The Repossessor (F/F) - Story 6
Posted: Wed Feb 12, 2025 12:53 pm
The Repossessor
In each of these brief vignettes, a victim narrates her encounter with “The Repossessor,†a girl of whom some already had the privilege of being a friend and others a stranger. At the end of each of the stories, though, the victim wishes she had paid her debts. I am trying to work with various narration styles to get a feel for different characters and see which ones provide the best narration in this kind of story. Your criticisms of the voices (especially if they come across as too similar) is much appreciated as this story is experimental for me. Many thanks for reading!
STORY 1: Missy Mischief Meets the Repossessor
Zip! Glide! Speed! The motorcycle casually races along the highway. I’m not speeding, but it still looks thrilling through the GoPro strapped to my friend Genevieve's chest. Genevieve rides as my passenger as we go along, the wind blowing my wavy blonde locks behind me as I speed along the road. The royal blue Kawasaki Ninja is my baby, my new baby, and I treat her like an absolute gem. She set me back many hard-earned dollars, but she is worth every single penny. I may have done something dirty, though, and wound up getting his bike for, well, free.
I love sport bikes. With my last bike, I used to gear up and do track days on a racing course, and I never have felt so much energy like I did on those rounds. Every track day, I’m there, and I’m a sight just because I’m a girl and I ride with both confidence and a desire to be a great-grandma. My grandparents would be pretty upset if I got killed doing something stupid on a bike. My dear readers, please ride responsibly. Wouldn't it be awful if I turned myself into burger and gristle? I stop the bike in front of the house, and we get off and take off our helmets.
I don't want to become ground meat, and neither does Genevieve. That's why we have good old fashioned protection! I mean we're wearing jeans, black combat boots, and black leather jackets for thick padding. We're very similar, by my request. We both have leather skirts over our jeans, but Genevieve’s is red while mine is black. I’ve got a white crop top tank top, but she has a gray crop top t-shirt. I’m rocking a blue bandana headband, but hers is red. Freaking stylish, yeah?
“That was a great ride. Thank you,†Gen’s French accent is cute, “My boyfriend sold you this?â€
“Thanks. Yeah. It's a sweet ride and a sweet deal,†I am practically bouncing to the front door.
Genevieve is a big strong girl. She is so sleek and feminine, though, and I wish I could carry my femininity so well. Her dark brown hair is so sexy with the effects of the helmet, but we both are a little vain about our hair and fluff it out to undo the helmet head. We run our fingers through it in an attempt to undo any wind-blown snarls. We also adjust our tops. Today, we're wearing our cute navel piercings, Gen’s featuring those emeralds and mine a cheap sapphire that matches my bandana. Unlike Genevieve, I have several of these to wear whereas she has only one.
Just as I open the door, everything goes straight to hell in a handbasket. Genevieve's arm wraps around my chest, and her other hand gags me. Her grip is tight and heartless. Fear seizes me. I am in deep trouble, because frankly I just cannot do anything about this big French girl’s ability to bench press twice my weight. She is going to compress my lungs.
“Missy, you bought this bike off my boyfriend, and your check bounced at the bank.â€
Then, she shoves me into the house, shuts the door, and deadbolts the door. Her leather satchel is a bit ominous. She reaches out and grabs me. Effortlessly, she pulls my coat off me and makes a striptease out of an already awful situation, but I’m wearing nothing under my top at the moment because I’m kinky! Seriously, sister, what else are you going to take that is mine and not yours. First, you say you're stealing my bike, and then you steal my coat. Ummm… what is that coil of white rope for, and why do you casually have white rope in your satchel anyway?
“I’m going to tie you up while I figure out how you’ll pay my boyfriend. Understood?â€
“Gosh, ummm, I don't know… dunno how that happened,†I sputter the words.
“You know what you did,†she snarls, spins me around, and ties my wrists together.
“Hey, no need for this!†I cry out, “Surely we can work something out.â€
“Yes, Missy, let's play a game. It's called Repossession!†her voice is awfully sinister.
