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The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Tue Oct 07, 2025 10:20 pm
by TuggyBoundMale
Alright, after 4 months of literally not doing anything anything, I decided to try myself at this one. I am kinda scared because I really want this to be good. What I‘ll publish now is basically the Introduction, so don’t expect too much. I still hope you‘ll enjoy it :)


Introduction

The light was shining through the narrow basement window of the simple, white painted house. It was in a classic suburban area, nothing special. Nobody would have suspected that inside, three men, Paul Evans, Jacob Hart and Ewan Donnolly were discussing what would be their first ever crime. All of them once were important men in their local town. Jacob had been the CEO of one of the biggest farming companies in the area, Paul was a former mayor and Ewan had been a a doctor at the local hospital. However, all of that was now gone. Their lives and families destroyed, torn apart. Why? Because of one decision: giving their money to the Waterstone national business bank. Everything went smoothly for 3 years. But one year ago, the bank had suddenly lost the money of a lot of their clients. Nothing too suspicious, however the bank‘s owner, Tyson Waterstone, had also gained a lot of wealth during that same time. Unfortunately, he was good. No one could prove him anything. But Paul, Jacob and Ewan weren’t gonna let him get away. The had planned for months on what they hoped would become the craziest heist the town had ever seen. Yes, these three men, all aged around 50, complete innocent citizens so far, decided to rob a bank as revenge for their destroyed lives.

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 1:56 am
by Detective-Gag
Ooh…now THAT’S a great start.

Big stakes; and great backstory!

(haven’t been as active on the site lately; but I’ll be sure to post something in the near future).

Looking forward to the next part!

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 3:39 am
by Alkaid90
it is an interesting plot!!!!

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 4:33 am
by TuggyBoundMale
Detective-Gag wrote: 2 weeks ago Ooh…now THAT’S a great start.

Big stakes; and great backstory!

(haven’t been as active on the site lately; but I’ll be sure to post something in the near future).

Looking forward to the next part!

I am SO glad you like it. Ngl, I gave myself quitw some pressure because I really don wanna mess this up. Like… a request for Detective-Gag is… something big lol

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 7:10 am
by Detective-Gag
TuggyBoundMale wrote: 2 weeks ago
Detective-Gag wrote: 2 weeks ago Ooh…now THAT’S a great start.

Big stakes; and great backstory!

(haven’t been as active on the site lately; but I’ll be sure to post something in the near future).

Looking forward to the next part!

I am SO glad you like it. Ngl, I gave myself quitw some pressure because I really don wanna mess this up. Like… a request for Detective-Gag is… something big lol
Ha, well...that means a lot!

But don't forget to have fun with it!

Good stories are as much fun to write, as they are to read.

(one just takes longer) XD

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 9:50 am
by TuggyBoundMale
Quick question, would you guys prefer this to be one big story or several chapters like I usually did it? I‘ll adapt to whatever you prefer

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 12:58 pm
by BOUND-BONUS
Several chapters and this story seems very interesting, I can't wait to see the rest.
However, since this is a request, I want to take advantage of telling you that I also made a request and if you are interested
https://www.tugstories.blog/viewtopic.p ... 8d#p201020
From your description maybe it's not your kind but I'd like it if you did.
P.S.
If you want I can give you some suggestions for your story.

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 3:06 pm
by Detective-Gag
TuggyBoundMale wrote: 2 weeks ago Quick question, would you guys prefer this to be one big story or several chapters like I usually did it? I‘ll adapt to whatever you prefer
I’d break it down into parts.

Makes it easier to work on, and lets us build on the suspense every time you release a new part. : )

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 3:11 pm
by TuggyBoundMale
Thanks for helping me to decide

And in that case…

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 3:12 pm
by TuggyBoundMale
I‘ve got Part 1 for you ready. Hope you enjoy it :)


Part 1

„But Moooom, this is boring“ the 10-year old boy looked at his mother and rolled his eyes. „Dads business isn’t nearly as cool as that new movie, why did we have to go here? This suit is itchy“ He look down at himself, ignoring the white button-up shirt with the in his opinion extremely ugly dark blue tie and his ironed khakis. His gaze stopped at his black polished shoes. „And these shoes are too tight, my feet hurt!“ His mother, 35-year old Gina Waterstone, was visibly annoyed. She was dressed in a black skirt and a white button-up blouse, a dark blazer along with dark heels completing her outfit. „Austin, don‘t whine so much, okay? Daddy said he needs us to grab something from the safe. I can’t let you be alone during that.“ She looked at him while hastily searching through her purse. „But at least the new movie in the cinema…?“ Austin began again. „Austin, this is enough. This discussion is over!“ Austin, both saddened and annoyed, slowly slid down the seat, sulking as he did so. Well what a great day. Her idiotic husband had forgotten something important in his personal safe at the bank and now he needed his family to get it. Because the great businessman himself of course didn’t have time, like always. He never had time for anything besides jetting around the world and visiting some friends who were in her opinion just as idiotic as Tyson himself.

