The Box (f+/f+)

[RopeBunny]

[mention]slackywacky[/mention] Wow. I knew a tiny bit of that. Of course the usual to say 'half past....' I knew.

But, all the history and backstory, everything else. Interesting.

Thank you.

[RopeBunny]

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[JulieG]

So Once readybto.be tied up in PJs all day. If Chrome sleeps.over could it be all.weekend?

[RopeBunny]

could it be all.weekend?

Maybe?

[TightsBound]

could it be all.weekend?

Maybe?

Maybe usually means yes!
Another great chapter! I’m loving her journey of discovery. She seems to be coming to terms with loving it, but still isn’t sure and doesn’t entirely understand why. I can’t wait to see what happens next!

[Trammel]

This story is fantastic. Great writing. At first the sentence fragments were a tad hard to get used to but they really make it, and the description of the experience is superb. Looking forward to more!

[RopeBunny]

could it be all.weekend?

Maybe?

Maybe usually means yes!

It does?

At first the sentence fragments were a tad hard to get used to

Sorry. I've a tendency at times to use prehaps too many commas. Plus, because of (I think it comes from?) a book I enjoy, at times I'll finish a sentence mid flow, then continue.

I'm kinda trying to write how the lead character thinks or speaks.

Great to read that you're enjoying my story anyway

Thanks for commenting.

[Trammel]

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention] please don't misunderstand. Your writing style is a tad unconventional but once I figured it out I really like it. There is nothing to apologize for. It comes across as a very natural stream of thoughts and makes for a very compelling story. I'm looking forward to what comes next. Great job!

[slackywacky]

"Going to let me in?"

Oh oh, what's next? A very enjoyable story.

[FabianStr2016]

What a story so far! Keep continuing!

[RopeBunny]

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[JulieG]

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention] hmm. 14 year old girl topless (or worse naked). Will get this story removed and could get.you banned. Tread carefully and respect board rules.

[RopeBunny]

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[Solarbeast]

In all the writing I’ve read from you on this site I’ve never thought you were violating any rules. Your stories are continuously good each time you write one. I’m hoping you continue this story in this section, but if you really want, or to quell the fear of others, I’d be happy to move the story to the adult section.

[FabianStr2016]

Yeah, why don't you move the story to the adult part? It is a great story, and I think it would be cool if you could write everything you want to

[RopeBunny]

I’m hoping you continue this story in this section

This is what I'm going to do. I've thought it through, my options: kill the story here, re-write it in the adult section with grown ups not school girls of course. And I want to carry on.

In truth I enjoy the challenge. There's plenty about TUGs that's sexual, and whilst of course not every tie up has to lead to more, it's very easy to make it happen. When I do come here to the 'Everyone' section I enjoy trying to keep things fun.

Thank you all, for the views and (I hope continued) comments

[RopeBunny]

Yeah, why don't you move the story to the adult part?

Going to keep it here, as per my previous post. Had I moved/restarted it in the adult thread it would've changed the story beyond what I'm trying to make it.

Thanks for commenting

[RopeBunny]

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[JulieG]

An excellent new part. So descriptive are could picture the nervous exchanges and the turmoil in your head.

[Trammel]

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention] your writng is superb.

[RopeBunny]

An excellent new part.

your writng is superb.

Thank you both

[TightsBound]

Excellent chapter. With the dialog and very intricate character development, and of course the tie up, this might be your best work. Considering your portfolio, that is saying something!

[Dpsiic]

Coming along nicely. Looking forward to seeing where this is going.

[Mask6190]

Another excellent chapter Ropebunny! The way you describe Luce's reactions to her bondage is well done

[slackywacky]

That was... WOW... a great chapter. I like the way you write. The way you give us insight in the feelings of Luce, very well done.
Can't wait for the next chapter...