“Damn you!†I rarely curse, “Untie me right now! This… why… this is illegal!â€
Yeah, like I don't know that I screwed them over, right? I thought I’d pass a check on an empty account and get the bike for nothing. Am I a punk or what? Maybe I kind of deserve this as an act of vengeance for what I did? I am in really hot water now; I’m screwed. She is even tying my elbows together, and with it she is reducing my chances of escape.
She picks me up and throws me onto the table now. Genevieve's really mad, and she takes it all out on me, using some more white rope to tie my ankles together and even wrapping the rope in my heels so that I cannot get the boots off. This is an awful situation. She's not being reasonable about this at all! Maybe I could just, I dunno, write a check that won’t bounce? She ties more of the white rope on either side of my knees.
“C’mon! I… I wasn't trying… to bounce the check,†maybe I am being dishonest?
“You are a pathetic liar,†Gen tightly gags me with a knotted green bandana, the fabric pulling tightly against my skin. She knots it behind my head with speed, efficiency, and tightness.
“No! Hleathe hon’h hu thith!†I am pathetically begging for freedom at this point, “Ah’ll hay!â€
Genevieve callously ignores me, taking another rope and tying a breast harness to accentuate my bust, and she cinches it tightly so that it also restrains my arms. She is one angry girl! There is no sweet talking my way out of this anymore. I am trapped. She takes out a roll of duct tape to wrap my face. The black tape takes away what little intelligibility I had left. She then takes out one last rope and puts me in a hogtie upon the table. Excuse me? She exposes my boobs, too!
“As much as I’d love to stay and play with your bust, I have a bike to reclaim.â€
“Mmmmmmm!†I try to say more, but I sure can't right about now. She pinches my nipples.
With that, Gen shows me the keys, “Don’t contact us until you have real money. See you around, sport,†and then she shuts the door, leaving me hogtied and gagged by myself.
I struggle against the ropes as best as I can, but it is useless. Outside, I watch Genevieve roll the bike up onto her boyfriend's waiting trailer. She waves farewell to me before the truck drives away with my bike and without me. I can only wail in protest, but, even just in the front yard, I am not heard. I continue to pathetically struggle for several minutes until I hear the sound of the front door unlocking and the voices of my roommates as the scene fades out…
END OF STORY 1
STORY 2: Roxanne Rutledge Meets the Repossessor
I love the howl of the wind, the sound of my foot pushing the clutch, the feel of the transmission when I shift gears, the roar of the engine. My Mazda MX-5 is my baby, and no one can drive her but me. It took a lot to get this baby, and the sleek black car is a vinyl top. I take care of her like a child since I have no children of my own. Yet. OK, I’m single and virgin, so what? The black fabric is comfy. The texture of the shifter is divine. My long wavy dark brown hair is carried by the breeze but restricted by my camouflage headscarf bandana. The curved neck of my tank top allows the wind to envelop my arms and chest like a blanket. The breeze fills my nostrils with freshness. My camo leggings. khaki socks, and khaki combat boots are shielded from the breeze, but the boots give me such control of the pedals.
Don't f-ck with me.
In the passenger seat is my friend, Genevieve. She is stylish and in control of herself. The red turtleneck t-shirt is classic for her. The black leather knee skirt adds a little shine amd edge to an already tough girl. The red pantyhose and black combat boots let you know she is no ordinary girl; she runs her own life as she sees fit. The black bandana headband balances the colors, gives her a gangster vibe, and is outright cute. Her dark brown hair is only shoulder length and freely blows in the breeze. Her chocolate brown eyes are cold, and she is eerily content yet silent. Her black fabric satchel brings an authoritative air with her, and unsettling authority.
“That was amazing!†I pull off the road, into the backyard, and under a tree, “What. A. Ride!â€
“Yes, thank you,†Gen’s gratitude is oddly formal.
“She needs a bath and a shine. Would you like to help?†I ask my friend with kindness.
“She is a beauty, but it's a shame she's not yours,†Gen drops, “Should have paid your bills.â€
“I pay my bills,†I turn at this point, “What ever makes you think otherwise?†I look up at her.
