to an amiable shrug from Merri and a comic smirk from Charity. Even in the merciful shade, the sunlight was powerful enough to render the lenses of the narrow, fashionable eyeglasses perched on the girl’s small nose their deepest shade of gray, giving the young girl’s wide, fair face a certain diva-ish quality she found quite pleasant; Jillian Burton, the owner of the pretty face with its well-shaded brown eyes, as well as the fair-complexioned, trim frame which came with the face and its long, silky-straight brown tresses beginning to streak with sun-showered natural highlights, had discovered over the past spring that she rather enjoyed presenting herself as a pretty young starlet as much as she had previously enjoyed presenting herself as the young scholar that her natural and prodigious intellect naturally made her. The brand-new swimsuit, a bright-teal two-piece suit she had begged her mother to buy for her, seemed to play into the young-starlet image she was so carefully building for herself. But starlet-wannabe as she was, her natural tastes and proclivities would not be denied, as the thick hardcover copy of Twilight residing at that moment in her lap would testify. No matter how well Jill Burton managed to present her trim young ten-year-old self as a budding young cutie, she was and always would be a bookworm at heart. “She meant Charity.†Her bestie, yet academic rival Charity.
“Yeah, mostly,†said Felicity, brushing back behind her ear a stray lock of her short-bobbed raven-black hair—of a shade identical to that of her two younger sisters—hiding mostly beneath a red bandanna she had tied over her crown, as usual the only color in her presentation. “At least if I could get any help around here!†With Dad at work and Mom in the middle of summer office hours at the university, Felicity Mabrey once again found herself the lady of the house.
“But you’re doing so well!†called the third sister, tall gangly Serenity, from the shallow end of the well-used Mabrey pool, sitting on the bottom but still and all quite tall enough for her face and shoulders—indeed most of her torso—to rest above the waterline, revealing the upper half of her modestly-cut navy-blue one-piece suit. Unlike most of the more modest choices in swimwear being displayed at the three pools that day, though, the modest suit was very much its wearer’s choice; swimsuits, Serenity asserted sourly and frequently, simply accentuated her three most frustrating figure flaws—the long coltish legs she often referred to acidly as “a couple of sticks,†the small derriere atop the slender legs, and a chest that remained maddeningly flat even as she headed into the final weeks before the start of high school. No wonder she often wondered whether her boyfriend Joey Housely needed glasses.
Especially compared (as Serenity often did) to her companion sitting beside her. Abbie Dwight, diminutive as she was—barely five feet tall—had been growing into a very comely young lady, with a bosom and waist and hips and bottom perfectly shaped and proportioned to send most virile young men into ecstasies at the mere sight of her. But the firm, strong arms and legs which adorned that frame were proof that their owner was a formidable young woman, the possessor of a black belt in taekwondo and a student of various other martial arts such as kendo, shinkendo, and iaido, all of which she excelled at. She excelled at other things too. “And Serenity’s busy entertaining her guest!†said Abbie in that preternaturally-high little piccolo of a voice which was perhaps her most striking attribute, giving her bestie Serenity a bright laugh which lit Serenity’s fair, freckled face with its gray-green eyes and a mane of raven-black hair which she had allowed over the past months to grow well below her shoulders—
“Yeah, laugh now, metalmouth!†said Felicity, stopping Serenity’s nascent laugh. Her most recent cross to bear about her appearance was the braces she now had to wear on her teeth, which had the effect when combined with her other perceived flaws of persuading Serenity that she was now positively ugly. While Serenity bridled angrily, Abbie swished her long russet-brown tresses over her shoulder and prepared to defend her bestie.
“At least she’s not dressed like Jack Sparrow!†which earned another smile from her bestie. “Nice comeback, Lissy!†she said at Felicity’s stuck-out tongue. Yeah, she sighed to herself as she lounged in the cool water and the blistering heat, today is going to be that boring.
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Lana and Chelsea were dipping themselves in the deep end of the pool as the sun reached its meridian, Chelsea still quietly kvetching at getting a baby sister instead of a baby brother. Lisbeth was hiding beneath another parasol while dousing herself in more sunblock; Aisha, for her part, lounged beside her friend downing a bottle of water practically with one draught. Cora lay in a chaise adjacent to Leslie’s, the fingers of her left hand gently entwined with the fingers of Leslie’s right hand, her deep, soulful brown eyes lightly shut. So too were Leslie’s green eyes, but much more firmly shut. The heat and the slowness of the day had lulled green-eyed green-haired Leslie quite to sleep. But not quite a quiet sleep.
