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Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 17th*

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 10:34 am
by RopeBunny
[mention]slackywacky[/mention] Wow. I knew a tiny bit of that. Of course the usual to say 'half past....' I knew.

But, all the history and backstory, everything else. Interesting.

Thank you.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 17th*

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 10:40 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 11:53 am
by JulieG
So Once readybto.be tied up in PJs all day. If Chrome sleeps.over could it be all.weekend?

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 9:34 pm
by RopeBunny
JulieG wrote: 3 years ago could it be all.weekend?
Maybe?

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Wed Apr 20, 2022 10:18 pm
by TightsBound
RopeBunny wrote: 3 years ago
JulieG wrote: 3 years ago could it be all.weekend?
Maybe?
Maybe usually means yes! 😁
Another great chapter! I’m loving her journey of discovery. She seems to be coming to terms with loving it, but still isn’t sure and doesn’t entirely understand why. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 3:20 am
by Trammel
This story is fantastic. Great writing. At first the sentence fragments were a tad hard to get used to but they really make it, and the description of the experience is superb. Looking forward to more! :)

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 7:06 am
by RopeBunny
TightsBound wrote: 3 years ago
RopeBunny wrote: 3 years ago
JulieG wrote: 3 years ago could it be all.weekend?
Maybe?
Maybe usually means yes! 😁
It does? :lol:
Trammel wrote: 3 years ago At first the sentence fragments were a tad hard to get used to
Sorry. I've a tendency at times to use prehaps too many commas. Plus, because of (I think it comes from?) a book I enjoy, at times I'll finish a sentence mid flow, then continue.

I'm kinda trying to write how the lead character thinks or speaks.

Great to read that you're enjoying my story anyway :D

Thanks for commenting.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 11:42 am
by Trammel
[mention]RopeBunny[/mention] please don't misunderstand. Your writing style is a tad unconventional but once I figured it out I really like it. There is nothing to apologize for. It comes across as a very natural stream of thoughts and makes for a very compelling story. I'm looking forward to what comes next. Great job! :)

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 17th*

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 7:31 pm
by slackywacky
RopeBunny wrote: 3 years ago "Going to let me in?"
Oh oh, what's next? A very enjoyable story.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2022 10:04 pm
by FabianStr2016
What a story so far! Keep continuing!

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER April 20th*

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 1:01 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER Friday April 22nd*

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 5:34 pm
by JulieG
[mention]RopeBunny[/mention] hmm. 14 year old girl topless (or worse naked). Will get this story removed and could get.you banned. Tread carefully and respect board rules.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER Friday April 22nd*

Posted: Fri Apr 22, 2022 7:25 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER Friday April 22nd*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 4:44 am
by Solarbeast
In all the writing I’ve read from you on this site I’ve never thought you were violating any rules. Your stories are continuously good each time you write one. I’m hoping you continue this story in this section, but if you really want, or to quell the fear of others, I’d be happy to move the story to the adult section.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER Friday April 22nd*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 7:57 am
by FabianStr2016
Yeah, why don't you move the story to the adult part? It is a great story, and I think it would be cool if you could write everything you want to

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER Friday April 22nd*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 8:04 am
by RopeBunny
Solarbeast wrote: 3 years ago I’m hoping you continue this story in this section
This is what I'm going to do. I've thought it through, my options: kill the story here, re-write it in the adult section with grown ups not school girls of course. And I want to carry on.

In truth I enjoy the challenge. There's plenty about TUGs that's sexual, and whilst of course not every tie up has to lead to more, it's very easy to make it happen. When I do come here to the 'Everyone' section I enjoy trying to keep things fun.

Thank you all, for the views and (I hope continued) comments :D

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER Friday April 22nd*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 8:15 am
by RopeBunny
FabianStr2016 wrote: 3 years ago Yeah, why don't you move the story to the adult part?
Going to keep it here, as per my previous post. Had I moved/restarted it in the adult thread it would've changed the story beyond what I'm trying to make it.

Thanks for commenting :D

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER Friday April 22nd*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 4:12 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER (moving on) 23rd April*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 6:31 pm
by JulieG
An excellent new part. So descriptive are could picture the nervous exchanges and the turmoil in your head.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER (moving on) 23rd April*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 6:48 pm
by Trammel
[mention]RopeBunny[/mention] your writng is superb.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER (moving on) 23rd April*

Posted: Sat Apr 23, 2022 8:51 pm
by RopeBunny
JulieG wrote: 3 years ago An excellent new part.
Trammel wrote: 3 years ago your writng is superb.
Thank you both :D

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER (moving on) 23rd April*

Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2022 3:53 am
by TightsBound
Excellent chapter. With the dialog and very intricate character development, and of course the tie up, this might be your best work. Considering your portfolio, that is saying something!

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER (moving on) 23rd April*

Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2022 5:46 pm
by Dpsiic
Coming along nicely. Looking forward to seeing where this is going.

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER (moving on) 23rd April*

Posted: Sun Apr 24, 2022 11:57 pm
by Mask6190
Another excellent chapter Ropebunny! The way you describe Luce's reactions to her bondage is well done :D

Re: The Box (f+/f+) *NEW CHAPTER (moving on) 23rd April*

Posted: Mon Apr 25, 2022 12:36 am
by slackywacky
That was... WOW... a great chapter. I like the way you write. The way you give us insight in the feelings of Luce, very well done.
Can't wait for the next chapter...