“The three consecutive months for which you have not paid me or my boyfriend, my dear.â€
The trees above are a canopy allowing light to filter through. The green leaves above, the gravel of the driveway below, and the open grass and dirt around. We're behind the house. It all seems so peaceful, and now this woman, this repossession agent, is here barking orders at me! Yet, she sinisterly grabs a piece of white rope and plays with it in her hands.
“You're f-cking crazy!†I step back, but my dark brown eyes are all black now, “I pay my debts on time! It's just been a slow period. I was making this month's payment, I swear!†She does not care for my story, though, and she spins me around with ease before using the rope to bind my elbows together behind my back. I’m flexible, but it isn't pleasant. “C’mon, you f-cking c-nt, untie me right now! My boyfriend wrecks b-tches like you!†She ties my wrists, too.
“You don't seem to know when to shut up, my dear,†Gen coldly says while readying more rope to punish me, “You're no longer in control of anything. I rule this backyard right now,†and then she shoves me forward over the side of the car so that I fall, head on the passenger seat of the car, “I think you should realize this soon,†and she positions my hips to pivot over the car door.
“Morherf-cker!†the ropes dig into my arms in unpleasant fashion, “I’ll kill you!†I kick out, but she is binding my ankles together, “Guh! Let me go, you psychopath!†and is tight and cinching it well, and she moves my socks so the ropes are right against my skin, “I can't believe you!â€
“You are pathetic, really,†she soullessly begins tying rope above my knees, “You seem to think I have not taken command of this situation, you can boss me around, and you can scare me. Quite contrary, I am in charge, and I will scare you into learning a very important financial lesson.â€
“Yeah!†I gritted my teeth and felt the fibers digging into me, “I took out a loan from a predatory psychob-tch and her f-ckstick boyfriend!†but she moved to roping below my knees with similar intensity, “Please, for the love of God, untie me right now! You motherf-cking c-nt!†She ripped me out of the car and forced me to my knees on the ground beside the car while she stripped my feet, “You're a sicko! You wouldn't dare!†I snarl at her, but she jams my socks into my mouth.
“I dared,†the heartless tone sends a chill down my spine; she really is a psychopath.
Salty, sweaty, cottony socks fill my mouth and antagonize my taste buds while she applies strips of sticky double-sided tape to my face. I try to spit out the socks, but my lips are sealed for good by this maneuver. She folds a black bandana into a wide strip and ties an OTM gag, knotting the bandana tightly as if her goal is to see how much pressure my face can handle. I’m helpless. It’s all too readily apparent that she is a total professional and has done this many times.
The rope winds around under my boobs, and the fibers dig into me with the first pull on the rope. “MMMM MMMM MMMMMMM!†I try to yell at her. The lack of emotion in her motions is detectable; she is cold and selfish. “Mmmmmm!†She wraps rope above my boobs and cinches it through my armpits. With each motion, I feel more constricted, like an anaconda wrapping me to crush my bones. “Gmm mmmm mmmmm!†The waist and crotch rope is similar, but it feels more invasive because of that rope that seeks to irritate my womanhood. She is diabolical. She makes it a double crotch rope, with an invasive pass under my panties and a pass over my pants.
One final rope insults me: it winds between my ankles, and then despite my gagged protests she throws it over a tree branch. I am dropped to the ground, and then the rope drags me towards the tree. I am hoisted into the air upside down, and the rope winds between my legs and the branch many times before it is cinched well and knotted above the branch. I am so close to the ground I can feel my hair barely scraping the earth. Before she leaves, she pulls my shirt to expose me.
“Next time, you pathetic mess, pay your debts!†Gen hisses at me.