“I’m totally helpless, Cora,†she purred in a somnolent undertone. “Your helpless prisoner…†Cora, sitting next to her sleeping girlfriend, gasped and blushed at Leslie’s words—oh, she smiled with pink cheeks, last fall, when… She glanced around her; Lana and Chelsea were still bobbing languidly in the pool, and it seemed that Lizzie and Aisha, under their nearby parasol umbrella, were utterly oblivious to Leslie’s cooing sleep-talk. “Oh, Madame X,†Leslie purred in her dream, “how long will that be? What is my ransom anyhow?†Even a languid, waking Cora giggled at the memory of that delightful game she had played with Leslie that interesting night. “How will my family ever be able to pay?†Sweet dreams, Leslie—
“Oh—my—God!†Lizzie’s blustery voice interjected, Lizzie herself standing above her sister with her hands on her hips, her face a wide-eyed mask of disgust. Behind Lizzie’s shoulder, Aisha stood with her hands over her mouth, struggling mightily to suppress a gale of laughter—“She’s talking in her sleep! About that night! Eeeeeeewwww!â€
Aisha spluttered between her fingers, her big dark eyes sparkling behind her glasses. “You sound like you didn’t enjoy it, Lisbeth!â€
“You weren’t the one tied up by fake burglars all night!†said Lizzie, her voice still filled with distaste as Cora tried to blink her vision into focus. Uh-oh…
Not surprisingly, Lizzie’s outburst instantly had gotten Lana’s and Chelsea’s attention. It was Lana who went ahead and asked what was going on. “Freakshow Leslie’s sleep-talking about playing tie-up with Cora!†Not a good name to use in front of Lana.
“Call her Freakshow again and you’re going to be sorry, you little jerk!†said Lana, fairly levitating from the pool in her truculence. By then, Leslie had awoken from her dream and quickly pieced together what had happened—she must have been talking in her sleep again! Something she had been prone to ever since her abduction by the Crowells now almost three years ago. (author note: Read The Snowden Snoops: Ransom, Revelation, and Redemption for details) Now, she lay with red cheeks and welling eyes as her sisters fought yet another battle about her. Lana (while never yet disclaiming her right to tease Leslie) had become her most vociferous defender; Lizzie, while reconciling herself somewhat to the reality of Leslie’s inconvenient (to Lizzie’s social aspirations, at least) sexuality, had found in Leslie’s swerve into emo/goth/scene-dom more fuel for her disdain for her sister. Especially since Leslie had discovered a taste for unique hair colors.
“Yeah? Make me be sorry, bitch!†Sixth grade had been a year for Lisbeth to pick up a new attitude that was distinctly disrespectful of anyone not named Lisbeth Morgan, not to mention some very salty additions to her vocabulary.
And an attitude which had Lana instantly red-faced with anger as she stormed toward her sneering sister—“You just shut your face, Lizzie!â€â€”and finally, a Lizzie clued in that Lana was serious broke and ran into the house with Lana in hot pursuit—
Just as Lizzie’s other guest for the afternoon pool party arrived from around the side of the house. She was Lizzie and Aisha’s classmate, but much taller than either girl—already well over 5-6 and not yet in seventh grade—slim and willowy in build, with shockingly light, silky-fine long light-blonde tresses pulled back behind her ears with a narrow white-cloth headband, revealing a small blue-eyed pixie face. The tall slim frame was draped in a robin’s-egg blue spaghetti-strapped top which was but light concealment for her modest, budding bosom, and fell quite short of her navel—whether from choice or the fact that the girl had a tendency to grow out of her clothes at a practically visible rate was uncertain—while her snowy-white short-shorts let her long coltish legs shod in flip-flop sandals soak up the sunshine into the beginnings of an attractive tan. Even in her sandals, she towered over everyone else, even the older Chelsea—“So what’s up?†said the girl in a bright voice that somehow seemed smaller than her tall, rangy self should carry as strolled toward her friend Aisha, still standing aghast at the drama which had played out in front of her.
Aisha shrugged, rolling her eyes at Lizzie’s ridiculous behavior. “Just Lizzie being difficult again, Taylor. I’m surprised you could tear yourself away from Sammy Hartman!†A pool-less Valleyview neighbor who just happened to be Taylor Jensen’s current crush.
