Captivity (MMM/FF)
Posted: Tue Feb 25, 2025 11:06 am
Sofia Alvarez had always stood out, her wiry frame topped with a tangle of dark curls that she perpetually swept back with a flick of her hand. At twenty, she carried herself with a quiet confidence, her sharp brown eyes catching details others missed—a habit from years of sketching street scenes back home in Valencia. Amara Patel, her roommate and reluctant partner-in-crime, was her opposite: soft-spoken and petite, with long black hair that fell in a sleek curtain down her back, framing a face that still held a trace of teenage roundness at nineteen. Her hazel eyes often darted nervously, a contrast to Sofia’s steady gaze, but her quick wit had made them fast friends during their exchange program in Mexico.
That morning, they’d been perched at a rickety table outside a border town café, the kind of place where the coffee was bitter and the air smelled of dust and frying tortillas. Sofia wore a faded red tank top and cargo shorts, her sketchbook open to a half-finished drawing of the plaza’s crumbling fountain. Amara, in a loose white blouse and denim skirt, scrolled through her phone, giggling at a meme about their linguistics professor. It was their last free weekend before midterms, a fleeting taste of normalcy.
Then came the screech of tires. A battered black van skidded to a stop beside them, kicking up a cloud of grit. Sofia’s pencil froze mid-stroke as three men burst out, faces obscured by ski masks, movements swift and practiced. The first grabbed Amara, his gloved hand clamping over her mouth as she shrieked, her phone clattering to the ground. Sofia lunged to her feet, adrenaline surging, but a second man was on her in an instant. His arm hooked around her neck, yanking her backward, while the cold muzzle of a pistol pressed against her temple. “Quiet, or you’re dead,†he hissed, his breath hot and sour with tobacco.
Amara kicked wildly, her sneakers scraping the pavement, but the third man joined in, pinning her arms and slapping a strip of duct tape over her mouth. Sofia’s own scream was cut short as a rag was shoved past her lips, the taste of dirt and oil flooding her senses, followed by more tape sealing it in place. Blindfolds came next—filthy strips of cloth tied so tight they pinched her skin. The world went dark, and then they were moving, dragged into the van’s stifling interior. Ropes lashed their wrists together, the fibers rough and unyielding, before they were shoved face-down onto the floorboards. The engine roared to life, and the vehicle jolted forward, leaving the café—and their old lives—behind.
Now, hours later, the jungle air clung to their skin, heavy with humidity and the sour tang of rotting leaves. Sofia’s sneakers sank into the mud with each stumbling step, the rope around her wrists biting deeper as she tried to steady herself. Beside her, Amara’s ragged breathing cut through the drone of insects, her own bound hands tugging at the coarse line that linked them together. A coffle, Sofia thought dimly—a word she’d read in some history book, now a brutal reality. The rope ran from Sofia’s wrists to Amara’s, then looped through a metal ring on the belt of the man ahead, a silent promise that any attempt to stop or pull back would yank them all into chaos.
They’d been walking for hours, blindfolded and gagged, the rags in their mouths turning every cry into a pitiful whimper. Sofia’s jaw ached, her tongue pressed uselessly against the dry wad, tasting dust and her own fear. Every swallow felt like choking. Amara’s white blouse was now streaked with dirt, her skirt torn at the hem from tripping over roots, while Sofia’s tank top stuck to her back, soaked with sweat.
“Move, gringas!†The voice was sharp, accented, and laced with impatience. A hand shoved Sofia’s shoulder, sending her staggering into Amara. The rope jerked taut, and Amara let out a stifled yelp, the sound warped by her gag. Sofia’s mind flickered back to the van—the leader’s rasped orders, “dinero†and “rápido,†money and fast, as he’d barked into a phone. There were three of them: the leader with the gravelly voice, a younger one who muttered curses, and a silent third whose heavy boots now thudded behind her. Their hunger for ransom was a coiled energy, every touch a warning.
The ground leveled out, the air growing stale with mildew. A metallic clang echoed, followed by the creak of hinges. Hands gripped Sofia’s arms, shoving her forward until her knees hit a wall, and she crumpled to the floor. Amara landed beside her with a muffled groan, their shoulders brushing. The blindfolds stayed on, but Sofia sensed the shift: they were inside, the jungle’s chorus replaced by dripping water and faint scuttling.
“Down,†the leader snapped, his tone flat but menacing. Rough hands hauled Sofia upright, then forced her into a crouch. Her wrists throbbed as the coffle rope was untied, only for new cords to lash her hands behind her back, tighter than before, cutting into her skin. Her elbows were pulled together until her shoulders screamed, bound with more rope that looped around her chest, pinning her arms to her spine. She squirmed, and a sharp slap across her cheek silenced her, the sting blooming hot against the gag’s adhesive.
Amara’s breathing hitched into a choked sob as her own bindings were secured—rope rustling, tape snapping. Ankles next—Sofia’s legs were yanked together, cord wound so tight her feet tingled. A final tug forced her into a fetal curl, knees lashed to her chest with a rope that hooked around her neck. If she straightened, it would choke her. Stay small, stay still, or suffer.
The cell was tiny, Sofia’s shoulder against one wall, her bound feet brushing another. Amara’s trembling frame crowded her, their sweat-slick skin sticking together. The air was thick, suffocating, reeking of damp concrete and fear. A heavy door slammed shut, the lock clicking, footsteps retreating. Silence fell, save for the drip-drip-drip and Amara’s stifled gasps.
