Summer Camp Leaders in Trouble (m+/M+, m+/m+, M+/m+, M+/M+) — Chapter 16 added

[WhereAmI]

Ahh the old " WORM down Cody's Throat trick" it works every time especially if you just happen to have a 9-year-old prisoner named Cody, that the escaping leader tries to protect.

Cody should rule the campers.

[bondagefreak]

Wow, this was quite the packed chapter. Lots happening all at once!
I'm liking Marcus and Ian a lot. Seems like they've developed a taste for the warmth of a human footrest.

Tyler's hyperactivity is really coming through. I must admit, I am intrigued by the hint he let slip about holding grudges. There is something deceptively menacing laced beneath his over-the-top antics. He strikes me as being the deadly jester type - superficially harmless but really quite dangerous if he decides you've become a threat. Maybe I'm wrong.


Things are looking mighty well for rich boy Dylan and his team. But you know what they say, right? The higher they rise, the harder they fall. Or at least, so the saying goes Remains to be seen how long their luck & clever planning will last.

Now this Noah fellow...definitely due for a serious comeuppance. Hopefully, he ends up thoroughly bound and subjected to his own torments. Fill a sock with worms, knot the end and let that be his gag

All in all, fun chapter, @ajohnson. Anxious to see what happens next.

[ajohnson]

@bondagefreak Thanks, I'm just finishing chapter 9 as well.

[ajohnson]

Chapter 9: The Winner Takes Them All

And while Ethan hesitated at the entrance of the Lynx shed, Dylan had already returned with his Falcons to the cabin where they were keeping the prisoners. Alongside Nate and Luis, they had also captured two boys from the Blue Otters and one from the Green Wolves along the way. Although Dylan was considered one of the physically weaker leaders, he was still stronger than most of the boys, and his help had been crucial in capturing the new prisoners. A wave of celebration swept through the cabin, while the captives stood silently, their heads lowered in defeat.

"Tie those two Otters to the second post, and these three Wolves—you can hogtie them like him," Dylan ordered, pointing at Connor, who had been lying on the floor in a hogtie for hours. The Falcons quickly followed his instructions.

“Gag them all and blindfold them. The game will be over soon, and there’s no need to interact with them until it is. You stay here and guard them. I’m going to check if your buddies are keeping a good eye on Cameron, okay?” Dylan told his Falcons.

"Wait! Take someone with you. What if one of the Wolves or Otters ambushes you again and takes you prisoner? We still haven’t caught them all," Sam warned.

"True, but we already caught the strongest Wolves, and the Otters… well, they're harmless anyway," Dylan joked, though he agreed and picked two of the older, bulkier Falcons to go with him in case of trouble. And so, the three of them headed toward the lakeside cabin, while the rest continued securing the new prisoners.

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Back at the Lynx cabin, Ethan slowly began taking hesitant steps inside, unable to leave Cody at Noah’s mercy. Still, he kept pausing, torn by doubt. “Who knows what he’ll do to me now, he already tormented me earlier for no real reason,” he thought to himself. But then another thought quickly followed: “And what will my boys think of me if I run away now and leave them behind?” The second thought won out. Ethan clenched his jaw and started walking with more resolve toward the room where the other Hawks were still tied up.

“I knew it… You just can’t help playing the hero, can you?” Noah sneered, a wicked grin spreading across his face as he put the worm back into the bait jar.

“Alright then—on your knees, hero,” Noah barked, and Ethan had no choice but to obey.

Noah grabbed a pile of ropes from the table and gave Ethan a quick once-over. His red shirt was now a dark, grimy mess, soaked with dirt and sweat. He wore only black socks on his feet, his sneakers still off from the escape attempt.

Noah approached him and shoved him roughly to the ground, forcing Ethan onto his stomach once again. Ethan’s heart pounded in his chest, and he couldn’t hide the concern on his face, as he had no idea what Noah would do next.