Taylor deposited her beach towel on the back of a convenient chair. “No pool there! Besides, Skylerâ€â€”Sammy’s elder sister—“was acting like a jerk, and I didn’t want to put up with her.†She reached up and stretched her long lanky arms over her head with a yawn, then brushed a stray lock of hair back over her ear—
“Oh!†cried Aisha, spluttering, a sudden grin creasing her olive-complexioned face—“And I think I know just how she was acting like a jerk, Taylor! Or was it Sammy being the jerk?â€
“What do you mean?†asked Taylor, her voice feigning innocence while her fair face went suddenly, guiltily scarlet—she quickly snatched up the beach towel—“I don’t know what you’re tâ€â€”
Aisha giggled, snatching away the towel and seizing one of Taylor’s long thin wrists. Displaying, with a sly giggle, the distinct pink stripe still visible across it—“This! I think,†said Aisha, “that you were late getting here because you were a little—ahem!—tied up at the Hartmans’ place! Weren’t you?†Taylor stammered—blushed with a gaping-wide mouth—
“It was Devan’s fault!†Taylor finally answered with a voice full of bluster, frantically trying to hide her marked wrists, referring to her elder sister Devan Jensen, three years older than her kid sister Taylor and an incoming sophomore at Darius Allen High. “She and Skyler teamed up on me! I was just sitting there talking to Sammy on their back deck, and they sneaked up behind me and grabbed me! I didn’t hardly stand a chance!â€
Leslie, recovered from her contretemps with Lizzie, grinned up at Taylor. “And of course Sammy didn’t exactly come to the rescue, did he?†She liked Lizzie’s friends much more than she actually liked Lisbeth herself.
“He stood there and took pictures!†cried Taylor, just as Aisha, Leslie, and Cora noticed a matching set of ligature marks fading on Taylor’s ankles. Even Chelsea wandered over with a big grin on her face.
Chelsea snickered as she drank in Taylor’s blushing face. “Oh my God! I remember helping Krysten babysit those freaks! I spent the whole time tied up on the living room floor!â€
“And what about Krysten?†asked Leslie with a smile.
Chelsea smirked. “She got loose and wouldn’t untie me! She walked them to the playground and left me there tied up!†Her tale met with chortles of laughter, even from Taylor and Aisha, who remembered well the mystery that grew from that trip to the playground. “So welcome to the club, Taylor! Nobody’s safe around the Hartmans!â€
But as evidenced by the commotion at the door, safety was illusory at the Morgans’ too; as Chelsea regaled her friends with stories of Skyler and Sammy Hartman, a slender blonde figure was bodily thrown onto the pool deck from inside the house. Her arms were pinioned behind her back, and a thick wooly towel was tied through her mouth—the girl wriggled her bound wrists and mewled animatedly—Aisha shrieked upon recognizing the hands-tied girl as Lizzie—“Lizzie! Who did this toâ€â€”
“That would be me!†said Lana, striding onto the pool deck and seizing Lizzie’s arms. “I’m so sick of Lizzie and her smart mouth! Nobody calls me a bitch and gets away with it, especially Lizzie Potty-Mouth here! I’m her big sister, and damn it, I’m going to have some respect if I have to beat it out of her!†Lizzie still glared angrily at Lana, but the understanding that her hands were tied behind her back and her mouth stopped left her sullenly uncertain, suspecting that she was fairly at Lana’s mercy without help from her friends. Who all seemed to be standing around enjoying the scene.
Just as a circle of grinning friends, neighbors, and sisters seemed to be closing in on a Lizzie unable to free her hands and nervously aware of the pool nearby, a phone on a deckside table suddenly caroled out merrily—Chelsea, recognizing the tune as her message tone, skipped over and checked her message—“Hey guys! Look what Krys just sent me!†She held up her phone with its generous screen—
“Who sent you that?†cried Taylor, blushing vividly at her gang as they devoured a picture of her lying on the Hartman living-room floor with her hands tied behind her back and her ankles also tightly tied. But in not nearly as much distress as her tale to them had suggested.
Chelsea snickered. “Skyler forwarded it Maggie O’Hara, and Krysten just sent it here!†She cast an amused grin at red-faced Taylor. “Yeah, you can tell you just hated Skyler and Devan ganging up on you!†Even Lizzie seemed to be giggling beneath her towel-gag. But before Taylor could concoct a suitable reply, a sudden cry—
“Girls!â€â€”and seven young ladies gasped—
Also, bear in mind (especially those reading the new Bind of My Own Making tale with Charity and her gang), in the Snowden timeline, this story is eight years ago. Thus, the Charity and Jillian and Clinton and Colton who are eighteen in the BOMOM tale are only ten here. I hope that's not a problem!
The thing is, when I looked at the old thing, it was, well, truly awful with book-saidisms and extra ellipses, so I've begun editing it to make it a little less awfully written. And since the thing runs 279 pages even without the final chapter I never wrote, this could take some time. We're starting in early spring, and it might be a couple more of them before it's done! Meanwhile, I hope you enjoy this new old tale, starting with...
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The Land of Snowden: Summer (Tie-Up) School
by Mister Mistoffelees
1 Summer Breezes
The icy winters in Snowden tend historically to alternate with scorching summers, and this blistering-hot July was no exception. The Fourth was the starting-point for a string of murderously-hot days, even in the marginally cooler reaches of Valleyview Estates, and any means of relief from the heat was fair game. Fortunately, many of the homes on Valleyview were equipped with more than mere air-conditioning to help keep their denizens cool.
