Stories of Tie Up Games

Yay, Crest backstory! :D

I like seeing him in the interview, and I'm guessing it'll be a running theme for Laney to meet with all members of the Crew in person. I wasn't expecting Crest to be a non-native speaker, but looking back, it makes sense from his way of speaking. Also, liked the touch of ...

Wonder what else they have for poor Evan. Even without the bonds, his situation seems hopeless enough.

Rolland is scientifically observing two subs in their natural environment is great! Big fan of the wide selection of bondage in this chapter.

This is my first proper story in a while and my first ever story with a female main character, so any feedback is appreciated.



Chapter 1

Graves slumped into the first bar chair he found, letting out a loud sigh. The work was absolute hell this week - the 35-year-old mechanic was usually ...

You got this, Elias! What's the worst that could happen if you make a few mistakes along the way?

:cry:

...anyway, I said that I'd try not to draw attention to myself if I were in his place a few chapters ago, but Elias probably should try to prove he's worth keeping around now. It doesn't seem ...

Xtc wrote: 1 week ago @DeeperThanRed,
Send it by pm and we'll see where we go from there.

Thanks! Just sent you a DM.

Gagging singers between songs is a creative way to give them a break! Looking forward to the competition round, I wonder what sort of men volunteered for the event.

It all depends how long the draft is. If it's less than about 3000 words, I'll happily have a look at it. Other than that, I don't think I could find the time to give constructive feedback.


The first chapter is a bit under 1000 words. I don't expect any subsequent ones to be longer and there's ...

I'm not sure if this is the right forum for this topic, but here it is:

Would anyone be interested in beta reading for me? I'm trying to get back to writing, and I can use some feedback on my stories before I post them out in the wild.

The story I'm currently working on is an M/FM story with only ...

Payback time?!

What a great surprise! I'd say Maurice got what he deserved but maybe he and Romeo both did, considering how much fun they seem to have in both roles.

This might be one of the most uniquely written stories on this forum. Not only did you capture the Victorian era gossip writing so well, but I also loved how the entire story of the bondage lovers was told from a complete outsider's view, captured through hearsay. It fits the mood so well and ...

What a great ending. You're always full of surprises right until the finale.

And here I thought Maurice would get some deserved payback! He really found a creative solution. And I liked everyone more or less got what they wanted out of this extraordinary scramble.

If I recall correctly, the drow dislikes manipulations. So either Jarlaxle was subtle enough when pushing Elias towards Sorn's direction or the weapons master prioritizes his ego above all else.

Either way, I'm more curious about the reason. My first guess is that Jarlaxle has found Elias ...

Great ending to the show!

Romeo's manager was really memorable considering his slim screentime. I think he and Rui would get along really well despite having different priorities.


rewrites the ending again


:o


But so is the thought that famous escape artist managed to overpower and ...

I'm sorry bondagefreak but this might be my new favorite line from you:

"You are new here, are you not?" the drow asked, moving his eye patch from one perfectly functional eye to the other


This flamboyant stranger is certainly a more pleasant company compared to other drow, but it's too early ...

Great ending to the show!

Romeo's manager was really memorable considering his slim screentime. I think he and Rui would get along really well despite having different priorities.

Sounds like a fun festival! With so many participants gagged, I'm sure the language barrier won't be a problem.

Looks like the best method of survival among the drow is to not draw attention - something Elias neither has naturally nor is good at.

Poor Crest, if I knew winning the poll meant being cruelly caged I would've thought twice. Hopefully Crest can convince Tommy to be obedient a little sooner.


Poor Crest? I wouldn't describe his predicament as "poor." Seems to me that Crest has a wonderful opportunity to bond with Tommy. Take ...

Julian really charmed Evan into a tough spot - now if his new captors aren't as kind as him, there's not much he can do about it.

Uncanny! I don't think Evan could do much, even if he gets himself free - he can't even know if there's someone to call for help.

Let's hope Julian isn't taking him to somewhere too bad.

It's nice to see Sina having some second thoughts about kidnapping his old crush, even though he eventually captured him.

I voted to send Vihan off to a BDSM club - he can identify the guards if left behind and otherwise isn't involved in the plan.

Wow, what a fair challenge to end things on.

And as always, there's "one last thing". Let's hope it's not something Romeo will mind being immortalized on live feed.

I don't believe that Rui would just bury his golden goose. Whatever he's planning must be safer... but probably a lot more torturous.

Not sure if Veldrin meant it but I have a hunch that he'll try and toughen up Elias a bit for him to last longer - while still keeping him afraid of him, of course.



Hmm. Interesting. What do you mean by "go badly wrong with Elias"?

Like, he suddenly gets badly sick, or he has a complete ...