And then it began. Noah sat on Ethan’s legs and began tying them tightly with an excessive amount of rope, securing each section—feet, ankles, knees, thighs—until they were completely immobilized. “Let’s see how are you going to escape now,” Noah muttered with manic satisfaction. Then he shifted position, sitting on Ethan’s back, and began wildly wrapping ropes around his shoulders. With a grunt, he pulled as hard as he could, trying to force Ethan’s elbows together behind his back—a nearly impossible task, given how muscular Ethan’s arms were. “Come on! I thought you were more flexible,” Noah growled through clenched teeth, struggling as Ethan let out muffled groans of pain through his gag.

Seeing the pained expression on Ethan’s face, Cody whispered softly, “Thank you.” Ethan tried to smile in return, but the effort barely showed. Once satisfied with the bindings around Ethan’s elbows, Noah tied a new rope to his ankles and began pulling them upward. Ethan already knew what was coming—a hogtie. But this time, it was going to be much tighter and far more uncomfortable.

“Don’t even think about pulling that cramp excuse again,” Noah said coldly. “You’re staying like this until the game’s over.”

Finally, Noah attempted to tie Ethan’s head to his feet, so that he couldn’t rest it on the ground. But after several failed tries, he grew frustrated and threw the last piece of rope aside in irritation. Ethan felt a small wave of relief—at least he’d be able to keep his head down on the floor.

But that relief didn’t last long. Noah still wasn’t satisfied with his work. His eyes landed on Ethan’s worn-out black Nike sneakers, lying on the floor next to him.

“So that’s how you got your legs free... We should’ve taken those off before we tied you up.”

Noah picked up one of Ethan’s sneakers and slowly crouched down beside his head. Then he pressed the shoe against Ethan’s nose and tied the laces behind his head, securing it in place. Ethan didn’t even try to resist—he didn’t have the strength, nor did he see the point.

“Mmm... do you like your own aroma?” Noah mocked. “A fine blend of sweat, dirt, and loss. It must be delightful. Perfect for the stinky leader of the Hawks. Enjoy it!”

Ethan didn’t respond. He no longer showed any signs of resistance or defiance. Forced to inhale the foul stench of his own sneaker, his eyes filled with tears for the first time—he just couldn’t take it anymore. And yet, he gathered enough strength to hold those tears back. He knew that if he broke, it would only feed Noah’s satisfaction and deepen his own humiliation.

Whether for better or worse, a few minutes later, Ethan heard Tyler’s voice shouting joyfully in the distance: “Woohoo! Victory is ours!” Ethan was good friends with Tyler and knew he wouldn't allow the humiliation to go further. But that also meant the rest of the Hawks had probably been captured. Noah rushed to the window, and when he spotted Tyler approaching the cabin, he panicked. He hurried back to Ethan and untied the sneaker from his face, placing it next to the other one. He knew his leader wouldn’t approve of what he had done.

Tyler entered through the cabin door, followed by the rest of the Lynxes and the captured Hawks. He congratulated Noah on a job well done and immediately made his way over to Ethan.

“There you are, bro! How are you holding up?” he grinned. “Whoa, my boys really did dirty on you—sorry, you know they’re a bit wild, just like me. Who tied you up like this?”

“I did,” Noah said proudly.

“Nice work! Look at those knots—tight and clean. Can you move at all, Ethan?”

“M-m,” Ethan groaned and shook his head, gagged.

“That’s how it should be. Can’t be mad at Noah for this, he did it better than you would. You know you suck at tying knots,” Tyler teased.

“Now, let me show you how it’s done. Pay attention, alright? Bring me this naughty little Hawk!” he shouted, pointing at Jimmy, and instructed the Lynxes to handle the other three Hawks.

“This kid caught me earlier—can you believe that? And he was full of attitude, too. I think he’s earned the same treatment you got,” Tyler added, helping Jimmy lie down in front of Ethan. Then, he began tying him up the same way, demonstrating each step to both the Lynxes and Ethan. “So—you wrap it around a few times, always thread it through here, then wrap again, and finish with a knot. Got it?”