The O’Hara sisters, wheatstraw-blonde Hannah and raven-tressed Margaret—known to one and all as Maggie—were the latest recipients of such help, and although they had remonstrated with the lady of the house—Hannah’s mother and Maggie’s stepmom Anne Thomson O’Hara—that she and her husband—Maggie’s father and Hannah’s stepdad Tony O’Hara—had waited until Hannah and Maggie were almost out of the house for Snowden State University before finally getting the in-ground pool installed, they were making good use of the time they had with the brand-new, sparkling pool. Both had spent leisurely hours that blistering-hot July day in the refreshing water; now they reclined in state on brand-new chaises longues on the adjoining deck letting the sun dry their long, slender, lissome forms. Hannah’s somewhat easier-tanning frame was slightly dressed in a sky-blue bikini of somewhat more modest cut than Hannah herself would have bought, evidence enough that the suit had been bought by her mom, a fact which rankled almost-nineteen-year-old Hannah but did not stop her from wearing it; just-eighteen Maggie, for her part, lounged in a daringly skimpy silky-black bikini which she had made meticulously certain neither her dad not her stepmom knew she owned. Both had set aside their glasses—both disdained contact lenses, preferring their glasses as improbable badges of pride in their intelligence. A pride which had recently been rather badly flicked by one of their two guests currently bobbing and giggling in the pool.
Presently that guest, who had had the unmitigated gall that past May to graduate as the Darius Allen valedictorian ahead of both Hannah and Maggie, took one last bob under the glittering surface of the water, then drew her ripe, hourglass-shaped frame up the steps built into the shallow end of the pool, grabbing a towel and patting her shoulder-length dark-brunette locks for a moment before draping it over her shoulders, partially concealing a royal-blue bikini top whose modest cut was mitigated in its effect by the ripe, generous bosom which it strained to contain. She slipped her small feet into a pair of flip-flops at the edge of the pool and strolled toward her drink, on a table under a wide parasol. “Tell you what, guys,†said Tricia Dwight with a grin as she downed a long cool draught of ice water, “how about we ditch the house on Schaefer Street and just live here? I’m sure your mom and dad won’t have a problem with that, would they Hannah?â€
Hannah giggled. “Mom had my suitcases packed forty-five minutes after commencement!â€
“And Dad had mine packed two weeks before commencement!†said Maggie. “Think they’re trying to tell us something?â€
“Yes!†said the fourth girl, piping up with a bright smile, bobbing at her shoulder-depth somewhat near the shallow end of the pool. She took a quick bob under the surface, then bounced back up with her long, fiery-red tresses glistening wet, flicking them out of her eyes with a small pink hand, then curling over to float on her back a few languid moments, displaying a pastel-pink bikini which almost perfectly matched the natural hue of the pale-pink flesh which adorned her petite frame, and whose somewhat daring cut was as adventurous a choice for her as Maggie’s had been. Had Ted Parker—who, caught in a maelstrom of mid-life crisis, with dramatic suddenness had absented himself from his family’s life a month previously—known his eldest daughter Krysten was currently floating in the O’Hara family pool in such a suit, he would have dragged her home and paddled her behind, all eighteen-year-old-high-school-graduate of her though she was. “They want the pool all to themselves!†Something four languid, giggling, barely-dressed soon-to-be Snowden State Snoops had no intention of yielding at that moment.
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Other Valleyview pools were being put to good use at the same moment. Only a house away, on the same side of Valleyview Drive, a longer-established pool was currently hosting its own guests—three young ladies, one for each of the three daughters currently putting the pool to its intended use.
The youngest of the guests, whose dozen-year-old, slim olive-toned frame strikingly set off the snowy white of her very first bikini—a gift from a mother rather rueful that her daughter had grown enough to do justice to a bikini—had had a trip of only two houses to get to the house from her own pool-less home. In normal circumstances, Aisha al-Fashir would have accompanied her mum, noted Egyptologist Barbara al-Fashir, to the Valley of the Kings to do further research on the Egyptian royal lineage, which Aisha had in the past year—at nearly tragic cost—discovered she was in fact part of, but Mum was deep in the drafting of her third book, Slaying the Goddess—Thutmose III and the Roots of Modern Propaganda, which kept both her and her only child back home in Snowden. Which Aisha hardly minded for once, since the emoluments of this summer now included a boyfriend; and while small, mousy Tucker Logan was hardly considered much of a catch by most of the girls of the soon-to-be seventh grade at Snowden Middle School, Aisha was still dizzily in love with her bespectacled little swain. I wish he could be here today, she mused to herself as she floated lazily along an edge of the pool, occasionally flicking small sprays of water at her hostess, classmate Lisbeth Morgan, whose sun-yellow two-piece suit well matched the golden–blonde tresses which floated around her face as she floated beside her friend, her slender limbs splayed casually around her as she floated along.