I helplessly watch, upside down, as she hops over the side of the car and into the driver’s seat, and she puts the key in the ignition. She never even looks at me as she drives away in my car. “Mmmmmmmm!†I yell after her and absolutely freak out. I am thrashing like I’m having a seizure, “GMMMMMMM!†Instead, my bandana falls off my head and onto the ground. “Hell -e!†I call into my gag, “Humun hell -e!†but the scene fades away with my last indignity…
Someone please help me…
END OF STORY 2
In each of these brief vignettes, a victim narrates her encounter with “The Repossessor,†a girl of whom some already had the privilege of being a friend and others a stranger. At the end of each of the stories, though, the victim wishes she had paid her debts. I am trying to work with various narration styles to get a feel for different characters and see which ones provide the best narration in this kind of story. Your criticisms of the voices (especially if they come across as too similar) is much appreciated as this story is experimental for me. Many thanks for reading!
STORY 1: Missy Mischief Meets the Repossessor
Zip! Glide! Speed! The motorcycle casually races along the highway. I’m not speeding, but it still looks thrilling through the GoPro strapped to my friend Genevieve's chest. Genevieve rides as my passenger as we go along, the wind blowing my wavy blonde locks behind me as I speed along the road. The royal blue Kawasaki Ninja is my baby, my new baby, and I treat her like an absolute gem. She set me back many hard-earned dollars, but she is worth every single penny. I may have done something dirty, though, and wound up getting his bike for, well, free.
I love sport bikes. With my last bike, I used to gear up and do track days on a racing course, and I never have felt so much energy like I did on those rounds. Every track day, I’m there, and I’m a sight just because I’m a girl and I ride with both confidence and a desire to be a great-grandma. My grandparents would be pretty upset if I got killed doing something stupid on a bike. My dear readers, please ride responsibly. Wouldn't it be awful if I turned myself into burger and gristle? I stop the bike in front of the house, and we get off and take off our helmets.
I don't want to become ground meat, and neither does Genevieve. That's why we have good old fashioned protection! I mean we're wearing jeans, black combat boots, and black leather jackets for thick padding. We're very similar, by my request. We both have leather skirts over our jeans, but Genevieve’s is red while mine is black. I’ve got a white crop top tank top, but she has a gray crop top t-shirt. I’m rocking a blue bandana headband, but hers is red. Freaking stylish, yeah?
“That was a great ride. Thank you,†Gen’s French accent is cute, “My boyfriend sold you this?â€
“Thanks. Yeah. It's a sweet ride and a sweet deal,†I am practically bouncing to the front door.
Genevieve is a big strong girl. She is so sleek and feminine, though, and I wish I could carry my femininity so well. Her dark brown hair is so sexy with the effects of the helmet, but we both are a little vain about our hair and fluff it out to undo the helmet head. We run our fingers through it in an attempt to undo any wind-blown snarls. We also adjust our tops. Today, we're wearing our cute navel piercings, Gen’s featuring those emeralds and mine a cheap sapphire that matches my bandana. Unlike Genevieve, I have several of these to wear whereas she has only one.
Just as I open the door, everything goes straight to hell in a handbasket. Genevieve's arm wraps around my chest, and her other hand gags me. Her grip is tight and heartless. Fear seizes me. I am in deep trouble, because frankly I just cannot do anything about this big French girl’s ability to bench press twice my weight. She is going to compress my lungs.
“Missy, you bought this bike off my boyfriend, and your check bounced at the bank.â€
Then, she shoves me into the house, shuts the door, and deadbolts the door. Her leather satchel is a bit ominous. She reaches out and grabs me. Effortlessly, she pulls my coat off me and makes a striptease out of an already awful situation, but I’m wearing nothing under my top at the moment because I’m kinky! Seriously, sister, what else are you going to take that is mine and not yours. First, you say you're stealing my bike, and then you steal my coat. Ummm… what is that coil of white rope for, and why do you casually have white rope in your satchel anyway?
“I’m going to tie you up while I figure out how you’ll pay my boyfriend. Understood?â€
“Gosh, ummm, I don't know… dunno how that happened,†I sputter the words.
“You know what you did,†she snarls, spins me around, and ties my wrists together.
“Hey, no need for this!†I cry out, “Surely we can work something out.â€
“Yes, Missy, let's play a game. It's called Repossession!†her voice is awfully sinister.