In a couple minutes, Jimmy was in a firm hogtie, barely able to move. Though clearly uncomfortable, he stayed silent, glancing toward his leader to see what fate awaited him. Tyler crouched next to him and said to Ethan, “You know, this kid’s got quite the mouth. He actually threatened to gag me with his sock. Can you believe the disrespect? I think he needs to be punished for that. So I figured I’d ask his leader—you agree?”

Ethan nodded looking at Noah, who was standing behind Tyler, nervously swallowing.“

Perfect! Then let’s get to it,” said Tyler with a mischievous grin. He kicked off his white Adidas sneakers and peeled off his black socks—the same ones Jimmy had mocked earlier. Realizing what was coming, Jimmy panicked and began pleading.

“I’m sorry! I didn’t mean it like that! Please, don’t do this,” he begged.

“Too late,” Tyler replied, his tone suddenly losing its usual playfulness. “Don’t waste your breath! You know I’m not letting this slide.”

“Come on, this could be dangerous, right? They’re dirty, I could get sick or something! What about bacterias?” Jimmy continued to panic.

“Relax, Jimmy. You’ll be fine. It’ll be a little salty, but it won’t kill you. Just brush your teeth afterward and there’ll be no bacteria left. Now open up.”

Jimmy hesitantly opened his mouth just a bit. Tyler began pushing the sock in, then used both hands to open Jimmy’s jaw wider. The socks were a bit longer, and Jimmy’s mouth was small, so Tyler barely managed to stuff one sock inside. He wrapped the second sock around Jimmy’s mouth, tying it off to hold the first in place. With the help of two Lynxes, Tyler pulled Jimmy so that he lay next to Ethan.

“There we go—leader and apprentice, side by side,” Tyler chuckled, unaware that his own apprentice had earlier stuffed his sock into Ethan’s mouth too.

At that moment, Mr. Parker’s voice echoed over the loudspeaker once again: “The game ends in one hour.”

“There you go! You won’t have to wait long in this position,” Tyler said. “We’ll relax and have a little chat—you guys just stay here and behave.”

* * * * * * * * * *

Meanwhile, Dylan had reached the cabin where the Falcons were keeping his roommate, Cameron. I haven’t mentioned this before, but I should have. The leaders slept in two small cabins in the center of the camp, so each of them could quickly reach their team. Both cabins had three beds. Jason and Ethan had the privilege of sleeping alone in one of the more comfortable cabins since they were more experienced leaders, while Dylan, Cameron, and Tyler shared the other one.

Marcus, Ian, and Josh were thrilled to see him. They excitedly retold everything they had done while he was away—how they escaped onto the boat, how they guarded Cameron. Dylan proudly listened to his boys, praised them, and handed out high-fives, while Cameron lay on the floor wondering whether Dylan would finally bother to acknowledge him.

“Ohhh… Cam, there you are? I’ve got to admit, I was confused when I saw just your legs, but they really tied you up well. Take off his bandana, guys, I want to have a little chat with my roommate,” Dylan finally said.

“So, did they take good care of you? No trouble, right?” Dylan added, standing tall over Cameron. He didn’t want to crouch, enjoying the way he towered over him.

“Yeah, they were nice. Everything’s fine,” Cameron replied.

“Great! We caught a few of your Otters. They said that they’re keeping Jason captured. I can’t believe it…,” Dylan commented in surprise.

“It’s true. I saw them taking him away, just before Ian, Marcus, and Josh caught me,” Cameron said with a faint smile.

“Interesting… I would never send my guys after the strongest leader. I sent them after you,” Dylan said mockingly, as Cameron’s smile faded. “Anyway, the reason I came here is… the game ends in less than an hour. After that, we’re supposed to present our prisoners like trophies, and I think it’s only fitting that I bring you along—as the leader captured by my boys. I hope you behave nicely… unless you want to sleep outside tonight.” Dylan chuckled, wanting to show his boys who the real boss was in their cabin.

Cameron nodded in shame, while Dylan kept taunting: “You know what they say—The winner takes it all, the loser’s standing small...” And as Dylan laughed with his Falcons, Cameron’s eyes were fixed on Dylan’s filthy New Balance sneakers, just inches from his head.