The second-eldest of the guests was the only one actually swimming in the swimming pool, long slow backstrokes which pulled her petite, diminutive frame along the opposite side of the pool from Aisha and Lizzie. Her short, rich brown locks clung close to a round, fair face as she swam under the vivid green eyes of her hostess. A hostess which smiled at the way the rich pink one-piece suit with a back low-cut enough to give its owner a bit of pause clung to that small trim body. Cora Peabody caught a glimpse of that hostess—and girlfriend—Leslie Morgan gazing down at her from the chaise beside the pool and smiled. The suit had been a gift from Leslie to Cora; pink, Leslie swore, was Cora Lee’s best color, and Leslie knew Cora well enough to know that her beloved Cora would be badly embarrassed in a two-piece. But the daringly low back was still pleasing to Leslie, and therefore to Cora as well, despite any discomfort it might cause her. The green eyes of Leslie Morgan drank in the lithe, pink-suited form, settling herself more deeply in her chaise and adjusting her suit, such as it was. The black bikini top swelled to contain a bosom generous enough to be the envy of most of the girls—and the delight of the vast majority of the boys—of the incoming freshman class of Darius Allen High School, but was matched not with a conventional bikini bottom but with a pair of baggy black shorts which allowed generous room for ripening hips and rear and reached well down soft, fair thighs. The green eyes of Leslie Morgan, prospective Darius Allen High junior, perfectly matched her current hair color—an iridescent neon green peppered with streaks of sky-blue which had been the latest of her outrageous new choices in hair color. The past months had seen a startling change in Leslie; she who had, as a blonde, been a shy, timid bookworm, had begun to discover herself with a vengeance, finding a circle of friends among the local emo/goth/scene crowd who didn’t disdain her for her intellect nor looked askance at her for her near-tragic suicide attempt of the previous summer nor even evinced issues with her bisexuality, and in response Leslie had embraced their style in her own extravagantly quiet way. She was still the bookworm, still timid around strangers, but with her own unique style, which allowed her to tweak at her mother’s nerves. Especially with the series of outrageous dye jobs she had perpetrated on her now shoulder-length-cut, fluffy-banged tresses; first electric-blue, then pink, then purple, now vivid green.
While Leslie’s outrageous styles irritated her younger sister Lisbeth, they did not at all displease her elder sister Lana. Despite a lifetime of sisterly tormenting, Lana had come to see herself as Leslie’s defender against their parents—and since Leslie’s proclivities (which Lana had known all along) had come to the fore, against their kid sister Lisbeth as well. While Lizzie considered Leslie to be a humiliating ruination of her social aspirations, Lana was both relieved and quietly proud of the way Leslie was asserting herself. Perhaps Lizzie was disgusted by Leslie’s obvious infatuation with Cora, but Lana was simply happy to see her troubled sister Leslie happy. Which allowed Lana to concentrate on her own guest, sitting beside her near the low-set diving board flicking their feet in the water. While Lana’s own daringly-cut two-piece was a brilliant emerald green to match her eyes, her guest’s substantially more modest one-piece suit was a fiery red to match the fiery red locks bobbed closely around her freckled face. Lana could tell that Chelsea Parker, the latest guest to arrive, was bearing news that was not altogether pleasant—unpleasant news from the newly-broken Parker household was common lately—and finally nerved herself to ask about the most likely topic of that news. “Your mom okay? Problems with the baby?†The infant conceived during their wild autumn tie-up-game extravaganza was mere days away from being due—which was the least of Diane Parker’s problems at that moment.
Chelsea sighed ruefully. “Well, good news and bad news. The good news is that the baby’s perfectly healthy and Mom’s okay too. No problems there.â€
“And the bad news?â€
Chelsea smirked. “Turns out my baby brother’s name is going to be Virginia.†She chuckled mirthlessly at Lana’s puzzled expression. “As in my baby brother has turned out to be my baby sister instead. Mom waited until yesterday to let the doctor tell her the baby’s sex.â€
“Well,†said Lana airily, catching a glance at Leslie smiling at Cora, “you know, Chell, baby sisters aren’t all that bad!†Something Chelsea seemed to find very doubtful.
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The neighbor across the street, Lana and Chelsea’s classmate Felicity Mabrey, in a suit which involved a pirate-striped bare-midriff tank-top-styled upper piece and track-shorts-styled bottom, found baby sisters to be much less palatable at that particular moment than did Lana Morgan. “Oh, come on, Jerkface! Can’t you and your slobby little friends ever pick up after yourselves?†She had spent much of the afternoon picking up the mess her youngest sister Charity was leaving around the Mabrey family in-ground pool; empty drink cups, abandoned towels, scattered flip-flop slippers, candy wrappers…
Charity Mabrey—the aforementioned “Jerkface†to her two elder sisters—paid Lissy heed only long enough to reply with a haughtily stuck-out tongue between bobs in the shallow portion of the pool, enjoying the freedom of the white polka-dotted turquoise one-piece suit which robed her slim, freckled frame, tall for her ten years. Her companion in bobbing, however, was more apologetic.
