Plymouth and Deborah (MF+/F+) *FINISHED*

[RopeBunny]

This story is something I've daydreamed, worked on, ditched and binned only to begin again along a slightly different tack, for some time.

It would appear that, like Plymouth, I'm incapable of leaving Deborah well enough alone....

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[Caesar73]

Hot stuff, Seems like Deborah and Plymouth are stuck - for now. Excellent work.

[BlissfulMisery]

Missed this initially, but seems like a promising little story!

It would appear that, like Plymouth, I'm incapable of leaving Deborah well enough alone....

And it seems *you* cannot leave Plymouth well enough alone

Except.

As time passed, days into weeks, I couldn't shake the recurring doubts.

Why had I risen up?

With Deborah I'd had what I'd always dreamed, total constant submission. And she'd clearly been as into it as me.

So, why had I forced the change?

Not that she is listening, being a figment of imagination, but because it was feeding what is an addictive streak in her personality, consuming her entire life? Submission can feel amazing, can be almost intoxicating, but much like anything, can become problematic if taken to the extreme. Some part of her realized that, even if not entirely consciously, and now she is back into a situation where that desire can run unchecked once again...

Of course it is much easier to see that from the outside (and helped further by the framing of the tale).

Hopefully she realizes the problem - and perhaps strikes a better balance in her life going forward.

But, more 'serious' things aside, a fun bit of introduction - an opportunity for her to catch up with Deborah, and clearly there is quite the knot of complicated feelings to untangle there...

Interested to see where it goes.


Also a very minor typo in chapter 2:

I can feel the heat, and sweat, of Deborah pressed into me, the stubble of her public hair rubbing my crotch as we both shift, trying to get comfortable in the too small space.

'Public' should be 'pubic'. Obvious in hindsight, but I can see how it slipped, being 'technically correct'.

[RopeBunny]

'Public' should be 'pubic'. Obvious in hindsight, but I can see how it slipped, being 'technically correct'.

Oops I'll fix it now.

Hot stuff, Seems like Deborah and Plymouth are stuck - for now. Excellent work.

Missed this initially, but seems like a promising little story!

Thank you both.

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[BlissfulMisery]

Seems Plymouth is in a bit of trouble, especially since Alice is apparently the type to share her toys

But then came Deborah. Who trussed me and owned me. Who teased and used me however, whenever, she desired. Deborah, who sometimes whipped me. And, because she had my total submission the pain didn't register the same way anymore. As the pet, the toy, kept locked away for hours on end. Ignored. Any attention was good.

I craved it. Loved it. Wanted it.

Begged her for more.

The stinging, fire running through me, red hot at the point of contact. Lit me up, making my pussy throb, my helpless inability to stop her abusing me only made me more horny. A spiral down and down, want and need and please more more more.

Not much to say other then a great description.

Led through Alice's flat, the layout to which I don't know anyway, we finally stop.

To be fair, she has been there for two days now.

Overall a fine depiction of Plymouth's descent into submission. Captures well both the attractiveness of such, and the obvious danger, with how she is very quickly forgetting herself and just letting it happen, drinking from the hose of dominance aimed at her as if she were dehydrated. In a way I suppose she is.

But too much of anything can be quite dangerous, and Alice seems to have a very blasé attitude about the whole thing - there is a very good reason one should have significant trust in another before doing such a thing with them.

But my buzz, my base level tingle of excitement and arousal, never vanishes. I'm betrayed by my submission loving mind which overrides or flat out ignores issues of safety and my basic rights. Instead, locked away, at the complete mercy of Alice and Steph, awaiting their pleasure.

All I feel is horny.

Problem? What problem?

What problem indeed... I wonder how long it will take to catch herself this time. Or if she even will, since she is being force fed exactly what she wants.

As for the cliffhanger, I suspect Deborah is in quite a bind (hah) - and I also suspect Plymouth might be joining her soon...

[Switchgirl]

Great to see Plymouth back - though she seems to have got into trouble! Love the story and the fact that’s Plymouth’s need to be owned has risen up again…..

