Small Town's Dark Secret (M+/M+) FINISHED

[DeeperThanRed]

What an amazing ending!

Almost everyone got more or less happy endings and Gimp's revenge was simply glorious Great job on this story - what initially appeared to be a simple anthology story ended up being so captivating and well-written! Thanks a lot for sharing this with us.

[blackbound]

I have to agree with @DeeperThanRed on all counts.

Who knows, maybe the Punished and the Old Master will end up as tributes together next year?

[Bootmark]

Incredible from beginning to end!

[CaptiveDan]

What an amazing ending!

Almost everyone got more or less happy endings and Gimp's revenge was simply glorious Great job on this story - what initially appeared to be a simple anthology story ended up being so captivating and well-written! Thanks a lot for sharing this with us.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I'm happy the ending came together and was satisfying! I had a lot of fun writing the gimp's revenge, I feel like he (and his victim) deserved it the most

[CaptiveDan]

I have to agree with @DeeperThanRed on all counts.

Who knows, maybe the Punished and the Old Master will end up as tributes together next year?

Very very likely!

I have to say, your comments throughout the story have been both really supportive AND had a impact on the finale. I definitely thought a lot more about the Gimp because of your interest in his situation which ended up driving the "continued bondage" theme of a few of the epilogues.

I'm really enjoying reading your current story and seeing the long term bondage elements there. I'm always fascinated (as someone who irl wouldn't want to be restrained for more than maybe a weekend at a time) by the idea and mechanics of keeping a long term prisoner - as evidenced by the Gimp and Punished stories

[CaptiveDan]

Incredible from beginning to end!

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

[CaptiveDan]

Gonna make a few short stories next (need a break from long forms) but I do have an idea to one day return to the small Iowa town for town wide game of bondage and betrayal

[Camguy2050]

fantastic
bound gimp all the way for me
i would enjoy that so much

[ChairBoy]

I've been horny af for some cop content so I went to search and found a chapter from your story! im starting the first one now and ill tell you what I think (:

[ChairBoy]

oh fuck I just read the first opening epilogue and how interesting?!

[Straitjacketed]

Belatedly enjoying this one: disparate bondage elements with a central vibe that reminds me, oddly, of Stephen King (maybe your profile name should be "Stephen Kink"? ) with the cornfield motif, or maybe the classic 1948 short story 'The Lottery', by Shirley Jackson.

With me, it's the different captors who stand out, especially. Favourites were the cop and, most of all, the mechanic.

[CaptiveDan]

fantastic
bound gimp all the way for me
i would enjoy that so much

Thanks! Glad you like it. Gimp has been pretty popular, which I guess makes sense since he gets the most time in captivity.

I've been horny af for some cop content so I went to search and found a chapter from your story! im starting the first one now and ill tell you what I think (:

Yay! I hope you like it! Let me know how the cop chapters were once you get to them

Belatedly enjoying this one: disparate bondage elements with a central vibe that reminds me, oddly, of Stephen King (maybe your profile name should be "Stephen Kink"? ) with the cornfield motif, or maybe the classic 1948 short story 'The Lottery', by Shirley Jackson.

With me, it's the different captors who stand out, especially. Favourites were the cop and, most of all, the mechanic.

Glad you're enjoying it! Being compared to Stephen King is an honor. I feel like there's alot of similarities between horror, comedy, and erotic storytelling

[ChairBoy]

I've been horny af for some cop content so I went to search and found a chapter from your story! im starting the first one now and ill tell you what I think (:

Yay! I hope you like it! Let me know how the cop chapters were once you get to them

I LOVED THEM! I am super into struggle, domination, smother, and forcing so there was so many characters and situations I loved!
I love the man punished for the past, the flat tire, the pornstar?! All the surprise things I really fucked with (: the only criticism I have artistically would be in the last chapter when everyone is getting there last paragraph the officers part is first and recounts the two getting shocked, and tortured, I would’ve preferred the officers part last because I instantly skipped to the details of the guy getting tortured and spoiled it. But… I think I was just crazy horny over this story haha. I loved this story! Those parts truly made the story! I was in the search bar searching “cop” and this story popped up!

[ChairBoy]

I feel as if this story needs to by hyped up more lol