“Damn you!†I rarely curse, “Untie me right now! This… why… this is illegal!â€
Yeah, like I don't know that I screwed them over, right? I thought I’d pass a check on an empty account and get the bike for nothing. Am I a punk or what? Maybe I kind of deserve this as an act of vengeance for what I did? I am in really hot water now; I’m screwed. She is even tying my elbows together, and with it she is reducing my chances of escape.
She picks me up and throws me onto the table now. Genevieve's really mad, and she takes it all out on me, using some more white rope to tie my ankles together and even wrapping the rope in my heels so that I cannot get the boots off. This is an awful situation. She's not being reasonable about this at all! Maybe I could just, I dunno, write a check that won’t bounce? She ties more of the white rope on either side of my knees.
“C’mon! I… I wasn't trying… to bounce the check,†maybe I am being dishonest?
“You are a pathetic liar,†Gen tightly gags me with a knotted green bandana, the fabric pulling tightly against my skin. She knots it behind my head with speed, efficiency, and tightness.
“No! Hleathe hon’h hu thith!†I am pathetically begging for freedom at this point, “Ah’ll hay!â€
Genevieve callously ignores me, taking another rope and tying a breast harness to accentuate my bust, and she cinches it tightly so that it also restrains my arms. She is one angry girl! There is no sweet talking my way out of this anymore. I am trapped. She takes out a roll of duct tape to wrap my face. The black tape takes away what little intelligibility I had left. She then takes out one last rope and puts me in a hogtie upon the table. Excuse me? She exposes my boobs, too!
“As much as I’d love to stay and play with your bust, I have a bike to reclaim.â€
“Mmmmmmm!†I try to say more, but I sure can't right about now. She pinches my nipples.
With that, Gen shows me the keys, “Don’t contact us until you have real money. See you around, sport,†and then she shuts the door, leaving me hogtied and gagged by myself.
I struggle against the ropes as best as I can, but it is useless. Outside, I watch Genevieve roll the bike up onto her boyfriend's waiting trailer. She waves farewell to me before the truck drives away with my bike and without me. I can only wail in protest, but, even just in the front yard, I am not heard. I continue to pathetically struggle for several minutes until I hear the sound of the front door unlocking and the voices of my roommates as the scene fades out…
END OF STORY 1
STORY 2: Roxanne Rutledge Meets the Repossessor
I love the howl of the wind, the sound of my foot pushing the clutch, the feel of the transmission when I shift gears, the roar of the engine. My Mazda MX-5 is my baby, and no one can drive her but me. It took a lot to get this baby, and the sleek black car is a vinyl top. I take care of her like a child since I have no children of my own. Yet. OK, I’m single and virgin, so what? The black fabric is comfy. The texture of the shifter is divine. My long wavy dark brown hair is carried by the breeze but restricted by my camouflage headscarf bandana. The curved neck of my tank top allows the wind to envelop my arms and chest like a blanket. The breeze fills my nostrils with freshness. My camo leggings. khaki socks, and khaki combat boots are shielded from the breeze, but the boots give me such control of the pedals.
Don't f-ck with me.
In the passenger seat is my friend, Genevieve. She is stylish and in control of herself. The red turtleneck t-shirt is classic for her. The black leather knee skirt adds a little shine amd edge to an already tough girl. The red pantyhose and black combat boots let you know she is no ordinary girl; she runs her own life as she sees fit. The black bandana headband balances the colors, gives her a gangster vibe, and is outright cute. Her dark brown hair is only shoulder length and freely blows in the breeze. Her chocolate brown eyes are cold, and she is eerily content yet silent. Her black fabric satchel brings an authoritative air with her, and unsettling authority.
“That was amazing!†I pull off the road, into the backyard, and under a tree, “What. A. Ride!â€
“Yes, thank you,†Gen’s gratitude is oddly formal.
“She needs a bath and a shine. Would you like to help?†I ask my friend with kindness.
“She is a beauty, but it's a shame she's not yours,†Gen drops, “Should have paid your bills.â€
“I pay my bills,†I turn at this point, “What ever makes you think otherwise?†I look up at her.