[TightsBound]

Holy. Wow. Words. Escape.

Just like Plymouth, I’m finding myself being pulled back into this world you’ve created, with writing that is both incredibly beautiful and touching and insanely hot at the same time.

Take me further down the rabbit hole.

[RopeBunny]

Love the story and the fact that’s Plymouth’s need to be owned has risen up again…..

It definitely has.

Basically this whole story came about because I really really loved writing Plymouth being owned before, way back before.

Have always regretted stopping it, bottling out. So, here I am, determined to go the distance, to plunge all the way down.

Might get dark, fair warning.

Holy. Wow. Words. Escape.

Just like Plymouth, I’m finding myself being pulled back into this world you’ve created, with writing that is both incredibly beautiful and touching and insanely hot at the same time.

Take me further down the rabbit hole.

Hey. Thanks.

And as I just said, we're definitely going further down/in.

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[Switchgirl]

Wow. What an episode! Enough bondage in that to last a whole story. Brooke is disappearing down the sub rabbithole (wait a minute..) with her once owner..

[RopeBunny]

Wow. What an episode! Enough bondage in that to last a whole story.

I did kinda go all out there huh

Was fun to write.

[BlissfulMisery]

Seems Plymouth and Deborah are living the dream... Or perhaps the nightmare - with such things, it all depends on your point of view I suppose.

Steph certainly seems to have a harsher streak - which seems to have rubbed off on Alice.

They know what they're doing, teaching us to want the punishment. Teaching us to enjoy it, associating the whipping with a fierce intense climax.

Indeed they do

And has been mentioned, down the rabbit-hole indeed. An addiction fed endlessly... I suspect eventually to the breaking point.

Was fun to write.

I can tell! Was a fun read.

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[Switchgirl]

The ability of Brooke to switch from sub to domme is breathtaking. Her libido overrides all rational thought - lucky her!!

Great as always

[RopeBunny]

The ability of Brooke to switch from sub to domme is breathtaking. Her libido overrides all rational thought - lucky her!!

Great as always

Writing my Plymouth stories I've always attempted to treat Brooke and Plymouth as almost separate people.

Brooke loves bondage, she has the secret obsessions, but for Plymouth it's enjoyable, but a job first.

That's what I'm attempting (hopefully pulling off) to channel here: that Brooke is suddenly able to step back from her submissive plunge, Plymouth stepping forwards to assume a Domme 'role' at Carmen's request. Plymouth able to ignore the urges and greater want to be helpless.

Of course, this will all be fine until Plymouth’s job is done, and surrender loving Brooke returns

Thanks for commenting.

[BlissfulMisery]

It seems the tables have turned - to some extent.

"Ffggggmm-" Gagged attempt at speech cut off by two fingers thrust inside my forced open mouth.

"I'm Carmen." Withdrawing her fingers and sliding them immediately up inside my pussy. Raised eyebrow as she discovers how wet and ready I already am.

"I'd ask." Slowly pumping, making it hard to stand still my legs keep trying to buckle. "But frankly I don't give a fuck."

"You're mine now."

Quite the greeting

Have to agree that it is quite the swap for Brooke. Dominance and submission are very much about mindset, and it is surprising how she is able to switch so quickly from floating in happy buzzing submissive land to being very serious.

I wonder what she is looking to do - I would assume find out what is going on with Deborah? I suspect she might be in a little more trouble then Plymouth...

Well as usual, I suppose we shall see...

[RopeBunny]

Have to agree that it is quite the swap for Brooke. Dominance and submission are very much about mindset, and it is surprising how she is able to switch so quickly from floating in happy buzzing submissive land to being very serious.

Might be slightly jarring, and possibly could've been done better.

Same old story, give me a week and I'd likely write the whole thing differently

But it works.

I wanted Brooke down in the hole, but I'd reached a point where any further chapters would just be a repeat of her and Deborah being subs and pets. There's only so many ways and times I can write that.

So.

Time to change things up.

Might.

Might.

Of gone slightly overboard with this next chapter. But I like it, and so it's staying.

You'll see what I mean.

Enjoy I hope