“You’re so dirty. That’s not like you at all,” Cameron muttered with a hint of irritation, wanting to jab back at Dylan.

“Oh yeah. That’s because of those savage Green Wolves of Jason’s, but I took care of them. Just look at this mess.,” Dylan said calmly, raising his foot above Cameron’s head. As he lowered it, Dylan deliberately dragged his muddy sole across Cameron’s face, leaving a brown smear on his cheek.

“Oops… Sorry, bro. Total accident,” Dylan feigned, while a storm of anger swirled inside Cameron mixed with a feeling of helplessness—an all-too-familiar feeling by now.

“No worries, boss. We tied him up so he could work as a rug for us. He’s fine,” Ian added, sending the whole cabin into laughter, while Cameron stayed quiet and humiliated, lying on the floor.
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TO BE CONTINUED…

[WhereAmI]

RUH ROH, the revenge of the counselors begins . None of the campers will be safe, its sleeping in the deepest darkest parts of the Black Lagoon for them with the evil Noah in the messiest MUD HOLE of all.

OK, this is just my guess since I haven't read the next chapter yet but I sure hope SWAMP THING is included in the Grand Finale.

[ajohnson]

@WhereAmI Hehehe, you'll see soon. The next chapter will be the season finale.

[FelixSH]

Hehe, a shoe tied over a gagged mouth is one of my favorite...torture methods, I guess. Totally humiliating, disgusting, but ultimately harmless.
That's what I like about this story generally. People are tied up, gagged, sometimes heavily, but nothing really bad happens to anyone. Mostly some light, embarrassing torture. Enough to be uncomfortable, but not more.

I do hope, Ethan will get some revenge for how Noah treats him. Such a jerk.

[ajohnson]

@FelixSH That's right. It's totally embarrassing, but in the end, nothing bad will come of it. I guess Jimmy was trying to avoid his punishment that way, pointing out it would have long-term consequences. But Tyler didn’t really care, he knew nothing bad would come of it, so he shoved the sock into his mouth anyway.

I guess everyone is waiting for that revenge on Noah, but let's be honest, in reallity bad guys DO oftenly win and stay without consequences. So, we'll see about that.

[FelixSH]

What exactly did Ethan even do? That grudge Noah has seems pretty out of proportion.
But I guess that's just how bullies are.

[ajohnson]

@FelixSH Noah had bullied Cody the day before, and Ethan stepped in to intervene. He made a comment about Noah's intelligence, something like how he couldn’t even put together a proper compound sentence, and all the Hawks laughed at him, along with the Lynxes who were with them. That’s why he was so determined to humiliate Ethan, though bullies usually don’t need much of a reason.

[ajohnson]

Chapter 10: Keep Your Head Up!

The sun had set, and darkness began to fall over Echo Pines Camp. Meanwhile, the last remaining boys from the Green Wolves had finally managed to capture the boys from the Blue Otters and take them to their base. However, when they got there, they were met with disappointment as they realized their prisoner, Dylan, had escaped. Aware that there was too little time left until the end of the game, they didn’t even try to extract a confession from the Otters about Jason’s whereabouts. They decided to keep them tied up until the game was officially over, just to soften their defeat a bit.

As the final minutes of the game ticked away, everyone quietly waited for Mr. Parker’s voice to announce it. Finally, it happened: “The game is over! All teams, bring your prisoners and come to the main clearing so we can determine the winner,” came the voice over the loudspeaker.

* * * * * * * * * *

Four of the Otter boys began preparing Jason for departure. They untied him from the tree and wrapped several ropes around his chest and shoulders, securing his arms behind his head. Jason sat quietly as they tied him up, and when they were done, he made a few attempts to break free, grunting through the gag in his mouth. They wrapped more ropes around his waist and started leading him through the woods, holding onto those ropes like leashes.

The other teams had more or less a uniform way of restraining their prisoners for the end of the game. Their hands were tied behind their backs, with a blindfold and a gag over their faces, and one rope tied like shackles between their legs so they could only take small steps. Finally, a thick rope was tied around their chest and waist, which served as a leash as they were led to the center of camp. The prisoners stood quietly, sad that they had lost, but also happy that freedom was finally near.