Sofia’s mind churned, panic clawing at her chest. The bindings were unrelenting—wrists raw, shoulders burning, throat constricted. She couldn’t see, couldn’t speak, couldn’t move without risking more agony. Amara nudged her, a desperate press, and Sofia leaned back, a silent vow they weren’t alone. But as the minutes stretched, the weight of their fate sank in: captives of men who saw them as dollar signs, locked in a cage where every breath fought despair. This was only the beginning.
That morning, they’d been perched at a rickety table outside a border town café, the kind of place where the coffee was bitter and the air smelled of dust and frying tortillas. Sofia wore a faded red tank top and cargo shorts, her sketchbook open to a half-finished drawing of the plaza’s crumbling fountain. Amara, in a loose white blouse and denim skirt, scrolled through her phone, giggling at a meme about their linguistics professor. It was their last free weekend before midterms, a fleeting taste of normalcy.
Then came the screech of tires. A battered black van skidded to a stop beside them, kicking up a cloud of grit. Sofia’s pencil froze mid-stroke as three men burst out, faces obscured by ski masks, movements swift and practiced. The first grabbed Amara, his gloved hand clamping over her mouth as she shrieked, her phone clattering to the ground. Sofia lunged to her feet, adrenaline surging, but a second man was on her in an instant. His arm hooked around her neck, yanking her backward, while the cold muzzle of a pistol pressed against her temple. “Quiet, or you’re dead,†he hissed, his breath hot and sour with tobacco.
Amara kicked wildly, her sneakers scraping the pavement, but the third man joined in, pinning her arms and slapping a strip of duct tape over her mouth. Sofia’s own scream was cut short as a rag was shoved past her lips, the taste of dirt and oil flooding her senses, followed by more tape sealing it in place. Blindfolds came next—filthy strips of cloth tied so tight they pinched her skin. The world went dark, and then they were moving, dragged into the van’s stifling interior. Ropes lashed their wrists together, the fibers rough and unyielding, before they were shoved face-down onto the floorboards. The engine roared to life, and the vehicle jolted forward, leaving the café—and their old lives—behind.
Now, hours later, the jungle air clung to their skin, heavy with humidity and the sour tang of rotting leaves. Sofia’s sneakers sank into the mud with each stumbling step, the rope around her wrists biting deeper as she tried to steady herself. Beside her, Amara’s ragged breathing cut through the drone of insects, her own bound hands tugging at the coarse line that linked them together. A coffle, Sofia thought dimly—a word she’d read in some history book, now a brutal reality. The rope ran from Sofia’s wrists to Amara’s, then looped through a metal ring on the belt of the man ahead, a silent promise that any attempt to stop or pull back would yank them all into chaos.
They’d been walking for hours, blindfolded and gagged, the rags in their mouths turning every cry into a pitiful whimper. Sofia’s jaw ached, her tongue pressed uselessly against the dry wad, tasting dust and her own fear. Every swallow felt like choking. Amara’s white blouse was now streaked with dirt, her skirt torn at the hem from tripping over roots, while Sofia’s tank top stuck to her back, soaked with sweat.
“Move, gringas!†The voice was sharp, accented, and laced with impatience. A hand shoved Sofia’s shoulder, sending her staggering into Amara. The rope jerked taut, and Amara let out a stifled yelp, the sound warped by her gag. Sofia’s mind flickered back to the van—the leader’s rasped orders, “dinero†and “rápido,†money and fast, as he’d barked into a phone. There were three of them: the leader with the gravelly voice, a younger one who muttered curses, and a silent third whose heavy boots now thudded behind her. Their hunger for ransom was a coiled energy, every touch a warning.
The ground leveled out, the air growing stale with mildew. A metallic clang echoed, followed by the creak of hinges. Hands gripped Sofia’s arms, shoving her forward until her knees hit a wall, and she crumpled to the floor. Amara landed beside her with a muffled groan, their shoulders brushing. The blindfolds stayed on, but Sofia sensed the shift: they were inside, the jungle’s chorus replaced by dripping water and faint scuttling.
“Down,†the leader snapped, his tone flat but menacing. Rough hands hauled Sofia upright, then forced her into a crouch. Her wrists throbbed as the coffle rope was untied, only for new cords to lash her hands behind her back, tighter than before, cutting into her skin. Her elbows were pulled together until her shoulders screamed, bound with more rope that looped around her chest, pinning her arms to her spine. She squirmed, and a sharp slap across her cheek silenced her, the sting blooming hot against the gag’s adhesive.
Amara’s breathing hitched into a choked sob as her own bindings were secured—rope rustling, tape snapping. Ankles next—Sofia’s legs were yanked together, cord wound so tight her feet tingled. A final tug forced her into a fetal curl, knees lashed to her chest with a rope that hooked around her neck. If she straightened, it would choke her. Stay small, stay still, or suffer.
The cell was tiny, Sofia’s shoulder against one wall, her bound feet brushing another. Amara’s trembling frame crowded her, their sweat-slick skin sticking together. The air was thick, suffocating, reeking of damp concrete and fear. A heavy door slammed shut, the lock clicking, footsteps retreating. Silence fell, save for the drip-drip-drip and Amara’s stifled gasps.
Sofia’s mind churned, panic clawing at her chest. The bindings were unrelenting—wrists raw, shoulders burning, throat constricted. She couldn’t see, couldn’t speak, couldn’t move without risking more agony. Amara nudged her, a desperate press, and Sofia leaned back, a silent vow they weren’t alone. But as the minutes stretched, the weight of their fate sank in: captives of men who saw them as dollar signs, locked in a cage where every breath fought despair. This was only the beginning.