Re: Among Us (FF/F, FFF/F, F/FFFF) - Update Part 23
Posted: Mon Aug 16, 2021 4:04 am
Nice writing, [mention]Mineira1986[/mention]. What goes around, comes around. Hubris is always our downfall. Very entertaining.
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Thank you!GreyLord wrote: 3 years ago Nice writing, [mention]Mineira1986[/mention]. What goes around, comes around. Hubris is always our downfall. Very entertaining.
Yup, I love cliffhangers. Sorry this one took a while, I understand it can be annoying when a cliffhanger is delivered and the following chapters takes a while.ninterz wrote: 3 years ago And another cliffhanger.
Well you said you love em.
I've got a bad feeling about this.
Thanks!!!Caesar73 wrote: 3 years ago The Cliffhanger at the End was fantastic and I am looking to the next part!
Oh yes. More bondage coming this way hehe.Solarbeast wrote: 3 years ago This story is also another amazing tale, and I was not expecting that cliffhanger to happen at all. I'm hoping that Wendy gets some kind of resolution other than the sales commission in the end. I do hope to see more bondage as well.
Thanks. And here is the surprise...TimChimp wrote: 3 years ago I know cliffhangers can feel frustrating but I trust you to deliver on them, whatever happens I'm sure it'll be a fun surprise
Thank! We'll see what she can get done (and what she can't) right now.Caesar73 wrote: 3 years ago That was fascinating: Wendy discovering her friends, the way she follows the events in the room from her hiding place, in permanent fear to be discovererd. It will be interessting to see, what Wendy will do now: Will she be able to untie her friends before her opponents return? Will she try to get help?
Yup. Lots of work to do.GreyLord wrote: 3 years ago This is her chance to free the captives that might help her. She should get busy.
Thanks! And thanks for understanding =)ninterz wrote: 3 years ago First if all. You got nothing to apologize for.
Your cliffhangers are part of the story and they keep people wanting to know what happens next.
And if it takes a little longer it doesn't matter.
It's one of the best stories around.
Keep up the good work
Thank you so much!TimChimp wrote: 3 years ago Wow this chapter was tense! I really liked how it went, Wendy slowly discovering what's happening and more than anything I really liked that long and drawn out sequence with her hiding in the room from the trio, really tense and it felt like anything could happen.
Overall, great chapter.
Of course.Thanks! And thanks for understanding =)
That does not look good for Wendy, doesn´t it? On the other hand: Lori seems not amused to see the newcomer ... I probably have missed something, so I wonder: Is Skinny Friend or Foe? The build-up of the Tension is fantastic!Mineira1986 wrote: 3 years ago “How about the hard way?†A voice said behind me.
I turned around to see a pale, thin girl standing behind me with her hands on her hips.
“Skinny!†Lori said after a moment of pause. The smile had disappeared. “You decided to return. Good. I’ve been waiting for this.â€
Well since 'skinny' was the one who made Wendy imposter and always has been on her side I think it's safe to assume she is a friendCaesar73 wrote: 3 years agoThat does not look good for Wendy, doesn´t it? On the other hand: Lori seems not amused to see the newcomer ... I probably have missed something, so I wonder: Is Skinny Friend or Foe? The build-up of the Tension is fantastic!Mineira1986 wrote: 3 years ago “How about the hard way?†A voice said behind me.
I turned around to see a pale, thin girl standing behind me with her hands on her hips.
“Skinny!†Lori said after a moment of pause. The smile had disappeared. “You decided to return. Good. I’ve been waiting for this.â€
Thank you [mention]ninterz[/mention] - I guessed I overlooked something previously and hoped that too. So things are probably not going the way Lori wantedninterz wrote: 3 years ago Well since 'skinny' was the one who made Wendy imposter and always has been on her side I think it's safe to assume she is a friend
Thanks you for following the story! =)
Thanks. Oh, Skinny is the name that Lori called Marcia. It was a few chapters ago, my bad since I'm taking a week or so between chapters, it's probably forgotten by the readers. I'll try to post them more often then!Caesar73 wrote: 3 years ago That does not look good for Wendy, doesn´t it? On the other hand: Lori seems not amused to see the newcomer ... I probably have missed something, so I wonder: Is Skinny Friend or Foe? The build-up of the Tension is fantastic!
Indeed. It's Marcia. So it's a friend to Wendy, not much of a friend to Lori.ninterz wrote: 3 years ago Well since 'skinny' was the one who made Wendy imposter and always has been on her side I think it's safe to assume she is a friend
Thanks! But Lori's punishment is not overninterz wrote: 3 years ago That's the way Lori deserve to be treated.
Marcia is a freaking badass. Maybe my most favorite character of the story.
Great update.
Thank you very much!
Thanks!Caesar73 wrote: 3 years ago I have to admit, that I enjoyed that Lori got a another good taste of her own medicine. She deserve that. Now I am fairly curious how the bargaining will go, good Work, [mention]Mineira1986[/mention] !
That is good questionGreyLord wrote: 3 years ago What a dom Marcia is! It is nice to see the bad guys get exactly what they deserve. But it is not over yet, is it?What surprises still await?
Hehe. Now, it's not over. A little surprise coming this way.GreyLord wrote: 3 years ago What a dom Marcia is! It is nice to see the bad guys get exactly what they deserve. But it is not over yet, is it?What surprises still await?
Oh sure, nothing will go as planned. I'm glad you are liking Marcia =)Caesar73 wrote: 3 years ago That is good questionSomehow, I do not think that everything will go as planned. Marcia is a real bad ass, I like that!
Thanks! I hope things are still interesting.