* * * * * * * * * *

Cameron's legs were finally untied from the beam, and he was allowed to sit on the bed for a few minutes. His legs were completely numb, so he needed a bit of time to recover before heading out. At one point, Dylan sat down next to him with two bandanas. Cameron looked at him and had already slightly parted his lips, thinking that was what they were for. But instead, Dylan tied the bandana over his eyes.

"Easy, easy, your turn for that is coming too, Cam. Let me finish this part first," Dylan said jokingly, noticing Cameron had already started to open his mouth.

"You know I don’t like the dark. Why are you doing this to me now that the game’s over?" Cameron whispered so the other boys wouldn’t hear.

"Come on, be a man! You're not a little kid anymore. Now open wide and bite down on this," Dylan replied as he tied the bandana around Cameron’s muddy cheeks. He then helped him up, wrapped a thick rope around him, and began leading him through the woods.

* * * * * * * * * *

In the Lynx cabin, Tyler and his boys were getting the entire group of captured Hawks ready to move. At one point, Noah walked up to him.

"Ty, can I be the one to lead Ethan to the winner announcement? You know, as my personal trophy?" he asked.

"Uhh… I’m not sure. I mean, I’m the leader, so it kinda makes sense that I lead him, right?" Tyler answered, a bit confused.

"Yeah, but I worked so hard to capture him and tie him up properly. Don’t you think I’ve earned it?" Noah kept pleading.

"Alright, alright. It’s not that important to me anyway. I’ll be satisfied with this little hero," Tyler chuckled, lifting Jimmy up and starting to prepare him for the trip.

"Awesome!" Noah jumped with excitement and moved closer to Ethan. "Are you ready? This is so exciting! I'm going to parade you in front of everyone like my servant!" Noah whispered as he untied Ethan’s legs. Ethan was already so humiliated that he didn’t care who would escort him; he just imagined himself under a hot shower, then in bed.

Once he got Ethan ready, Noah started putting on his own shoes, irritated that he had to wear them without socks. "Put Ethan's shoes on too, you see he can’t do it himself," Tyler called out. Noah angrily grabbed Ethan’s Nikes sneakers, began to shove them onto his feet and tie the laces, grumbling with each pull, feeling like this was beneath him. "Why do I have to put his shoes on…" he muttered.

* * * * * * * * * *

Soon, groups of boys started arriving at the camp's central clearing, where Mr. Parker was waiting for them.

“Ooooo… Well, well. Jason, what’s this? You’re the last person I expected to see in a situation like this. As far as I remember, you never even let anyone tie your hands before. What happened to you now?” Parker said with surprise, eyes wide as he looked at the tightly bound Jason. “Guys, take his bandana off. Let’s hear what he has to say in his defence,” he added to the Otters.

“What can I say, sir… I guess I just let myself relax a little,” Jason said with a smile, clearly unbothered by having ended up as a prisoner.

“Okay, okay, it can happen to the best of us. Even you. And you, Cam? Looks like you were rolling around in the mud with those Falcons?” Parker continued, looking at Cameron’s muddy face.

“Something like that…” Cameron said, a bit ashamed.

Parker’s gaze finally landed on the group of Lynxes and Hawks.

“If there’s one thing that’s certain, it’s that the Lynxes absolutely crushed the Hawks. Ethan, how do you explain this? I expected you to handle things better—you look like… like you got run over by a tank. What did these naughty Lynxes do to you?” Parker remarked.

Noah began removing the layered gag from Ethan’s mouth—first the bandana, then a layer of rope, and finally, he pulled out his two black, now saliva-soaked socks, deliberately spreading them out so everyone could see what had been in Ethan’s mouth. Faces all around them were frozen in shock; only the occasional gasp or whisper could be heard—“Did you see that? Those were socks.” Tyler looked the most stunned of all. He glanced at Jimmy, who still had Tyler’s socks stuffed in his mouth, and wondered how he was supposed to punish Noah if this was how he’d punished Jimmy. Parker, though visibly shaken by the scene, didn’t say anything in order to avoid humiliating Ethan further.