When the taxi stopped, both her and Austin got out and walked towards the big white building, that was built to look as if it came from the Victorian era, even though it wasn’t even 20 years old. She quickly walked towards the building, pulling her son with her and clacking loudly with her heels on the cobblestones. Luckily, there wasn‘t too much going on right now. One of the bank counters was even free. So instantly walked towards it.

„I‘d like to go the main safe, my husband wants me to take something from there!“ The young woman at the counter looked at her with a questioning look. „Excuse me… who are you? If you don’t tell me your name I can’t help you.“ Gina shook her head. A new worker, why did she have to talk to a new worker in such a situation? „Gina Waterstone! I don’t think I have to tell you who my husband is?“ as she said that, the face of the woman went as pale as chalk. With stammered words, she took a key, got up and turn around with a mumbled „Please follow me“, she walked towards an iron door.

Just as she was opening that door, both women heard a voice behind them. „You two stay here or the kid will have to pay!“ Both instantly raised their hands and turned around to see a man in black biker clothing and with a red stocking pulled over his head facing them. With his left hand, he held a tight grip on Austin while his right hands was holding a gun that was currently pointed right at the young boy‘s head.
The fact that Jacob was actually so nervous while doing this that he felt like he had to throw up went unnoticed. Of course he knew they needed to do this, but still, doing it was something entirely different than planning to do it. He looked around. Ewan, dressed in the same black biker clothes, only with a blue stocking had apparently already collected all phones while Paul, now wearing the same stocking as his friends, only in green, was holding the other visitors of the bank hostage. Jacob turned his head back to the two women and just now realized who he was looking at. This was Gina Waterstone, Tyson‘s wife! And the kid he had taken as a hostage must have been their son Austin. He almost felt sorry for doing this. Gina was known to be entirely different than her husband Tyson. She was what you would probably call a philanthropist and donated most of her earnings as Tyson‘s personal secretary to charity. If this was really her personality, or if Tyson just told her to do it to clean the family name, wasn’t clear. However Jacob felt as if Gina actually was a much better person that Tyson would ever be.

„What are you doing here lady?“ both women were at first unsure who he was talking to, but he just pointed at Gina. „Oh, I was just… coincidentally here.“ Right, this was all a big coincidence. Jacob‘s look must have told her exactly how realistic he thought that was, because suddenly, she started talking. „Fine, that’s not true… I was about to get something for my husband.“ So she was sent by Tyson… that could only mean one thing: whatever she had to get, it was important! He looked over to his two partners in crime. They had already tied up all of the staff and visitors with zip cuffs as well as duct taped their mouths. Time was running out. They had to act quickly. Even though they had gathered all phones, it wouldn’t take that long until the police would be notified. It was always like that.


To be continued

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 3:16 pm
by TuggyBoundMale
I just realized I made some spelling mistakes and sometimes even forgot words somehow. Really sorry for that, but I think it’s still readable

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 3:42 pm
by Detective-Gag
TuggyBoundMale wrote: 2 weeks ago I just realized I made some spelling mistakes and sometimes even forgot words somehow. Really sorry for that, but I think it’s still readable
Totally readable…and already exciting!

Right into the action.

Gina is pretty sassy, and Austin seems like a handful normally (though here, he’s likely to be more cooperative, for sure!).

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 3:57 pm
by TuggyBoundMale
Detective-Gag wrote: 2 weeks ago
TuggyBoundMale wrote: 2 weeks ago I just realized I made some spelling mistakes and sometimes even forgot words somehow. Really sorry for that, but I think it’s still readable
Totally readable…and already exciting!

Right into the action.

Gina is pretty sassy, and Austin seems like a handful normally (though here, he’s likely to be more cooperative, for sure!).
Maybe, I don’t wanna spoiler anything ;)

But I‘m glad to see you like it

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 4:24 pm
by WhereAmI
Exciting beginning

I fear, and sincerely hope, that little Austin is about to be kidnapped which is surely more fun
and exciting than watching a movie. :shock: :o

PS. Austin ties are always ugly and uncomfortable. :mrgreen:

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Wed Oct 08, 2025 10:27 pm
by TuggyBoundMale
I got another part for you guys ready. Personally I think this I the worst part so far, but what do you think?
I mean, as long as you enjoy it, I‘m happy :D


Part 2

Jacob turned his head back to the two women standing in front of him. „Lady, you will lead the way, and you, Mrs. Waterstone are going get what you have to get. Only that your husband will never receive it. Understood?“ Both of them nodded. „Well, let‘s go then!“ Perfect, everything was working out. The fact that his gun was only a blank firing pistol also hasn’t been noticed by anyone so far. Now they just needed to get whatever Tyson Waterstone wanted and leave, right?

