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Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (FINISHED) (NEW story coming soon)

Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2022 9:42 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+)

Posted: Sat Jul 09, 2022 9:44 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+)

Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2022 3:19 pm
by Caesar73
Glad to read Plymouth new Adventures - and the title is intriguing :)

I think it is a good decision to start a new thread with this story, because - it makes reading easier :)

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+)

Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2022 7:13 pm
by RopeBunny
Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago the title is intriguing
That name, Jester's Revenge, may be familiar to some already? But if not all will become clear as we go along anyway.

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+)

Posted: Sun Jul 10, 2022 9:19 pm
by Mikal903
Love this so far

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+)

Posted: Mon Jul 11, 2022 10:15 pm
by tickletied84
Welcome back Brooke!

I'm very glad she's been planning for the future - although let's hope Mrs Green has been inquisitive!

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+)

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2022 7:20 pm
by RopeBunny
Mikal903 wrote: 2 years ago Love this so far
Thanks :D
tickletied84 wrote: 2 years ago Welcome back Brooke!
Indeed, I have missed writing her.

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+)

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2022 7:22 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 12/07)

Posted: Tue Jul 12, 2022 11:57 pm
by Switchgirl
Love your style of writing…the story and the characters are so developed and you keep us waiting for the bondage….

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 12/07)

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2022 10:18 am
by TightsBound
Great to see Plymouth make her triumphant return to the site! Like any good sequel, you did a nice job reintroducing her and establishing where she is in her life and new characters. And I’m figuratively on the edge of my seat about that box. To quote Se7en, “What’s in the box?!” 😂

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 12/07)

Posted: Wed Jul 13, 2022 11:00 am
by Caesar73
TightsBound wrote: 2 years ago Great to see Plymouth make her triumphant return to the site! Like any good sequel, you did a nice job reintroducing her and establishing where she is in her life and new characters. And I’m figuratively on the edge of my seat about that box. To quote Se7en, “What’s in the box?!” 😂
I agree - very good chapter!

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 12/07)

Posted: Thu Jul 14, 2022 10:25 pm
by RopeBunny
Switchgirl wrote: 2 years ago Love your style of writing…the story and the characters are so developed and you keep us waiting for the bondage….
Thanks. I quite enjoy writing backstory and filler. and as for the bondage much as I'd like to it can't feature in every chapter, got to build up to it. Set the scene.
TightsBound wrote: 2 years ago And I’m figuratively on the edge of my seat about that box. To quote Se7en, “What’s in the box?!” 😂
Well, not a severed head (am I remembering the movie right?) promise. All will be revealed in good time.

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (F+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 12/07)

Posted: Fri Jul 15, 2022 6:33 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 15/07)

Posted: Sun Jul 17, 2022 11:52 am
by tickletied84
Oh, I think we all hope there'll be a next time!

Quite a lot for Ruth to take in on her first time, but I suspect Brooke's parting gesture might have sealed the deal!

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 15/07)

Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:26 pm
by RopeBunny
tickletied84 wrote: 2 years ago Brooke's parting gesture
A genuine last minute addition. I had the chapter written, was doing my final spellcheck read through, and the idea for Brooke to flash Ruth just came to me.

So I added it :D

Thanks for commenting.

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 15/07)

Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2022 1:28 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 18/07)

Posted: Tue Jul 19, 2022 6:38 am
by BlissfulMisery
Hey, been away for a bit so missed the first few chapters, but caught up now. I know it's kind of implied, but I do appreciate your efforts put into writing for our enjoyment.

Looks like Brooke is well on her way to 'corrupting' :P some people into the lifestyle.

Also old demons seem to be popping up again. Ominous. It seems she will need to figure out how to navigate (control perhaps? Would be an ironic choice of word if nothing else) her submissive nature to avoid getting hurt again, as she has always had a tendency to want to take things to their limit.

How much is too much/too far? A valid question when talking about pretty much anything, but especially when literally giving up control of the situation. The proverbial waters of bondage/submission are warm and inviting, perhaps even intoxicating, but they are also deep, and it is easy to get sucked (or maybe even pulled?) under for the unwary. Trust is a precious thing, not to be given lightly, and not to be taken for granted by the one receiving it.

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 18/07)

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 1:42 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 21st July)

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 2:32 pm
by GreyLord
I just found that you had started this up, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. And you have started it with a bang. Your introduction of Elwood is outstanding. He represents the dreams of all would be, almost be, want to be riggers.

And you certainly have not lost your touch with Plymouth. Well done!

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 21st July)

Posted: Thu Jul 21, 2022 8:47 pm
by RopeBunny
GreyLord wrote: 2 years ago And you certainly have not lost your touch with Plymouth. Well done!
Thank you.

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 21st July)

Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2022 4:22 pm
by Caesar73
GreyLord wrote: 2 years ago I just found that you had started this up, @RopeBunny. And you have started it with a bang. Your introduction of Elwood is outstanding. He represents the dreams of all would be, almost be, want to be riggers.

And you certainly have not lost your touch with Plymouth. Well done!
Couldn´t say it any better :)

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 21st July)

Posted: Sat Jul 23, 2022 9:05 pm
by RopeBunny
Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago
GreyLord wrote: 2 years ago I just found that you had started this up, @RopeBunny. And you have started it with a bang. Your introduction of Elwood is outstanding. He represents the dreams of all would be, almost be, want to be riggers.

And you certainly have not lost your touch with Plymouth. Well done!
Couldn´t say it any better :)
Didn't honestly think too hard about what I was doing until I'd written it. Then I realised what a lucky (fictional) man I'd allowed Elwood to become :lol:

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 21st July)

Posted: Sun Jul 24, 2022 11:26 am
by Caesar73
[mention]RopeBunny[/mention]
Didn't honestly think too hard about what I was doing until I'd written it. Then I realised what a lucky (fictional) man I'd allowed Elwood to become
Sometimes this is the best approach - not overthinking things :)

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 21st July)

Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2022 7:27 am
by RopeBunny
Agreed. I always have a rough plan, but often it's the last minute additions, the added twist or not previously planned flirty exchange, which I find makes the story.

Best not to overthink.

New chapter below :D

A long one. I tend to write to a specific point, planned out so I reach some kind of cliffhanger or hint at a decision about to made, regardless of length, and usually wind up with about the same per chapter.

But not this time :lol:

Re: Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 21st July)

Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2022 7:31 am
by RopeBunny
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