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Re: Not Quite According to Plan (M/mm)
Posted: Mon Apr 04, 2022 8:52 am
by Killua
Nice story. You wrote it in a way msking the readers care for the twins. I really liked the story and I'm glad they git rescued. I still want to know who was "their" Micheal.
Re: Not Quite According to Plan (M/mm)
Posted: Tue Apr 05, 2022 12:04 am
by alkaid_
hey... hey...hey!!!!
what we got here!!! an inocent dude being caught by cops and accused of kidnapping charges!?!?!!
and at the end found guilty even when the kids sayed they dont think he was his kidnapper... justice sistem fail again!!!
but at the end... nice story...
love the way like dan and seb ended tied and mummified and next being hanging from their ankles... that were awesome!!!!
Re: Not Quite According to Plan (M/mm)
Posted: Fri Mar 14, 2025 6:25 pm
by adams.keeper
I really enjoyed this story so I had to join the forum to see if you had written more. Great work!
Re: Not Quite According to Plan (M/mm)
Posted: Tue Jun 03, 2025 11:07 pm
by brbfuntie
Wow cool story