He followed the women into the vault, where the young cashier opened a safe with the number 008. What would be inside? A diamond ring? A giant animating alone? A collier of diamonds?
As he layed his eyes upon what the cashier took out of the safe, he was confused. It was a document. But what kind of document would be so valuable that a man like Tyson Waterstone would keep it locked away in a safe within his own banks vault? Unless this was… „Give me that!“ without hesitating, the woman handed him the paper. Jacob opened it and his face lit up. „Jackpot“ he mumbled.

The document he held in his hands had detailed information about all the money of Tyson Waterstone. All his transactions, loans, everything. That meant that with this document, they could prove his crimes and finally bring him to justice. When he turned around, he saw Paul standing behind him. Jacob just grinned and nodded. „We got exactly what we had hoped for.“ Paul instantly understood and also started grinning. „Time to bring that fatass behind bars. Ladies, it’s time to…“ just as he wanted to finish the sentence, Jacob interrupted him. „We take her“ he pointed towards Gina „and the boy with us. You tie up the cashier here while I deal with our two hostages, understood?“ he looked at his partner. „Are you sure that’s a good idea?“ Paul raised an eyebrow, visibly sceptical. „Well, if we have her, we don’t even have to contact the police ourselves, right?“ Jacob couldn’t stop grinning. Everything was working perfectly. Now he also saw Ewan appearing in the doorframe. „Hey! We take these two and leave, you got it?“ he shouted at him. Ewan just nodded and helped him taking both of the Waterstones outside while Paul dealt the cashier just as he did with the other visitors and staff members.
He pulled her wrists behind her back and cuffed them together with some thick black zip cuff. He added another one of those cuffs around her ankles and then tore a strip from a roll of white duct tape and smoothed it down over her lips.
„Alright, time to get out of here, folks!“ he yelled as he followed his partners in crime to the white Ford van they had parked outside.

Ewan already sat behind the wheel with Jacob sitting next to him. Austin and Gina Waterstone were lying in the back of the car. „Alright, let’s get away from here, then we can deal with our two hostages.“ he proposed. Jacob nodded into Ewan‘s direction „You heard him. Full throttle“. Ewan didn’t wait long. All he said was a simple „Aye Aye sir!“ before putting his foot on the gas and leaving the crime scene.


To be continued

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 9:42 am
by momsonbondagelover
Omg!!! i cant wait for the part 3. i hope if will be scenes about the son trying to protect his mother while she struggles, it will be good to show the cute bond of mother and son :D

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Thu Oct 09, 2025 12:47 pm
by Detective-Gag
A good turn of events with the discovery of the document.

Changed the hostage situation into something different.

Enjoyed the gagging of the bank teller. : )

Now to deal with the Waterstones!

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2025 8:18 pm
by TuggyBoundMale
Heyyy, I‘m back. Not a big part now, the shortest so far, but at least something so you don’t have to wait longer lol. We will get to the best part very soon, don’t worry ;)


Part 3

Ewan was sweating. What on earth were they doing? What was supposed to be a bank robbery had now turned into a full on kidnapping. He felt like everything was just going worse and worse. „Are you really sure that’s a good idea?“ he asked his friend sitting next to him. „I promise you, they‘ll never catch us! Remember the precautions? No cameras, no one knows who we are, the van doesn’t belong to one of us… what are you worrying about?“ The doctor just stayed silent. Of course Jacob was right. But his gut was still telling him something different…

When he brought the van to a stop, they were pretty much in the middle of nowhere. A narrow road in the nearby forest. The three men knew where this road would lead them. A possible hideout, but more importantly: their second getaway vehicle, this time a black Lincoln sedan. Jacob pointed to Paul. He instantly understood. He was the one who knew how to deal with ropes and other stuff, so he was the man who tied up the hostages. He climbed out of the van and into the back. „Alright lady, this is how we‘ll do it: You will call the police for us and tell them to come to the Barrester hut in the forest. They will find something… interesting there. Namely you! All clear so far?“ Gina just nodded. She was probably intimidated by him. No wonder, he was one of her kidnappers after all.
„Good! And to make sure you‘ll actually do what we want…“ he grabbed Austin and pulled the boys wrists behind his back, pulling some black cotton rope tightly around them. „We‘ll tie up your son a bit to make you comply!“ Gina looked at him both shocked and scared, but it was clear that she had understood what they wanted. Meanwhile, young Austin seemed to be no less scared than his mom, but at least he remained quiet. Not that it mattered. Both of them would end up tied up and gagged anyway.

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Sun Oct 19, 2025 10:09 pm
by Detective-Gag
Ah, fantastic build up!

Can’t wait for the ransom phone call, with Austin probably struggling tied & gagged in the background so she cooperates.

And then , of course, Gina herself being bound & silenced afterwards. : )

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2025 12:26 am
by Redman
Nicely done, Tuggy! You've got me on the edge of my seat over here.

Re: The bank robbery - Request by Detective-Gag (MMM/Fm)

Posted: Mon Oct 20, 2025 4:27 am
by TuggyBoundMale
Thank you guys so much for all the positive feedback. I was kind unsure if the pointwhere i stopped was good, but aoparently it is :D