Plymouth. (MF+/F+) *NEW 15/02 NEW* (Finished...?)

[RopeBunny]

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[tickletied84]

Sorry to hear you've not been well, hope you're feeling better now.

A good return, with lots of possibilities of how Brooke earns her money now!

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey,

I am glad you are back, and hope you are feeling much better now!

I like the buildup in this chapter; the general feeling of uncertainty (the good kind). I might have already said this before at some point, but arguably the anticipation is as much a vital part of the experience.

Wonder what Plymouth has gotten herself into... Much like she herself is.

I enjoyed the chapter very much!

[RopeBunny]

A good return

I enjoyed the chapter very much!

Thank you both.

[RopeBunny]

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[Caesar73]

I really loved that chapter how you capture the atmosphere, the situation: Plymouth getting asked questions, answering. To me, when I read this, it is as if I am watching that "interview" live! Well done!

[GreyLord]

[mention]Caesar73[/mention] said

Well done!

Well done, indeed.

I hope you are now well. If your writing is any indication, you must be splendid.

[tickletied84]

Fantastic! (as always)

Brought anyone who's not read the previous Plymouth stories back up to speed, and got that perfect mix of teasing, playfulness, bondage and erotica. And...she's only *just* tied!

[Fandango]

Granted I've never been in a livestream like this, but the livestream format seems perfect for Brooke / Plymouth's cheeky and frenetic inner monologue. It's a perfect fit and I have a feeling that the upcoming parts are going to be a lot of fun. I hope Plymouth is enjoying America. We could use more people like her over here.

Tremendous work, as per usual.

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey,

As already mentioned by others (but bears repeating!), I think this chapter does a great job establishing the desired atmosphere. A different type of performance then what Plymouth is used to; creates a bit of ambiguity on how much of it is genuine response vs acting (well most of her actual verbal responses are genuine, but even then she is certainly put 'on the spot'.)

A good way to mix things up; very enjoyable!

[RopeBunny]

To me, when I read this, it is as if I am watching that "interview" live!

That's great excellent.

I hope you are now well.

I am. Mostly. Can't write if I'm ill, can't get into the zone, can't picture and imagine the tie, the struggle and fun.

Diving back in now though

Granted I've never been in a livestream like this

Like a lot of the porn stuff, the behind the scenes of Brooke's job, it's largely guesswork based on some stuff I've seen, and on how I think it could probably work.

Fantastic! (as always)

Brought anyone who's not read the previous Plymouth stories back up to speed

Yeah I guess it did thanks for commenting.

Hey,

As already mentioned by others (but bears repeating!), I think this chapter does a great job establishing the desired atmosphere.

And thank you, I'm glad it's coming across well.

A ton of comments, thank you all. I shall endeavour to keep things running smoothly, to keep those chapters coming.

[RopeBunny]

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[GreyLord]

The dialog was absolutely wonderful, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. In a way, I am sorry to see Plymouth moving on. I thought she and Tommy had long term possibilities. Looking forward to whatever you give us next.

[RopeBunny]

I thought she and Tommy had long term possibilities.

There's more I could've done, a second shoot, something off camera even.

But I'm trying to keep the story moving. There are other already planned spots where Brooke will do more then just one shoot before leaving, so as much as I liked Tommy too I didn't want to stretch this one out.

Thanks for commenting.

[BlissfulMisery]

Hey,

Well Plymouth certainly went on a ride. A great description of the paradoxical 'push and pull' of such a situation.

I also liked the conversation, because it did a good job of capturing how hard it is to describe such things to someone who 'does not get it'. How can something that would normally feel bad feel so good in a specific context or situation?

Well, there is a boring 'logical' answer to be had there (even if only a partial one), but that is the mystery... Which is perhaps part of the attraction.

On another note, the little details during the conversation really add to it:

Drumming his fingers on the table, looking down at them, stopping.

Is a good example.

As usual, a great chapter.

[Caesar73]

That was quite the ride - your style of writing matches - in my opinion - the Character Plymouth perfectly!

[tickletied84]

Brilliant - I give this scene - 5 out of 5 (Yorkshire puddings)

[Switchgirl]

Another superb chapter. You’re one of my favourite authors on here!

[RopeBunny]

I also liked the conversation, because it did a good job of capturing how hard it is to describe such things to someone who 'does not get it'. How can something that would normally feel bad feel so good in a specific context or situation?

Took me awhile, several goes, to get that how I wanted it. Harder then I thought to put into words given I'm personally not into the pain side at all, tight ropes aside anyway.

your style of writing matches - in my opinion - the Character Plymouth perfectly!

Thanks. I like my/this style, and as I've said previously I feel a connection to Plymouth, which probably makes her easier to write.

Brilliant - I give this scene - 5 out of 5 (Yorkshire puddings)

Another superb chapter. You’re one of my favourite authors on here!

Thank you, made me smile.

[RopeBunny]

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[GreyLord]

It just keeps getting better and better, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. Looking forward to reading more about Alicia.

[slackywacky]

The adventures of Plymouth, coming to a XXX theater near you soon, are a pleasure to read. It makes me wonder how much of Plymouth is you
No need to answer that one, just wondering, as they say a writer leaves her/his mark on the stories she/he creates.

Looking forward to more from Vegas...

[BlissfulMisery]

Well, the crazy trip continues.

Liked the callback to her very first shoot/tie-up.

Seems Plymouth has met a kindred spirit, in more ways then one.

Long slow kisses, full of promise.

Full of promise seems about right to describe whatever might follow on the rest of this journey through the United States.

[RopeBunny]

It makes me wonder how much of Plymouth is you

Not as much as I'd like

And yet, more so then anyone else I've written, I do tend to see Plymouth through my eyes. Her way of thinking, a fair chunk of what she loves (her chopper, working outdoors, her bondage tastes) are my loves.

Maybe I'm Brooke, and Plymouth is the me I wish I could be

Thanks for the comments, more Vegas coming soon.

[Caesar73]

It just keeps getting better and better, @RopeBunny. Looking forward to reading more about Alicia.

Me too Another highly enjoyable Chapter!