Re: Isobel and Aunt Jan (Ff/f) part 5 - 2nd August
Posted: Sun Aug 04, 2024 7:36 am
@copperfox thank you for a lovely criticism of my work.
@TightsBound when I started writing I wasn’t sure who would win the bet either. It’s just as the chapter progressed, I thought an initial lack of progress with a sudden breakthrough which still leaves much to be done was the ideal progression. It was the vision in my mind of two girls desperately pulling tape and shreds of rope off them and an aunt who can’t quite believe she lost the bet seemed the better outcome.
@TightsBound when I started writing I wasn’t sure who would win the bet either. It’s just as the chapter progressed, I thought an initial lack of progress with a sudden breakthrough which still leaves much to be done was the ideal progression. It was the vision in my mind of two girls desperately pulling tape and shreds of rope off them and an aunt who can’t quite believe she lost the bet seemed the better outcome.