Ethan moved his jaw a few times, trying to loosen it up, and then said quietly, utterly defeated, “I’m sorry… I didn’t do very well in this game.”

Parker finally turned to Dylan and Tyler. “Since their leaders are free, and I see they each have a captured leader of a rival's team, the winners are the Gray Falcons and the Yellow Lynxes! Congratulations, boys! Your reward will be a weekend rafting trip,” Parker announced dramatically. “The losers will stay here for the weekend and will be in charge of cleaning up the camp. Now, untie the prisoners, go clean yourselves up, and come to dinner—then straight to bed! Tomorrow brings new challenges,” he continued in a calmer tone.

The boys began untying the captured leaders and the rest of the players, who stretched their stiff muscles and compared who had the worst rope marks.

Tired, filthy, and hungry, the boys raced to see who could shower and eat first, while the Lynxes and Falcons excitedly talked about how fun the reward trip would be. Tyler sat nervously outside their cabin, debating whether to apologize to Ethan and what to do about Noah. In the end, he decided it was best to sleep on it—morning is wiser than evening, he told himself. Inside the cabin, Dylan teased Cameron, saying he was now the odd one out—the only loser in the whole cabin.

In the cabin next door, Ethan was sitting alone, deep in thought. His sneakers were off, placed beside the bed, and his legs were lightly stretched out on the floor. He was trying to pull himself together before heading to the shower, but the images kept replaying in his mind—Noah shoving socks and sneakers under his nose, Ethan searching the room with his eyes for someone to help him, but no one was there—all his boys were sitting tied up right in front of him.

At one point, Jason walked into the cabin, having noticed that his roommate had been acting strange ever since the game ended.

"Hey, there you are, bro. I’ve been looking for you," Jason said with a warm smile.

Ethan just glanced at him dully and muttered, "Yeah, I’m here."

Jason sat down next to him on the bed, trying to think of a way to lighten the mood. After a moment, he pressed his hand next to Ethan’s and exclaimed excitedly, “Ooooooh, look! We’ve got matching war scars!” He laughed, pointing at the red rope marks. “Wonder who got it worse?”

“I bet I did,” Ethan replied, still sounding flat.

"This was my first time being tied up today," Jason began, taking off his sneakers to rest his feet. "I mean, I let those kids tie me up, but after that, I seriously tried to get out—and couldn’t. It’s kind of a creepy feeling, isn’t it?"

Ethan just nodded, and finally Jason lost his patience.

“Come on, dude, we’ve known each other for years. What’s up with you? Won’t you even talk to me? I thought we were tight,” Jason said, his voice raised in concern.

“I’m just tired, relax...” Ethan kept his distant tone.

“I know exactly how you get when you’re tired, and this isn’t it. You can tell me what happened. I heard some kids talking, saying that Noah did something to you, that he humiliated you—is that true?” Jason asked.

“So they’re already talking? What are they saying? That he shoved his dirty socks in my mouth? That he made me sniff my boys’ socks and my own sneakers? Yeah, yeah, it’s all true!” Ethan burst out, finally coming to life.

“What a psycho! Don’t worry, Tyler’ll take care of him, or if he won’t, I will. No kid gets to treat us—counselors—like that!” Jason said firmly.

“Just forget it. He used the game to humiliate me. Now he’ll brag to everyone about stuffing his socks in my mouth. Maybe I should quit the camp.”

“What?! How can you even think about that?! You? Leave camp after all these years because of that little jerk?” Jason shouted. “Come on now. Keep your head up! You and I, when we team up, we’ll teach all of them a lesson, got it?” he went on, and Ethan finally cracked a slight smile. Jason patted him on the thigh and got up. “I’m heading to the shower. I can’t stand this sweat and grime anymore.” -“Wait up, I’ll come too,” Ethan called out, finally a little more cheerful.