“The three consecutive months for which you have not paid me or my boyfriend, my dear.â€
The trees above are a canopy allowing light to filter through. The green leaves above, the gravel of the driveway below, and the open grass and dirt around. We're behind the house. It all seems so peaceful, and now this woman, this repossession agent, is here barking orders at me! Yet, she sinisterly grabs a piece of white rope and plays with it in her hands.
“You're f-cking crazy!†I step back, but my dark brown eyes are all black now, “I pay my debts on time! It's just been a slow period. I was making this month's payment, I swear!†She does not care for my story, though, and she spins me around with ease before using the rope to bind my elbows together behind my back. I’m flexible, but it isn't pleasant. “C’mon, you f-cking c-nt, untie me right now! My boyfriend wrecks b-tches like you!†She ties my wrists, too.
“You don't seem to know when to shut up, my dear,†Gen coldly says while readying more rope to punish me, “You're no longer in control of anything. I rule this backyard right now,†and then she shoves me forward over the side of the car so that I fall, head on the passenger seat of the car, “I think you should realize this soon,†and she positions my hips to pivot over the car door.
“Morherf-cker!†the ropes dig into my arms in unpleasant fashion, “I’ll kill you!†I kick out, but she is binding my ankles together, “Guh! Let me go, you psychopath!†and is tight and cinching it well, and she moves my socks so the ropes are right against my skin, “I can't believe you!â€
“You are pathetic, really,†she soullessly begins tying rope above my knees, “You seem to think I have not taken command of this situation, you can boss me around, and you can scare me. Quite contrary, I am in charge, and I will scare you into learning a very important financial lesson.â€
“Yeah!†I gritted my teeth and felt the fibers digging into me, “I took out a loan from a predatory psychob-tch and her f-ckstick boyfriend!†but she moved to roping below my knees with similar intensity, “Please, for the love of God, untie me right now! You motherf-cking c-nt!†She ripped me out of the car and forced me to my knees on the ground beside the car while she stripped my feet, “You're a sicko! You wouldn't dare!†I snarl at her, but she jams my socks into my mouth.
“I dared,†the heartless tone sends a chill down my spine; she really is a psychopath.
Salty, sweaty, cottony socks fill my mouth and antagonize my taste buds while she applies strips of sticky double-sided tape to my face. I try to spit out the socks, but my lips are sealed for good by this maneuver. She folds a black bandana into a wide strip and ties an OTM gag, knotting the bandana tightly as if her goal is to see how much pressure my face can handle. I’m helpless. It’s all too readily apparent that she is a total professional and has done this many times.
The rope winds around under my boobs, and the fibers dig into me with the first pull on the rope. “MMMM MMMM MMMMMMM!†I try to yell at her. The lack of emotion in her motions is detectable; she is cold and selfish. “Mmmmmm!†She wraps rope above my boobs and cinches it through my armpits. With each motion, I feel more constricted, like an anaconda wrapping me to crush my bones. “Gmm mmmm mmmmm!†The waist and crotch rope is similar, but it feels more invasive because of that rope that seeks to irritate my womanhood. She is diabolical. She makes it a double crotch rope, with an invasive pass under my panties and a pass over my pants.
One final rope insults me: it winds between my ankles, and then despite my gagged protests she throws it over a tree branch. I am dropped to the ground, and then the rope drags me towards the tree. I am hoisted into the air upside down, and the rope winds between my legs and the branch many times before it is cinched well and knotted above the branch. I am so close to the ground I can feel my hair barely scraping the earth. Before she leaves, she pulls my shirt to expose me.
“Next time, you pathetic mess, pay your debts!†Gen hisses at me.
I helplessly watch, upside down, as she hops over the side of the car and into the driver’s seat, and she puts the key in the ignition. She never even looks at me as she drives away in my car. “Mmmmmmmm!†I yell after her and absolutely freak out. I am thrashing like I’m having a seizure, “GMMMMMMM!†Instead, my bandana falls off my head and onto the ground. “Hell -e!†I call into my gag, “Humun hell -e!†but the scene fades away with my last indignity…
Someone please help me…
END OF STORY 2