“Sorry, Felicity,†came a sweetly contrite, naturally cheerful voice from that companion, smiling at her hostess as was her wont. Meredith Howland was a plump young lass of an age with Charity—ten years old and heading into the Snowden Elementary fifth grade—distinctly shorter than her friend, with a chubby round face and shoulders even more heavily freckled—if such was even possible—than her hostess, friend, and classmate Charity’s and a ruddy complexion which well complemented the bright strawberry-blonde tresses hanging in a low off-center ponytail somewhat below and behind her right ear and hanging wet over her right shoulder. Her white two-piece suit with its horizontal pink stripes was an unfortunate fashion choice for chubby Merri—the nickname everyone had always used to address the child all her life, a nickname which perfectly suited her sweetly outgoing personality—but she paid the incongruity of her swimsuit no mind as she frolicked with one of her two best friends in the world.
“She didn’t mean you, Merri,†the other of Merri Howland’s two best friends said with a sardonic little grin from behind the book she was perusing in her parasol-shaded chaise, to an amiable shrug from Merri and a comic smirk from Charity. Even in the merciful shade, the sunlight was powerful enough to render the lenses of the narrow, fashionable eyeglasses perched on the girl’s small nose their deepest shade of gray, giving the young girl’s wide, fair face a certain diva-ish quality she found quite pleasant; Jillian Burton, the owner of the pretty face with its well-shaded brown eyes, as well as the fair-complexioned, trim frame which came with the face and its long, silky-straight brown tresses beginning to streak with sun-showered natural highlights, had discovered over the past spring that she rather enjoyed presenting herself as a pretty young starlet as much as she had previously enjoyed presenting herself as the young scholar that her natural and prodigious intellect naturally made her. The brand-new swimsuit, a bright-teal two-piece suit she had begged her mother to buy for her, seemed to play into the young-starlet image she was so carefully building for herself. But starlet-wannabe as she was, her natural tastes and proclivities would not be denied, as the thick hardcover copy of Twilight residing at that moment in her lap would testify. No matter how well Jill Burton managed to present her trim young ten-year-old self as a budding young cutie, she was and always would be a bookworm at heart. “She meant Charity.†Her bestie, yet academic rival Charity.
“Yeah, mostly,†said Felicity, brushing back behind her ear a stray lock of her short-bobbed raven-black hair—of a shade identical to that of her two younger sisters—hiding mostly beneath a red bandanna she had tied over her crown, as usual the only color in her presentation. “At least if I could get any help around here!†With Dad at work and Mom in the middle of summer office hours at the university, Felicity Mabrey once again found herself the lady of the house.
“But you’re doing so well!†called the third sister, tall gangly Serenity, from the shallow end of the well-used Mabrey pool, sitting on the bottom but still and all quite tall enough for her face and shoulders—indeed most of her torso—to rest above the waterline, revealing the upper half of her modestly-cut navy-blue one-piece suit. Unlike most of the more modest choices in swimwear being displayed at the three pools that day, though, the modest suit was very much its wearer’s choice; swimsuits, Serenity asserted sourly and frequently, simply accentuated her three most frustrating figure flaws—the long coltish legs she often referred to acidly as “a couple of sticks,†the small derriere atop the slender legs, and a chest that remained maddeningly flat even as she headed into the final weeks before the start of high school. No wonder she often wondered whether her boyfriend Joey Housely needed glasses.
Especially compared (as Serenity often did) to her companion sitting beside her. Abbie Dwight, diminutive as she was—barely five feet tall—had been growing into a very comely young lady, with a bosom and waist and hips and bottom perfectly shaped and proportioned to send most virile young men into ecstasies at the mere sight of her. But the firm, strong arms and legs which adorned that frame were proof that their owner was a formidable young woman, the possessor of a black belt in taekwondo and a student of various other martial arts such as kendo, shinkendo, and iaido, all of which she excelled at. She excelled at other things too. “And Serenity’s busy entertaining her guest!†said Abbie in that preternaturally-high little piccolo of a voice which was perhaps her most striking attribute, giving her bestie Serenity a bright laugh which lit Serenity’s fair, freckled face with its gray-green eyes and a mane of raven-black hair which she had allowed over the past months to grow well below her shoulders—
“Yeah, laugh now, metalmouth!†said Felicity, stopping Serenity’s nascent laugh. Her most recent cross to bear about her appearance was the braces she now had to wear on her teeth, which had the effect when combined with her other perceived flaws of persuading Serenity that she was now positively ugly. While Serenity bridled angrily, Abbie swished her long russet-brown tresses over her shoulder and prepared to defend her bestie.
