Plymouth rising (MF+/F+)

[Caesar73]

Great update!

[GreyLord]

That was a fast move to hard core. I hope that it occurs to Plymouth before she really gets hurt that she should have her representative at a meeting like that. Well written with details that bring the reader into the scene.

[NotSeen]

Usually it's guys thinking with their dick instead of their brains, but this time I'd say Plymouth was thinking with her pussy... Oh well, live and learn - as long as she lives to learn.

[RopeBunny]

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[GreyLord]

I get that Plymouth was having fun in the scene. My thinking was that she put herself completely in the hands of three people, two of whom she had never met and the other she had met only briefly and did not know by reputation and had only a passing indication that Roman was okay from someone else whom she had known only briefly. That being said, this is a fictional story and you should certainly have the literary license to tell the tale as you wish. My thoughts on safety do not make your story less interesting or less attractive. Your writing is the best, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention].

[NotSeen]

My apologies. I certainly never intended to make you feel bad about your story. Should've kept in mind that we all read and write from our own personal backgrounds, likes and dislikes - and not try to impose mine on your story.

I've enjoyed this story (along with your previous works) very much and will follow Plymouth's journey with great interest. Thank you for sharing these stories with us.

[tickletied84]

Wow! Intense and well written Sybian scene - not something Plymouth is going to forget in a hurry!

[RopeBunny]

[mention]GreyLord[/mention] I, honestly, never thought of that. The three on one, the risk potential. Too busy working towards the actual tie on this occasion.

Can't think of everything huh

[mention]NotSeen[/mention] No need to apologise. I didn't simply want to leave your comments hanging, to have you worry or misunderstand the angles I was going for.

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

Thank you both.

[RopeBunny]

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[Tights tights tights]

Hi,

I don't usually make time to read long stories, but these that you have made look very intersteing so far. I have only read the whole of 1 and 2 so far, but I will eventually read all the rest very soon when/if I can spare the time, then I'll give a full proper review.

Well done so far!

[GreyLord]

The story is following its natural progression. I had wondered if it was time for a switch and Plymouth would top Syn.

[RopeBunny]

[mention]Tights tights tights[/mention] thanks for both the comment and compliment.

[RopeBunny]

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[slackywacky]

Okay, I had to say it... We had to wait a whole week for an update? Geez
Nah, I have to be honest, I would wait longer if needed for an update, but it would be hard. Thank you for a very enjoyable update.
And I liked your opening.

[NotSeen]

For some reason, I found that adorably clumsy (and I do not mean the writing). Both Brooke and Lili, jolted out of their sleep, the whole day suddenly a bit out of joint... that came across exactly as I would envision such a situation to go, especially when there's the barely discussed mutual attraction to further complicate matters.

Best of luck to the two of them, they make a nice couple.

[RopeBunny]

We had to wait a whole week for an update?

Well I. Kinda. Had a whole chapter written. A somewhat different 014 where Lili actually did tie and gag Donna
And, I liked it. But, it wasn't right for the story I'm trying to tell. I didn't want a potential relationship between Brooke and Lili to begin that way.

So I had to start over again

Glad to see it's still well received, thanks

[GreyLord]

Way to go, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention].

Where I'll see Lili again. And, somehow, tie her up.

This is so enjoyable. I've been hoping to see Plymouth top someone. I looks like it's coming.

[slackywacky]

So I had to start over again
Glad to see it's still well received, thanks

I don't mind waiting for a new chapter of your stories. They are always worth the wait.
And don't let yourself be pressured by a guy like me

[RopeBunny]

I've been hoping to see Plymouth top someone. I looks like it's coming.

It's definitely coming

[mention]slackywacky[/mention] no pressure, got it

[RopeBunny]

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[RopeBunny]

I've been hoping to see Plymouth top someone. I looks like it's coming.

It's definitely coming

And. It still is, coming. I don't mean to be a tease. Neither Brooke nor Lili are only Domme or only sub. Both, the way I'm attempting to write it anyway, just like to play with, in some cases getting paid to do so, ropes.

Brooke will tie up Lili. Soon. Promise.

[GreyLord]

I've been hoping to see Plymouth top someone. I looks like it's coming.

It's definitely coming

And. It still is, coming. I don't mean to be a tease. Neither Brooke nor Lili are only Domme or only sub. Both, the way I'm attempting to write it anyway, just like to play with, in some cases getting paid to do so, ropes.

Brooke will tie up Lili. Soon. Promise.

This is just fine, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention], the story is progressing at the pace it should. Good detailed writing that helps the reader picture things clearly. I'm still looking forward to seeing Plymouth top Syn. That will be fun, I think.

[slackywacky]

Another great update (without having to wait for a week ). I love the way you tell a story, thank you!

[NotSeen]

As much as I liked your supernatural stories, reading this is a delight. The way you write Brooke's thinking is awesome. Thank you for this story.

[RopeBunny]

As much as I liked your supernatural stories, reading this is a delight.

Thanks. (To you other readers/commentators too of course) I do enjoy writing my supernatural/magic themed stuff, but, I'm really enjoying writing this.