Stories of Tie Up Games

As mentioned in a post on my 'For everyone' box story, I'm beginning again, here in the 'Adult' section.

This story should be quite different, but anything I do copy, well, that's just because I liked the idea the first time around.

Enjoy

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What a start! It's nice seeing the adult version, and I can't wait for the next chapter!

Oh my. That was…. Really. Pretty good I guess. I think we have the makings of another hit on our hands. Excuse me while I go read that again.

Hot! Hot! Hot!

Beautiful blend of descriptiveness, comedy, character drama and sauciness. A worthy follow-up to the concept of the last story.

Oh this is gonna be gooooooooood

Thak you all, it's great to see positive comments

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RopeBunny wrote: 3 years ago 002.
The Jock.

Ush, it's short for Ushinatta.

I grew up in a home. Mum as good as died giving birth to me. I'm told she hung around, life support, slowly fading, for a couple of weeks. Long enough to gift me that strange name.

Which, of all things, means 'lost' in Japanese.

... Dad, apparently invested enough in me to pick out what must be the weirdest name ever, didn't care enough to stick around post birth.

He didn't claim me. Nobody did. ....

Nobody, at the hospital anyway, ever saw him.

Wanker.
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Talking about story-telling: this is one hell of a piece. Taking a bow!

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention], you never fail to please.

Nainur wrote: 3 years ago
Talking about story-telling: this is one hell of a piece.

I like to write backstory stuff

GreyLord wrote: 3 years ago you never fail to please.

Thank you Sir, always happy to deliver something worth reading

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I am motoring through the rough draft here, on a serious roll, very much enjoying writing this one

So.

Why not share another chapter I thought, you're welcome

Hot! Loving it!
Would love more chapters, too!

This surely is picking up steam, loving the power bottom dynamic

RopeBunny wrote: 3 years ago I am motoring through the rough draft here, on a serious roll, very much enjoying writing this one

And I’m very much enjoying reading this one Your writing keeps getting better and better with every chapter and every story.

What an enjoyable story, I really hope you'll continue it!

ThatDino wrote: 3 years ago loving the power bottom dynamic

Which just came to me as I was writing.

I find some of my best twists, or those random additions (such as a tied helpless Ush bossing Luna about) come to me in mid flow, and I nearly always add them.

It's one reason why my initial story ideas are usually just a rough plan, because so often things/details will change mid flow.

Nainur wrote: 3 years ago Would love more chapters, too!

FabianStr2016 wrote: 3 years ago What an enjoyable story, I really hope you'll continue it!

Should be posting at least once a week, prehaps more often as time allows. No point flooding the thread with new chapters every day, but I shan't make you wait too long either

Might be that I've already written them, but I need to go back in and double check things before posting.

Thanks for all the positive comments and views

RopeBunny wrote: 3 years ago
Which just came to me as I was writing.

I find some of my best twists, or those random additions (such as a tied helpless Ush bossing Luna about) come to me in mid flow, and I nearly always add them.

It's one reason why my initial story ideas are usually just a rough plan, because so often things/details will change mid flow.

It's fascinating to get a glimpse at your writing process, thank you. I honestly know the feeling as the DM of a chaotic D&D group, where 80% of the story is shaped by whatever the players are attempting to do and you just gotta adept

Either way, thank you for putting in the time and effort!

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Great characters in a great story, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. This is one hot read. Luna is unsure of herself and thinks that Ush is beyond her grasp. But then she is not. I do want to see what you do with this.

Because I don't expect everyone here to of read my entire story catalogue, I'll explain.

There's a 'For Everyone' story, written not that long ago by me, which remains unfinished due to my hitting a mental brick wall. Also, I kinda wrote myself into a dead end so to speak.

When I came up with this story, The Other Box, I did so in large part because I'd been puzzling for some time how best to restart or continue that forgotten story.

So. For those familiar with A Bully's Tale, something in this next chapter will be old news. A thing I'm repurposing for here.

For the rest of you. For all of you. I hope you enjoy the unusual twist I'm beginning on this tale, a twist which has more to it then just what you'll find below.

Thanks for reading.

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Still blistering hot, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. That's not just a cliffhanger, it is an embarrassing cliffhanger.