“At least she’s not dressed like Jack Sparrow!†which earned another smile from her bestie. “Nice comeback, Lissy!†she said at Felicity’s stuck-out tongue. Yeah, she sighed to herself as she lounged in the cool water and the blistering heat, today is going to be that boring.
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Lana and Chelsea were dipping themselves in the deep end of the pool as the sun reached its meridian, Chelsea still quietly kvetching at getting a baby sister instead of a baby brother. Lisbeth was hiding beneath another parasol while dousing herself in more sunblock; Aisha, for her part, lounged beside her friend downing a bottle of water practically with one draught. Cora lay in a chaise adjacent to Leslie’s, the fingers of her left hand gently entwined with the fingers of Leslie’s right hand, her deep, soulful brown eyes lightly shut. So too were Leslie’s green eyes, but much more firmly shut. The heat and the slowness of the day had lulled green-eyed green-haired Leslie quite to sleep. But not quite a quiet sleep.
“I’m totally helpless, Cora,†she purred in a somnolent undertone. “Your helpless prisoner…†Cora, sitting next to her sleeping girlfriend, gasped and blushed at Leslie’s words—oh, she smiled with pink cheeks, last fall, when… She glanced around her; Lana and Chelsea were still bobbing languidly in the pool, and it seemed that Lizzie and Aisha, under their nearby parasol umbrella, were utterly oblivious to Leslie’s cooing sleep-talk. “Oh, Madame X,†Leslie purred in her dream, “how long will that be? What is my ransom anyhow?†Even a languid, waking Cora giggled at the memory of that delightful game she had played with Leslie that interesting night. “How will my family ever be able to pay?†Sweet dreams, Leslie—
“Oh—my—God!†Lizzie’s blustery voice interjected, Lizzie herself standing above her sister with her hands on her hips, her face a wide-eyed mask of disgust. Behind Lizzie’s shoulder, Aisha stood with her hands over her mouth, struggling mightily to suppress a gale of laughter—“She’s talking in her sleep! About that night! Eeeeeeewwww!â€
Aisha spluttered between her fingers, her big dark eyes sparkling behind her glasses. “You sound like you didn’t enjoy it, Lisbeth!â€
“You weren’t the one tied up by fake burglars all night!†said Lizzie, her voice still filled with distaste as Cora tried to blink her vision into focus. Uh-oh…
Not surprisingly, Lizzie’s outburst instantly had gotten Lana’s and Chelsea’s attention. It was Lana who went ahead and asked what was going on. “Freakshow Leslie’s sleep-talking about playing tie-up with Cora!†Not a good name to use in front of Lana.
“Call her Freakshow again and you’re going to be sorry, you little jerk!†said Lana, fairly levitating from the pool in her truculence. By then, Leslie had awoken from her dream and quickly pieced together what had happened—she must have been talking in her sleep again! Something she had been prone to ever since her abduction by the Crowells now almost three years ago. (author note: Read The Snowden Snoops: Ransom, Revelation, and Redemption for details) Now, she lay with red cheeks and welling eyes as her sisters fought yet another battle about her. Lana (while never yet disclaiming her right to tease Leslie) had become her most vociferous defender; Lizzie, while reconciling herself somewhat to the reality of Leslie’s inconvenient (to Lizzie’s social aspirations, at least) sexuality, had found in Leslie’s swerve into emo/goth/scene-dom more fuel for her disdain for her sister. Especially since Leslie had discovered a taste for unique hair colors.
“Yeah? Make me be sorry, bitch!†Sixth grade had been a year for Lisbeth to pick up a new attitude that was distinctly disrespectful of anyone not named Lisbeth Morgan, not to mention some very salty additions to her vocabulary.
And an attitude which had Lana instantly red-faced with anger as she stormed toward her sneering sister—“You just shut your face, Lizzie!â€â€”and finally, a Lizzie clued in that Lana was serious broke and ran into the house with Lana in hot pursuit—
Just as Lizzie’s other guest for the afternoon pool party arrived from around the side of the house. She was Lizzie and Aisha’s classmate, but much taller than either girl—already well over 5-6 and not yet in seventh grade—slim and willowy in build, with shockingly light, silky-fine long light-blonde tresses pulled back behind her ears with a narrow white-cloth headband, revealing a small blue-eyed pixie face. The tall slim frame was draped in a robin’s-egg blue spaghetti-strapped top which was but light concealment for her modest, budding bosom, and fell quite short of her navel—whether from choice or the fact that the girl had a tendency to grow out of her clothes at a practically visible rate was uncertain—while her snowy-white short-shorts let her long coltish legs shod in flip-flop sandals soak up the sunshine into the beginnings of an attractive tan. Even in her sandals, she towered over everyone else, even the older Chelsea—“So what’s up?†said the girl in a bright voice that somehow seemed smaller than her tall, rangy self should carry as strolled toward her friend Aisha, still standing aghast at the drama which had played out in front of her.