And so ended one exciting day at Echo Pines Summer Camp, but many more adventures still awaited the boys and their leaders that summer.
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THE END OF SEASON 1!
TO BE CONTINUED… (maybe)
Okay, this is the whole story about the “Save Your Leader” game. Thanks to all the readers and all members who participated by commenting and sharing their thoughts on the story.
As I said, this wasn’t the only event which included tie-up games in this camp, so if you want to know what happened with these characters, I may continue the story after a short break.

[WhereAmI]

Mumble, Mumble, Grumble, Grumble, Swamp Thing didn't even show up for the awards ceremony or perhaps Noah was actually Swamp Thing in human form. Mumble Mumble Grumble Grumble.

Great story, next year Ethan gets revenge on the evil Noah.

[ajohnson]

@WhereAmI Thanks! But there are many more tie-ups in the same year, they won't need to wait next year for another round.

[FelixSH]

Congrats for finishing, and thanks for the story. It was very nice to read.
I did appreciate the last scene, between Jason and Ethan. I find these scenes important, slower ones, that aren't just about the action. Good to know, that Jason managed to cheer Ethan up a bit, and get him out of his bad mood.

[ajohnson]

@FelixSH Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope that I'll find some free time to write about the events that followed this story. It would explore friendship and bond between Jason and Ethan in much more detail.

[bondagefreak]

Chapter 9: The Winner Takes Them All

Another great chapter. I'm liking Tyler more and more. Definitely the deadly jester type. Using his own socks to gag Jimmy was bliss, especially after the exchange between them in one of the earlier chapters. Serves Jimmy right. Also loved how Tyler has no idea that Ethan's mouth is packed full with "apprentice" Noah's socks. Awesome imagery right there

Dylan's pride and smug condescension really comes through during his exchange with captured Cameron.
All in all, this was another brilliantly executed chapter. Will be catching up to the next part tonight.

[ajohnson]

@bondagefreak Thanks, the next one (chapter 10) is the conclusion of this part of the story, so I hope you enjoy that one as well.

[FelixSH]

I forgot to ask: Did Noah get his lesson, for what he did? Or was Jason just saying this, to get Ethans morals up? I guess, there could also just haven't been a chance to do anything in that regard.

Considering what you wrote earlier, I guess nothing happened, but I'm still curious.

[ajohnson]

@FelixSH I guess you don't want me to spoil the sequel? I'll just say that the story of Noah and Ethan is far from finished, but whether or not Ethan got his revenge and did he even wanted it, you'll see in the upcoming chapters.

[FelixSH]

Ah, right, forgot that you are continuing so directly. Yeah, fair enough. Looking forward to finding out more, whenever you get to it.

[bondagefreak]

Chapter 10: Keep Your Head Up!

What a lovely conclusion to the first part of the adventure.
I bet Dylan and Tyler are quite pleased with their respective teams (and themselves!). It was nice seeing that sweet moment between Ethan and Jason at the end, what with Jason vowing revenge on punk-ass Noah. Man, I hope that kid gets it good

Still, I genuinely loved the sequence and dialogue leading up to Tyler and Noah parading Jimmy and Ethan back to the centre of camp. The sockgag reveal was great. I bet that'll give the other boys and counsellors plenty of ideas for future games.

All ten chapters were brilliantly executed through and through. Very much enjoyed them and looking forward to more!

[ajohnson]

@bondagefreak Thanks! I'll certainly continue writing, because I enjoyed it as well – recalling what happened and commenting with others. I just need a little more break and after that new chapters are coming!

[bondagefreak]

@ajohnson
I've already said this, but take your time. Quality should never be rushed. Write when you're ready and when you feel like it. In the meantime, enjoy the forum and what it has to offer. We'll still be here when the adventure continues.

[FelixSH]

Yeah, what bf said. There is no rush, and no point in getting burned out. We will wait.

Feel free to notify me, when you start your next story. Just to make sure, that I don't overlook it.

[WhereAmI]

Make sure Worm Boy Cody stays safe and that the Big Bad Bullies dont get ahold of him.