Stories of Tie Up Games

I mean :) :lol: we jest, and I'm aware not every author sees things my way, and in fairness some of those who don't go all out on the TUGs are actually pulling in more views/comments then me. So maybe I'm in the wrong?

But, that said, we jest but for me the quota is almost a real thing, if I ...

Partly my fault, these inner observations from Brooke. Probably writing too many, too frequent, but that's what comes from writing chapter by chapter as opposed a whole novel, which you could then go through and remove at least some of the repetition.

The aim here is to show the downward spiral ...

This was my original idea, the base premise that everything else slowly grew out of.

Upset- at myself -for what I'd done to Plymouth, seeking a way back in. A new tale. And my first good thought was to pair Brooke with someone from outside the industry, for Brooke to date a non model, non rigger ...

Whether it was obvious or not I actually merged two shorter chapters: Brooke coming home to find Dorothy, followed by the initially separate Fayth coming home to find Brooke.

I had let the second part of this run away from me. That bondage quota :lol: getting filled as Fayth took advantage, but ...

:lol: definitely not going to be giving up ALL her bad habits, I'd have nothing to write :lol:



Indeed :lol:



But what I wrote there, the multiple bondage scenarios running through Brooke's head whilst she ran towards the hotel room. I'd done those awhile ago, so no, it wasn't an ...

drinking water because beer is a bad habit, something to be savoured rarely.


Now if only she were so diligent with keeping a lid on other bad habits.

Then again, if that were the case, there would be about half as much story to tell :P


It's me, on my own small phone screen. Bound and gagged ...

Might have to aim at a high multiple count in a future chapter, just for the fun of it :)



So, going for a bondage high score? :P

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"So we've got to show how Plymouth starts her day."


Well... more like 'how Plymouth wishes every day would start' :lol:


"Want to struggle?"
"For ...

That damn quota :lol:

Which to be fair I'm happy to fill. It's- for me at least -kind of a game. This is how I want the story to flow, so, how can I add bondage to that? :) :lol:


"We've had one bondage scene yes, but what about a second one?", to butcher a quote :P

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plus my favourite ...

And of course another twist and layer to it all. The fact of Brooke beginning to fall for Kira, manipulated, in part into having feelings, into wanting and missing her.



Quite the tangled web Brooke has found herself caught in... and not just metaphorically tangled either :P


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Me ...

Stop giving me ideas :lol:



:lol:



Fair. Probably could've made bikes into a somewhat third, even within the confines of what I've written above: Kira showing up at a biker meet, on a bike?

But I love the naked and cuffed on a tree stump entrance :)



Fair enough :) As I mentioned ...

Seems like conspiracy theory stuff :lol: and unfortunately I'm (this time) just not being that smart.

Which isn't to say I won't intertwine Dorothy/Brooke/Kira at some stage further down the line :)



Fair enough - but it is fun to speculate.

And are we talking intertwining in the very ...

Which, okay :lol: I can see it wasn't the strongest hint, not the best explanation of Kira's dishonesty: pretending to be a genuine guest.

Didn't want Brooke to figure it out at the time, because she's drunk, and most likely I forgot to include a post credits style scene of her asking Jennifer ...

Thanks, such a long detailed comment, and I'm so pleased to read so much positive feedback, happy to see that what I wrote landed so well.


You are welcome! Glad to give credit where it is due :)

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"But." Confused, even whilst letting Kira lead me out onto the cleared central floorspace, the ...

But not- modified -Hayabusa fast. Yes, the M3 makes more power, but my bike weighs almost nothing in comparison. And we joke, and talk around the fact, but once it becomes clear- to them -that I do know how to handle the rocket I sit astride, both are good, polite enough to admit defeat.

Into ...

I think it was Jon Willie who drew pictures featuring women in stockings pedalling bicycles with the rear jacked up and the back wheel attached to a third cycle wheel with floggers attached. The faster you pedal, the harder you are spanked.


Sounds like a really fun way to exercise! Includes ...

Mostly the mistakes are down to two rewrites, and one complete change regarding the bondage used :lol:

My fault, but stuff easily gets lost in the mix when so much is being changed.

Twice.



Fair enough, figured it was something like that.


Liked this, as an idea whilst writing. She doesn't ...

Quite the ride :) and yes, I used Jennifer specifically because of her presence at the beginning. Of course there's plenty of fun I can create at a wedding ;) :lol: but it gave me the excuse to include her, too.



Always ideal to have more then one reason for including something :)



Well ...

True, but most likely I've written similar into stories before. Artistic license or whatever, doing things with the characters technically too dangerous or things just impossible to do in reality.


Cannot disagree that it can be fun to imagine :)

And to be fair my response was more aimed at ...

No, in this instance it is supposed to be 'train.' Although yes train as in 'train of thought' but writing it as I did, above, I felt it worked in shortened form.

Though possibly not :lol:

Things don't always translate well from my head onto the page.



Fair enough. Just sounded strange when ...

Can't help myself :) :lol: the naming is something I really enjoy thinking up.



Can tell :)

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But Kira isn't technically a model, so it's okay to cross the line into intimacy. If it helps her relax.



Nor do I outwardly react beyond an audible- for the camera's, I swear -sigh as, having ...

Mostly Jody was there to help fill out and add interest to the chapter, I wanted/needed to bring up Carnival, the Acadamy, these aspects of Plymouth's past. But can't do such with a list of facts, and so Jody.

Who I don't expect to be using again.

As you said, and as I said, we're in the 'warm ...

Plus it gives me an angle to write: Foxe not simply serving up exactly what Plymouth wants/was expecting.



Ahh but then there is the eternal question of the difference between what one 'wants' and 'what is actually a good idea'.

Because in fairness, what Foxe did was simultaneously the ...

Indeed :) and this- in part -is one of the reasons I perhaps overdid the mentions of Plymouth's 'secret' before, because i knew this was coming and so wanted to set the notion up.



Ah, once again the not-so-subtle foreshadowing :P

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"I'm supposed to be spending the night with friends ...

And, thank you for commenting on this :)


Figure it is only fair I show at least a little appreciation for the effort that goes into it :)


regardless of how much I enjoy Brooke and her trees and her bikes.


Even as you take many opportunities to poke fun at her about it (at least about the ...

Not sure exactly what I was expecting, but it wasn't you writing about Brooke again.

Not that I am not pleased - as you said, she is one of your best recurring characters.


So, by way of apology, and because I love writing her, we're diving back in.


Ah, of course, apologize to your fictional ...