Aisha shrugged, rolling her eyes at Lizzie’s ridiculous behavior. “Just Lizzie being difficult again, Taylor. I’m surprised you could tear yourself away from Sammy Hartman!†A pool-less Valleyview neighbor who just happened to be Taylor Jensen’s current crush.
Taylor deposited her beach towel on the back of a convenient chair. “No pool there! Besides, Skylerâ€â€”Sammy’s elder sister—“was acting like a jerk, and I didn’t want to put up with her.†She reached up and stretched her long lanky arms over her head with a yawn, then brushed a stray lock of hair back over her ear—
“Oh!†cried Aisha, spluttering, a sudden grin creasing her olive-complexioned face—“And I think I know just how she was acting like a jerk, Taylor! Or was it Sammy being the jerk?â€
“What do you mean?†asked Taylor, her voice feigning innocence while her fair face went suddenly, guiltily scarlet—she quickly snatched up the beach towel—“I don’t know what you’re tâ€â€”
Aisha giggled, snatching away the towel and seizing one of Taylor’s long thin wrists. Displaying, with a sly giggle, the distinct pink stripe still visible across it—“This! I think,†said Aisha, “that you were late getting here because you were a little—ahem!—tied up at the Hartmans’ place! Weren’t you?†Taylor stammered—blushed with a gaping-wide mouth—
“It was Devan’s fault!†Taylor finally answered with a voice full of bluster, frantically trying to hide her marked wrists, referring to her elder sister Devan Jensen, three years older than her kid sister Taylor and an incoming sophomore at Darius Allen High. “She and Skyler teamed up on me! I was just sitting there talking to Sammy on their back deck, and they sneaked up behind me and grabbed me! I didn’t hardly stand a chance!â€
Leslie, recovered from her contretemps with Lizzie, grinned up at Taylor. “And of course Sammy didn’t exactly come to the rescue, did he?†She liked Lizzie’s friends much more than she actually liked Lisbeth herself.
“He stood there and took pictures!†cried Taylor, just as Aisha, Leslie, and Cora noticed a matching set of ligature marks fading on Taylor’s ankles. Even Chelsea wandered over with a big grin on her face.
Chelsea snickered as she drank in Taylor’s blushing face. “Oh my God! I remember helping Krysten babysit those freaks! I spent the whole time tied up on the living room floor!â€
“And what about Krysten?†asked Leslie with a smile.
Chelsea smirked. “She got loose and wouldn’t untie me! She walked them to the playground and left me there tied up!†Her tale met with chortles of laughter, even from Taylor and Aisha, who remembered well the mystery that grew from that trip to the playground. “So welcome to the club, Taylor! Nobody’s safe around the Hartmans!â€
But as evidenced by the commotion at the door, safety was illusory at the Morgans’ too; as Chelsea regaled her friends with stories of Skyler and Sammy Hartman, a slender blonde figure was bodily thrown onto the pool deck from inside the house. Her arms were pinioned behind her back, and a thick wooly towel was tied through her mouth—the girl wriggled her bound wrists and mewled animatedly—Aisha shrieked upon recognizing the hands-tied girl as Lizzie—“Lizzie! Who did this toâ€â€”
“That would be me!†said Lana, striding onto the pool deck and seizing Lizzie’s arms. “I’m so sick of Lizzie and her smart mouth! Nobody calls me a bitch and gets away with it, especially Lizzie Potty-Mouth here! I’m her big sister, and damn it, I’m going to have some respect if I have to beat it out of her!†Lizzie still glared angrily at Lana, but the understanding that her hands were tied behind her back and her mouth stopped left her sullenly uncertain, suspecting that she was fairly at Lana’s mercy without help from her friends. Who all seemed to be standing around enjoying the scene.
Just as a circle of grinning friends, neighbors, and sisters seemed to be closing in on a Lizzie unable to free her hands and nervously aware of the pool nearby, a phone on a deckside table suddenly caroled out merrily—Chelsea, recognizing the tune as her message tone, skipped over and checked her message—“Hey guys! Look what Krys just sent me!†She held up her phone with its generous screen—
“Who sent you that?†cried Taylor, blushing vividly at her gang as they devoured a picture of her lying on the Hartman living-room floor with her hands tied behind her back and her ankles also tightly tied. But in not nearly as much distress as her tale to them had suggested.
Chelsea snickered. “Skyler forwarded it Maggie O’Hara, and Krysten just sent it here!†She cast an amused grin at red-faced Taylor. “Yeah, you can tell you just hated Skyler and Devan ganging up on you!†Even Lizzie seemed to be giggling beneath her towel-gag. But before Taylor could concoct a suitable reply, a sudden cry—
“Girls!â€â€”and seven young ladies gasped—