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Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 003 *Sammy* 14/09)
Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2022 6:58 am
by BlissfulMisery
Well they seem surprisingly (stupidly?) brave and calm considering what just happened.
Even if they think all the ghost will do is tie them up (and from their point of view, if the ghost can do that much, what else can it do?), what do they think will happen if all of them get tied up and left there until someone else decides to stumble along (which could be days or weeks later)?
Also I can imagine Beth is definitely not amused by her friends just leaving her like this.
Well, teenagers and stupid ideas are like peas in a pod, and certainly it would be a boring story if they all just ran away.
Interested to see what happens next.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 003 *Sammy* 14/09)
Posted: Thu Sep 15, 2022 12:24 pm
by Caesar73
Not so nice of the others, leaving Beth tied up

Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 003 *Sammy* 14/09)
Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2022 8:00 pm
by Shotrow
Well, that description of Beth goes a long way to addressing my earlier complaint.
They're definitely not taking this ghost thing very seriously. Kind of funny they left her tied up though. XD
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 003 *Sammy* 14/09)
Posted: Fri Sep 16, 2022 10:56 pm
by RopeBunny
Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago
Not so nice of the others, leaving Beth tied up
Shotrow wrote: 2 years ago
Kind of funny they left her tied up though. XD
Not nice, agreed, but it is kinda funny
BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 years ago
certainly it would be a boring story if they all just ran away.
Exactly. No running away on this ghost hunt.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 003 *Sammy* 14/09)
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2022 9:05 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Sun Sep 18, 2022 9:39 pm
by Caesar73
I really like the ghostbuster like setting! Well done [mention]RopeBunny[/mention] ! I hope the ghost will show the wannabe ghostbusters the ropes soon

Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2022 2:10 am
by BlissfulMisery
What is interesting is that the ghost has not shown up again (or even given a sign of its presence). Perhaps it operates under some sorts of rules and limits (or certain events trigger it's presence).
Or perhaps it just has a sense of dramatic tension.
Either way, wonder who is getting kidnapped next.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2022 2:41 am
by GreyLord
BlissfulMisery wrote: 2 years ago
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Either way, wonder who is getting kidnapped next.
That is one lamebrain gaggle of girls you have assembled, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. Like [mention]BlissfulMisery[/mention], I am wondering who is getting kidnapped next. Good work.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2022 6:13 am
by Nainur
It is so great a story-telling!
The banter ... the cockyness ... the chaotic approach... excellent. Where's the video?

Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Mon Sep 19, 2022 7:13 pm
by Shotrow
Wonder what Lucille's up to now. Those girls are certainly not making it difficult for her.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2022 6:10 am
by Caesar73
Shotrow wrote: 2 years ago
Wonder what Lucille's up to now. Those girls are certainly not making it difficult for her.
Indeed, so far an easy job for the ghost in residence. Our Ghostbusters are more than a bit clumsy

Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Tue Sep 20, 2022 6:45 pm
by Bound to Please
A new RopeBunny story! This makes me happy.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Sun Sep 25, 2022 9:11 pm
by RopeBunny
Nainur wrote: 2 years ago
Where's the video?
Yes. Indeed. I'd love to watch whatever the girls final YouTube offering looks like
Bound to Please wrote: 2 years ago
A new RopeBunny story! This makes me happy.
Thank you.
To all of you for the continued comments. More chapters are coming. Sometimes things take longer then at other times, but rest assured I am working on this as time allows

Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 004 *Michelle* 18/09)
Posted: Tue Sep 27, 2022 9:54 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 *Lucille* 27/09)
Posted: Wed Sep 28, 2022 12:21 pm
by GreyLord
Excellent description from Lucille's POV, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. Very well done.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 *Lucille* 27/09)
Posted: Thu Sep 29, 2022 11:39 pm
by BlissfulMisery
Lucille strikes again! Nice to get a bit more background/character for her, even if it does not currently seem likely she is going to interact with anyone else in an anything resembling 'normal' way.
Wonder if they are going to leave her tied up too.
Nice symbolism/juxtaposition/wordplay with the wolf vs rabbit, esp with tying into the name. Pretty amusing.
Overall, another enjoyable chapter, especially since it is once again from the ghost's very unique point of view.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW CHAPTER 005 *Lucille* 27/09)
Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2022 9:06 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW 006 *Sammy* October 2nd)
Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2022 9:56 am
by Nainur
you are so very good in creating a vibe of mystery, spine tingling intensity and foreshadowing the actual capture...
brilliant.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW 006 *Sammy* October 2nd)
Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2022 10:41 am
by Caesar73
Nainur wrote: 2 years ago
you are so very good in creating a vibe of mystery, spine tingling intensity and foreshadowing the actual capture...
brilliant.
I love the way you create that really really creepy Atmospehre. My personal Highlight? The sudden appearance of Lucille

Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW 006 *Sammy* October 2nd)
Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2022 11:38 am
by GreyLord
And I've always thought that Halloween was a dull holiday, [mention]RopeBunny[/mention]. Your well written story is making me rethink that. Well done.
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW 006 *Sammy* October 2nd)
Posted: Mon Oct 03, 2022 10:10 pm
by RopeBunny
Caesar73 wrote: 2 years ago
Nainur wrote: 2 years ago
you are so very good in creating a vibe of mystery, spine tingling intensity and foreshadowing the actual capture...
brilliant.
I love the way you create that really really creepy Atmospehre. My personal Highlight? The sudden appearance of Lucille
Thank you both. I'm having lots of fun writing this story, doing creepy stuff. I'm glad it's all coming across.
GreyLord wrote: 2 years ago
Your well written story is making me rethink that. Well done.
I'm glad you're enjoying this too. Thanks

Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW 006 *Sammy* October 2nd)
Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2022 3:31 am
by BlissfulMisery
Hey,
Yet another fun chapter.
Lucille seems the most interested in those who run... But even so, the old saying about only needing to run faster then your friend probably still applies.
It is interesting that she is depicted as giggling from their point of view, because from her own point of view she seems much more morose, almost angry.
Of course this is probably the only entertainment she gets, so you know, have to get your laughs where you can...
Either way, seems like another person is about to get picked off. I wonder if they will start panicking once they realize there are only a few of them left...
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW 006 *Sammy* October 2nd)
Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2022 9:37 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW INTERLUDE 04/10)
Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2022 10:58 pm
by Caesar73
Nice change of pace!
Re: Lupin Manor (f+/f+) (NEW INTERLUDE 04/10)
Posted: Tue Oct 04, 2022 11:58 pm
by BlissfulMisery
Ramping up... and then ramping down... At least for now.
Well, Lucille certainly has a sufficiently tragic backstory to be a proper spooky ghost.