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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 004 added Jan 6th]

Posted: Thu Jan 07, 2021 9:15 am
by NotSeen
RopeBunny wrote: 4 years ago Rest assured all will become clear.

Soon.... :D
Do take all the time you need. As in any good story, getting there is (at least) half the fun.

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 004 added Jan 6th]

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2021 12:48 am
by RopeBunny
Rest assured I shall ;)

The 'soon' comment was mostly my attempt at being dramatic :lol: . And the fact I'm actually several chapters ahead with writing this, powering along so to speak :D , writing and then going back to change things based on something I've just added in. Having fun really.

Anyway, next part appearing....

Soon ;) :lol:

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 004 added Jan 6th]

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2021 7:28 am
by Nainur
cool: author's having fun! Now, that's a jolly concept!
:lol: :lol: :lol:
Love to read this! 8-)

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 004 added Jan 6th]

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2021 9:24 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 005 added Jan 9th]

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2021 9:55 am
by Nainur
if this going on they might need an even bigger building, huh? Great news! :D

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 005 added Jan 9th]

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2021 10:56 am
by tickletied84
The Church is certainly increasing in size - lovely update and good job you're keeping those pesky boys out of the way!

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 005 added Jan 9th]

Posted: Sat Jan 09, 2021 12:16 pm
by Caesar73
tickletied84 wrote: 4 years ago The Church is certainly increasing in size - lovely update and good job you're keeping those pesky boys out of the way!
Absolutely. The number of believers grows, which is good. I like that church :)

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 005 added Jan 9th]

Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2021 1:17 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, why not keep it flowing, 006 up Jan 10th]

Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2021 2:40 pm
by Nainur
"work and pray" are old cloister-rules indeed. Very proper!
But stealing? I do not think so... uh-oh!

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, why not keep it flowing, 006 up Jan 10th]

Posted: Sun Jan 10, 2021 7:19 pm
by tickletied84
Abusing privileges given by Michelle...although I guess at least India didn't take advantage of the tied girls!

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, why not keep it flowing, 006 up Jan 10th]

Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2021 8:18 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 007 posted and up Jan 12th]

Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2021 8:44 am
by BoundJana
Another great, exciting addition ^-^ this story quickly turns into one of my all-time favorites ^-^

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 007 posted and up Jan 12th]

Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2021 8:55 am
by tickletied84
Fantastic twist to the story, not only getting free but releasing her bully and drinking wine. Loved the tender aspect of Foxtrot/Petra encouraging Denise that she's come so far. I'm torn between wanting their nighttime adventures continuing, and Michelle catching and 'punishing' them!

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 007 posted and up Jan 12th]

Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2021 9:07 am
by Caesar73
tickletied84 wrote: 4 years ago Fantastic twist to the story, not only getting free but releasing her bully and drinking wine. Loved the tender aspect of Foxtrot/Petra encouraging Denise that she's come so far. I'm torn between wanting their nighttime adventures continuing, and Michelle catching and 'punishing' them!
My feelings exactly :)

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 007 posted and up Jan 12th]

Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2021 3:21 pm
by Nainur
superb stuff!
I sense a 'take over' in the making...

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 007 posted and up Jan 12th]

Posted: Tue Jan 12, 2021 10:36 pm
by RopeBunny
Thank you all, for the continued comments, and for reading this as it develops :D . It's good to have company along for the ride.

[mention]tickletied84[/mention] the part you refer to, with the mirror, was one of the first 'scenes' I came up with for the story. I'm glad it came across well.

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 007 posted and up Jan 12th]

Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2021 8:40 am
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 008 added Jan 15th]

Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2021 9:45 am
by tickletied84
Wonderfully descriptive update - the mix of fear of being caught, to exploring the mysterious room 3, through teenage fantasies and then exposure in a cliff hanger...just great!

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 008 added Jan 15th]

Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2021 2:43 pm
by Nainur
so detailed!!!

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 008 added Jan 15th]

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2021 7:58 am
by sian26uk
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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 008 added Jan 15th]

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2021 10:38 pm
by RopeBunny
[mention]sian26uk[/mention] thanks for joining us :D and for commenting.

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 008 added Jan 15th]

Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2021 11:31 pm
by sian26uk
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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW, 008 added Jan 15th]

Posted: Sun Jan 17, 2021 10:26 pm
by RopeBunny
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Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 009 added Jan 17th]

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2021 9:29 am
by tickletied84
Well, the tale gets more complex, yet more intriguing! I'm really starting to want your characters to succeed in finding out what/who's behind the organisation - even if it has been good for them.

They need to be careful not to slip back into bad habits though...almost caught again.

Re: The Church of Silence (F+/F+) [NEW 009 added Jan 17th]

Posted: Mon Jan 18, 2021 9:36 am
by Nainur
tickletied84 wrote: 4 years ago Well, the tale gets more complex, yet more intriguing! I'm really starting to want your characters to succeed in finding out what/who's behind the organisation - even if it has been good for them.

They need to be careful not to slip back into bad habits though...almost caught again.
couldn't phrased it better! Could be very dangerous to stay - why not building their own chapter of the order? ;)