Stories of Tie Up Games

Beaumains wrote: 3 years ago
My only question is, maybe it was already answered, why is Brooke so attracted to bondage and wanting this career. Would Jessica or any other friend not been able to tie Brooke up before she would decide to do a porn?

Hey Glad you found my story. Glad you liked it.

Your question. I'm not sure if I ever delved deep into her reasoning? I've had a look back. And in 001 Brooke does say she found bondage at fifteen thanks to her Mums lousy internet parental blocks. From there the fascination grew, and she decided she wanted bondage to be a career instead of some occasional adult fun.

I hope that helps? No doubt I could've gone into things more, I was probably in a hurry to get the story moving though.

Anyway. Enjoy.

I totally understand you did not give an entire reasoning. It's quite hard to get a character that really wants to get into serious bondage, but also is a complete novice. Having tried something in those 3 years, self-bondage, asking a friend, or whatever, would have seem a more logical step (for me, at least). Only, skipping some steps in that reasoning is the obvious solution if you want a complete beginner (which is often very charming) and, as this tale is (sadly) fictional, is completely alright. Or maybe you intend to do it this way and is Brooke truly naive and pursuing a fairy tale dream.

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Brooke really loves danger, and so far, three groups of strangers have had her in their possession. I kinda expect that this kink ball is quite safe, as any story of someone getting abused/harmed would end the entire thing. On the other hand, these two cellmates seem to be the craziest so far. A very nice cliffhanger.

Brooke really is getting herself into situations - now she's getting frustrated at just being ignored. Love the scene where the guys are playing cards and just using her as a table - she's expecting to get some proper attention but they're more interested in cards and their own girls

> We can do whatever we want

Well, within the limits of the fact you are locked in a cage
Great chapter.

Thanks all for the continued comments.

Now.
There have been, as we've gone along this journey, a small scattering of comments relating to things like consequences and how lucky Plymouth is on her bondage journey.
At the start of all this I almost called this story: 'The Rise, Fall, and Rise of Plymouth.

FAIR WARNING.
This next chapter, below, is by my usual standards quite dark.
In my original sketched story plan I wanted this to happen, for it not to be all roses. Every rise has to come with at least one stumbling block. This. Clive and the ball. Is Brooke's.

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Wow!!! That was one great chapter. Well told. From the being pushed over the line in the cage to the rescue by Lili. Wonderful.

Such a deep storyline, the realities of life hitting home for both Lili and Brooke. Very glad that Brooke has learnt her lesson without being truly hurt, and now - let's hope that true love blossoms

This was quite the chapter, and it was no problem it was dark. Actually, I gad expected something much worse when I read that. The sweet ending made up for a lot. Also, I like you added a lot more backstory. Well done!

Thanks, for the comments, I'm glad it all came across well.

Normally takes several days of dipping in and out, writing whenever I have time and am feeling in a TUGs mood, but that chapter I knocked out in almost one sitting. Brookes ordeal and Lili's backstory all felt quite intense, to me at least. And it all just flowed out.

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Awwww. Once again, adorable, wonderful and, well, you doing what you do so well. A fine chapter, echoes of past hurts and all. Nice to see Brooke&Lili's relationship grow - and her mom taking it in stride. Lovely.

What a nice turn of events. From the supportive Mom to Plymouth rising to to top to Lil being a great sport. Best wishes for you keeping up your good work. Readers want to know where she will go from here.

Fabulous - such a great mix of love, cheekiness, family loyalty - the story that just keeps on giving!

It's very nice to see how much love Brooke receives from Lili and her mother. Her career choice is accepted, and her success seems to be infinite. The sky is the limit, and she seems to have learned from her failures. It was a hard lesson with a bad ending, but it could have been worse. Good stuff!

Las Vegas here we come... but... whatever happens in Vegas stays in Vegas, so how will we know what happened?
Great update.

All five of you, thank you. At least one part of each of those most recent comments bought a smile to my face

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Congratulations, Plymouth. It was nice that Mom was there. Too bad they didn't find a way for Lili too. Great writing.

Oh ,wow, Brooke does it again. Her luck has returned. A very good chapter.

And, uh, I cannot help to wonder about the interaction of Roman with Brooke's mother. Are they up to something?

Plymouth rising (MF+/F+) (NEW 025 THE END? August 8th)

Oh noes? Surely not the end?

Then again, the award ceremony would be a fitting place to end - from a total novice to an industry star. Quite a trip for Plymouth, ups and downs and all.

...though, I'd love to see some kind of denouement for Brooke and Lili (okay, not a wedding, no, but a kind of 'happily ever after' or at least 'happily for now, whoever knows what tomorrow may bring').

NotSeen wrote: 3 years ago Surely not the end?

This chapter marks an end of sorts. The awards ceremony was the final part of my pre story plan, I've written every twist and turn I set out to in the beginning.

So, I could end things here. It does feel like a good ending.

But I've enjoyed writing Plymouth. Is there an appetite for more?
And if so, what?

Any ideas feel free to pass them on, via post or message. Might even have to do a poll, if I can think of enough choices.

[mention]RopeBunny[/mention], this has been a splendid story, well written, enjoyable to read. I would truly hate to say goodby to Plymouth and I'm hoping that you will see fit to continuing it. Some possible threads for future stories:

1) A trip to Japan with a good introduction to shibari and kimbaku.

2) Another bondage convention where she gets tickets for her lawn maintenance coworkers. Maybe even so light play with some of them.

3) A bondage challenge between Brooke and Lili.

4) A bondage business venture with Brooke and Lili.

Of course, we know your fertile imagination could come up with a dozen more in the time I thought of these four.