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Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 9:41 am
by GoBucks
I'm happy to explore anything more with this story, but I'm going to vote A and F. Like the others said, I feel like A is broad and likely overlaps some with the other choices and you'd still get to see his interactions with the other guys.
F- I'd like to see more of Mark getting humiliated by his rival Matt. He avoided getting gassed like his brother was and I think he needs to experience that! I know this option doesn't mean it will play out like that, but I hope!
The Brody options intrigue me, but I'm not all that into role reversal and seeing an alpha type dominated. Would still love to see him fighting to make Sammy his though.
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 11:09 am
by Bound Down
I think A and H could both be the most interesting (all of them would be). I'd love to see Andrew share more toys and ideas with the team.
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 12:11 pm
by Ossassin
E & F are my go tos, they sound fun.
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 12:44 pm
by ChairBoy
G without a doubt. I want to see how they interact with victims that struggle and are bratty, versus victims that instantly sub out to giant doms
And b. I do want to see how they keep getting away with it.
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *COMPLETE & ILLUSTRATED*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 1:18 pm
by Bradstick
bondagefreak wrote: 1 day ago
A - A DAY IN THE LIFE OF SAMMY, DETAILING THE DUTIES AND EXPECTATIONS SURROUNDING HIS NEW ROLE.
C - SAMMY'S CONTRASTING RELATIONSHIPS WITH CHAD, HUNTER, MATT, & BRODY.
I choose A and C. I will say that one thing I did not like about this story is we never go to know the inner thoughts of Sammy. I really want to read a story from Sammy perspective.
A story where we get to see what it’s like being Chad’s plaything but also managing his role with other three would be very interesting. Not to say I didn’t like the story but I definitely love a story from the sub’s perspective.
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 3:28 pm
by vincenzotognolo22
I would choose H and I, Brody and Andrew are two of my favorites characters ever
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 9:29 pm
by Msueta@2
I go with G and I
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *COMPLETE & ILLUSTRATED*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 11:51 pm
by bondagefreak
Bradstick wrote: 22 hours ago
I will say that one thing I did not like about this story is we never go to know the inner thoughts of Sammy. I really want to read a story from Sammy perspective.
Heresy!!! Nah, I understand, buddy-boi. I know you've already come to realise this, but my decision to construct this tale around Mark's narration was very much deliberate. All of my lengthy tales are told from the submissive/victim's point of view. I really wanted to break from this routine, not only for the sake of narrative diversification, but also for my own enjoyment.
Mark was able to provide us with a mostly unbiased, almost 3rd-person style narration, right up to the point where things began revolving around his own person, during the late-night hazing. It would have broken the story's neutral/distant narration completely had we magically jumped into Sammy's head. I also feel it would have been very redundant, seeing as how Jake's tale is running simultaneously with this one. I won't completely bar the possibility of having Sam narrate a sequel, but I won't hide the fact that I have no immediate plans for it. Either way, we'll see.
Re: THE TWINK & THE JOCK (M+/M) *READER QUESTION*
Posted: Fri Aug 01, 2025 11:57 pm
by JustKindaCurious
I'm gonna pick A and D
A, cause it has the most potential for a diverse storytelling, since there are multiple angles and directions to write about
D, cause I'm a sucker for stories in which someone is in a lower position, surrounded by oppressing personalities. A potential deep dive in Sam's psyche surrounding that could be interesting
I like basically all the Sammy options cause I identify with him the most, the one with the different relationships is interesting too, but A and D are ultimately my picks