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Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2024 2:07 pm
by TapeTurtle
A!

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2024 9:33 pm
by Bilmik
A

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Sat Apr 27, 2024 9:49 pm
by SarahM
B!

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Sun Apr 28, 2024 10:31 pm
by RopeBunny
Going A.

Good story, keep it up please.

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 11:03 am
by lanadelgagged
A Wins!

"Alright, let's backtrack a bit." – comes Montana's voice, much more diplomatic. – "How much money do I owe then? And to whom?"

"A month's worth in protection fees. It's your first month here, right? That'll be $3,000."

"That's ridiculous, do you think I have that kind of money to throw around?"

"Those are the rules of the game miss, I'm just the bearer of bad news, I don't make the rules."

"You're out of your mind."


Montana Leighton picks up her duffle bag and the boombox and ambles back to the locker room, but the Korean man stands blocking her path, far from convinced. Adopting a much more serious stance, sunglasses in hand, he glares into her burning eyes.

"So what will it be? Cash? A check perhaps? We don't take credit cards as of today but..."

"Stay out of my sight."


Montana shoves him aside, but the man insists, unfazed. He's heard it all before, and the situation is far from new to him. Montana, however, is acting erratically, the mere presence of the man is unsettling her and there's nobody around to aid.


"The boss also takes alternative means of payment. See, we don't like causing trouble, there's always an alternative. Those 'pitiful consequences' I mentioned before are usually the last resort."


The man is now blocking the entrance to the locker rooms, with his back to the door.


"Look man, I don't know who you are, or what the hell you want from me, but...

A. ...get the hell out of my sight or I'll call the police."

B. ...just tell me what those alternative means of payment are, and leave me be already."

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 11:25 am
by tiedinbluetights
B.
"Call the police" comes up twice in a row now. When I used to read choose your own adventure books, in my younger years, I would resist the one option that seemed to recur. So I'll go with B.

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 4:11 pm
by SarahM
A

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 5:01 pm
by AlexUSA3
"B". She knows she's in the corner, and I agree with her that $3000 is ridiculous. For a startup, that might be more than her gross income let alone the pennies she's got to keep for sustaining her own life.

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Mon Apr 29, 2024 10:39 pm
by RopeBunny
B

No harm in asking what the alternative to cash is :D

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Wed May 01, 2024 5:03 am
by Bilmik
B

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Fri May 10, 2024 12:17 am
by GwenGagged
Ooh, I’d say A in real life, but B is so tempting.

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Fri May 24, 2024 5:52 pm
by gshsubd
B!

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Fri May 24, 2024 9:43 pm
by Withers
B

Re: Montana's Aerobics Club (F) - Vote Story

Posted: Sat May 25, 2024 8:17 am
by Treville
A