Jester's Revenge. Or. Plymouth part II (MF+/F+) (FINISHED) (NEW story coming soon)

[RopeBunny]

Thank you both.

Right then, update time.

I've been away awhile, holiday. I had 012 more or less written before I left, not quite ready to post but close. I intended to finish off and post whilst away, but that didn't happen.

And now here I am, back, and for the last couple of days I honestly haven't bee sure whether to carry on with Plymouth or not. I have ideas, a gameplan, but have found the urge to write it down lacking.

Should I continue?

I've just scrapped 012, begun a rewrite, because I enjoy writing TUGs and so that's what I'll do. I daresay there will appear more chapters, this tale will go forward. Just, give me time.

[GreyLord]

You must follow your own dream, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention].

[JulieG]

Please Cary on. And Plymouth new neighbour showed some.promise as a charachter. Will she return?

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey, nice to see you around again. Was curious what the hiatus was about.

Ultimately you should not feel compelled to write if you do not want to merely for the sake of making people happy. If you feel like writing about something else, or taking a break, would be better, then you should do those things.

Obviously I personally would enjoy seeing the tale continue, but I would not want that to be at your expense.

Just my two cents.

[RopeBunny]

You must follow your own dream

Thank you

Please Cary on.

Thank you

I personally would enjoy seeing the tale continue

And thank you.

Going to take a break with Plymouth, not walking away more stepping back. I've got the idea, it's just taking me time to put down in the right way.

Might be the next chapters will appear with large gaps between each. We'll see.

In the meantime I have another idea, a new thing I'm writing, which I might post soon.

[BlissfulMisery]

I appreciate the update, and gladly await whatever comes next, whatever form it takes!

[RopeBunny]

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[slackywacky]

Glad you continue this story. It is interesting and fun to read. Thank you!!

[GreyLord]

Glad you continue this story. It is interesting and fun to read. Thank you!!

I certainly second @slackywacky. Thank you very much.

[RopeBunny]

Glad you continue this story. It is interesting and fun to read. Thank you!!

I certainly second @slackywacky. Thank you very much.

You are both welcome thank you for the comments.

[tickletied84]

Well that was definitely worth waiting for! Loved the moment that Plymouth had to look away from the struggling Ruth to keep herself under control - very hot!

[BlissfulMisery]

The tale continues

Looks like Brooke is back to corrupting guiding others on their bondage journey.

Concerned her desperation will lead to disaster, but then again, one could argue that adrenaline inducing 'dance' of seeming danger is half the fun of D/S. Until/unless it goes too far. Hopefully not, for Brooke.

[Caesar73]

i really liked this chapter, especially Brooks reaction when Deborah called her and then all the tension, the longing she is feeling while the session with Ruth.

[RopeBunny]

Well that was definitely worth waiting for!

Thanks

Concerned her desperation will lead to disaster

On this note. No spoilers, of course, we (you) shall have to wait and see.

all the tension, the longing she is feeling while the session with Ruth.

Glad this came over well

[Caesar73]

all the tension, the longing she is feeling while the session with Ruth.

Glad this came over well

It did absolutely

[RopeBunny]

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[tickletied84]

And. Still. Really really fucking horny.

I think is how anyone reading it will be feeling!

[BlissfulMisery]

Total, intoxicating, wonderful surrender.

Bliss, really.

Please do it again please please yank at my collar please.

Great line, evocative of the mental state.

What Plymouth did/asked for is insane. But not surprising.

Of course, Brooke will likely end up having to deal with the consequences of Plymouth's decisions.

Great chapter.

[RopeBunny]

Total, intoxicating, wonderful surrender.

I just had to quote this, to say, I love your description of what I've written.

Thank you

[BlissfulMisery]

I just had to quote this, to say, I love your description of what I've written.

Thank you

You are welcome of course, but the thought(s) was/were inspired by what you wrote, so I do not take credit.

[GreyLord]

Can't improve on what [mention]BlissfulMisery[/mention] said, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention].

[RopeBunny]

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[BlissfulMisery]

Doubling, or perhaps even tripling down. Problem is both people involved seem to be thinking with their kinky side instead of their brains, which certainly could never end poorly (right?).

Also, Plymouth is breaking the first rule of kink; do not force your kinks on the unwilling.

Well maybe not the first rule, but it is definitely somewhere on the list.

Love the trip into her fantasy world. Crazy, but understandable, once again. Chasing that high, what she 'really' wants an eternal contradiction, one side of her wanting to board (strap into perhaps being the more accurate verb?) the proverbial roller coaster ride and the other side wanting to come out the other end at least somewhat intact. But one extreme by definition means forgoing the other. Having her cake and eating it too, perhaps, which itself is a funny expression if one thinks about it.

Hard to find the right words (right metaphor? Rollercoaster, tightrope, minefield, fire, all seem insufficient) really, but language is such a limited way to describe intense experience, only allowing for a pale reflection at best.

Amusing little exchange about 'names'. Stupid names that make one laugh afterwards are half the fun, one might argue, but like with anything in life, opinions certainly vary.

Probably does not need to be explicitly stated with everything that has already been said, but it certainly never hurts so, good chapter.

[RopeBunny]

Also, Plymouth is breaking the first rule of kink; do not force your kinks on the unwilling.

Bad writing by me it seems.

The overall gist of Plymouth/Deborah is meant to be: Deborah in charge, the easy dominance of Plymouth who is, so far, happy to surrender. And whilst the abandoning was Plymouths idea, I wasn't trying to write it as forcing, more as idea dropping alongside a small teasing dangling of herself off the hook to show she was up for this.

Because Deborah loves being in charge, but let's be fair actual abandonment of the sub isn't really the done thing no matter how bossy and power trippy you feel.

So Plymouth had to hint, to drop the suggestion followed by further hints/coaxing to prove she was on board with this new deeper level.

As I said, should've maybe written it better, but, it isn't always an easy thing to find the best way.

This last chapter too, meant to be more of the same: Deborah panicked that she'd overstepped the line, so reassurance from Plymouth that all is well, and a confirmation that she, as the sub, is still very much Deborah's to use.

However she sees fit.

I find sometimes the hardest thing is that of course I know what's going on in my characters heads and hearts, but I have to remember to describe and explain all of it well enough for everyone else.

Anyway.

Thanks for commenting, always great to find, I hope I've been helpful to both you and possibly others.

[BlissfulMisery]

Bad writing by me it seems.

No, bad writing by me. That line you quoted was meant as a tongue and cheek reference to the person who ended up discovering/untying her (it is not good form to make people super uncomfortable like that just for your own gratification, as technically they did not consent to anything). I already understood what you laid out in your post/the dynamic between Brooke/Plymouth and Deborah (and yes even the 'dance' of trying to reassure each other, that part rings very true), no need to worry, you were more then clear on what you meant.

But it is not a bad thing to spell out exactly how dangerous a game they are playing.